Date: 20 Jun 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 48
No no no. No slowing down. I love this all of it
Date: 19 Jun 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 43
Just found this story and I am loving it!!! Can't wait to read more tomorrow! ;)
-Kate
Date: 19 Jun 2012 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 43
Awww!! YES!!!! Can't wait for me
-Amanda*
Date: 19 Jun 2012 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 43
Good chapter.....
Date: 19 Jun 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 43
More more please .okay these two need to get their shit in one sock lol ya know .
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 43
Finally!! She's coming around! *fist pumps*
Date: 18 Jun 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 40
Really enjoying your story so far!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you enjoy it.
Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 40
i just started reading this today and i'm lovin it:D
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading. I greatly appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 40
Nice story!! I read it all in a few hours!! Can't wait to read more!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad my story was able to provide entertainment for a couple of hours. LOL. Thanks for reviewing and reading. Until next time....
Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 40
Mmm. Edward in sleep pants...
Author's Response:
I know, right? I think Edward in anything or nothing is good. Thanks for reading.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 40
Aww already at the end for now.... I so can't wait for the next chappie, and see how things have progressed between the beties.... lol
Author's Response:
We're almost done... thank you for sticking with the story.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 32
It must b hard to actually be the one to carry the baby the whole term just to give the baby away... For some i suppose it would b hard...
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 29
aWW, SHE IS BRAVE AND SO ARE, TO HELP SOME ONE OUT LIKE THAT...
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella is ready for combo,.... lol
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 16
Wow, Bella should put her foot down and plan her own wedding...
Date: 17 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
Finally an Answer... Lol
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my goodness. I was thinking it was Riley, o my lol... Big shocker for me... lol
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww, i wish my man would do something like that for me... Thats so sweet....
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
I miss Ed too... Lol, So far, I am loving this story, can't wait to read more, hope there is so more fun stuff to read...
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 8
ewww..... so glad i aint think of that as kids,lol.... Can't wait to see how things progress....
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
I feel so bad bella didnt have any fun....
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww she is going to visit her mommy...
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 5
Aww, Y renee go and do that for? My heart goes out to Bella...
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh boy lol, Emmie, and Bella.. Lol
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lol, that is to cute...
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow, I feel for Renee ...
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful beginning, I know how painful it is to give birth.... Can't wait too read more....
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 40
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you Lani... more chapters coming up.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 40
Awesome chapters! Love it! Things are starting to come along nicely with bella an Edward. I'm not going to tell you everything will be ok because I don't know that but I am going to say hope you feel better! You are an amazing write an can't wait to see the outcome of this wonderful story! :D
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 38
What will Bella do after this discovery of Edward's desire for her?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 37
Bella seemss different from the other pregnant women, her sexual appetite did not seem to increase. I thought she'd pound on Edward already.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh no Edward's inner perv is coming out. LOL
Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 40
LOVE IT CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTERSS xxxx
Date: 17 Jun 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 40
Thank you for all the updates today. I am really loving this story. I hope all is well with you. I will keep you in my prayers. Thanks for writing and sharing. Lisa
Date: 17 Jun 2012 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 35
Hope you feel better soon.
Date: 16 Jun 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 34
Loveeeed the updates!! I feel bad for Bella no one really gets her. An it's upsetting how people are getting mad at her namely Edward! But I'm seeing little sparks between them do hopefully soon they'll both get their heads out there asses!! :D love your story writing an everything!
-Amanda*
Date: 16 Jun 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
lkookinag forward to more
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 34
I was hoping they would get closer...not him staying away. I am so looking forward to the next update. Thank you for writing.
Lisa
Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 34
I commend Bella for even agreeing to have a baby for them in the first place, especially since it's actually hers this time. They seem pretty ungrateful too. She is doing them a favor, and even if she did lash out: 1) They should stop trying to force her into doing what they want when she's already giving them everything, and 2) she's pregnant! Her hormones are all out of whack! They all seem like pretty horrible people, but maybe it's just because I'm programmed to hate Tanya, so I don't like anything she's involved in to begin with.
Anyway,
Great update! So many chapters at a time! I love it!
Can't wait for the next round!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 34
LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT NEED MORE LOTSSSSSSSSSS AND LOTSSSSSSSS AND LOTSSSSSSSSS MORE xxx
Date: 15 Jun 2012 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 30
I love that you update in chunks. Thanks.
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 34
no no no please one more. She didnt do anything wrong and Im glad she stood up to Alice. What the hell is Eddie's problem.
1. shes pregnant
2. all she wanted was some space and he took it way out of proportions.
I hope you can find that stick that is lodge so far up his ass that prevents him form thinking.
Please update soon :)
Date: 15 Jun 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 34
cant wait to hear more!!Goos so far!!!
Date: 15 Jun 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 32
looking forward to more
Date: 14 Jun 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
Yes, I donated eggs about twenty years ago. We needed the money my hubby was out of work and we had a four year old and a two year old to feed. I got 2 grand out of the deal. I did tell my children when they were adults that I did this only because I had a nightmare shortly having this done that my son brought home a girl that looked just like me except for the eyes. Then she tells me she was an egg donor baby. Yeah, that will freak your shit out big time. Thankfully we don't live in the city where I donated the eggs and now live on the oppisite side of the US from where I donated from. So the odds of my nightmare come true is low but I figured I better cover my bases just in case.
