Date: 11 Mar 2014 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening
OMGosh!!!!!!! That was soooooooo HOT HOT HOT!!!!!!!! I am thinking that Bella went into Sub space. You have GOT to update SOON!!!!!! PLEASE, I am begging you. I am loving this story. Again you are doing an awesome job writing. I loved reading AToH and I am loving reading this story. PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon.
Date: 11 Mar 2014 2:40 AM Title: Prom Night
This sounds very interesting. I was wondering if Dr. Cullen was Carlisle or Edward. But in your authors note you mention Edward so I am assuming that it is Edward. Can't wait to read more. Oh by the way, I LOVED AToH!!!!!!! You did an amazing job with it.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening
Jesus, I need to lie down, how many orgasms was that?? Has Bella hit subspace? When will she stop calling him Dr Cullen it's so distracting? Lol.
I get the feeling Dr Cullen's going to be very pleased with Isabella.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:31 AM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office
I think Dr. Cullen has been attracted to Bella but circumstances never allowed him to dream of anything more.
I know Bella is hoping he will fall for her once she becomes his Sub and I think she is naive in thinking that. Yes I think Edward could fall for her but I think it would take longer than what Bella is hoping.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:13 AM Title: Always Be Prepared
Wow, what an imagination our little Bella has. I have a feeling Edward is fantasizing about Bella but wouldn't admit it to anyone. I'm so glad i don't have to wait for an update to see how the appointment goes.
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:18 AM Title: Always Be Prepared
yey! a new story :) I have been trying to find some time to start reading this.
It is super late and my sleep deprived brain is failing me. I got a bit confused, can you help me out? Did she take her own virginity with the toys? why did she do that if so?
She is doing research :) and taking her studies serious.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening
As Edward put it "Goddamn...that was good!" Jesus, serious panting and needy here! What a fucking hot fic you have written, as usual Soapy!! Can not fucking wait for an update to this one...you make us such greedy hOOrs, and I think you for it!!
Date: 16 Jun 2012 5:55 PM Title: Prom Night
Omg...I've never read anything that made me that hot before...ugh, to have Dr. Cullen take me that way....I'd never look at another man again! I love it!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!!! **fans self**
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening
Wow I finally found some time to read this chapter and it is hot, like chili hot. Pretty intense scene for Bella, and my guess is that it was probably not Dr. Cullens (are we talking about Edward Cullen? Because to imagine this with Carlilse is is something totally different) intention that she blacks out on him.
I hope it was not a dream on Bellas side, that would be cruel.
I think she will wake up in Dr. Cullens arms on a different bed, or in the bathtube where he holds her lovingly. Well that would be it for a romantic setting. But I let myself surprise from you.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening
Did he push her into subspace? That was intense!
I'm curious about the fleeting look he gave her when she stated 'you're beautiful'. Had he been secretly thinking about and desiring her as well. Was it a look mutual admiration? A secret longing to be loved by her?
Date: 15 Jun 2012 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening
Whoa! Talk about a hot update! Man that was good!
I wonder what that was that flickered in his eyes. I'm rooting for them to become something more!
And I hope he doesn't get mad at her! It's her first time!
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening
Hell no he didnt push her... That's pure orgasmic bliss!!! He may be worried for her health or with his fukawesome cock, he may be use to it. But I'm pretty sure she's gonna be more receptive than most ;)
Date: 13 Jun 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 5 Awakening
Well, that was intense. Was she trying to say red or yellow at the end? I hope she is ok. He should have been easier with her being as though it was her first time doing anything. I think he wasn't paying good enough attention to her. I hope you update soon. Thanks for writing.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:37 PM Title: Wishes Granted?
Ungh, I'm curious how far the delicious Dr. Cullen will take their first scene.
Bella appears to be well read on the potential outcomes of her desires to please Sir, yet, I wonder will his lust for her young body push her too far this first time?
Can't wait for more!
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:43 PM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office
Wow, that was intense. Our little Bella just became Dr. Cullen's kitten and he doesn't even realize it yet.
I can't even image what their first full body congress will be like if this small amount of contact can affect each of them so forcefully.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:23 PM Title: Always Be Prepared
She may fantisize about a man with that much intensity but I'll bet she will be shaking in her shoes if she gets to see it in action.
Why would Dr. Cullen refuse the chance to train his perfect submissive. Unless he prefers an already experienced sub.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 2:21 PM Title: Wishes Granted?
I've never been a Jake fan, at all, but I love him in this story. Being the gay best friend suits him so much, hahahahaha!!
As much as Bella blushes she squashes her shyness and embarrassment well to tell Dr C what she's been imagining. *fans self*
Date: 09 Jun 2012 1:24 PM Title: Dr. Cullen's Office
I should imagine Dr C's thinking all sorts of things from the law suit he could face to downright uncontrollable lust, lol. Is Bella too naive? Knowing what we know I think he would be underestimating her if he thought that she was more than just a little naive. I do think she's a little naive, he's already said he can't give her hearts and flowers, Bella's ignoring that side of herself in order to get what she wants but Dr C knows that there will come a point that she will begin to want that side too. She's already put her trust in Dr C and from his point of view he can completely mold her into what he wants her to be.
Oooh decisions, decisions.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:09 PM Title: Always Be Prepared
Lol, I'm going with obsessed with a dash of crazy, in fact Bella'a obsession knows no bounds. I still can't wait to see what she has planned. If it was me I'd die a thousand deaths if Dr C told me eff off and grow up but I'd probably throw up on him first just to make my humiliation complete, hahahaha!
I wonder if he'll be pleased with all her prep, or whether he would have preferred to 'school' her himself?