[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 2:00 AM Title: Living Up to Expectations
Awww, they are already stealing glances. I loved this chapter, but someone needs to knock some sense into Carlisle's and Charlie's head. On another note, when I mentioned a reference in my last review, I found out that in the movie THE SAFETY OF OBJECTS Kristen's character did give another character a handmade bracelet. In a way you unknownly make a reference. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
I never knew that! That's interesting. I've never seen that movie. Hmm.
And yes, Edward and Bella are starting to get closer. We'll see more of them as the story goes on. Don't worry about Carlisle and Charlie. They'll both realize how stupid they're being soon enough.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 1:34 AM Title: Living Up to Expectations
So sweet! I like Renee.
What Edward may have done wrong? He is so young, and your parents charge him so much.
Kisses.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I like Renee too. We'll see her doing more in the way of accepting Edward back into her life with Bella. And there will still be many hints and clues as to what happened, while the actual event will be revealed in two different way. I don't want to say too much, sorry.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 12:49 AM Title: Living Up to Expectations
I know we'll eventually find out what happened, but I can't wait to find out and want to know why Carlisle and Charlie seem to be more upset about what happened compared to Esme and Renee. Esme seems to try to keep Edward away from Carlisle's line of fire and Renee wants to get to know Edward again, which upsets Charlie. Would that be a mother thing?
Author's Response:
Yes, it's very much a mother thing. Carlisle was always hard on Edward, and after what happened, he was so disappointed that it changed the way he saw his son. Charlie is being stubborn, and that's pretty much it. Esme and Renee are the ones who really look at Edward because he's such a big part of Alice and Bella's lives. We'll see more of this as the story moves on.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 12:40 AM Title: Living Up to Expectations
Charlie is being so rude and Edward's dad is still so cold. I can't wait to find out what Edward did that was so bad.
Author's Response:
Yeah, they are, and trust me, it'll come around to bit them in the ass.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 7:37 PM Title: The Airport
confused..but hanging on
Author's Response:
It's okay to be confused. We're just getting starting.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:32 AM Title: The Airport
I think he's realized he loves Bella and can't stay away from her any longer.
Author's Response:
Well, yeah, and something's happened back home, so he's rushing to get back.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 12:39 AM Title: The Airport
Hey, I don't mind the abruptness. LOL What an interesting chap. This is present time and Edward is wanting to get back to Forks in a hurry. Ummmm.... is Bella pregnant and having a baby or is she marrying someone else. Hehehehe I'm just throwing shit out there because I don't have a freakin' clue.
Author's Response:
Not having a baby or marrying anyone else. Whew! It's cool though, the more stuff people throw out there, the more ideas i get for the story. ;-)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 10:59 PM Title: The Airport
Actu,ally, I think either someone has died; her father or both her parents. Then again, she could have been attacked by someone. Either way, it is obvious that he cares for here, otherwise he would not be rushing back to Forks to be with her, comfort her. Possibly, maybe, or who knows, other than you! Lol.
Author's Response:
You're really close, but I don't want to give too much away. And yes, Edward cares for Bella very much, and we'll see that develop over the next several chapters.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 10:02 PM Title: The Airport
Hmm, that was interesting, I can't help but think that there is a hidden meaning. Great chaper, and I just realized in the chapter NEVER SAY GOODBYE when Bella gave Edward the bracelet was that a reference to one of Kristen's old movies when she was little? I don't remember what movie, but I remember that she gave a bracelet to some guy. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
Well, I don't know about the reference, but there are meanings behind the titles. I like to weave the story along with them, so that when you see the title, you know something good or bad might be happening.
I'm glad you're paying attention. Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 7:26 PM Title: The Airport
when are you gonna tell us exactly what happened in the past? im dying here.
Author's Response:
Well, I've been leaving hints, but apparently they haven't been subtle enough. Give it time, and when you find out, you'll be sitting there saying to yourself, "I knew it!"
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:41 PM Title: The Airport
I'm so anxious about this story, what may have happened.
I really want to see the friendship of E and B evolve into love.
kisses
Author's Response:
It's okay to be anxious. I am. And I'm writing it. And don't worry, you'll see it soon enough.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:54 PM Title: The Airport
Hmmm why is he going back? Is someong getting married ? ?