Author's Response:
I try not to think about the kids my eggs produced but once in a while the thought will kick in. They live, as far as I know, about 30 or so minutes from where I live... so the possiblity that I will meet them is great. Hopefully by the time they grow up I'll be away in a small little town surrounded by cowboys. Thanks for sharig with me and definitely thank you for reading.
Date: 14 Jun 2012 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 28
I thought I was the only one that didn't love my baby for the first 2 days after he was born. Now, I'll kill someone if they mess with him. LOL!! I do mean it.
LOVE IT!!!
Author's Response:
I thought I was the only one, too. But it happened to me with all 4 of them, though by #3 I was expecting it. Thanks for sharing and reading.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
looking aforeward to more
Date: 13 Jun 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 28
I wouldn't be able to do it. I could if it wasn't genetically mine, because I'd feel like I was just 'baby sitting'. But I couldn't carry 'my' baby for someone else.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
omg i love it need lots lots more xxxx
Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 28
When I was pregnat even that I love my unborne child I didnt think to much about it, it was like having kind a tumor growing inside me, and let me tell you abot miscarriage I didnt feel nothing, no loss no guilt nothing, up to this day I dont understand people who make a lot about a miscarriage before the 12 week, but thats just me I dont saya word because it's not my place to say what a thought
Author's Response:
I had a miscarriage one time and I didn't feel anything either. I didn't actually know I had a miscarriage until I went to the doctor for a heavy menstrual and was informed then. I know exactly what you mean. Thanks for sharing, oldmeone.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 28
Well, I'm glad Riley and Bella broke up. I can't wait until Tranny and Ed do the same. I think Bella will feel an attachment after she feels the baby kick. That makes it seem real. Can't wait until tomorrow. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Date: 13 Jun 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 28
Ahhh!! ::throws temper tantrum:: is it tomorrow yet!!? I love this story I can't wait to see where this goes! Is it safe to say good riddens to Riley already or too soon? I hope when the baby kicks sonograms make it more real for her :D
Awesome chapters!
-Amanda*
Date: 13 Jun 2012 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 25
Why would you give up your baby and it is yours to a woman you don't even like to raise. That makes no sense what so ever. It is one thing if it is her eggs but it yours and the child might just come out looking like you so why do it??? Don't know where are you taking us on this roller coaster ride but I am on it.
Author's Response:
Thanks for staying along even though I can feel you running. LOL. Things will clear themselves. Have faith. Thanks for reading.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 25
Now the real fun begins...actually being pregnant.
Author's Response:
I don't know about you but being pregnant was never fun. We'll see for Bella. Thanks for reading.
Date: 13 Jun 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome chapters!! Giddy to have seen soo many! Wish they would've had sex already!! Lol! :D can't wait to see where this goes!! I'm incredibly intrigued now!
-Amanda*
Author's Response:
They can't have sex if they don't like each other.... right? Who am I kidding? It's Ed and Bella, they should do it out of default. LOL. Thanks for reading.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
I like the story but I can't stand the thought of Tanya and Edward together. I hope she is gone soon.
Author's Response:
They won't be together for long. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading Lani. <|;}
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loving it!
Author's Response:
Thank you. <|;}
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for all the updates today. I really want Ed and Bella to end up together. I'll keep my fingers crossed and keep reading.Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Author's Response:
Hi Lisa,
Edward and Bella will have a HEA, in my stories at least. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 23
That's. Very selfish of him I hope she fucking says no its not fair to watch your child grow up and not be their parent. I really hope she says no unless that's the plan that will unite them together b/c Riley left her and Tanya could handle the devotion Edward was paying Bella... Update soon
Author's Response:
All will fall into place. I'm not a fan of Tranny so just keep reading. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome chapter can't wait for more!!
Amanda
Author's Response:
Thanks, I tried to update the 3 chapters but my internet was like "no, too much work." So yeah, 5 updates coming up. Thanks for reading.
~Norma
Date: 12 Jun 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
sweet story--at least the childhood part was!now of course there is angst and drama,and i can't wait to see where this goes.
thanks for such quick updates!
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're liking the story. Thanks for reading.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, lani.
Date: 12 Jun 2012 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
not to rub it in...but i *just* had In N Out yesterday...yes, i'm a lucky lucky gal.
first read your story over on FF, sooo stoked I found it here as well. i've been sucked back in all over again.
the first chapters told from renee's pov and then young bella and ed are just delightful. i forgot how sassy bella gets as she matures.
my heart breaks for edward at this point and since my memory is hazy at best, i can't wait to finish this ride....
Author's Response:
Welcome back. I'm so fuckign stoked that people are coming back to read the story again. As far as the In N OUt burgers go, there are 3 restaurants within 5 miles radius from my house. It's the worst temptation ever when doing anything that requires I leave the safety of my house. LOL, I think you might have just taken that away. I'm glad you're taking the journey again and hopefully you'll catch something new you missed before. Thanks for reading.
~Norma
Date: 11 Jun 2012 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
I read this once and loved it so much I'm following their journey again.
Author's Response:
Aw, thanks so much. I can't really put into words what it means to read you write that. Thank you and welcome back.
Date: 11 Jun 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for the 3 updates tonight. I hope Bella doesn't go through with the wedding. Poor Ed :(
Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Author's Response:
Hi Lisa,
I keep forgetting to update since the story is already complete. LOL, weird, I know. You'll just have to wait and see about the wedding. Thanks for reading.
~Norma