Please update soon

PLEASE update today! I'm going crazy 

Wow, for such a short chapter, it had so much emotions. This chapter was wonderful and makes me question my theory of what is going on. Can't wait for your next update.

Ok, we'll, it seems Edward figured out Bella's secret, I hope he doesn't hurt her by making a big deal out of it, especially because I think he has his own feeling for her. That would be pretty exciting to see the volcano erupt.  Thanks for the update!  I hope you had a Merry Christmas & that you have a Happy New Year. :)

Love it ,a33;:゜*a34;r51;a310;o('▽'*)Merry Christmas(*'▽')oa308;r51;a34;:゜*a33;

Author's Response:

Thanks.  And to you too.

Merry Chistmas to Me!!!! I mean you! thannx for the chapter I am in love with this story!!! I love the fact that you had Edward figure things out. I alos loved your  very vivid descriptions of their trip . As italy is one of the places on my bucket list you've only enhanced my interest in seeing it. bravo again merry chirstmas  and thanx !!!!!

Such a sweet chapter. :-)
Waiting for the next update!
Merry Christmas!

Author's Response:

Thanks!  I really love writing chapters like this one, especially since a few difficult ones are on the way.

Please come back and dont let the next one be a ways off too!!! Seriously Im living for this story I follow it like a religon. I saw that u kept with deadlines for a while and as one time ff writer myself I know that couldnt have been easy but I just need a little something to make my day brighter an estimate at least ? lol awesome chap btw

I think I will miss BPOV for a while.  Her sweet innocent thoughts & crush are fun to read.  I've just been reading a story about the deceit B has with A ruins their friendship.  I hope this doesn't happen with your story.  Thanks for all of your hard work to get new chapters to us. :)

awww poor Bella... I think to make Edward aware of his real or you can say hidden feelings you should throw in Jacob. lol can't wait to see a jealous Edward.

Author's Response:

Well, Jacob won't come into the picture for a while, but someone will make him see that he's feeling something for her.  Just wait and see.

I feel so sad for Bella

Bella finally realized her feelings for Edward are more than a sister would feel towards a brother.  Her actions must have been somewhat obvious if Alice noticed it.  So did Edward? :)  Awesome chap!

I really enjoy your story and I love the way you make it last and take your time with the story.  Thank you do much for this wonderful story :) keep posting please 

He's so sweet to her!  But, I'm very curious to read Maggie's reaction to Edward & Bella's interaction.  Thanks for the update!  I hope you had a nice Thanksgiving holiday. :)

There is something going on between E/B, but I'm unable to grasp what it actually is.  Does that make sense? LOL    Happy Thanksgiving to you!

Awwww, that was so sweet. I love how Maggie seems to always now what to say. Wonderful chapter, and I am glad to see Carlisle starting to forgive Edward. Can't wait for your next update.

It makes me sad to see Bella had to go through this feeling. It really hurts to see someone you like is with someone else. :-(

Author's Response:

Yeah, this is never an easy feeling to experience for anyone.

Oh, young love!!!!  This story is so sweet right now!  I loved this chapter!

Never enough!

Author's Response:

I know!  I feel the same way!

Is it gonna keep going this slow or are we gonna take take a leap in age to move things along

Author's Response:

Just because Bella's so young and Edward's not head over heels in love with her doesn't mean things are moving slow.  This is the story I planned, and it involves a slow burn so these two can heal and realize they're made for each other.  Sorry, chica, but no.  And I'm hitting highlights left and right to move things along.  I did say in the beginning that this would be a slow burn.  It's not for everyone.  I understand.  But when you wait for something good, it usually happens in a way you least expect it.

I was trying to figure where this story was going in the beginning and it really annoyed me that I did not know what happened for him to loose all this trust, not the fact that he was getting on a plane out of the blue.

I have to say that this story is amazing and I dont mind that he has had little friendships/kisses/and even relationships along the way, it is only normal as Bella is so young.

In the end I am guessing that maybe they will end up together, but for now, they both have separate lives to live until they can be together, but I am also guessing that Charlie is not going to be happy about it.

I do have to say that I am glad that Carlisle came around to realise that he can not keep doing this to Edward and that in the end he would have probably lost his son if he did not change.

I cant wait to see where this story is going and I kinda feel bad for Maggie, because in the end you really do know what is going to happen to her.

Thank you for this story, it will be one that I can not wait to get home ever week and find a chapter waiting to be read.

Author's Response:

I'm really glad you're enjoying the story, and it's really nice to read a review from a reader who's completely okay with nearly everything that's happening, especially in this fandom.   I don't think anybody liked Siobhan, and that was before they all found out she was just the girl who was going to give Edward his tattoo.  Okay, so she kissed him, but like you say, Bella's so young.  I'm trying to show that she's mature for her age because of what happened, but she's still a kid.

great chapter....does maggie realize who completes edward? does she just live the moment with him? can´t wait for more....

