[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 5:19 PM Title: Appointments
Lol, is Bella walking like a duck? Everyone seems to be getting really confused with what's going on and what they're feeling. I say they should just all be straight with each other but knowing Edward he'll blow his top and it will ruin the game for him. He'll then have to take a long hard look at himself and decide what he wants from his life and I'm really not sure if he's ready for that yet, although it did cross his mind to push Jasper out of the game and keep Bella from himself, such a loyal man, lol. If they are honest Bella's going to be angry that she's been played right from the beginning even though it did cross her mind.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:39 PM Title: Cracks in the Armor
Things are starting to change more for these three now. I'm glad that Edward has ended his arrangement with Angela, she could still end up being a bitch to Bella though, she may think it's all her fault. Edward will have a fit if Jasper is honest with Bella but then it might just force Bella to reveal that she's been thinking that she'd like both of them. So many ways this could go, lol.
Emmett and Rose would have loved to have had parents like Peter and Charlotte. In my little happy world I can see them all becoming one big family, Alec included. Lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:27 PM Title: Chastity
Oh my God a chastity belt! He really is evil. She'll be ripping their clothes off later when she sees them.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:13 PM Title: Are You Amiable?
Has Bella thought anymore about the submissive side of her nature? It strikes me that both Edward or Jasper could talk her into anything. Will this make her feel more used by them? I know this is strange, after everything they've already done, but this time with Edward would definitely make me feel used, I'd feel as though I was a toy being passed from one person to the next.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:30 AM Title: Decisions
Edward's definitely slipping but he's such an anal control freak. Every part of his life is ordered and planned. I think he uses this to protect himself from committing to a relationship, he's using protecting Jasper as an excuse. Bella's already chipping away at his wall, it's only a matter of time before she makes a hole big enough to get through. I honestly think that with the situation they find themselves in now, it's going to take Bella to lay her cards on the table, once she finally realises that it's both of them that she wants.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 3:12 AM Title: Eyes Wide Shut
Bella's certainly put the cat amongst the pigeons for Jasper and Edward, Jasper more so at the moment, we'll have to see about Edward later, lol. Peter and Charlotte seem like they could become good friends to Jasper.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:55 AM Title: What Now?
Hmmm, it sounds as though the thought of Edward getting a bit of one on one time with Bella doesn't sit well with Jasper. I wonder what Bella will think about it and whether she'll see Jasper's absence in class as a further rejection of her.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:45 AM Title: After
Ooooh, that was awkward. Trouble is, of course, Bella doesn't know they're playing a game and this will only confuse her. Jasper's heart really isn't into playing the game any longer and that's what, I think, Edward could sense, that Jasper was different than usual and then we have Edward who's totally all about playing the game. As fuck hot as the sex is, this is one huge recipe for disaster. Who'll be the first one to cave and say what they actually want?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:31 AM Title: The Fantasy Continues
Interesting has got to be an understatement. Holy shit that was so effin hot, I'm wishing I could be Bella at this moment in time, lol. I'd say she's been ruined for anyone else now so Edward and Jasper have to keep her.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:17 AM Title: Two's Company, Three's a Fantasy
Bella's wrong, it's more for Jasper and for her. It's just fucking for Edward at the moment, I'm sure he'll catch up eventually. Will she tell them about her lack of experience and Mike's little dick?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 2:01 AM Title: Making the Grade
I hope Bella won't be getting high marks on her assignment purely for her sexual prowess. I don't think Bella would find that acceptable. I hope they drop the Dr and Ms crap soon, it's a bit distracting, lol. God they're all so hot together and Bella finally gets to experience a real mans cock, bwahahaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:44 AM Title: Research Proposal
Lol, she didn't make them work too hard for that did she. I wonder if Edward is thinking the same thing as Jasper about this possibly being more than a conquest and a casual fuck or whether he's yet to catch up to him.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:18 AM Title: Surprise
Surprise indeed, lol. It looks like Ms Swan is going to make them work for this, lol. I have a picture in my head of a deer caught in the headlights and I'm thinking that's how Bella looked when she realised she had company. I'm kind of feeling sorry for her but not too much, I mean she does get off on the thrill of possibly being caught. What's her next move going to be? What's their next move going to be?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 1:02 AM Title: Biding Time
These two are like a pair of kids on Christmas Eve, lol. So Edward doesn't mean to be short with Bella he's just pissed off that Jasper's getting to see all the action and touch her first.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 12:40 AM Title: Naughty Birdie
Oh my God!! Part of her fantasy is coming true but did she get more than she bargained for? Rose, Emmett and Alec are going to die when they hear about this........well, I'm assuming that she'll tell at least Rose. She will, won't she?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2012 12:19 AM Title: Cherry Poppin'
Oh my God! Bwahahahaha!! Poor Bella. I know we all fear the pain but if you're going to lose your viginity you want to know that fuckers well and truly gone, not just a little bit broken. Bella was very charitable not dumping Mike's arse after that. I'm sorry but I couldn't put up with an inchworm dick, lol.
