Date: 09 May 2010 3:34 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
wow just found this and have been camped out at my comp reading it! :) (i think my husband and children are hungry but I kept telling them.. just let me read one more chapter then i will get up and that was last night LMAO)
going to put u on alert for any future works :)
Kate
Author's Response:
LOL I've had hungry a hungry boyfriend and children many times too being caught up in a story. So glad my fic was one of them that did it to you! Well, maybe your kids and hubby aren't as glad haha.
I do have another story in the works, entitled Playing With Fire. It should be up soon, so keep an eye out for it!
[Report This]Date: 08 May 2010 4:35 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
First, I want to tell you how much I really enjoyed this story. I originally thought this would be a B&E story and I was "uncomfortable" realizing it wasn't going to be and B would end up with C. I almost stopped reading it since I have a difficult time seeing Edward with anyone other than Bella and Angela just did not do it for me.
That being said, I can honestly say I was surprised with this story and it really got my mind out of the "Twilight" mind set. I can see this being an original story with just a simple name change to the characters.
Really good job and thank you for sharing your talent.
Author's Response:
It really does mean a lot to me when readers continued with the story even being die hard B/E fans. I love that you gave it a chance and really liked it in the end. Honestly, Angela didn't do it for me either, but I was running out of options!
And thanks for thinking it could be an orginal story. I have no plans (yet) to try it out, but maybe in the future.
If you're interested, I do have another fic I'm working on entitled Playing With Fire. It should be out in the next couple of weeks. Hope you keep an eye out for it!
Date: 06 May 2010 5:39 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
that was good i liked it glad that bella got her happy every after
Date: 05 May 2010 8:44 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Amazing story I loved it.
Can't believe its over!
xo Beckie
Date: 03 May 2010 11:42 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
yay everyone has found their 'one' thank you for writting.
Date: 03 May 2010 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
yay everyone gets a happily ever after!
Date: 03 May 2010 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
poor edward! i could not even imagine how it would feel to stand there and have that conversation with my mom. but the journey has been started towards healing for everyone.
Date: 03 May 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
wow i like your renee! she seems really smart about things and sees things deeper than most would. glad to see we found out why carlilse said charlie wouldn't be a problem, can't believe he told! wonder how everything will turn out.
Date: 03 May 2010 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
well looks like everything is out in the open now, but what will come of it all? and what the hell did carlilse mean when he said that there was no need to worry about charlie? how long has HE known about what is goning on?
Date: 03 May 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
oh my, how long has edward known? how did he find out? what will bella say?
Date: 03 May 2010 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
well looks like they are starting to accept that they both want 'more' now they just have to figure out how they are gonna get it.
Date: 03 May 2010 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
she better not have. he better not have, from the souns of it she passed out! bella really needs to tell him about her and daddy c.
Date: 03 May 2010 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
the wedding was great. so hot that they explored the joys of the backseat of his car. so sweet that they have finnally gotten the chance to cuddle up and fall asleep.
edward needs to back the fuck off! and bella and daddy c need to come clean to everyone, and soon.
Date: 02 May 2010 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
i wanna hear what daddy c wants! so not fair to leave it off like that. and i'm surprised that bella didn't follow him downstairs to finish that conversation.
Date: 02 May 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
my vote is still for daddy c! and going by what i've seen of edward i think it's gonna stay with him.
kinda confused as to why carlisle didn't just tell eddie that his momma died, would have made things easier on everyone. but then there would be no conflict here. so i guess it had to be...
Date: 02 May 2010 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
i am still rooting for daddy c. it sounds like he has never allowed himself to find and feel love. him and b could be great together. eddie still has forever to find a girl. and come on now it's not like there wouldn't be a line up of girls begging to have a go at all that is edward cullen!
Date: 02 May 2010 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
wow daddy c needs someone to love and care for him, someone to help him be whole. i wonder who that could be? i am almost hopeing that she ends up picking him over eddie-boy, but i guess we'll just have to see what your eddie is like...
Date: 02 May 2010 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
i wonder what esme means about daddy c? what happened to him to cause the 'damage'?
Date: 02 May 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
well looks like they are caught, i wonder who it is?
