Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon
this story is like an aphrodsiac...ok not really but i hope u get the point
Author's Response:
I will be updating in the next few days. I admit I've been slacking, but I wanted to finish my one shot for the Sport of Love contest, which I have finally finsihed and posted. I promise to have the next chapter up soon!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
plz plz plz plz plz plz plz plz update soon
this story is like an aphrodsiac...ok not really but i hope u get the point
Date: 01 Apr 2010 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Great story...couldn't stop reading it. Please post the next chapter soon...can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks! The next chapter will be up in the next few days!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
how much longer is there to wait.... Update please.. not that I am addicted or anything!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Not much longer! I promise to have it up soon
Date: 26 Mar 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Wow! I wasn't sure about a Carlisle/Bella fic but I decided to give it a go and I'm so glad I did and I've read it all in a day. I loved the sneaking around Bella and Carlisle had to do in the beginning and Charlie's comments about hunting. I can't believe Edward knew all along. I really want everything to work out for Bella and Carlisle although that doesn't seem likely at the moment. Really looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm so glad you gave it a chance! I know it's not everyone's cup of tea, so to speak. The next chapter will be up soon, hopefully in the next few days.
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
AHHHHH!!! Must know more! I love this story and can't wait for the next chapter! This one broke my heart for both of them, but now I'm wondering where Edward ran off to?
Date: 25 Mar 2010 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
WOW...I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while, but I started reading where I left off last week and got so sucked in I kept hitting next! I'm freaking out becasue I have enough time to finish this before heading off to work but I wanted to say, damn that was amazing and heart wrenching and the ending with Edward...just, wow! Blown away. Well job, hon!
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
That was one mean ass cliffy!. Excellent chapter however.
[Report This]Date: 25 Mar 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Yes I was in tears on this chapter, but I have a feeling due to the dynamics of this relationship/s it is going to be an emotional rollercoaster, but thank goodness puke bags will not be required for this ride.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
This story is super hot!! Loving it!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
OK, now I am sitting on the edge of my seat. Not even sure what will happen!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Edward needs a good ass kicking.
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Well damn! I justread this all freakin evening! I never liked Carlisle until NOW! AND I REALLY LIKE HIM NOW! So thank you for that!
Bella kinda grossed me out trying to bone Edward. And Edward made my gag reflex attack me too. Kust fyi...BUT I LOVE CARLISLE!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
waiting on the edge of my seat!!!!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
<33
Date: 19 Mar 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
I liked it, but I felt a little off by Carlisle being Esme's brother.
Date: 19 Mar 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
my god i was bawling my eyes out in this chapter
Date: 19 Mar 2010 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
This has been great! I love the storyline and the humor, plus the drama. I'll never look at Carlisle the same, ever again! LOL! Keep up the good work! I can't wait to see what happens!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Well I'm hoping this bridges the gap between father and son, but where does that leave Bella? I can't see Carlisle getting over the fact that she almost slept with his son and Bella won't be able to get past her feelings for Carlisle to have anything for Edward. I thought I had it figured out, but now I'm more confused about who will end up together. Great chapter.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Well i dont think i would of jumped back into bed even for Carlise after the way he hurt her, in fact when he fessed up and said the reason why, i would probo go good for you and walk away and let him and stew and suffer abit as she had.
Then he walks out on her again after she has been honest, she could of lied. She has been more honest than him imho
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Oh God! What a mess!!!!!! Poor poor Bella she still think about everyone else first, that's why she didn't defend herself saying aboud Edward's advances and attempts to seduce her only to make Carlisle hurt. But I believe in Dr-sexy-as-hell-C, he will figure it out eventually.
Edward is so messed up kid, God, I hope he will come around but now he's such an ass!
Pls. update soon ;-)
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
Assward is just that...I think he should know just to knock his spoiled ass down a few pegs. If he were my grown son talking to me that way, I might have hit him.
Author's Response:
My friend said the same thing! She asked me if one of my sons talked to me like that if I would stand for it. And, maybe I would if I was in the position Carlisle is in. I do think Edward needs to be taken down a few pegs. And he will be....
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
Squee!!!!! Love it! Can't wait to see the drama unfold!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
oh man...what a chapter. Fantastically written, completely realistic, and completely heart-wrenching!! Please update soon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! The next chapter probably won't be up for a week or two, I'm still trying to fine tune everything.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
This is an amazing story! I can't wait to see what happens next!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
This is an awesome story. You are doing a great job.