SO glad that Edward has Maggie to talk too. She is very understanding. What is Bella going to think about her? I know Bella has told Edward that he needs a girlfriend and everything but what will REALLY happen when he brings one home? 

I think as time goes by Maggie will be the person to make Edward realize he has feelings for Bella, more than just a friend.
How will they convince Charlie to let Bella go to Italy were Edward is ?
Can't wait for more!!!

Author's Response:

I think you might be right, but only I know that for sure.  Don't worry about Charlie.  We'll see how they work their magic, and we'll also see some interaction between Bella and Maggie later on.

What in the world is going on??? What has happened to Bella???

great chapter...what happend to bella? i can´t wait to find out....

I don't know why, but I feel like Bella got into an sccident like Edward to prove a point. This was a cute little chapter. Can't wait for your next update.

hmmm maybe she's sick thanks for the update

Edward's gotten her pregnant? 

please update as soon an you can because this story is fabulous

I'm so happy to, finally, read what Edward did.  I wasn't very surprised, you gave a lot of clues.  I wasn't certain on all of the facts, but I had the general idea.  Thank you for writing this great story! 

I know she's still way too young, but I always have a hard time reading about Edward with any but Bella. ;)

FINALLY!!!!!!!! We find out what Edward did. Yeah, I could see where Carlisle and Charlie would be really upset with Edward. I can also see that it would really be hard to trust Edward again. I would thinnk Carlisle would come around before Charlie would. That accident could have turn out really really worse than it did. Glad that Edward has someoe that he can talk to now. Happy that Carlilse has made the choice to be easier on Edward. I think Edward has paid his dues for what he did. Thannks for the update. 

Wow what a terrible thing he has had to live with. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Yeah, but I think things will be a little better for Edward from now on.

Aww, that was sweet, I am happy that Carlisle is finally forgiving Edward.  Also I think having Maggie as a friend is good for him.  Hopefully Charlie can get over the fact that his little girl was almost killed, but saved, by Edward. Can't wait for your next update.

I really love this story. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you're liking it!

Love that Edward and Bella got to spend some time alone. I hope Charlie and Carlisle ease up on Edward some. Can't wait to find out what happened.

Awww, that was a sweet end to the chapter. I am loving how swirmy Bella is right now. Can't wait for the next update.

great chapter....so first feelings towards edward....can´t wait for more.....

Yes, I can definitely see BPOV is lighter, but then she is only 13.   There are times she where she's noticing Edward's appearance, like how he looks dressed and barefoot or how his hair looks. Then in the next breath, she sees him as a friend. But she also seems to have to remind herself that Edward is her best friends brother.  Ah, those 13 year old hormones.

I am looking forward to seeing how Edward and Bella's relationship turns into A romantic one. Bella is so sweet to want Edward to be happy. Whatever Edward did in the past it's obvious that Alice and Bella forgive him.  Why can't everyone else.

When does it get out of this pity party faze? He always sounds like a Debbie Downer. I know how his dad and Charlie are but he's grown and still letting them run things, no one says he even has to come home. Yeah it would hurt his mom but even she would have to understand... If she can't control her husband then she'll lose apart of her son. Better that then to have her son lose so many parts of himself

Author's Response:

Hopefully, it will end soon.  I'm working on upcoming chapters right now.  But the thing of it is Edward isn't going home for just his mom.  I think in the next few chapters, possibly more, we'll start to see him changing for the better.

Edward is really having serious problems. Bless his heart. I am just waiting for him to just lose it and blow his lid and scream at Carlisle and Charlie, and go off. Those two need to get over it. What does the Mayor have to do with what has happened???

God these chapers are so happy and sad at the same time.  I mean it is great that Edward is starting to forgive himself, but now he is pushing Bella away. Can't wait for your next update.

What in the world?? What is going on that Edward is going back on the Red Eye????? Has something happened to Bella??

Garrett sounds cool. What kind of tattoo is Edward going to get??/

I am glad that I can go from chapter to chapter!!!!

Ok, whatever has happened in the past has to do with Edward/Bella/Alice. Something to do with water, since in one of the chapters Edward says something about in his dream that he drowns this time. 

Why does Charlie not like Edward? What did Edward do to make Charlie and Carlisle mad??? Can't wait to find out. Bella seems very comfortable with Edward. 

I am so curious that it's killing me! I think someone died. Looking forward to more!

great chapter....i still don´t get why the relationship between edward, carlisle and charlie is so disturbed...can´t wait for more....