Date: 02 Mar 2010 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
Carlisle in the shower...Hot! kat
Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
I am really enjoying your story! Kat
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
Holy Shit! Great lemon...Kat
Date: 02 Mar 2010 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Ummm...Wow! You are such a tease! lol Kat
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
Delicious! Kat
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
I think that I am going to like this. I'm glad that you made Esme and Carlisle siblings - that way I don't have to feel bad about them being with other people. Kat
Author's Response:
I didn't know if Esme and Carlisle would go over too well being written as siblings. But I'm so glad people are opened minded about it!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I just wanted to say that I'm really into this story! However I'm all kinds of confused since I'm totally a Team Edward girl, but I really like your Carlisle...so I don't know if I want Bella to end up with Carlisle, Edward or both. I think the story is well written with complex characters; it's definitely interesting and unique. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying the ride! I wanted to bring complex characters into the mix so people would feel for them and have to make a choice on who they were rooting for. It sounds like I've accomplished a little of that!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
This story is fuck hot!! Can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Mirrors are soooo much fun!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Dear Jen, you were right, this is absolutely my favorite chapter! One more thing we have in common - older guys are by all means better in everything!!! add to this being a Dr and I'm all yours rrrrrrrrr!
Author's Response:
Bring on the older men! Who needs boy toys, right?
Date: 26 Feb 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I just found this story yesterday. I have to admit, it was so addicted, I read it all the way through. It is almost 1 in the morning and I have to be up to go to work at 5:30, but it was worth it. I can't wait for the next update. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
I am blown away that you read all 13 chapters like that! Wow. I'm so glad it was woth it to go to work on such little sleep! lol. The next chapter will hopefully be up within the week.
Date: 26 Feb 2010 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
OMG you can not believe how excited i am when u post a new chapter
Date: 26 Feb 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
the chapter is awesome. i have to agree it is one of my favorites so far.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Oh I loved me some happy Dr. Cullen time! I thought I knew which one I wanted her to go for, but I think I'm on the fence after this chapter. Will she get with Jr soon? Maybe that will help me make up my mind which one. LOL Thanks for the update.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I love them together they are so cute. I want him to ask her how she feels about transfering so she can be with him.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
will it be carlisle or edward??
Author's Response:
I know there will be some disappointment no matter which way it would end up, but it's not an E/B HEA.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
OMG OMG OMG
LOVE IT.
I hope they find a way to be together.
Author's Response:
So do I! The anxiety these two are giving me is insane! lol
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
This story is awesome and i'm realy torn about Bella ending up with Dr. McNaughty or Edward. I guess i have to trust you with it and let myself enjoy the ride!! Please update soon i need some more Dr. Cullen lovin'. ;-)
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Phew! Dr Cullen can take me anyday he wants! LOL
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
WOW, I need a cold shower..... Glad to see her and junior Cullen didnt do anything...... Can't wait to see whats in store for McNaughty and Bella ( love that name by the way).... Keep up the great work.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
GREAT CHAPTER!!!!!!!! Love some Dr. McNaughty!!!!!!
3-4 weeks between chapters.....Oh please tell me I read that wrong. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update sooner than that. Love you!!!!!!!!!!!!! Love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
I know. I'm sorry. It is a long time to wait. But by the time I get the next chapter done and wait for it to be beta'd it usually ends up being that long. The next chapter is almost complete so hopefully it'll be up within the week. Thanks for sticking with it so far!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
<3
Date: 25 Feb 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
I'm pretty sure she didn't. Even drunk, Bella wouldn't do that. I miss Carlisle.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
uh ohh!! poor girl! edward is ridiculous, i bet he knows its his dad, how could he not? its obvious to everyone else.. lol
Date: 25 Feb 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
ooo
pleaSe post the next one NOW!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
I just found this story and It's absolutely amazing :) Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying it so far.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
<3
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
I must tell you that I always what Bella to be with Edward and no one else, I just wasn't comfortable with other options something was off about that, till now, this story is soooo different!!! I WANT her to end up with DR-SEXY-C, they're perfect together. Great job, pls. continue and update soon, can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! It means a lot when die hard Bella and Edward fans tell me that I've changed their views on them being with other people! I take that as a HUGE compliment. The next chapter is up. I hope you like it!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
NO THEY DID NOT!!!!!! Bella had to have past out and Edward, surely would not have taken advantage of her......WOULD HE??????
Author's Response:
Next chapter is up so you can find out!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Great chapter. I really like Carlisle and Bella together here in this stroy. I hope Edward does not screw things up for them.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Very interesting chapter. Will we "see" into Edward's mind and what he is thinking?