Author's Response:
No, no one is getting married. Yet.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 2:30 PM Title: The Airport
I still haven't figured out what the heck Edward did that was so bad for Carlisle and Charlie to be so angry with him and to not trust him with Bella. Did I miss that some where or has it yet to be revealed.
~Beezy
Author's Response:
There have been hints along the way, though not very subtle I suppose. There will be a few more before the event is revealed, but by then, most of you will have figured it out.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:41 PM Title: The Airport
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 1:30 PM Title: The Airport
great chapter....is bella dying? or is she leaving? can´t wait for more....
Author's Response:
Choice words, but no, she's not dying. But he's rushing because of her.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 12:51 PM Title: The Airport
i have no clue what happened i trying to get over the shock of such a short chapter :(
Author's Response:
I know, I'm sorry. I meant to warn you ahead of time. The next chapter won't be nearly as short. I promise.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 2:37 PM Title: Tattoo on My Heart
great chapter....will he have a relationship with siobhan? or will they be just friends? can´t wait for more....
Author's Response:
Well, you're the first one to ask, so I'll go ahead and say no, he won't have a relationship with Siobhan. She's just going to be a friend.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:00 PM Title: Tattoo on My Heart
that is amazing it is simple and beautiful just like him
Author's Response:
Thanks! And thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 9:20 AM Title: Tattoo on My Heart
Wow, that's a great chapter and an amazing tattoo :) Goes great with the story :)
Update soon!!!
Author's Response:
Yeah, and it took quite a little bit to get it right, so thanks! And the next update won't be too far out, I promise.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:57 AM Title: Tattoo on My Heart
So beautiful!
Thanks.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:09 AM Title: Tattoo on My Heart
Love the tat:) I really don't know what to think about the whole Siobhan deal. I'm probably wrong, but it seems like he's looking for affection or a connection with someone or anyone so far from someone his father would approve of. It's like his way of getting back at this father which he is doing taking the music classes on the side.
Author's Response:
Well, you're not wrong in that he's looking for a connection, and there'll be clues along the way as to what he true connection is, but that's all I'll say.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:07 AM Title: Tattoo on My Heart
Love the tattoo...not so sure about Siabhon. Sad there was no Bella/Edward interaction, but a beautifully written chapter. Can't wait for more.:)
Author's Response:
Blame Garrett for her presence, but that's all I'll say, since Edward will tell you more soon.
Thanks for reading! More interaction in the chapter after next.
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 12:54 AM Title: Tattoo on My Heart
Oh poor , Edward being controlled by Carlisle. Lovely chapter as always, I just can't wait to see Bella and Alice again. Faithfully waiting for your update next week.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's trying to rebel, doing it in little ways for right now.
Thanks for reading! More with Bella and Alice in the chapter after next which might be closer than normal. ;-)
Date: 09 Sep 2012 11:51 PM Title: Tattoo on My Heart
I'm not happy about the tonsil hockey with Siobhan
Author's Response:
*Sheepishly shrugging my shoulders* Sorry. I tried not to let him do that, but he just wouldn't listen. At least he's making progress with Bella.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:14 AM Title: Level Head
What the hell happened? Ugh lol
Author's Response:
A lot of people have asked, and I really wish I could say. I promise it's going to be revealed, along with a lot of the aftermath, but all in good time.
Thanks for reading.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:12 PM Title: Never Say Goodbye
I love tattoos on other people. Great update.
Author's Response:
I love tattoos too!
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:57 AM Title: Never Say Goodbye
First off, Carlisle is an ass. Right now I could really care less about what he's going through, what he thinks, he's just a horrible person and he treats his own flesh and blood like he doesn't exist. And the comment Alice made at the airport to Edward? That made my heart break for him, even though Alice probably didnt' realize how close to home she hit. The way Bella acts and carries herself, it's hard to believe she's just 13 yr old. You can see why Edward's feelings toward her would change. The bracelet Bella made Edward was a sweet going away gift. Now I want to know what kind of tattoo Edward is going to get and who is the inspiration?. Could the tatt be beautiful bird, by chance? Hmmmm......
