Date: 13 Jul 2012 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 15
I figured it was the cat liter that was going to completely clue in Edward to what Wisp' former life was. ... I can't wait to here is inner and verbal dialogue when he admits it to himself and others. I hope the heck they can get more out of James or somehow can figure out where she came from. Web searches for that kind of very kinky and depraved things.
Great chapter!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 15
It was tough, hard and painful. But something Edward really couldn't have forseen. It seems so unbelievable to consider a girl could be treated like a cat.
Thankfully it seems Edward's techniques have been able to help her. Lets hope they help more each passing day.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Wow that was heartbreaking and I can only imagine how frustrating for Edward. But it looks like he is getting through slowly but surely.
I sure hope they will eventually have lemons.
Date: 12 Jul 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 15
Poor Wisp. :( It seems like Edward is getting through a teeny tiny bit. I think it will help more now that he understands more about what she's been through.
I think a kitten is better than a puppy anyway as a cat can look after itself more whereas a dog needs much more attention and supervision so I think the initial choice was good and would be better in the long run.
And I understand the term twink can be a derogetory reference but I think if you pair it with the Rainbow Brite fact no one will take it that way. I believe most people who read fanfics are from that era anyway, in my experience. We're old pervs! ;)
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
What a powerful story!!! I can see and feel how draining that could be....
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 15
WOW that was rough but at least he has a little more on how she was being treated, poor little wisp.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 15
Your story is heart rending. I love it. I have to admit that I read Wisp's backstory. Couldn't help myself. :(
However troubling this is, it's even more difficult to imagine that for some people out there, it's true and not fan fiction. It really makes you think.
You're a great writer.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
It looks like Wisp was made to eat cat food, use the litter box and was called pet, among other things. Whoever kept her captive were sick, sick bastards. It would be so easy for Edward to lose patience with her but he doesn't. He is so freaking sweet to her. I truly love this story even though it breaks my heart. Thanks for the update!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
Great story!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 15
SO IF I'M UNDERSTANDING THIS RIGHT JAMES MADE HER THINK SHE WAS A PET AND HAD TO USE A LITTER BOX FOR THE POT AND ALSP HAD TO EAT CAT FOOD? AM I RIGHT? MY GOD HOW LONG HAS SHE BEEN TREATED LIKE THAT?.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
aww bless her.fab chapter,that was so emotional brought tears to my eyes.update soon
[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 15
Such a great chapter. It nearly broke my hart that wisp freaked out over the cat box. I hope she under stud at least have of what Edward was telling her about being human and not a pet.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
This has got to be one of the most amazing, different, and interesting stories I've read so far. I Love It!!!!!!!!! I'm torn as to wether I want to read Wisp/Bella back story or learn along with Edward. I do hope she becomes well enough to someday have a love/couple relationship with Edward, I feel even though he tells himself he can't feel that way for her I think deep down he already does. Please update soon
Pam
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
Shoot, he said if people are looking for her they aren't her family. Does that mean his accomplices could be looking for her? Accomplices that a vile low life like James is even afraid of. Oh no! And I love that she was speaking more. Baby steps :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 11
Ohhh, what she draw?! He hasn't mentioned the fact that she said his name, twice. Why not? Loving this story :)
Date: 10 Jul 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 14
Marvelous! So many clues! I would guess that Wisp had been living on cat food and that's why she reacted so violently. Rather like being brought back to hell. As for her age, James stated that they would be ruining years of work. That means she could very well could have been a minor when she was taken and her abuse started. The last 2 chapters were excellent and moved the plot and characters well. I'm looking forward to many more!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
She spoke! And she's going home with Edward :) :) :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Ugh, stupid horrible woman! ...not you, the psychologist. ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Duh, duh, dun! They better not try to take her away! Love this Alice :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 4
OMG, she's never seen a female?! That means he's had her since she was at least a small child right? Poor little thing :(
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 2
Awww, poor poor girl, and Edward is so tender and wonderful with her.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh this is interesting, creepy and scary-exciting
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 14
WOW TOTALLY LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!! I really wonder if someone is looking for her and how liong she was held captive by James and whoever and i wonder who else is involved in this. Is it Aro? Demitri? Felix? who!!!!!!!! cant wait for an update and hope its soon!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks for the review! If you want to read her backstory, it's posted on this site. If not, you'll just have to wait untiL Edward learns what happened to her. :)
Date: 08 Jul 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 14
OMG!!! once i found this story couldn't put it down until I read the last chapter. Wonderful story you are such a wonerful author thank you so much for sharing this story with us. Can't wai or the next update.