Author's Response:
I'm thinking of doing a future EPOV. Nothing's set in stone yet, but it may come into play. I think it would be very interesting to see what Eddie has going on upstairs and not just down
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Wow, I don't know what to say. I wasn't expecting things to get so intense so quickly. I guess it's possible to fall in love that quickly, but I'm really anxious now to see if anything's going to happen with Edward. I just don't want anybody to get hurt.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
Your Edward is cocky and an assward. But I like him. I can believe that Carlisle did not tell Edward the truth when he was younger but why did he tell him something that would make Edward hate him. Edward is hurting now, just like he would have hurt if Carlisle had told him the truth about his mother. I guess I would have been selfish. I would have wanted Edward to be mad at his mother instead of me, if I were Carlisle.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
At least they are at a Banquet Hall and not a church. I had to remind myself of that when Carlisle took Bella in the closet. lol.
I loved the last line, too.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
HOT shower sex!!!!! WOW!!!!! Great job!!!!
So Carlisle is just as confused as Bella is.
Can't wait to see where Edward fits into all of this.:):)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Story is awesome but please let her end up with Daddy C. Edward seems like ftoo much of a Jerk and I think she didn't sleep with him but he will make it look that way so that he can hurt his dad. I think he knows what's up. The boy isn't stupid
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
Lol, Im a huge Carlisle fan too! :D
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeppp
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
oo oo yay yay
srry if u think my reviews are stupid randomness
(did i just type meaningful words?)
Author's Response:
LOL I don't think any reviews are stupid reandomness! To me, that just shows how excited the reader is!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
oooooooo fun fun fun to come!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
hehehe more fun fun fun!!!!
BUSTED!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
yay yay yay
p.s. i am a spaz...as in there is no medical reason for my craziness :)
o ya luv ur story too
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
hehe hot hot hot!!!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
please let it be an edward and bella story, awesome job btw
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
I am glad that Esme talked to Bella. It was nice to learn about SOME of Carlisle's past. Who is Edward's mother and why was she not in the picture? Can't wait to read Carlisle's POV.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
Oh My Gosh!!!! WHO turned on the lights????? Charlie or Esme??????
Date: 24 Feb 2010 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
ooooo its getting hot
u kno i never really thot about bella and carlisle but i LOVE it
Author's Response:
Neither had I! And then I started writing it and there was HEAT!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
hehe naughty bella
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
wow! This story is a-maze-zing! Next chapter please!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
I'm so confused as to who I want her to end up with. Could she just go ahead and sleep with both. LOL You had to go and choose the two hottest guys in the book. It's so hard to decide. Great chapter.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
OMG OMG please i hope she didn't!!!!!
Can't wait till the next one
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!
You should have put a panty warning at the beginning of this chapter!! OMFG!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
WOW!!!!! That was HOT!!!!!!!!!
I like that Bella got snarky with him at the end. Carlisle may have to make Bella pay for that remark later when he has his way with her. lol.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
OMG!!!! I hope Bella did not sip her water all over everyone!!!!!!!!
Can't wait to go read the next chapter. I am off.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Love it! That was such a funny couple of chapters lol. x
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
oh nOOOOOOOO....oh please please do not leave us out there.....
Author's Response:
You won't be left out for long. The next chapter is my absolute favorite yet!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
Can't wait to read youro next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
OHHHH please let them fall in love....they so need it...both of them...yeah another wonderful chapter
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Ohhh...While reading (the kitchen part) I listened to Marvin Gays "Let's get it on" and ohhh-it's really hot in here right now.This whole 'Dr.Cullen'-thing-totally sexy.
Author's Response:
Love it! Everytime I read that chapter now I'll think of that song. Dr. Cullen is one very sexy man.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Holy Hell, please dont let them have had sex. I really want her with daddy C. Waiting patiently for the next update.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Oh my god! I hope she didn't do what she thinks she did. She's much better off with Carlisle. I really hope she ends up with him.
Keep up the excellent work!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Lovin' this story more and more! I'm so glad I found it yesterday!!! Edward needs to just go somewhere - geez! Definitely wasn't expecting what Esme thanked Bella for - interesting turn of events so to speak.
Author's Response:
Edward always seems to portray the guy you instantly love in most fics. I love making him the guy you love to hate....but still have a little soft spot for.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
I discovered this story over the weekend and fell in love with it. The squeal out of my mouth this morning when I saw an update, made the cat jump. I can't wait for the next update. :)
Author's Response:
Poor kitty, but I love that! lol So glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
WOW WOW WOW
Please more!!!!!!
Can't wait!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Oh my god! This story keeps getting better nand better. I can't wait to read more of it. I just hope that Bella ends up with Carlisle. They seem to be the better couple in this story, plus they would be good for eachother. Edward is really getting annoying.