I don't blame you for letting Bella have Carlisle one last time. Where is Edward? Will Carlisle and Edward work things out? I can't wait to find out. Will Carlisle and Bella work things out? Can't wait. I am a little lost about the book....what was that about??????
Author's Response:
I sat here thinking for a good solid minute..."What book? Did I misprint something and it came out book instead of look?" LOL And then I finally remembered. Forgive me. It may be early afternoon, but I'm going on very little sleep thanks to a new fic I found. The book will all be explained in chapters to come.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Seriously, Bella?
I do wonder if he'd have ever done it himself. He could have kept perpetually postponing it, and she saved him a very awkward conversation. I love how she is a catalyst in Edward's life. And how she left out a crucial bit of information which, had she told Carlisle, would have hurt him more than what she'd already releaved. Flirting on occassion. Indeed. But he loves her. And he ... did it again. Granted, she did muck it all up properly. I can't wait until Esme comes home. I am inclined to suppose that Edward is seeking out information about mommy dearest. But perhaps that's only due to my fanciful nature.
Author's Response:
I think everyone is waiting on Esme to come home and have some magic words that will make everything all better. Hopefully, she'll be able to smooth some things, but will she be able to fix this? I'm not so sure. This really is between Carlisle and Edward/Carlisle and Bella. But as always she will have some words of wisdom
Date: 18 Mar 2010 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Ok, I'm breathing again. I guess I can hang in there for a few more chapters. I think what you wrote was pretty realistic. I'd have had make-up sex before confessing, I guess. And there was no way Bella could have kept all that hidden without being eaten alive by guilt or doing further damage. But gosh, I can't believe you just had to stop there. Hurry up and tell us what happens between Edward and Carlisle.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Oh my god that was such a great chapter... I hope what Bella did will bring father and son togerther not further apart...
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
I hope Edward tells him what he had been doing!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
Wow...really liked the look inside Carlisle's mind...can't wait to see what happens when the boy shows up!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
My fave non canon carlisle...damn!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Loved that we finally know why Daddy C wanted to leave Bella, just wish it was something that wasnt so silly.... Now onto Edward, that little ass, i cant beleiev he would do something so low as that. But i know its the way you wrote the characters. Loved the Lemon, and that I love you came out. Just wished it ended differently. I know he's mad at Bella for telling edward, but come on it was an honest mistake, and nothing happened between her and edward so give the girl a break. Waiting patiently for the next chapter. Keep up the awesome work. This is one of my absolute favorite stories on this site.
Author's Response:
It was a silly reason, wasn't it? *sigh* Carlisle needs to learn he can't protect and make things right for everyone. He needs to focus more on himself than others around him. Why he does that will be explained before the end of all this. I think he just needs to take a step back and clear his head before making any rash decisions when it comes to him and Bella. I'm holding my breath like all of you that they work it all out
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
K I know it was wrong but the girl said she had a lot to drink. I hope Edward tells him the whole story, that might help her. Wishful thinking I know. Mann I need them back together. Daddy C has just mad me very unhappy
Author's Response:
I hope once he steps back and takes a break from everything, he'll come to realize its not as bas as he thought. Okay, it was bad, but she could have actually slept with him
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Crap. Is it over for good? Are they just going to decide that they're better off without each other? Is Edward ever going to forgive Carlisle? Does this sound like the ending of a bad soap opera? Just kidding. I'm done! Love it, even though there's trouble in paradise.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
What a mess they are all in. I really want to kick Edward in the head. I had a feeling he was using Bella.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
fast updates please :D love the chapter minis the bella/carlisle arguement...keep up the great work!!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
i love the chapter. i think you should do an epilogue. i think it was mean to declare their love and walk away but i think it worked for the story.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Okay, I loved it and I hated it at the same time. I hate that by resolving like one thing, Bella and Carlisle have a multitude of problems to face now, but that's life sometimes isn't it? Please please please update again real soon. I need to know what happens with Carlisle and Edward and Carlisle and Bella.
