Date: 21 Jan 2013 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 41
Wow... Wisp taking more for her own and talking more, as well as we now have a lead for the doctor. So looking forward to the next updates.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 41
Wow what a chapter. I'm glad Cecelia sent the note. I think it will help alot! I'm having a problem with your updates. The chapter updates but the date does not. I'm not sure why but wondered if you did. Thanks
Date: 21 Jan 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 41
Oh Wow!!!! No fair to leave us with that kind of clif hanger. Biting nails & anxiously waiting for the next update!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jan 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 41
omg!! at last maybe a lead!!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 41
Wow! I so wasn't expecting the end to this chapter.... another great one and I can't wait for more of Wisp and Pet's adventures with Edward.
Date: 20 Jan 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 41
I love this story so much!!!!!! This journey with Wisp and Edward has been full of suprises, sadness and happiness... Thank you for sharing your story and I can't wait for the next update!!!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 41
Wow! Good stuff. I'm glad Edward is 'My Edward' now! :) Thanks for writing!
Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 41
This is great please update soon
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 41
Glad to see the story moving forward. I know it would be completely unbelievable if Wisp got better overnight -- and that is NOT what i want at all -- but it's so hard to see how damanged she is because of the horrors she's been through. I just can't wait 'til she has some true communications skills, walks on her own feet and uses furniture.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jan 2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 40
I don't think she would be allowed to know his nsme. Very hsrd chapter but excellent.
Date: 20 Jan 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 40
I'm glad they are moving forward with her therapy, although I completely understand Edward's reticence this will be tough on Wisp and he so just wants to keep her in that safe bubble.
Okay now they have a lead I say they don't release her picture that's a scary prospect letting those people know she's out there, I suspect they'll do anything to keep their secret, I think they need the element of surprise.
Awesome chapter!!!
Date: 17 Jan 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 39
Please update soon
Date: 16 Jan 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 39
Looking forward to more
Date: 16 Jan 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 39
Neat progress for Wisp! And so sweet that so many were willing to help her. Neat chapters! Thanks for writing!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 39
Beautiful. Simply beautiful! Hopefully now Wisp can concentrate on healing herself. Pet should be a good beginning!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 39
huge step forward for wisp. she claimed the cat,
Date: 15 Jan 2013 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 38
yay wisp has a new therapist, and pet has been found!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 37
Okay, I finished crying now... Marvelous chapter! The twists and turns and emotional pitfalls you paint are truly wonderful! Thank you!
Date: 15 Jan 2013 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 39
What a relief! I was crazy stressed! Bad Pet! Love it when she busts out with new words :)
Date: 15 Jan 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 37
the search party was so sweet! bambi is so not the movie for wisp and i am sure all movies will now be prescreened before wisp can watch.
time for the pet drama to really begin...
Date: 15 Jan 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 36
wisp found peter! must be such an awesome experience for her.
pet is missing... oh shit!
but you wouldn't take pet away from wisp so i know pet will be found...
Date: 15 Jan 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 39
great chapter!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2013 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 39
yay pet is home! poor Wisp so heart broken and confused by her her pet getting lost. now she just needs to trust Edward completely again.
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 39
Oh so glad Wisp has Pet back. Edward, you are a good good man for taking care of Wisp and Pet. Pet so vital to Wisp as much as the people in her life are.
Date: 15 Jan 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 38
Thank God! PET!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2013 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Like it. A teddy bear would be good for her
Date: 09 Jan 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 36
Oh boy! As silly as it might seem to some, a missing pet is majorly traumatic to a family. But Wisp! It could set her back big time. I keep hoping Pet is upstairs asleep near Wisp. I love the chapter. Thank you!
Date: 09 Jan 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 35
that really seamed like real communication....
Date: 08 Jan 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 34
well they have a name and they know she wants to be wisp...
[Report This]Date: 08 Jan 2013 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 36
Lol they lost pet & didn't know it until a while later lol but yet poor poor Bella she's going to so so sooooooooo up set
[Report This]Date: 07 Jan 2013 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 36
Thanks good chapter
Date: 05 Jan 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 36
Thanks for the update. I'm really enjoying reading your story.
Happy New Year!
Date: 03 Jan 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
Wisp will be so heartbroken is something happened to Pet. I hope they find her.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jan 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 36
oh no!hope they find the cat before wisp finds out.fab chapter.update soon.
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 36
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2013 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 36
Oh no, Wisp will be devestated if something happens to Pet. Would love to have seen her reaction to 7-Up. Sweet and bubbly. Think it will be a favorite! Happy New Year and lol, Cheri
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 35
I'm not very good at reviews but I just wanted to let you know how much I am enjoying this story. It was refreshing to finally get Bella's point of view a few chapters back to know what she's thinking. It is a touching story and very well written. The whole pit with the litter box and cat food was heartbreaking. As far as her language skills I think watching TV and perhaps using children's picture books would be a good way to develop that. I notice you introduced the DVD player and Disney movies, so I'm assuming that will help her vocabulary in the future. I can't wait to find out what Wisp's whole story is and what happened to her parents. I'm guessing the man in the sketch she did is either Laurant or Aro. Dr. Gerandy is also a mystery I'm looking forward to having solved.
Thank you so much for all your hard work. I have definitely gotten a lot of enjoyment out of reading this story. It is definitely one of the best fanfics I've read. Can't wait for more updates.
[Report This]Date: 01 Jan 2013 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 36
Please don't let Pet be lost. I worry about who will show up to claim her. I don't trust the police to protect her
Date: 01 Jan 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 36
Awesome chapter I'm glad they are both on the mend. I think it's a good idea for her to start therapy but a bad idea about the picture!!!!
Loved the Christmas outtake, brought tears to my eyes!!!!