Author's Response:
Oh, gosh. First, thank you for reading and reviewing, and welcome aboard. I'm working on getting the tattoo uploaded so everyone can see it when it's ready. I won't make any excuses for Carlisle, and you're right about Bella. She's had to grow up a lot in a short time, and she's a very smart girl. I loved reading all your comments, and I look forward to hearing from you again. Feel free to let loose on Carlisle some more. Right now, he deserves it.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:35 AM Title: Ignorance is Bliss
Bella is very protective of Edward, especially by the look she gave Carlisle. She's a smart girl and she knows exactly what is going on. It seems like now Edward might have someone he can talk to.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 4:21 AM Title: Insistence of Innocence
She seems very mature for a twelve year old. We still don't know what happened but it seems to me like Charlie goes a bit overboard? It's sweet how she thinks of Edward as a big brother and worries about him.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 2:52 AM Title: Level Head
It seems like Alice can basically get her own way (has she cleaned her room yet? lol), but Edward is treated like errant child. And when does a 19yr old have a curfew? I thought we were going to get close to what happened those 2 yrs ago when Edward was listening to Tanya's story. And then Edward goes to protect Bella and Alice from the Rez kids and Charlie goes and treats Edward like a felon. I don't know what happened, but I feel bad for Edward right now.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 2:19 AM Title: Playing Field
A belated Happy Birthday. Has Carlisle always been this strict with Edward or does it have to do with what happened 2 yrs ago? I have a feeling Edward was kind of wild a few years ago too?
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 2:00 AM Title: Babysitter Blues
I think there might have been a small clue in this chap that Edward wasn't a virgin. It was during Edward's conversation with Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 1:41 AM Title: 6 years ago . . .
Carlisle and Esme raised a good son :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 1:30 AM Title: The Race
Well this chap got me hooked. I want to know why Edward is in such a hurry to get to Isabella?
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:46 AM Title: Never Say Goodbye
I watch as Edward and Bella get closer, I would see them at camp
must have been a relief to have gotten away from pai.Pobre Edward has had enough punishment.
What he put the tattoo? Confess I'm curious.
Garret seems to be the opposite of Edward, but seems to be nice.
Kisses.
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:12 AM Title: Never Say Goodbye
A tattoo!?! I can't wait to see what he gets. Is it for Bella?
Date: 01 Sep 2012 11:01 PM Title: Never Say Goodbye
I found this rec'd over on Twilighted.net, and I'm so glad that I did! I'm really liking watching E&B's relationship progress and grow, and I absolutely adore their character's. Can't wait for more!
Date: 01 Sep 2012 9:34 PM Title: Never Say Goodbye
Look at that, he is admitting that Bella is something more than she should be when he decided to hid her bracelet. I wonder what the tattoo is going to be. Can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's growing up! I'm working on making sure everybody gets to see it.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 01 Sep 2012 9:07 PM Title: Never Say Goodbye
I just discovered this story today, read it and added to my favorites. I have to say that I just want to come through my computer and kick me some Carlise ass! What is his problem? I know that something happened 2 yrs ago but it sounds like he has been a jerk to Edward a lot longer than that.
Thanks, Maria
Author's Response:
Good to have you on board! And yeah, Carlisle is overreacting. He's a typical dad, except he tries too hard. He's a work in progress.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 01 Sep 2012 7:59 PM Title: Never Say Goodbye
Such a sweet goodbye between Edward and Bella. I'm glad he's beginning to see her as more than a little girl. A friend is a great place to start. My husband is my best friend and has been for 19 years now. I'm dying to know what tattoo Edward is getting! Can't wait until next week.
Author's Response:
There will be many more sweet moments like that, so get ready. And that's a beautiful thing with you and your husband.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:34 AM Title: Ignorance is Bliss
Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
It's coming! I promise.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 1:08 PM Title: Ignorance is Bliss
Why is Carlise such a jerk??
Author's Response:
He has a lot of unresolved issues that will be dealt with soon enough. I'm working on him.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 4:27 AM Title: Ignorance is Bliss
So sweet!
It's interesting to see their relationship grow and trust gradually.
I do not know what Edward did, but whatever it is I can see how he's sorry, then why Carlisle is so cruel.
I'll be waiting for the next installment.
Kisses.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading! It's good to know we're in this together.