Author's Response:
Thanks for such a sweet review! I hope to be updating every Thursday as long as my schedule allows. :)
Date: 08 Jul 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
This is good. Reminds me a bit of Nell but not. Keep this up woman. I like how this is going.
Author's Response:
Lol, a lot of people have mentioned Nell. I haven't seen it, and I don't think I will while I'm writing the story. maybe after...
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 14
What a horrible life Wisp has had. The plot of this story is very intense. I love your writing and the way you handle this subject. I would like to guess that Wisp is a part of a sex trade organization that James happened to work for and he ran off with one of their workers. I can't even imagine what those children go through that are sold or stole into that type of life.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes, the fact that horrible abuse, the sex trade, etc. is real is very sobering. Happily, this is fiction and Wisp/Bella found some good people who are happy to take care of her.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jul 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 14
I just found your story and I have no words that can explain the emotions your writing has brought out in me. This is an amazing story, and I can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing this amazing story with us.
Author's Response:
Thanks for such a sweet review! I hope to be updating on thursdays (crossing my fingers!)
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 14
fab chapter i hope james never walks free again.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
fab chapter.aww glad wisp likes her kitten.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 12
aww bless her getiing her first pet.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
fab chapter.she does belong with edward at home.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 10
fab chapter.aww glad she sback with her edward.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 9
awww that was so emotional sat sobbing.fantastic chapter.omg she spoke her first word thats brilliant.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 8
aww bless her.poor edward.fab chapter.hope james gets what he deserves and worse.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
fab chapter aww that was so emotional and really hard for edward to do.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
fab chapter glad shes slowly starting to trust rose and alice.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great story so far. Very intriguing and engrossing. Can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Im presuming Aro is behind all this.... is anyone going to Teach her some words at some stage ? love this - nice to read a story with an original plot
Author's Response:
Thanks for teh review, though I'm not going to go so far as to call it an original plot. There are a lot of abuse fics out there. And I'm not giving away who's behind things unless you read her backstory ;-)
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
Sounds to me like its about to get really messy sometime soon.
Fascinating story. I tend to punce on every new chapter. Thank you for sharing!
Catherine
Date: 05 Jul 2012 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 14
this story is great. i can't wait for more updates
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 14
Loved it! Your wisp is awesome and your protective Edward are AMAZING :D though i can wait for them to find out more on her and I excited for her to talk more and it will be i while befor that happens BUT i just really like this story :D
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks! I'm glad you like protective!Edward, he's one of my favorites. :)
Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Wow, this just gets better and better each chapter i read ^_^ I absolutely love this and i am so glad that she's over 18 lol hehe I hope they can find out more about her but Wisp and her kitten are so cute :D can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks! I thought she could use a furry little friend. :)
Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
What happened to her, good lord it's killing me.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 5
fab chapter.hope she gets to stay with edward.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
"The cat really needed a name. It was sweet that Alice thought they should name it, but realistically Wisp was far from being capable of something like that."
You know what that kittens name must be! ;) Come on, Alice seems like a Rainbow Brite gal!
I really really hope Emmett and the cops are able to go all the way down the line. From James to Felix to the Doctor to the Priest and back to her father. All those assholes deserve a special, dark hole in jail. I really hope they all are made someones bitch in prison. I also hope James gets a wake up call about just how wrong what he did was. It would have been awesome if the prosecutor was a woman. But he might not have talked to her. But it would be cool if another DA could work on the case that was a woman.