Ooooh, is Bella going to find her inner lesbian? Rose certainly got her all worked up. Hmmm, what would Edward and Jasper think?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:32 PM Title: Firsts
Lol, Bella's acquiring friends left, right and centre and telling all about her past, private life and fantasies. I'm glued to my seat and screen, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 11:11 PM Title: Rosalie's Story
Lol, that got Bella's attention.
Rosalie and Emmett certainly have had some rough times. What's that saying? Misery loves company. I'm not sure if that's right or if I'm interpreting it right but it really did when Royce found Rose. I'm so glad that she found Emmett again and he helped her get away and get her life back. They've both done so well for themselves, I love it when something bad turns into something good.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 10:41 PM Title: Miss Innocent
In some ways Bella's quite naive and she seems to have been sheltered from the outside world. I can't believe she's never met a gay man before and this is the first drink she's ever had. I know she said she's never been the bad girl but I would have expected her to at least have had one drink before she was twenty one, lol. Just imagine what Bella could have turned out like it Charlie and Renee had been liberal parents......my mind is boggling with all the possibilities, hahaaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:56 PM Title: Confessions
Lol, Jasper's such a voyeur. These three are so kinkily suited to each other. I can't wait to see how they put the game into action. Will Edward keep seeing Angela throughout this?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 9:32 PM Title: The Bone
I knew they'd be neighbours. Bella's definitely and exhibitionist and as Jasper's realised a bit more kinky and less innocent than they thought, lol. I can't wait for him to tell Edward.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 8:45 PM Title: Group Project
Inchworm dick....bwahahahahaha!! I'm glad Bella's made a friend, she needs someone outside of college.
How devious of Dr Cullen adding polygamy on at the end, not being suggestive at all, lol. Is it all part of the game for him to be really curt with Bella?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 7:56 PM Title: Frustrations
We go from two men whose parents couldn't care less about them to a woman whose parents love her and want to protect her. In that respect they couldn't be more different, but then little Miss Bella is a bit of an exhibitionist just like Edward and Jasper, now is she into voyeurism like they are?
Please tell me that Bella's living in the same place as Jasper, it sounded like it to me, lol. She's not the innocent girl Edward has pegged her for.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 7:11 PM Title: Together Again
Jasper's arrived and Edward already feels better. Is Jasper as dependent on Edward as Edward is on him?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 5:18 PM Title: Innocence Lost
Edward's experiences explain why he's shut himself off from his feelings. It's sad that he feels he's a sexual deviant. At what point do we turn from being sexual beings to deviants? Who draws that line? Is it just a personal one? Of course there are those activities that are just unacceptable to all of society, I would call them sick, detestable and perverse. I think the answer to who draws the line is the individuals concerned in the consensual act. One person may think anal sex is a deviant practice whilst another sees it as a complete and utter joy. Edward is being too hard on himself by labelling himself as a sexual deviant.
With a lack of experience and no safeguards in place Jane and Makenna paid the ultimate price for their sexual experimentation. Should they be labelled as deviants? Some will, some won't and although, personally, I would never venture into that realm I wouldn't call them deviants. It's so sad that a town couldn't leave it alone and let the family grieve for their loss.
Okay, I'm off my soap box now, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 4:42 PM Title: Restless Memories
Where's the disaster? Is that yet to come......too soon......maybe? Bwahahaha. That's definitely some experience for your first time and at twelve too, oh my God! I'm not sure that anything would compare after that, unless of course Edward completely embarrassed himself.
I felt sure that Jasper had got some affection from his parents when he was growing up, obviously got that wrong.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 4:15 PM Title: Match
I don't think Jasper should add Alice to his 'used and abused' list. Alice was the one that came on to him, childishly thinking that if she had sex the way Jasper wanted it he would stay. As she totally planned this, she should have prepared herself for the probability that it was just going to be a goodbye fuck and if anything else came from it it would be a bonus. I think she was a very silly girl to think anything else.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 4:01 PM Title: Set...
Lol, Alice is getting what she wished for. Is it better than she ever could have imagined? I think so. Alice is finding her kink, how will she cope with Jasper leaving now?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 3:42 PM Title: Game...
So maybe not so vanilla anymore then Alice. Is she thinking that if she seduces Jasper he won't go? Jasper's right, we learn by example and I think that both of them have been ignored by their parents on some level. It does seem that Jasper may have had more affection given to him growing up than Edward did but they've definitely both looked to each other to provide what's missing.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 3:19 PM Title: Jasper's Plans
Hmmm, so what Edward and Jasper get up to is no real big secret. I'm sure if Jasper really didn't want to play this game any longer that he'd finally find the balls to say so. It sounds as though Jasper's looking for a relationship from what he's said and maybe Bella's the girl for him, maybe she'll be the one to make Edward commit and stop playing the game.