See you next time!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 2:22 AM Title: Ignorance is Bliss
Love it :) Can't wait for the next update! :)
Keep writing,
Caitlin x
Author's Response:
Will do!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 10:33 PM Title: Ignorance is Bliss
What exactly happened? I understand that Bella and Alice were involved. Did they get into a car accident? Was Edward drunk while driving them?
Author's Response:
I'm trying to keep all the big details under wraps, but you're right on two fronts. That's all I'll say.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 10:28 PM Title: Ignorance is Bliss
Love it, great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 10:26 PM Title: Ignorance is Bliss
I love your story, and I think it is cute that Edward is already developing feelings for Bella. This line "We stand there as the sun makes its first appearance over the trees in the horizon, and as its warmth spreads through me, I start to feel a little better with Bella in my arms. I haven’t felt like this in a long time, and it feels good. I feel . . . whole." made me warm inside. I can't wait to see their feelings develop.
Author's Response:
I always love reviews like this. It lets me know you're really reading. Thanks!
I look forward to showing you everything that's yet to come.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 2:53 AM Title: Insistence of Innocence
I'm loving this story !!! Edward is such a sweet and protective guy. I love how in this Bella is the one to sneak in the room at night :-)
It will be interesting to see how they deal with each other having a GF/BF as they get older.
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you're liking it! And if these two have their way, it will be an interesting road to get them on the same page together.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:58 PM Title: Insistence of Innocence
This is great update soon please
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading!
The next update will be this weekend.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:50 AM Title: Insistence of Innocence
I absolutely love this story!!!!!!! It is so cute! I'm totally loving this Edward :)
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you like it.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2012 7:11 PM Title: Insistence of Innocence
Parents put too much pressure on Edward, he is not obliged to look after the girls, he is a teenager, should take care of si.… clear that Edward loves them and cares about them.
Waiting to see where the relationship will change.
Kisses.
Author's Response:
You're right. He isn't obliged to do it. He does it because he wants to. The change is not that far off -- at least not from where I am. ;-)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 19 Aug 2012 5:28 PM Title: Level Head
what the heck??? i love it but im sooo confused! I have 2 theories, 1 edward was drunk and crashed with bella in the car and that hurt her bad, or 2 she was molested or hurt somehow by some one and edward was apart of it? tell if me im close or far off! and please update soon awesome story!
Author's Response:
Okay, drunk, yes, plus a few other things. Crashed, yes, especially given the dreams he's having, and there will be more. The other part, no, never in a million years ever.
The next update will either be today or tomorrow.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 6:29 AM Title: Playing Field
A very happy belated birthday. I'm glad for the AN. LOL
Author's Response:
Thanks! And I'm glad for them too.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 5:02 AM Title: Level Head
NOOOOO! update sooner!! This is such a great story. I can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Well, my vacation is almost over, but I'll try to possibly update later this week.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2012 2:59 AM Title: Level Head
Poor Edward, he is so good because he feels in debt, which he did so wrong?
Kisses.
Author's Response:
Yeah. But I promise he'll cut a break soon enough.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 15 Aug 2012 2:35 AM Title: Level Head
Enjoying the story so far. I am looking forward to the story developing and finding out exactly what happened to Edward.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking it!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 3:11 AM Title: Playing Field
HAPPY bIRTHDAY!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 14 Aug 2012 12:32 AM Title: Playing Field
Happy Birthday !!!! I am still wondeirng when we will find out what happened, I am thourghly confused.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the birthday wish! There's a little bit of past history we'll go through before we find that out, but I promise there will be clues along the way. Pay attention to when he dreams.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:49 PM Title: 6 years ago . . .
hmmmm very interesting, wondering what happened
Date: 13 Aug 2012 11:39 PM Title: The Race
Well I love EPOV stories , so far this seems very interesting. I will keep reading to see were youare going with this
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:44 PM Title: Playing Field
Really enjoying your story. Hope you have a great birthday!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it, and Thanks!
Thanks for reading too!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:43 PM Title: Playing Field
loving this story... happt birthday have a great day and an even better year
Author's Response:
Thanks! And thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 6:42 PM Title: Playing Field
is your birthday? So, congratulations to you sweet!
I'm very curious about your story, Bella and Alice trust in Edward, because Charlie and Carlisle are so strict with him?
Although not romantically linked, is sweet to see Edward and Bella together.
Happy birthday, and do nothing I would not (laughs).