Really love Wisp and the kitten. Art and animal therapy have been used for years to help people. I think they can really help her grow and come out of her shell. I know Edward doesn't want to push her and right this very moment that might be right, but eventually he'll have to. She can't stay like that forever if there is the potential for her to reclaim what she's lost. And Edward has so fallen in love with her. It's such a beautiful, pure love. Based on humanity and basic human goodness. Whether it grow into something more than that remains to be seen, but Wisp is very lucky. Like I said before, I hope that it can grow and evolve into something more so that Wisp has the chance to claim and own her womanhood and her sexuality. How those are all strengths and can be used at her own will and not taken and used against her. Whether she ends up with Edward in that capacity or not, I hope she finds it. Although obviously we all want it to be Edward due to the fact it's Edward and Bella, but I can't imagine anyone else coming close to understanding what she's been through and how she'll grow like Edward will. It kind of reminds me a bit of how SM writes the werewolf imprinting. You fall completely in love with your imprint but you are exactly what they need at that moment in their live. Be it a friend, a brother or a lover. Edward would be willing to be exactly what she needs in whatever form that need takes.Author's Response:
Jeez, you wrote me an essay!
Twink would be an excellent name, but IDK...the term is also a derogatory one in gay male culture, and I don't want people to go there.
I have to confess that I don't outline my stories before I write...with this one in particular the plot bunny was totally just 'Edward finds scared girl in truck' and I'm kind of discovering things right along with you guys. I usually have an ending in mind, but for this one I don't even have that. There's just too much we don't know about her yet, you know? I don't know if there will be romance for them, or how it might happen, just that she deserves a happy ending of some sort. So while I, too, hope that they're able to trace her past all the way back to the beginning (especially since I think she might like to know something about her mother at some point), I don't know when/if/how it's going to happen yet.
It's funny that you mention a female prosecutor. I actually thought about doing that, but I too was afraid James wouldn't talk to her, wouldn't take her seriously.
Lol, now you sound like Carlisle, saying that they'll eventually have to push her! I can envision that there will be some friction between him and Edward about that. I so want her to be able to become a functioning, independent person again...we'll just have to see. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
aww bless her shes never seen another woman.fab chapter.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 3
fab chapter.aww bless her.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
aww that was so emotional fantastic chapter.poor girl.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
omg!hope whoever it is is ok.fab chapter.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
"She had a distinct personality and a raw sort of humanity..." It speaks so highly of Edward that he sees Wisp as a person, not an anomoly to be studied or toyed with.
"...but she trusts you. It really is a beautiful thing." Esme IS wonderful. Trust is the most beautiful thing. So easily broken, but so powerful. Imagining how Wisp could never trust anyone, it's remarkable.
Love, love, love this story. Can't wait to see Wisp draw more and to find out more about her background.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes, I'm excited to see what she does with the sketch artist (I don't outline my stories, so things are still a surprise to me when I write them). :)
Date: 05 Jul 2012 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wow awesome chapter
Date: 05 Jul 2012 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 14
no reviews, just the story, is a good plot and you have a good story mind
Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
another great chapter, cant wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thanks good chapter
Date: 05 Jul 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hhhhmmmm I am thinking either her dad sold her, or she was kidnapped when she was just a little girl and tortured since then.
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
Can't begin to tell you how much I love this story. I have gotten so involved and get so excited when I see an update. Want to kill James of course, afraid of cat food, not good, not good at all. Really like all the "Cullen Clan", you really have brought them to life. Thank you for sharing your talent and can't wait for the next chapter. Cheri
Author's Response:
Thanks for such a sweet review! I enjoy writing the Cullens, they all have such different personalities. :)
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
hhhmmm I was surprised at the kitten. As for the cat food, I am thinking that she was given cat food to eat and that was why she reacted that way to the food.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
A Kitten? I dont know about that. I would think she would be affraid of it. Especially because kittens scratch alot. Well I guess we will see.
Author's Response:
Well, a doll doesn't react, and a puppy would have been way too boisterous for her. Kittens can be quite affectionate if they're raised properly. Thanks for the review!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 14
I'm I'm no words.....wisp....
Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow I am so glad that Edward got her out of that hospital. I can totally understand her fear of being abandoned, especially if that is all she has known her whole life.
By the way I love this Rose. I like that she thought of the clothes and other things.
It seems that Bella is smart. LOL She asked for socks. Well not in so many words but that is what she wanted.
Great Story! I am really enjoying it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes, she asked for socks. I thought it was cute. :) And I'm glad you like my Rose! I think she's an under-utilized character in fanfiction.
Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 14
Amazing... I just jump to this story whenever it updates!