Author's Response:
It does seem like they can't catch a break, doesn't it? I'm holding my breath with all of you that everything works out for all of them!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Great chapter~
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
18 chapters?!? Wow - so I guess a lot is going to be happening in the next few chapters! Awesome. And WOW - my heart actually hurt a few times reading this chapter! I can't believe he knew the whole time! Seeing how upset C got at the thought of B/E sleeping together - makes me really glad they didn't (even if I kind of wanted them to at the time...). I'm sure he probably always had a complex about Bella being with someone closer to her own age - if not, he probably does now! Maybe this is something he will be able to get over as he has more time to think about why she did it. Poor Edward. Hope he's found soon. Can't wait for more!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Ahhh!! Poor Carlisle! And poor Edward! Their lives have just crumbled. I don't blame Carlisle for walking away. You'd have to...even if you didn't want to - almost just out of principal. But he damn well better run back!
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
See, here's the thing. I totally see Bella's side here. Edward was flirting and being all dazzling to her non-stop. She didn't know he was "faking it" which I don't buy into completely - he stopped because he couldn't go through with it. But she just had her heart broken, she was drinking and to her, he had been sweet and there and a chance to escape. She just didn't have the energy to fight it anymore and gave in, whether that was what she really wanted or not.
But I also see how Carlisle can't see that. It'll take time, but if you're not getting Edward and Bella together, then there had better be at least one happy couple, lol.
This is one of the first times I have really disliked Edward, which I kinda thank you for. Because if I liked him, then I'd be super pissed this wasn't a B/E story.
Good Chapter. No matter how long you write them, they never seem long enough.
Author's Response:
I can see everyone's side and it sucks lol! Well, Edward I'm not too fond of right now, but I hope under all the anger and assholism (hehe my new made up word of the day) that there really is a good guy. I think issues need to be resolved between father and son before either of them can move on to other things. Carlisle with Bella - and there's still issues there - and Edward with....whoever. I've had soo many people beg me not to have him end up with Tanya, which surprised me since she's not really a character in the story, just a mere mention. I guess some can't separate the Tanya from Twilight and the one that may be in here.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Did she really expect that to go well? Where the hell is Edward?
Author's Response:
I don't think she expected it to go well at all, but anyone in that situation would want to have a tiny bit of bit that it wouldn't blow up as much as it did. Edward...I have no idea where Edward is right now! He hasn't disclosed his location to me either. Is he licking is wounds? Back in New York? Searching for answers? Only time will tell
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2010 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
I have to say I love this and hope that its going to stick to a Carlise and Bella story..with little bit of Edward drama in it..but ultimately C/B!!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
OMG poor Bella, I feel sorry for her and Carlisle and even though i am Team Edward, i want her to get with Carlisle in your story. I can't wait for the next update. Please update soon and take away the suspense we are all feeling lol.
[Report This]Date: 09 Mar 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I loved it. This chapter was great, so sad for Bella though. Poor Carlisle, thinking he's being doing the right thing... and dayum Edward. ;D
Author's Response:
Thank you! Carlisle has to get over the idea that he needs to protect everyone he loves. It doesn't do any good in the end, does it?
Date: 08 Mar 2010 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
OMG i need to know what happens with edward and bella!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Ooooh, don't make me wait too long. I guess I should have known Edward would figure everything out. And I should have known Carlisle would back out of things. I love your Carlisle, by the way. He's so mature, naughty, sensitive, and sexy all at the same time. I know he's hurting, too.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I love my Carlisle too lol. He's always seen as the father figure and doesn't always get to bring is naughty side out to play. I love being able to do that for him.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Well, Eddie boy knows how to cut right to the core of things.
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Oh so sad and so crazy Edward stopped! Can't wait to see what she says to Edward about her and Carlisle!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
I can't wait to find out if she did!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
So crazy how Carlisle was not jealous of Edward being alone with Bella. Great chapter!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
WOW!!! This was one intense chapter.
Did Carlisle get scared and let Bella go???
HOW DID EDWARD KNOW THAT BELLA WAS FUCKING CARLISLE?????????
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
WOW so good! Love the shower scene!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
so in love with this story! Love the Bella Carlisle action!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I love this story! It rocks, but I hope that she ends up with Carlisle.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope so too! These two give me emotional whip lash
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Ok you really bad, bad, cliffy woman ;-) leave it like that for us to wait for an update?!!!! I don't know how I'll handle that!