Date: 02 May 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
i think i like your dirty daddy c!
Date: 01 May 2010 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
well daddy c that was not nice to start something if you are not going to finish it! right bella? looks like they are gonna have to find a way out of the house for a while.
Date: 01 May 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
i wondered who would be the first to touch under the table. looks like daddy c goes for what he wants. i wonder what b is gonna do.
Date: 01 May 2010 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
well this one sounds like it is gonna be fun!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Awww, they're so cute! I hope it works out somehow.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
I'm actually really rooting for Bella to end up with carlisle in this one. That's a first! Well done!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
You're trying to kill me with this fic aren't you? Shower sex, carpet sex, closet sex...
And the list goes on and on and on!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
Wow, the barrier free shower sex was hot! I wonder if either of them thought about STD's though...
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
BUSTED! very appropriate title! I wonder if it was Charlie or Esme... hmmmm?
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
Ummmm, I need a cold shower after that one! I'm an enormous Daddy C fan myself. I think he's just as hot as Edward's character actually. Well done!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
“Yeah, maybe next time you won’t get performance anxiety. Good night, Carlisle.”
OMG that was the best cock-blocking line EVER! Love it!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
Wow, talk about sexual tension! you sure know how to write it my dear! Whew! I need a glass of cold water myself!
Date: 30 Apr 2010 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
I LOVE that description of Carlisle! He sounds H-O-T!
Date: 29 Apr 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Ok. First of all, just know that I don't review stories unless it's so good that I want to eat it! This story is smokin' hot and sexy too boot. DAYUM! I quit smoking a few years ago, but I feel like I need one after these few chapters. You do an AMAZING job with combining characterization with storyline and sex! This is a really good story. Thought about the coat room incident all day at work. Almost melted my panties. YEAH!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2010 7:09 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Wow that was an amazing story! I'm sad it is over :(
Date: 27 Apr 2010 3:42 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Loved the story!! If Bella had to end up with anyone other than Edward, I agree that it has to be Carlisle. Hot, hot, hot story.
EeWee
Date: 27 Apr 2010 1:28 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Aww that was such an amazing story and i really love the baby's name, it's so cute and has significance as well. I can't believe the story is over but that was a really good ending.
Date: 26 Apr 2010 1:57 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Aw! I loved this so much! One of my favorites ever! :) You rock, and this story is great! :)
[Report This]Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:22 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Perfect ending!!! I love HEAs and I think the one you wrote for this is excellent. I loved the flashbacks of the wedding and the pregnancy. And Edward is happy with Angela and Jasper and Alice are married...love it all.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
I nearly had a shit fit when I read James was back in the picture. I am so glad that he was only looking to be her friend. Bella has been through enough.
I liked that Edward and Bella made peace. I really hated Assward.
Yea!!!! Carlisle took his head out of his ass and came to get Bella! Woo hoo!!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Long Road To Healing
Ok, Kate gets the award for Uberbitch of the century! How could someone treat their own child with such ice cold hostility and indifference. No wonder Carlisle chose to lie. I love that Esme is the voice of reason in all this fuckery. And I am glad that she doesn't let Carlisle dismiss her when he doesn't want to hear what she has to say.
I am glad Edward and Carlisle finally had it out. Maybe now they can start building their relationship back up.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 16: Words of Wisdom
OMG! So Charlie knew at the wedding?!? That explains his behavior when he insisted they have pictures together.
I love moments when Charlie shows his dad side. He was so sweet to Bella.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 15: Broken Promises
Hello rollar coaster of emotions! So Edward was just trying to nail her to take revenge on daddy? That is sick and twisted and not in a good way.
Ahhh, they finally admitted that they loved each other, but now what? He can't even look at her. My heart breaks for them.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Fuck me!!! How the hell did Assward know about B&C???
This chapter was so hard to read as Carlisle broke things off with her. I actually had tears in my eyes, very sad.
I can't beleive she threw herself at Edward like that. The girl needs help.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
Phew, I am so glad she didn't sleep with Assward.
McNaughty??? Nice! ;)
I loved the scene with the woman at the desk. I love snarky Bella.