I wonder what Edward will think of the few "hint" he gave? Do you think he will work it out in his head anytime soon? The sooner he figures it out the sooner he may be able to help her. James has every right to be worried about being found... I wonder how hard he's looking for him and her?
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes, Edward's gonna get there soon, lol!
Date: 05 Jul 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
As Emmett said, Edward needed to watch the video. James gave them something, but not enough for him or Wisp. Will he say something more? Maybe in a while, he seems very affraid of whomever else had something to do with this.
Wisp is starting to express herself vocally. So far it's been slow, but I'm certain she will be saying more sooner.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes, she's making progress, though James isn't much help.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 9
I cant believe that Social workers act like this. I mean I can understand it happening but like Edward said if they didn't want to help the people then they should have chose a different profession.
Author's Response:
Yes, unfortunately, even people in helping professions get burned out and forget just why they wanted the job to begin with.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well I am shocked that Alice let her touch her intamate parts but I guess she wanted to see that she was the same as her, its still weird. lol
I am so glad they did not have to cut her hair either, that would have been horrible.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
I know there are cruel people in the world, I can attest to that personally but to never have seen another female is beyeon even what I went through. It is sad.
Author's Response:
Definitely horrific abuse happens every day in the real world. This is fiction, but I don't think that takes away from the plight of real victims. Thanks!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
Its really great that Wisp will have all the girls to help her through what she is going through. I love how much Edward takes care of her too.
Date: 04 Jul 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 2
I wonder why she doesn't talk? I got this story rec from my mom PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine. I must say I am really enjoying it.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow he sure did get more than he bargained for in that pocker game. I know a story that is called Finding Bella, but it is a different author. Hmmmm anyway I hope this is a long story.
Author's Response:
Definitely he did! Yes, Finding Bella is a fairly well-used title and I think there was a well known fic by that name, but not the one I was thinking of. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
What a wonderful chapter! The kitten idea is brilliant. Love this story and can't wait to see what happens next. Thank you for sharing your talent. Signed, Cheri
Author's Response:
Thank you, and glad you liked the kitten! I thought about a puppy, but they're too boisterous for shy Wisp.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thanks good chapter
Date: 03 Jul 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 13
""Glad I caught you." Emmett sounded breathless. "James has agreed to deal.""
Damn you and your cliffhangers!!! *shakes fist*
I'm sooo interested in what that bastard has to say. Thursday can't get here fast enough! May the editing gods smile on you and you finish fast! :) And I love the kitten. Oh please oh please name it Twink!
And do you participate in Roller Derby? My boyfriend and I try to catch a few bouts a year when we have time and money.
Author's Response:
I don't mean to hang people from cliffs! It just sorta happens? Lol, i thought about naming the kitten Twink, but that word has a different connotation in some groups... No, I don't play roller derby (I am clumsier than poor canon Bella), but a lot of my friends do, and I'm usually there to support them. :)
Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
oh man this story sure makes you think about abuse how awful victems suffer
Date: 02 Jul 2012 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 13
VERY interesting story. Thanks for sharing
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 13
Not liking UNCLE C right now! I think Edward realizes what hes gotten him self into. Its like taking care of a new born. You have to learn as you go. Thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yeah, Carlisle's a realist, which probably isn't what Edward wants to hear right now.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
I've seen this story being posted, but I just hadn't had a chance to read it...before today. I devoured all 13 chapters in one sitting. I COULD NOT stop reading it. What a riveting, riveting story. Occasionally I have flashes of Jodie Foster in Nell, but your Wisp is somehow more endearing. Your story is funny, heartwrenching, poignant, and horrifying all wrapped up in one. I'm hooked! Totally and completely. I can't wait to read more! I'm thinking all sorts of horrible things. The white supremecists have peaked my interest. I can imagine how they might be involved. Wisp's reaction to that classical piece just broke my heart. I agree, I think she's smart. I'm dying to learn more. Wonderful, original story!
Author's Response:
Thanks for such a sweet review! I'm so happy people are enjoying my little plot bunny. Other people have mentioned Nell, but I haven't seen it. I'm almost afraid to now that I'm writing this, lol! I'm glad you're liking Wisp and you think she's smart; I'm enjoying exploring the character and seeing how she develops.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
this is seriously the most amazing story i have ever read
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 13
The kitten was great, the cat food was terrible. There's somethng behind her reactio, I wonder how will they find out.