Don't worry you're not the only one to do things you shouldn't I assure you! Been there, done that... But I'm happy she eventually didn't screw him, it wouldn't be good and only add more scruples for Carlisle to not continue this "relationship" with Bella.
Great chapter, waiting impatiently for the next ones, kisses.
Author's Response:
By the time I reached the end of this chapter it was 31 pages, I had to leave that cliffhanger. Plus, I will admit I like keep everyone is suspense ;) I hope to have the next chapter up sooner than I usually do
Date: 03 Mar 2010 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
OOOOH!!! How will they explain this!!! How did he find out?!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
OMG! I almost cried when Charlisle broke up with Bella. I am glad she didn't end up in bed with Edward. Keep up the good work.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Hurry up and update! This story is slowly becoming one of my obsessions and i hate to wait!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Finally. Some honesty. It's refreshing. And frustrating. What is with Carlisle and doing things that hurt himself and the perople he loves for their own good. I mean, really. There's a line between altruism and ... controlling. I think Carlisle may have a bit of a God complex. IloveEdward!Heisofunnyandkindofhorriblebutmostlyjustuninformedandangry. Golly. This story makes me incoherent. Love.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
<3
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
McNaughty, Alice can only guess at how right she is. I wonder why Bella is so insistent about denying any form of relationship in front of Edward. I find it a little odd, then again, they haven`t exactly put a lable on what they are... although there is the fact that he wants more. I hope it isn`t more than Bella is willing to give.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
She didn`t. He wouldn`t. It wouldn`t be right. She passed out. But she didn`t push him away. He must known, more now than before, about her and well, maybe not. I wonder why good stories make me go all convoluted with my sentence structure. He said it was a competition, that she was only a competition. Nothing good can come of this. And things with Carlisle were moving along so well. He likes her. He had fun. *Headdesk* Fun.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
They spent the night together. It`s so sweet. Umm... Edward is weirding me out... I think that he suspects, if not definitely knows, that there is something going on between Bella and his father and yet he persists. I love that she doesn`t waver. And that she isn`t confused. And that she`s falling for him. And that he wants to continue being with her. I particularly like their dancing. Oh! And the pictures, Charlie was adorable. I love how random he was, I think that maybe he and Carlisle had a little time to talk in the car before the wedding, hmm. It`s all so great. Too great, even.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Poor Edward. Things would be completely different if she`d met him first. But I think that Esme was right, she`s right for Carlisle. They fit. And I love how sweet Jasper is, and how Alice can`t help but be drawn to him.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
I like Edward, he`s interesting and has quite a bit to say. I really really like Carlisle. His self sacrifice for Edward`s sake and Edward`s abundance of incorrect information is ... I don`t know. It fits the characters though. Golly, what terrible way to grow up, thinking that the parent that cares is the one that ruined something he probably thinks of rather ideally. Geesh. What`s a girl to do with that information? I suddenly envy Bells a little bit less.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
Sure. Of course. I mean, it only makes sense that Edward would come to Esme`s wedding. I wonder how she`ll react to him. Gah. Poor... I dunno? Charlie? Yeah, poor Charlie. I love him for freaking out Carlisle. It`s hilarious how obvious they are though. And really, Alice is too good for words.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
I think he likes her. And I`m also pretty sure he`s just figured out how much.
Oh, god, he`s hilarious. And adorable. It`s ridiculous.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
wow never would have thought he would stop it or figure out bout his dad and her
Date: 03 Mar 2010 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
You won't lose me because of it, but it does dissapoint me. You should write an alternate ending/half of the story where it's B/E lol.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
i was not expecting that at the end!
i love this story i cant wait for more!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Wow didn't se this coming. Daddy C better get his head out of his ass and man up before I drop him. I hate that she continues to get hurt by these men. I hope when he finally does come around and he better, she makes him work for it
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Gosh what a fantastic story! Write faster!!!! Asshole Edward is quite cute, but I am really rooting for Carlisle! I never thought I would be!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Charlie doesn`t want to know, I`m thinking he enjoys his blissful denial and willingly swallows whatever story makes him comfortable (to a point, of course). I love that Esme is so candid. I`m thinking if it ever gets to the point where they need to tell Charlie, having her on their side will be a very positive thing. Her honesty is helpful and apparently necessarcy seeing as Bella can hardly put words together to question Carlisle about his past, she also seems to forget that he`s been asking questions along the same lines that she fears to venture. I love Alice. She is the greatest person ever.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
It can`t end now that it`s only just begun, can it? Carlisle is sweet, wanting to save her, protect her - such a kind sentiment. And he does seem to have quite the fascination for Bella. Although I have to wonder the same things she did when he admit that he`s not attatched and hasn`t been ever married...