And yes, dresser sex was unbelievably hot! I need Dr Cullen to make a house call!!!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drunk Confessions
Holy shit!!! Please tell me she didn't have sex with him. What was she thinking? Drinking games with Assward are never a good idea.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Wedding
Seriously, these two are perfect together. I really hope that Edward does not succeed in his seduction attempts. Grrrr, I really don't like Assward!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 10: Babysitting Edward Cullen
Yep, Edward is definately an ass. I am glad Bella had the clarity of mind to push him away when he tried to kiss her.
Seriously love this B&C coupling. They could set ice on fire with the things they do!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
Whoa, Edward really is an ass! I don't see Bella warming up to him anytime soon.
Poor damaged Carlisle. How sad that he has taken the blame for years for something that he didn't do.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 8: Anticipation
I love the conversation about how Bella was going to wear her hair for the wedding. Too funny.
Alright, I need to have some time with this Carlisle. That whole scene in the new house was fucking amazing. You write him entirely too tempting for words.
Ahh, the prodical son has shown up. This could get very interesting. Is Carlsle willing to share?
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
OMC!!! The shower sex has totally eclipsed the rest of the chapter! That was too yummy for words.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 6: Damaged Man
Esme is no fool. I love that she busted Bella for the contacts lie.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 5: Busted
Oh shit! Charlie is going to shoot and mount Carlisle on the wall.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
OMG!!! Dirty talking Carlisle is damned hot! I love that he found them at the club and took her out back for sex! It is dirty and beyond hot!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Oh shit! Performance anxiety??? That was just mean. But he deserved it after all the man handling at the restaurant and then getting her all hot and bothered in the kitchen. A girl can only take so much.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
Oh my. This Carlisle doesn't seem like the gentleman we are so used to.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
Hmmmm, very interesting start. Looks like Bella found a piece of eye candy at her dad's place.
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:31 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
I've been up literally all night (it's 5:30 am) reading this story. It was absolutely amazing and also completely heartbreaking at parts, but this has got to be one of the, if not THE best Bella/Carlisle fic I've ever read (and I've read a bunch as I love the pairing). Wonderful plot, spectacular writing (even if I did want to whack Alice upside the head with a heavy object at several different parts)...This was just an amazingly beautiful story.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
After hearing Carlisle's thoughts I am dreading Edward's appearence. I kinda want Bella to end up with Carlisle...I don't want him to get hurt again. And Bella is good for him just like Esme said.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 2: Oh Dr, Cullen
This story has had me giggling...my husband thinks I am crazy. And oh boy do I like naughty Carlisle!
[Report This]Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:21 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Loved your story from start to finish.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:29 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
I loved ths chapter. I loved the whole story. You did an amazing job with it. I am glad that you had Carlisle and Bella having a little girl. That way Edward can not compare. I am glad that Carlsile and Edward worked things out. GREAT GREAT JOB!!!!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 3: Alone in Charlie's Kitchen
Holy Smokes!!! It's hot in here! *fans self*
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 14: Secrets Exposed
Love it! And I'm not against their age but I think A is right. And its not all about love. Real life comes into play at some point. And I'm also not a disbelieved in feeling love right away or quickly. But honestly most of that love is fueled by lust.
So glad E called her out too. How many times had she said his name out loud in that house w paper thin walls? She wasn't exactly discrete. And again not to say that there aren't real feelings between them I do think there age gap is much more of an advantage for C and a disadvantage for B. If either of them were really being mature and thinking w their brains they would see this.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:38 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
AWESOME JOB!!! I really enjoyed the ending!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:31 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
<3
Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1: Coming Home
<3
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:42 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
fantastically wonderfully exceptionally done!! What a satisfying, unbelievably wonderful ending! I would have loved to read about Carlisle's reaction when Summer came, but you left things off at a great place. I feel like reading the entire thing over again!! And I think I will!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you! I thought about putting the baby's birth in, but really it just kind of stopped on its own. Maybe I'll do an outtake of the birth
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:27 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
I'm so glad Bella and Carlisle worked things out and had their 'happy ever after'. I'm also glad that things between Carlisle and Edward worked out and that Edward found someone to be happy with as well. It was a great story.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:26 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
You did a great job on this story! I really enjoyed it. Can't wait to read what you do next!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:06 PM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
eek it was fabiolus
it came we read you conqured lol im a dork and your writting rocks ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
This chapter was amazing. I love how you finished it. Bell will get her "happily ever after" I do like the way you brought James back and how that went.