Kisses.
Author's Response:
Yep, it's my birthday! And thanks! Yeah, Bella and Alice trust Edward, and Charlie and Carlisle are so hard on him because of what he did in the past. We'll get to that, I promise.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:55 PM Title: Playing Field
Good story so far. You have got my attention and I'm certainly intrigued about what happened in the past and how they will get together in the future. Keep up the wonderful writing.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you're liking it so far. I hope I don't let you down.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 5:48 PM Title: Playing Field
Happy Birthday!
I was glad to see an update today.
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was happy to get it out.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:13 PM Title: Playing Field
HAPPY BIRTHDAY HUN XOXO
Author's Response:
Thanks! ;-)
Date: 11 Aug 2012 3:00 PM Title: Babysitter Blues
Love it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking it so far.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:49 AM Title: Babysitter Blues
Awesome story! keep it up!! Already love it! :D
Author's Response:
I'm totally glad you love it! More is definitely on the way.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 12:47 AM Title: Babysitter Blues
Loving the story and can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
There will definitely be more!
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 8:45 PM Title: Babysitter Blues
What happened between Edward and Bella to Carlisle to be so hard on his son?
Edward is so protective of Bella, I love it when this feature appears.
Kisses, anxious waiting.
Author's Response:
Well, it's not just Bella. It was Bella and Alice, but Bella's a little more rebellious than Alice right now. I'm trying to keep that under wraps until Bella's a little older, but there will be clues along the way.
I wish I could say more, but that's really all I can divulge at this time. Pay attention to when Edward dreams. The big clues are there.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:36 AM Title: Babysitter Blues
he tried to sell her?
Author's Response:
That he did. He was six, what did he know? ;-)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:46 AM Title: Babysitter Blues
Great story so far!
Why doesnt Charlie want Edward around Bella ?
Cant wait to find out more. ;)XOXO
Author's Response:
There will be hints along the way, so I don't want to say right out, but it had to do with Bella and Alice. The reveal won't actually be for a while, so I hope you keep reading.
Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:59 AM Title: 6 years ago . . .
Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
There will definitely be more.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 02 Aug 2012 7:53 AM Title: 6 years ago . . .
Great job!! Can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I'm really glad you're liking it! I'm enjoying writing it.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 02 Aug 2012 7:52 AM Title: The Race
I love your first 2 chapters. I hope you will continue to update your story weekly. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please update soon.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 4:14 PM Title: The Race
This looks interesting, and yes; I want more.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:51 PM Title: 6 years ago . . .
Ok got it. Mom and dad have him babysitting for free. Friends at party he wants to stay with bella got it. Peer presure trying to get him to go. I wonder if jas will come over to the house while he is home. I hope you update more.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it!
Thanks for reading!
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:33 PM Title: The Race
Confused. Reading on.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 4:23 AM Title: 6 years ago . . .
i like it. it's sweet. please continue.
Author's Response:
Your wish is my command.
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: 6 years ago . . .
What he did to piss so bad Charlie.Eles are so cute.
Kisses.
Author's Response:
That will be revealed with time. This is part of the Angst.
Thanks for reading!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:27 PM Title: 6 years ago . . .
Love it. Great chapter.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:52 PM Title: 6 years ago . . .
Great update
Date: 31 Jul 2012 6:16 AM Title: The Race
I want more!
Please!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:57 AM Title: The Race
Great first chapter.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:33 AM Title: The Race
Can't wait to see what happens next.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:31 AM Title: The Race
You could hold me in your story, I'm so curious ...
When you're young is a difference of six years, but then this desaparece.Eu difference and my husband is six years apart, I started dating him I was 15, he was 21, then the difference was huge, he had a lot of patience, but everything went right and far between dating and courtship and marriage are 20 years together.
Kisses.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:00 AM Title: The Race
I like the opening but are all your chapters gonna be that short?
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:47 AM Title: The Race
Reads like it is going to be great
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:19 AM Title: The Race
looks good so far can't wait to read more
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:18 AM Title: The Race
YES I WANT MORE!!!!!!! but seriously it seems great and i would love to read the rest ;-)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:14 AM Title: The Race
WOW, Ed you think! More please and ty.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 12:55 AM Title: The Race
loved it!
can`t wait for more.