Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
I am very curious about Em's "dark" past, and I hope that we get to learn more about that. I enjoyed Carlisle ripping James a new one, and he deserved that ass whipping!!! *Cheering for Em*
I couldn't believe how James aired out Bella's dirty laundry in front of Edward. I was so embarrassed for her! I think it's going to be interesting to see how Edward responds to all of the info that James revealed.
I love this story!
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am so glad that I found this story. You've got me hooked and I can't wait to see what happens next!! I feel so sorry for Bella, and I hope that Edward doesn't hurt her again! You've done such a great job with this AU New Moon. I am REALLY enjoying it!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
I had given up on this story due to never having an update. I will mark it again and hope for an update soon. Can Edward really be so dumb as to blame any of this clusterfuck on Bella??? He should have stopped Alice! What the fuck was Alice doing wearing Edward's clothes anyway??? And even if Edward didn't sleep with Alice, what about all the other women he was photographed with??? He needs some serious STD testing before I would let him anywhere near if I was Bella. Not to mention if she can even trust him and his man-whore ways! Thanks for the update.
Date: 01 Jun 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 10
Wow. They both did things wrong back then, but I'm still blaming Edward. Seriously, he pretends to shack up with a singer after crying because Bella didn't show up at their "pre-appointed time" to run away together. Totally.his.fault.
Even if I don't like your Edward, its because of your writing that I actually care to dislike him. Keep it up and I can't wait for your next update.
Date: 31 May 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well I have to say that Alice the pedophile is not something I've ever read before.
Great chapter. I'm glad they are getting everything out into the open. Even though they both made mistakes, Edward made the most. He had no right to attack her like that. Thanks.
Date: 31 May 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
""Can't we all just agree that you were both young, a bunch of crap happened and that both of you are to blame?" Jasper asked with uncertainty in his voice. He never liked conflict and Bella and Edward were about to wage world war three in the family room.
"Shut up, Jasper!" Bella and Edward yelled at him at the same time.
"Jasper, sit down and be quiet, please, they need to work this out." Esme inserted."
I agree with Jasper and with Esme
Can I kick Alice ass? Please?! *puppy eyes*
I don't want ther to be friends with Bella, really.
Alice = Mr R from MotU for me, sorry.
Update again when you can! *hug*
Date: 05 Apr 2010 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
This story is just so messed up. I hate Alice in this story. What was she doing running around naked in Edward's shirt? I think she was probably fucking both Jasper and Edward. I also think Edward could have found Bella if he wanted to.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
wow wow wowie wow wow!!! lol. I love this story. you are sooo talented and I can't wait for more. Now that I know the story behind Alice (which is brillant by the way) I love it even more. keep up the great work. thanks again. bye
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow! I can't believe Edward was that stupid. To let Bella leave without saying anything and let Alice just act like a bitch wearing his clothes. I don't think Bella will want to be friends with someone who cost her several years and many tears for a long time.
Date: 25 Feb 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter. Glad to see James going. Am very curious as to why Edward fucked up so bad with someone he only "cared about"... Still very pissed at Edward.