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Carlisle is perfect. I may say that too often, but honestly. He`s really rather fantastic. And Bella, oh, if that one does not have a sharp tongue then I don`t know who does. Alice is, also, perfect. Bella is lucky to have Alice around. I like how Esme and Charlie are with each other. It`s wonderfully sweet. Quite a bit learned about the Cullens today. I wonder when Esme`s nephew will arrive. And how Bella will react to her step-cousin. Pfft. I love this story.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
I am so switching teams. Carlisle is perfect. I have never read a pairing with as much chemistry and hilariously awkward Bella-moments as this. Her mind wanders rather regularly and I love how he just watches with interest. And the pacing is perfect. I mean, the tension between them is evidently obvious to Alice and maybe Esme senses something - I only hope Charlie isn`t as observant.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
Awesome. I love every detail. Charlie and Esme are really sweet together. Alice is right, there are unparalleled experiences that come with age.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
cant wait to find out how edwaed knew
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
This was a good chapter. How did Edward find out though. I hope Carlise gets his head out of his butt. I love the pairing. I could see them together and happy. I want them to tell Edward the truth about his mother. When is that going to happen? Can't wait for the next chapter, make is soon please!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Ohhh boy. I can't wait to see what happens. As sick as some may think it is I hope she ends up with Carlisle. Update soon please!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I'm interested to know, how long Edward knew. Was it just when he thought he overheard her say his name or before. And if before was it just because he wanted to get even with his father. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
How did Edward figure it out? I can't wait for the next chapter. Kat
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
OMG
hurry up and write!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I love Bella and Carlisle together. I do have to admit that I am feeling sorry for Edward though. I am so used to Bella and Edward being together that I worry about him being broken hearted. I love the chapter though. Kat
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Oh! Whatcha want to bet that Edward found out and told Carlisle to break it off. The little weasel. I really hate Edward. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Keep up the excellent work!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
ohhhh Bella needs to man up and tell him how she feels -- he is bareing his soul - she needs to do the same....
excellent as always!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Is this a c-b story or a b-e?
Because I'm so conflicted. I want Edward and Bella to be together, but not at the cost of hurting Carlisle and vice versa really.
My heart hurts this chapter :(
Author's Response:
It is a B/C fic. I'm sorry if that disappoints you and I have lost some readers because of it. When I started writing I fully intended it to be B/E, but I'm really happy with how it ended up.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Oh no!! What a mess!
Date: 03 Mar 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Say what? How did he figure it out? Oh please update soon!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
I wonder how long Edward is staying in Forks. Kat
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I stumbled upon this story and I have to say I love it. It just keeps you wondering. I figured Edward would be intuitive enough to see what was going on. I think Jasper warned Bella of his intentions earlier. His agenda was to hurt Carlisle by hooking up with Bella, but this was before he actually got to know her. So as much as he wants to hurt his Dad he now doesn't want to hurt her or have her regret what they do. What a tangled web!!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
I knew that he knew it was his Dad. He's not a dummy. Especially after he called her out on defending him.
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Ok, this isn't something I was expecting. But none the less, you got me wanting more. Im think junior showed up and confronted Daddy C, BUt I could be wrong. Waiting patiently for the next chapter.....
Author's Response:
Him confronting Carlisle would be an interesting twist for sure!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
this was awesome. i cant wait for the next chapter. the ending was a suprise and i loved it. what was the phone call that she ignored?
Author's Response:
The ending surprised me as well! I'd love to fill you in about the phone call, but I can't give anything away!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Uh oh! So he knows. I wonder if Bella will tell Edward everything, including the secret his Father has kept all these years? Great chapter. Hum, did Edward go see his father and talk to him about Bella and this made Carlisle decided to end things with Bella?
Author's Response:
That would be a very interesting twist indeed!
Date: 02 Mar 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
The plot thickens! Kat ^_^