[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 21
awesome chapter bless wisp.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
definate progress i think. and i agree james didn't do this by himself.....
Date: 14 Sep 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
kitty was a great idea... unfourtunately it also gave a little insight into her past.... was wisp a sexual kitten for james?
Date: 14 Sep 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 12
she is doing so well today. a new picture, sleeping on the bed, washing her face, saying his name again. this is progress people! so excited!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
a way for her to comunicate?
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 10
rose and esme! awesome job getting everything ready for her. eddie it is time to do whats needed for her, you can work on the rest latter
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
yay good for you eddie! time to take her home
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 8
they sedated her?!?!? eddie go get her!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
what the fuck?!?!?!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
a bath with the girls... oh my so sad! chicken for dinner. meet with the friends and family... busy day for our girl. she knows eddie's name! an exciting first step...
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 5
aww she already knows eddie is a safe place to be
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
This story is great! It's an extreme relief to read a story with good grammar and spelling. I'm rooting for Wisp to be able to speak her mind freely. I still don't get why Garrett had to be old though. I just figured that it was because old people seem less threatening? I was pissed to hear you were plagiarized! Who would do something like that? Try to take credit for someone else's hard work? It's annoying. Anyway, I'm looking forward to the next chapter! I love what you've done so far!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
Dr Lawton needs a swift kick to the ...........
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bon chapitre ! Difficile de lire la dernière partie.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oui cette situation est terrible, j'espère que ça va vite s'arranger.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 6
Les filles se sont bien occupé d'elle !
Bon chapitre.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 26
I can't find the rec of Nobody's Little Girl. :(
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Et bien je crois qu'elle voit une femme pour la première fois.
Bon chapitre.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bon chapitre !
Elle dors pour le moment, c'est une bonne chose.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
More drama is on the way, with Edward not only fighting for Wisps recovery but also against Dr. Lawton. Hopefully her funding is not granted, but probably is, to add more drama to the story, ;)
Although there is already enough.
But Wisp knows, when it is time to speak the right words.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Pauvre petite, heureusement qu'Edward est doux.
Bon chapitre, j'aime bien cette fiction.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Mon Dieu, c'est horrible ce qu'il y a dans ce camion...
Date: 13 Sep 2012 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 4
has she never seen another girl? how long was she with james?
Date: 13 Sep 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
loooking forward to more
Date: 13 Sep 2012 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 26
this is amazing your a wonderfully passionate writter .....
Date: 13 Sep 2012 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 26
thank you! I'm ready to face my day now that I have had my dose of my beloved wisp!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
I LAUGHED SO HARD WHEN WISP BIT THAT DAMN DR. LAWTON I DON'T LIKE HER EATHER. AND I'M SO GLAD SCOTT SAID WISP COULD STAY IN HER HOME. IT'S ABOUT TIME HE USED HIS BACK BONE AND SPOKE UP HE NEEDS TO STAND UP AND PUT THAT DR. LAWTON IN HER PLACE.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
so fucked up in so many ways...
pretty sure she is not gonna be eddie'slittle sister... lol
Date: 13 Sep 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 26
I was hoping wisp would say something, yeah!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 26
Marvelous! You certainly raked us over the emotional though. (Nice job!). Dr. Lawton leaves a bad taste in my mouth and makes me really suspicious... Hmm.... Let's hear it for Wisp though! She came through like a trooper.
Date: 13 Sep 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 2
she is already starting to trust him... a little....
Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 26
love it, keep up the awesome writing! looking forward to another update soon!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 1
ok who the hell is this james guy?!?!?! will he be locked up for this? and holy shit can you even imagine being eddie here?! i think i'd die!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
Loved it :)!!!!!!!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 26
yay!!!!!! suck it lawton....hahaha
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful, just wonderful and so proud of Wisp and Edward too. Thank you for coming back, LOVE this story and the way you write. Thank you, Thank you - Cheri
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
YAY your back!!! Awesome story! I am glad that Wisp gets to stay. I have a question for you....you said that you will be moving your stories to AO3. So does that your stories including Wisp will be removed from TWCS or will it remain here and we can also find in on AO3? Again awesome story!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 26
Well, I'm glad you're back at writing, I missed reading the updates. A bite, hilarious:-)
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
My good Lord! I wanted to reach right through my screen and grab the fucking bitch of a doctor by the throat and choke the life right out of her. I can't believe I wanted to cause a fictional character bodily harm. LOL On a a happier note... wtg Wisp! When she bit the bitch I did a mental fist pump . And when she finally spoke, I was just as proud of her as Edward was. Awesome chap!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 26
interesting story! I can't wait for more
Date: 13 Sep 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 26
I don't know about NIMH but NIH (National Institutes of Health) only have about a 7% pay line. In other words only 7 out of 100 applications are funded.
