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Hope to see a new chapter soon.  Or maybe you are saving them all up for one major posting!  I know....I'm dilusional.  Great story.

Not so patiently waiting in Wisconsin.

I am quite addicted to this story hope to read more soon!~

There hasn't been an update in a while. This story is to good to become abandoned. Please update soon. 

Oooo! another clue, I love it.

This story has me so hooked. Love the way you write and the story is horrible, sad, and beautiful, so thank you!  Cheri

I didn't know what I was getting into when I started this story, but dangit its one of those you just cant stop reading once you start.  Your writing is very good and I am enjoying reading it even with Bella the way she is.  Beautiful Savage is another story like this with Edward being this way.  He was lost at the age of three and lived in the woods with wolves and Bella finds him and rehabilitates him cause he did get the basics before he got lost.  They eventually got married and he functioned very nicely with a job and such.  I just curious on how you are going to do things like what the whole story is on her and if Charlie and Renee come into the pic being that they are in Forks right now.  Cant wait til it all comes together!  Thanks for the great story.

Hugs, Stephanie 

Soon sweet.  Great chapter

They made progress, that they now know the name of at least one person, who knew about her condition *claps hands*. Hopefully they can find this doctor, but I think the chances are pretty slim. 

I am curious, who teached Wispella the word doctor, because that was not in the previous chapter or before, that she could pronounce this word. Perhaps with the whole environment she remembered this word and its associations. Also a step in the right direction to solve the mystery around Wispella.

My mom's an OBGYN nurse practitioner. Wisp has what would be called a "Friable" cervix- very easy to make bleed. It is caused by what Jasper said, and also from abnormal cells like cervical cancer. Infection is the biggest cause, and i reaqlly hope Wisp didn't have a forced abortion...that would be horrible. But now they have a name!!

Oh thank gawd....we have a name!!!!!

Thanks good chapter

Breakthrough...who's Dr. Gerandy? Looking forward to Thursday!

Holy shit! "Bad doctor Gerandy."  A tiny piece of the puzzle that is Wisp. Now they need to do some investigative work to find this Bad Doctor. Edward is one hell of a man to take care of this poor girl.  I just want to give him a big f**king hug (((hugs))). LOL

OK, I actually cried reading this chapter.

Awesome!!!

update soon please

Whisp's story is so tragic -- I can't imagine how she'll recover...  I'm just hoping there will be a light at the end of the tunnel.

wow-heavy duty stuff-very well written

fab chapter poor wisp that was so emotional.

I like this story so well becasue it remineds me of what I never was able to finish with Finding Bella. I just really hope that I will be able to read this story untill its complete. I hope that this story does not become an abbondand fic, or gets pulled from this website before its completed. Please keep up the good work.

awwwe poor girl 

Going with the meds, was the less harmful way to to the exam. And, lets face it, it was needed and has brought much more information than they thought. They ow have, along with James and the drawing the name of a doctor.

Also Wisp is't holding it against Jasper. 

Your story continues to be heartbreaking and fascinating. Thank you!

Good dr jasper. Ahh. Hated the examine for Wisp. Finally a real name. Cool!

I wouldn't want to be Dr Gerandy when Edward finds him. Poor Wisp.

I'm enjoying this story very much.. But will u be updating as children after play anytime soon?

I'm really enjoying the reality of this.  You're perfect in your descriptions.  I had it figured out from the start that she'd been sexually abused and a slave and then when you through in the furniture bit, I knew she'd been trained to be a pet of sorts.  I kept thinking dog.  I really enjoyed seeing my thoughts come to life.  Good job!

Brilliant chapter.

fab chapter.aww bless her.hmm wonder what jasper will say.update soon

Wispella is soooooooooooo smart. Starting a bath for Edward, because he was all sweaty/smelly from his work-out. hehe. And with each day, she learn a little bit more words to say. Although these are mostly names of persons, but at least she reconises the faces and can associate the name to the face. Definetly a huge step in the right direction.

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poor bella this is such a interesting plot . i throughly enjoy and look forward to each update

Loved the quick update, but mwahhhhhhh I want more!!!! Darn, almost wish I didn't have a non-internet two week vaca coming up, ok not totally, but now I have to wait for two weeks to find out what happens.  That all being said, I love the way you handle such a tough subject.  So much compasion, so much love.  Love all of these Cullens! WONDERFUL STORY.  Thank you - Cheri

thank you so much!

it was amazing!

thanks!

Edward has become so close to Wisp. He is realizing, how much power the girl has over him. Instead of scaring him, it's making him feel the need to be as much to her as he can be.

The will be bumps along their way. Some, as the litter box tough. Others like the shower, easier to overcome.

Cliffies make me irritable!  Great chappie. Poor Wisp in the car saying bad. Can't wait to see how she reacts to the "exam"

He really did need the break... if nothing else to be able to think.  I bless Emmett for being firm but kind in making sure he was taking care of himself.  It is often the case that the caregivers health suffers from such a stressful situation.  Great chapter.

I guess they made a progress and it seems that Wispella was held as an animal by James and his "friends". That is really sick, but at least Wispella seems to grasp a little bit the concept of the human being and her own persona.

My guess is, that Wisp had to eat cat food in her previous "home" and it is going to be interesting how Edward will feed the kitten now, when Wisp reacts the way she reacted.

Great story so far and your style of writing is great :) Glad you continued writing after Midnight carnival.