Poor Sam, it was so sad about Emily, he's going to be bereft all over again when Jake goes to that great big clover meadow in the sky. Awwww.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 2:59 PM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 2
Wow! I wonder if Jasper fully realised what he was getting his horny 14 year old arse into when Edward said he wanted him as his wingman. If that was your first experience, vanilla would definitely be boring, lol. How long had Edward been planning this?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 2:44 PM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 1
Jasper's about to lose his 'v' card then and be initiated Cullen style into the world of non vanilla sex I take it, lol. Alice made me laugh with her 'icky, yuck, yuck' lol, maybe she'll learn it's one of the best things ever.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 1:56 PM Title: First Day
Well! Angela Weber, I'm shocked at her blatant sexual display and her a Pastor's daughter, shame on her......BWAHAHAHAHAHA!!! It's always the quiet ones, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2012 4:00 AM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen
Quite the unusual elimination process Dr Cullen's got going on there, lol. I take it that his 'wingman' is on his way. It sounds as though they're all going to be in for a surprise. I can't wait to see what happens.
Jane x
Date: 29 Oct 2012 8:36 AM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 2
loved it!
Date: 25 Oct 2012 9:27 PM Title: In Clear Sight
*sigh* I love this story.
The dynamic between the three of them is very... interesting. And electric, ya know, when the heavy shit's not going down :)
And Edward's back story? What in the hell--I just--it's fucking awesome.
I've VERY curious to see who Bella ends up with *cough*Edward*cough*, and yes I will admit I want to strangle them both for those 'I love yous'; I can't help that E owns my heart and my cooch. BUT, I will say that should she choose Jasper... well, regardless I refuse to abandon this fic. I adore your writing far too much for that.
Lots of love!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 9:31 PM Title: After
Is it bad that I swooned over the fact that Jasper didn't leave..?
And am I a hopeless romantic since I hope for a HEA, with at least B/J, if not an E/B/J..?
Yep, this is an absolute favorite of mine, waitin' w suspense for the rest of the story to unfold :)
-Roe-
Date: 13 Oct 2012 10:33 AM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 1
loved it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2012 1:31 PM Title: In Clear Sight
Been really loving this story. Looking forward to the rest! Had hoped Bella would end up with Edward - not that I'm tied to B&E all the time - I just love tortured E :) Can't wait to see how you tie it all up!
Uhm, even though I also publish on this site, I actually have no idea how to get notified when you update. Any chance you know how to do that?
Nice to see someone else cooking in bacon grease! Lol - we'll actually be having pork chops fried in bacon grease for dinner tonight ;-) Comes out so good!
Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:11 AM Title: In Clear Sight
Hey TB! Um, are you gonna update anytime soon? Is everyhting okay? Let us know! its been a few months since your last!
Date: 28 Sep 2012 11:19 PM Title: In Clear Sight
I love this story and can't wait to see where it goes, I'm addicted and can't wait to see how Edward earns forgiveness
Date: 15 Sep 2012 11:35 PM Title: In Clear Sight
hope u finish the story soon looking forward to it
Date: 01 Sep 2012 9:20 PM Title: In Clear Sight
pretty please update soon!
Date: 31 Aug 2012 6:52 AM Title: In Clear Sight
Wow! Im worn out. That was alot of shit to catch up with. I started this on ffn but lost track of it. I am cought up now and want to read more please! Will give Edward an hea or leave him hanging? Thanks for writing.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 7:42 AM Title: In Clear Sight
ah come clean now or wait till tomorrow?
btw hahaha i knew it was alice!
Date: 30 Aug 2012 7:32 AM Title: Life Goes On
what the hell was that?!?!?
Date: 30 Aug 2012 7:23 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
time for jasper and bella to have a long talk. hopefully 1 oops will not end in 9 months...
eddie needs to get his shit together....
Date: 30 Aug 2012 7:15 AM Title: Consequences
eddie it is time to stand up for your actions, sucks but eh gotta do it.
poor jasper and bella they have a bit to go to get to hea...
Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:54 AM Title: Mea Culpa
oh shit is it angela? .....or alice?
Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:45 AM Title: Wake Up Call
jasper is taking care of bella and ed just plain needs help.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:37 AM Title: Sticks and Stones
edward you fucker! what the hell was that?!?! good thing jasper came when he did. poor bella
Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:26 AM Title: New Girl In Town
go bella! woohoo.
is mary really alice come to stalk jasper?
Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:09 AM Title: To Wrap or Not to Wrap
hot damn! lucky girl... my gyno appointments never go that way... :(
Date: 30 Aug 2012 5:30 AM Title: Mad World
thank goodness jasper is close
Date: 30 Aug 2012 5:24 AM Title: Doubling Up
aww jasper you are too cute and so sweet.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:37 AM Title: Freedom
oh boy gonna be a fun night!
Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:19 AM Title: Appointments
oh boy jasper! right on boy, well done!
Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:02 AM Title: Cracks in the Armor
well i'm glad angela is outta the picture for now...wonder if that will come back later?
time to see how the playing will go tonight and see where this will lead for bella, jasper, and eddie.....
Date: 30 Aug 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chastity
that asshole! controlling the situation with an ultimatum and the castity belt.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 12:26 AM Title: Are You Amiable?
eddie's turn...
Date: 30 Aug 2012 12:15 AM Title: Decisions
good for you bella just go with it and don't stress.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 10:27 PM Title: Eyes Wide Shut
good to see jasper found an outlet and a friend
Date: 29 Aug 2012 9:49 PM Title: What Now?
oh jasper why are you letting him bully you?
Date: 29 Aug 2012 9:36 PM Title: After
well wake up was great but the awkwardness of after was bad
Date: 29 Aug 2012 6:55 PM Title: The Fantasy Continues
wow! where can i get a pair for myself?
Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:50 PM Title: Two's Company, Three's a Fantasy
oh boy lucky girl!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:01 PM Title: Making the Grade
love how eddie is still teaching. bella is in all her glory letting the naughty girl out...
Date: 29 Aug 2012 4:44 PM Title: Research Proposal
hot damn!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:53 PM Title: Surprise
well that didn't go quite as planned...yet
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:46 PM Title: Biding Time
let the games begin!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 8:13 AM Title: Naughty Birdie
just think sweetie it's your dream come true....
Date: 29 Aug 2012 8:06 AM Title: Cherry Poppin'
oh poor bella! and it all started so good, not fair it ended with such a little bang... lol heehee
Date: 29 Aug 2012 6:11 AM Title: Firsts
wow big day for the little swan!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:48 AM Title: Rosalie's Story
heehee what!?!?! bet she just wants the back story... lol
Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:25 AM Title: Miss Innocent
oh iam loving rose and em! heehee you made emmie gay! so awesome, i see lots of fun to come with that!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 4:25 AM Title: Confessions
oh boy! she ismaking it too easy for them! but i don't think she'd want to play hard to get....
Date: 29 Aug 2012 3:45 AM Title: The Bone
well shit jasper got an inside view of what she wants.... time to play...
Date: 28 Aug 2012 8:08 AM Title: Group Project
hook line and sinker... nice job boys
Date: 28 Aug 2012 7:25 AM Title: Frustrations
hot damn bella is a horny girl....
Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:58 AM Title: Together Again
the boys are back together... gonna be nothin but trouble... oh goodie!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:49 AM Title: Innocence Lost
little deviant! heehee love it!!
poor girls gotta play safe...
Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:44 AM Title: Restless Memories
every boy wet dream and fantacy for not just their first time but anytime! lol
Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:27 AM Title: Match
oh alice told you it wouldn't work...
Date: 28 Aug 2012 3:40 AM Title: Set...
well hot damn! too bad he's already got a plane ticket....
Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:53 AM Title: Game...
girl is serious about talking him into staying....
Date: 28 Aug 2012 2:32 AM Title: Jasper's Plans
aww look at eddie taking care of jasper... poor jasper can't get away...........
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:48 AM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 2
and the plan is hatched....
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:23 AM Title: What Dreams May Come, Part 1
ohh eddie corrupting little jasper....
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:15 AM Title: First Day
and the prey has been spotted....
Date: 28 Aug 2012 12:24 AM Title: Meet Dr. Cullen
figured i'd give you a go keep hearing awesome things from nocturnal emmisions.
eddie is a bad boy...
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 10:47 AM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
glad to find this again
I was wondering if it would end upbeing just the two of them. It suits them, but who knows what you hold for them,hmmm?
Date: 24 Aug 2012 10:29 PM Title: In Clear Sight
Oh, crap! Well, the moment´s arrived.
Read you soon, I hope :)
Date: 24 Aug 2012 10:14 PM Title: Life Goes On
Eeeeeeeek! Alec! I knew it!
Date: 24 Aug 2012 10:01 PM Title: Another Brick in the Wall
Will he find Alec?
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:39 PM Title: Mea Culpa
Oh, E... Ang fucked you over.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:31 PM Title: Wake Up Call
I´m unsure about what Edward is feeling...
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:20 PM Title: Sticks and Stones
oh, fuck.
Date: 24 Aug 2012 9:10 PM Title: New Girl In Town
.::panting::.
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was that Alice?