Keep up the excellent work!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Everyone has given me such high praise I really hope I don't end up disappointing in the end.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
I like being in Carlisle's head. This is interesting. I don't even want to imagine her with Edward now.
Author's Response:
I had some mixed reviews about whether to make a Carlisle POV when I first mentioned it, but the response was great once everyone read it. I think there may just be another CPOV in a future chapter.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
It's very possible, I can't wait to see where this is going, about how many chapters do you think your going to have?
Author's Response:
Right now I have 13 finished. I'm working on 14 as we speak and I think there might be 3 more after that. So in the end it'll probably be an 18 chapter fic.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
So i'm guessing that Bella's not going to give into junior cullen, but She really wants the older cullen? Please let her end up with Daddy Cullen.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
WOW, hot sex in the living room, now hot shower sex. Got to give it to you, this is getting better and better. can't wait to see what happens next
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
I want to see Carlslie pop the question! LOL
Author's Response:
You are seriously the first person to say that! Most readers say they want them to have a HEA, but no one has actually come right out and said they want Carlisle to propose. I love where your head is that though!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
somebody's pissed, and I cant say I blame her.....
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
ok so far so good, I'm new to this website. I can honestly say this story has my attention.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Still lovin this story
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
I'm loving the story. Dr C is hott, but Edward is more her style. LOL
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Carlisle seems to care for her and not care sometimes, it´s confusing! Edward is an ass all the time ...
Author's Response:
Very true, and I think that's only natural considering how fast they've seem to "fallen" for each other. How much can you really trust those kind of feelings when it happens so quickly. He's being cautious so neither one of them ends up hurt.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2010 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Glad to see your story on this site.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
he should tell his son the truth, he is a man and can handle it
Author's Response:
ITA! But as a parent I can understand him not wanting to hurt Edward, too.
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
but I really prefer Carlisle !!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
Yes, definately hot in here! LOL
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
awesome ... getting better and better every chapter. He is incredible!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
How did I KNOW someone was going to walk in on them. I think the way you've written Alice is my favorite EVER!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Great story - Esme killed me at the beginning of this chapter. I'm still laughing about it!
Author's Response:
That was one of my favorite parts also. Thank you. It only gets better!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Lovin' It!?!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
he is the sexiest doc on earth
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Please please please tell me you are are going to make our fav Doctor man up and claim Bella.....oh please!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
He is so damn hot!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
so hooooooooooot
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2010 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
hot doc
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH
OMH OMG OMG OMG OMG
WOW WOW WOW WOW
This story is soooo awesome:-)It's really great!
Can't wait tiill the next one!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so glad you're loving it!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
That was too funny being caught by alice, assward is so much better than twilight edward
Author's Response:
Alice can be very annoying, but really she's on of my favorite characters to write because she can be so much fun! And wow, thank you for the huge compliment on Edward! So many readers love Twilight Edward its hard for them to be able to see a different kind of character with him.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
This is such a good story. Please upload some more soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the compliment! I will be uploading the next three chapters tonight
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
OMG...I tottaly agree with you...The way he says his name in Twilight is so sexy and manly. I'm not that into Robert, but I have to admit that I like his voice :)
Poor Bella...NOT! I know this won't be easy, but whoever she decides to be with will be a very good choice.
And Jasper came along o/ Alice was so lonely =P
Author's Response:
I'm really not into Robert either, but yes, his voice is something else. I do think he wasn't given a real chance in Twilight, because well, the movie sucked IMO. New Moon rocked though, and I hope that he gets an even better chance to shine in Eclipse.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
Oooops...Bella isn't falling alone!!! =P
The guy has issues, but who wouldn't have after dealing with a situation like that...Affair,son,med school. Bella is giving him a second chance to be a 20 year old again...to be and feel free.
And well...the amazing sex is a awesome plus ;)
Thanks for the naked and wet Carlisle...*sigh* hehehehe
Date: 22 Feb 2010 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
I am so loving the non-canon pairings. I especially love our favorite doctor. He is just oozing sex. Thank you for taking the chance and writing a fabulous flick
Author's Response:
Thank YOU for reading it and giving it a chance!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
hmmmm interesting! This piece of information opens a door for Edward!!! :)
Thank you for posting more chapters and for the reviews' replies ;)
x x
Author's Response:
I love getting the reviews. So if you can take the time to write one, I can definitely take the time to respond to them!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
Oh my meeting mr velvet after screwing his dad this must be confusing as hell. who is she going to want to fuck next????
Date: 22 Feb 2010 8:24 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
OH my I want both. So Carlisle is just a confused and she is that is good. He is Fuck Hot. I am total Team Edward so dun dun dun bring him on LOL