So Edward doesn't have too much understanding, but he has plenty of support, that's so important.
I wonder what will James try to deal and if he will ever menin Bella.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review, and glad you liked the kitten. Yes, Edward's eventually getting there...
Date: 02 Jul 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Ohhhh! Can't wait to read what Emmett has to say!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
I hope the deal is that he tells them who she is and in return, they use a sharp knife to castrate him.
Catherine
Author's Response:
So much violence! Lol, thanks for the review!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
I think Edward's thoughts are heading in the right direction... he's putting things together. I wonder if he will do some research on his theory and see what he finds. I hope that Edward will have perhaps have a early childhood education come and give him some tips at how to start teaching her... it might help.
I can't wait to see what James has to say.
Author's Response:
Hmm...interesting about research. I don't even know where to start witih research about abuse like this. Of course, I'm not a sociologist. ;) Thanks for the review!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 13
I am so addicted to your story...I love everything about it....
James ... what will he say??????
I hope to see you Thursday...
Have a great start to the week :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm hoping to keep to the Thursday schedule.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
James is going to talk!? I need to see what he says. Loved the kitten ;)
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 13
another great chapter, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
YAY!!! I am excited that he thought of getting her a kitten XD and she said his name again XD AWESOME!!
Author's Response:
*g* thanks for teh review!
Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Wisp. She probably thought Edward was making her his pet.
Author's Response:
Yep. We'll have some more of these misunderstandings until she starts to realize she's not an animal...
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 12
Holy shit... Wow... Really I have no words... This is THE best and worse story (in a good way!) I've read in a long time.... Welwritten and the subject is so heavy, I can't stop reading...
Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the sweet review! Yeah, I understand about the best/worst comment.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Beautiful, beautiful story! Thank you so very much for sharing it!
Catherine
Author's Response:
Thank you! So glad you like it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
I have to be honest... I cried like a baby when she said his name.
Catherine
Author's Response:
Aww...I don't mean to make people cry!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
What a f*****g bitch!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
James needs to have all his skin removed, while he's awake, with a dull spoon. Can I help?
Catherine
Author's Response:
Lol, yes! thanks for the review!
Date: 30 Jun 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Thank you so much for your amazing story . Love it so much.
French addict.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Discovering new exciting things is such a joy to ecperience and even more tomwitness. Edward is thrilled with all he is witnessing through Wisp's experiences.
Drawing seems to be the best comunication tool they have this far. Hopefully the scetch artist's visit will help.
Author's Response:
I'm excited to write the sketch artist's visit! Not quite there yet, but I'm def. looking forward to it. :) Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh,a kitten!that's a wonderful idea.
at least she slept in a bed at night.not alone,true,but it's still progress.maybe looking at James' pic will inspire her to draw others from her past.it will painful though.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Yes, she's making progress every chapter, though it's baby steps right now.
Date: 29 Jun 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ah, I saw the kitten thing coming! So cute. Still loving this so much, keep it up :)
Author's Response:
Lol, I'm glad! I thought about a puppy, but thought it would be too boisterous for shy Wisp. Thanks for the review!
Date: 29 Jun 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
Your story is so good and quite thought provoking....sadly, I'm afraid that this type of sex slavery is all too common. Thank you for bringing this terrible tragedy to our attention..as always can't wait for updates
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! yes, while this is completely fiction, I see real accounts of horrific abuse in the news every day...
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 12
I was thinking a baby doll but a kitten is even cuter. It is probably more realistic b/c it can respond back in its own way just like her. I am loving this story but wishing it would speed up so I can read more about her progress.
Author's Response:
Yeah, a doll just isn't the same as something alive that can respond. Thanks for the review! As far as the story speed, it's probably going to stay pretty slow, though I'm sure there will be some summary/jump cuts in the future. Just FYI, with some slow fics I read, sometimes I like to save up chapters so I have five or so at a time. Then it doesn't seem so slow. ;-)
Date: 29 Jun 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
I hope they can channel her drawing ability into a way for her to learn to communicate. I think encouraging her saying "Edward" may help her find her voice and know that it makes him happy to hear her talk. I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
That's a good idea - encouraging her to talk. Have to think about that one... Thanks for the review!