I wanted to bite Dr. Lawton too... why wasn't Scott doing or saying more, if he was the one in charge of the case.
Just the idea of "Dr." Lawton wanting to use her as an experiment is sickening!
Welcome back... I missed you and your story!
Date: 13 Sep 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
Welcome back! This was a great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks good chapter
Date: 12 Sep 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
absolutely adorable this is the upmost beautiful, emotional ,amazing story i have ever read.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
I am so glad your back! I just love this story and can't wait for more!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
Yucky dr lawton. The nerve to treat a human bing like an object. Missed Wisp alot.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
I find myself absentmindedly wondering what will happen next in this story. I will be doing something and something else will remind me of this story and the next thing I know I'm just sitting there thinking about what's going to happen next. I love it!! And I'm incredibly glad that you haveresumed posting!! I can't wait to find out what happens next!!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Get chapter..so well written! Please let that awful woman be gone forever!!!!!!As always I can't wait for your updates.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 23
why doesn't someone get wisp some knee pads.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my I just read straight through from the beginning to end at a cliff hanger and a hiatus-oh wow- just my luck. Anyway let me tell you I've read alot of twific and I am at the point where it really takes something to get me excited about a story and this has it. I am so eager to continue on with this story. You have really invested the time and energy in this story and I am so grateful you were not rushed and allowed this story to really take root and grow.Your story is just WOW. Thankyou.
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
A cliffy, Wahh. Dr Lawton, oh the Bitch oh the bitch, oh the bitch is back. Stone cold b as a matter of fact. Hey, ya got me singing Sir Elton!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awe, poor Dr. Gerandy is going to get the bad rap, ha ha.
Great chapter.:-)
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 7
They should at least threaten, well maybe not threaten, but insist that the psychologist will also suffer repercussions if her choices work disastrously & harm comes to Wisp from her "assessments" and indifferent recommendations. See how indifferent she is when her license is on the table.
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
Please continue this story. It is one of the best and most original that I have read. Fan Fic or other. Really love it and so hope you will continue. : )
Date: 07 Sep 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
Take the time you need to get back into the story. Some people really piss me off that they cannot create on their own and have to twist others ideas into their own.
Bless you for having to deal with others stupidity.
Date: 06 Sep 2012 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
Hi, I just read this whole story. I loved it. Sorry to hear about the plagiarism. One wonders why people do this kind of thing. I don't know if it's any kind of consolation but do remember, in the Middle Ages, copying from another artist was considered a way of paying tribute tot the original. So these people aren't unkind, they're just really oldfashioned !
Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Can't wait for more.... Please don't go into hiding for too long.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
I read you author's note and wanted to let you know that I'm glad you are going to continue this story despite what happened. I'm really tempted to read Wisp's backstory but I'm taking your advice and not going to. Please update as soon as you can. I really like this story and want to see how it ends. Oh and the chocolate cake incident in the previous chapters was very fun. I could almost see her eating and her reaction.
Thanks, Maria
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no! Who plagiarized Wisp? Terrible. This story is something else for sure. Its hard to read because of the topic, but important to read to know that there are terrible people out there who will treat other human beings like wisp was treated. Thank you for writing
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
this is great please update soon
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
this is awesome
Date: 05 Sep 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 23
please update soon
Date: 05 Sep 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 22
this is great
Date: 05 Sep 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm all in. This story is freakin awesome. Don't stay away too long.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 25
Crap that's not good thanks good chapter
Date: 04 Sep 2012 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 25
Hurry Back!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no!! I will never understand why people would plagiarize someone else's work. I'm so sorry that happened to you. Please don't be gone to long, we just got you back!