I have read a few James/Bella stories on fanfic, they are pretty good. I also like him as the villain. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Please keep on writing.
Most stories I won't read until they are complete. I HATE waiting for updates, but, yours was different. I couldn’t help myself. It was torture waiting for your updates but, they were so worth it.
Again thank you for this story and I hope you keep on writing.
Kim
Author's Response:
Thanks! I never intended to bring James into the story. He was only supposed to be mentioned as the ex, much like Tanya. But Bella needed someone who wasn't personally involved in the situation to turn to and I think James did great!
I have a love/hate relationship with waiting for updates. I hate waiting, but I love the delicious torture and having to find out lol. What I really dislike is starting a story to find the author hasn't updated in months and months. I'm sucked in and now have no idea if she's going to finish or not.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 9:20 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
perfect!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 8:55 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Love the ending!!!! How cute.... Congrats on the finished master piece!!!!
Author's Response:
A master piece...Wow. Thank YOU for reading it and making it a master piece, if in fact that's what it is! :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 8:51 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Love the ending!!!! How cute.... Congrats on the finished master piece!!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 13: Sex in Seattle
I love some B and C action but I still always want her to end up w E.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 6:00 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
I love this story...I must confess though that it did take me a few chapters to get there, but i did and i was hooked.
you ended this story perfectly...some stories seem to leave it open for a sequel without actually having a sequel to it so how you ended this was great!!! can't wait to read what else you may produce in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It usually does take people a little bit to get into, especially if they're hard core B/E fans, but I love that you, and everyone else, gave it a chance!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:59 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
WOW...that was great!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 9: Secrets and Lies
Always love a cocky E. So much hotter than emoward. But I think C is hurting E just as much w his lie. Now E has no relationship w his mother or father.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:25 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
great chapter i love this story
Date: 22 Apr 2010 4:17 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
*hugs self* SO SWEET!!!! Great epi!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:48 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
i cant believe the story is over. i loved it. i loved how it ended even though i never wanted it to end.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: Bliss
Man. I need to breathe. This isn't the 1st story I've read but fuuuuuuuuck that was hot. I think Dr. Daddy is making my stomach hurt!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:55 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Perfection. I don't think I can express it any better than that.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:23 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Awww so nice! One of my favourite stories and it's not even Bella/Edward! I've been turned ;)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 7: Revelations
HOT!!!!!!!!!!!! def a member of carlisle DILF!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:57 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Someone for everyone and a baby to boot, perfect!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:56 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Definitely love it.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:50 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Perfect! That was perfection...i'm glad I got my wish...B got preggers! I love HEA's I really loved this story, I'll miss these characters! Well done!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 1:09 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Great ending to a great story. Yes, so glad it wasn't Tanya. LOL
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:35 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Perfect ending!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:34 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
im happy they are happy ! its makes me all warm in side!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:33 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
AWE!! I love how you wrapped that up! So cute and sweet and still funny and snarky enough to live up to the rest of the story. A great ending to a great story! Well done~
[Report This]Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:30 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Beautiful ending!!!!! I really loved reading your story and look forward to your next one. Take care!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:22 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
wow- that was great!!!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:15 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
You wrapped it up well! Thanks for sharing this story with us :-)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:12 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
awww, thats sweet how it ended... I was expecting to see them married, but not with a baby, but it's all good.... Cant wait to see what u have planned next.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 18: Forever
Oh my...when Edward made the "Funny, bella had a cheating douche bag of an ex name James" comment, I died! So awesome!
I'm glad that Bella was able to get closure and that Carlisle came back...you faked me out when Edward showed, but I love it...now I just have to run to the epi!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:08 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
Totally love the ending. I am going to miss the story though.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:06 AM Title: Epilogue: 1095 Days Later
THANK YOU for the wonderful story and yes i was very happy with the wedding and the baby.
i am kind of sad there is not going to be more i would have loved a little DILF