Date: 01 Jan 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 36
Love this please update soon
Date: 01 Jan 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 36
Pet cant be gone, great chapter. love the dvd and the cuddles.
Date: 01 Jan 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 36
Uh oh that's not going :)
Date: 01 Jan 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 36
I hope Pet is curled up with Wisp in her bed watching Peter!
Date: 01 Jan 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 36
Please let them find Pet. Wisp won't be able to handle losing her. She needs some happiness for a while before things go to hell again. I'm very scared about the media getting involved. Would the man who brainwashed her come for her?
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 35
loved this chapter
Date: 27 Dec 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 35
I love the relationship beginning to grow between Wisp and Esme. She is just what Wisp needs! Wonderful work.
Date: 27 Dec 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 34
I loved this. Wisp at her most vulnerable and dependent on someone other than Edward. Esme is a star! She comes through - over and beyond the call. Carlisle steps up as well; lending a professional ease and knowledge that can only make Wisp trust him in the long run.
I hope you're feeling better!
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2012 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks good chapter
Date: 26 Dec 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 35
good chapter. wisp seemed to make good progress.
Date: 26 Dec 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 35
Thanks for the double update. What a treat! Happy holidays to you!
Date: 25 Dec 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 35
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 35
awww bless her.fantatsic chapter.update soon
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 34
aww that was so emotional fantastic chapter.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 35
I love it...Please update soon
Date: 25 Dec 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 34
Please update soon
Date: 25 Dec 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 34
He's so goodwith her.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
I'm glad she is recovering... poor thing is so undernourished and underweight she couldn't possibly fight that infection without help.
Great chapter, I'm glad to see her opening up as weel.
Date: 25 Dec 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 35
Loved it can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 25 Dec 2012 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 35
Glad you're feeling better - and happy to see a new chapter. Happy holidays!
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 33
oh god, you're killing me! she said her name! i've been waiting for this moment for ever! hope the next chapter is posted soon!
Date: 26 Nov 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 33
OMG..... I have finally caught up and your story is simply amazing. I love it and can't wait for the next update.
Date: 24 Nov 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 33
holy shit! a sick fever break through! we have a name people we have a name!
but will wisp like being called isabella? sounds like daddy was one of the bad guys....
Date: 23 Nov 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 32
wow a look through her eyes, must have been hard to write.
they are all going to be so proud of her! she's done so well!!
Date: 23 Nov 2012 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 31
rose is awesome! she is just tough enough and will make a great mom.
ed needs help and he is gonna have to find it soon.
Date: 23 Nov 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
poor eddie he is so lost right now...
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 29
oh no she has gone so far backwards...
Date: 23 Nov 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 33
Wow! Started this ff 2 days ago now I'm caught up and want more!! Love it!!
Date: 22 Nov 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 33
OMG yes a name finally! loving this so much yet at the same time its breaking my heart. Please please update soon
Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 33
Omg this has become one of my fav. You are a wonderful writer. Thank you so much for writing this its wonderful. :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
OMG they have a name. I cant believe that she said it. I hope that they dont take her away, firstly. Secondly, I really need you to update soon... I friggen knew there was a reason I did not want to catch up... Man now I have to wait and I am not good at that.
Thank you for a fan - fucking - tastic story.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 33
The more you here about Wisp the sadder it all is. Another fantastic chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 33
She said her name! Although in a wrong context, but at least she talked. it was just a matter of time for her to get sick. No real inner devense, due to lack of nutrition and than most of the time nacked.
It was so moving, when she wanted Esme to be her mother. I guess she never had a mother and her Daddy could only be a sick bastard to allow his daughter being so badly treated. But if he was a member of some sect/cult, than I don't want to know, what they did in addition. Fortunately Wisp/Isabella could "leave" this people.
Hopefully the can Wisp/Isabella make her get better without going to the hospital.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 32
Little Wisp is learning to take care of her or more of others, or at least trying. So sad, that she still things, that she has to go back to her old life. But somehow also understandable, because she didn't knew anything other. Hopefully this event will help her get better in general.
I mean it showed, that she is determined to get better and to improve.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh my gods! I love this story, its so wonderful. I will be waiting with baited breathe for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 33
10++++++++++++++
love it!
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh my God, I love this story!!! Please update soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 33
Her name! Thanks for putting this out sooner! When I read this I actually feel like I'm reading a book. You write so well! I can't waitress for more progress from wisp.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 33
Finally! Her name! Poor Wisp! She's been so strong and yet hurt so much - now, to go through this! Waking up in a hospital won't help her either....unless perhaps Edward, Rose, Esme or Jasper is there. She needs to know she won't be given up on.
You grabbed all my heart strings and played them perfectly here. Bravo on excellent use of plot and plot excelleration. This is a serious winner!! Kudos!
Date: 20 Nov 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
Oh, that's a sweet 'mother' moment! It really would help Wisp's case a lot, I imagine, if Carlisle & Esme could officially adopt her.
What a nasty sickness... but enlightening in its own way. I wonder if Wisp could/would draw a picture of 'Daddy', now that they know what to ask for?
Neat chapter!
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 33
wow she said her name fab chapter so emotional and intense hope edwards ok.update soon.
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2012 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 33
OMG THERE WAS HER NAME AT LAST NOW THEY CAN CALL HER BY HER IGVEN NAME BUT IF SHE LIKE BELLA BETTER HOW WILL SHE GET THAT ACROSS TO THEM.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
She's got a name!
cant wait to read more, this story is addicting.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 33
Yes! I love the cliffies.
Date: 20 Nov 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 33
ahhh! Oh I need another update ASAP! I can't wait to see how Esme and Edward take the "Bad Isabella" comment. And poor Wisp! She's got to get better!
Rhonda