Date: 04 Sep 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
i did some searching and it looks like the other story was removed from fanfic. which is a good thing because i love this story and its a shame when others try to take credit for your original idea.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so sorry to hear that someone tried to steal your incredible story! That being said I am so glad that you are still going to continue teiing this amazing story about Edward and Wisp. I am being selfish I know for wanting you to update quickly, but you are writing a story that unfortunately needs to be told. I knew that human slavery existed, but NEVER anything like this. Hopefully, your story will continue to open people's eyes to this atrocity. Thank you again for telling it.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 8:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
:( i hate that the authors in the fanfic world have to worry about others stealing their work. its one thing to have an idea sparked by an awesome story line, but they have to know the hard work, dedication, and epic gumption to put your own work out there for the readers to comment what they will. i only picked up this fic a day or so ago, but it has grasped my interest and as much as i loath waiting on an update, i completely understand the temp. hiatus, just please don't ditch this fic. i wish you luck on your mojo mission :) much love and respect :)
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
boy what a mess this iscaught with wisp on his lap. please wisp be good
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
So sorry to hear about the plagiarism of Wisp, I love this story and I'm glad you plan to continue the story even if you have to take some time to get back into the mood. Now to my thoughts on this chapter - NOOO! why did the witch have to show up and on a bad day too. I hope that if she acts like a B this time Scott will stand his ground and do what is best for Wisp. I'll be patiently waiting (hopefully not for long) for your next chapter.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 23
wisp really did protect her pet swhe is becomming independent and that makes it perfect
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 25
My guess is that Wisp's nightmares are about Edward leaving her. Very sad. He really does need to get a lock on that shower door though!!! :-)
Here's hoping that the visit/evaluation goes well.
Sorry to hear about the plagiarism. That sucks hard. I hope the hiatus is a relatively short one. Thanks for writing!
Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
that cake made my mouth water so now i'm baking one
Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
poor wisp she has been in pain now hopefully she wan't be all the time . she is smsrt
Date: 03 Sep 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh no....I need my Wisp updates! I'm so sorry though that your story is being plagerized. Good luck with getting that straightened out and hopefully you will be bringing us our Wisp fix soon.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 25
OK I liked the last two chapters. I really think they have made progress. Amazing progress really (since I read the back story and I really shouldn't have because now all I can think about it the justice I want to see for her rather than her story now - you know?). Anyway, I know she is having a bad day due to the nightmares, but please let her show some improvement so the witch doens't take her away again.
Come back soon.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great story! I can't wait for the next chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG what a cliffy!
Hope the plagiarism thing gets sorted soon. I am going to miss Wisp. :(
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 22
I now want cake! Wisp is so sweet.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
Good luck! Hope you find the mojo soon. Luv your story!
Date: 03 Sep 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
Just found this and am thoroughly enjoying it. Sorry to hear there has been a problem with a similar story but it should not put you off continuing yours please....
Date: 03 Sep 2012 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
I so loved these updates! Wisp and her world are enthralling and always leave me wanting more. I'm sorry to hear you've had plagiarism problems! My only advice is to hang in there and know that a superior piece of writing will always win out! I'll be waiting to read more once your mojo is up and running. Thank you for all the hard work you've put in so far.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
im definitly sticking with you this story has me hooked
Date: 03 Sep 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 25
I've really enjoyed the story and look forward to its return. I hope the other story got taken down, but if it hasn't and I can find it, I will report it as well. As a writer myself I understand how upsetting this is. I had my first story stolen. The person literally was posting it word for word. Not even changing a thing. Good luck!
Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Why is the bitch back? Poor Wisp. She's having nitemares and now the horrible woman is back. Sorry to hear about your story being stolen.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
It would have been to easy, if the social worker arrived alone. But now the drama is going high. Hopefully the case worker turns a blind eye on the issue, that Wisp is in Edwards lap (due to a nightmare ;) ), and not takes her away again. How this ended, we had already seen.
Hopefully you find your writing mojo again, and as long as you update, I will wait :) Because it would be tragic if this great story is left uncompleted.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh God they got the name of the bad doctor
Date: 03 Sep 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it. Cant wait for more.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Hmmm it sounds like maybe she was hosed down when James would say she was bad and she is associating the shower as a hose.