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Reviewer: westernem Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2016 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 66

So good interested in Tanya's character. Lov the story! 

Reviewer: twinicole Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2016 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 66

Please update

Reviewer: Mmmoyer Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2015 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 66

God lord you can't just leave it like that!!! Where is the rest of the story??? Don't get me wrong I enjoy the hotness but I read for the story line and despite the many short chapters this "story" is just beginning 

Reviewer: Twilightlovebedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2015 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 66

Aww, I can't wait to read more! Tanya just wants Edward for herself, warning Bella, she hasn't even met him yet and she's trying to imply that he's with her for her money. Update soon please! :)

Reviewer: hawkeye2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 66

Good story keep on writing

Reviewer: MiaClassic Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

Um, can you see the future! Because this Bella = Miley Cyrus...but the date this was published was before her non sense began. Awesome so far!

Reviewer: swimmergal1207 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2013 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 66

Amazing drabble story!! I cannot wait for more so update real soon!! Xoxoxoxoxo

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 66

Yeah....bitch prolly wants him for herself!!! Bring on the drama!!! Hope Bella beats her ass...and Edward turns Tanya into an ant ;)

Reviewer: yagalinus0420 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 9

How about Juicy Fruit? ROFLMAO ;)

Reviewer: Lilygirl88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really love this story. do you plan to continue it?

Reviewer: CullenloverGirl95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 66

can you update now

Reviewer: disrae Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2013 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Really enjoying this story! Thank you!

Reviewer: janedoe Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 66

I love this.  Is it going to continue?

Reviewer: Legal-Assassin-006 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 66

I just love this story. Please update soon.

Reviewer: beckey Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 66

oh plz  plz i love this story 

Reviewer: anbond41 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 66

Please tell me Tanya is not going to start trying to fuck edward to make a point!

Reviewer: CChuff Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 66

Tanya is really strange!! Continue!!

Reviewer: littlebella13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2013 11:28 AM Title: Chapter 66

Will this story be finished? It has been some time since you have posted....Please, please, please update and complete this story...It is such a wonderful story and deserves to be completed!!

Reviewer: crazygirl2929 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 66

love it

Reviewer: btlmotormouth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 66

Why do I get the feeling that Tanya is going to try to fuck with Edward? If she does I hope Edward puts her in her place. I can't wait to read more so I hope you can update this again soon. I haved loved all your stories and would love to read more but it seems like you haven't updated them in forever, do you plan on finishing them?

Reviewer: rpm2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 66

bitch is trying to cause problems, Edward's right Bella's just a little too nieve about things and let's people guilt her into to things when she should just tell them to fuck off.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 66

Great update!

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 66

Aw, Tanya's just trying to look out for her.

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 65

I hope Edward decides to travel with Bella for the long tours. The sex was hot, but of course, I want more.

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 64

Very nice touch making the sex scene with a girl. A porn star no less! Dying to see hoow Edward works out that frustration...

Reviewer: london spam Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 63

So glad to see these two again! Can't wait to see how the scene goes down.

Reviewer: Balam Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 66

that bitch X___X 

Reviewer: mstre11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 66

Um yeah, not trusting Tanya one bit!I think the bitch is gonna try to cause some trouble between them.

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 66

And as usual, Tanya is a bitch.

Reviewer: eternally addicted Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 62

Awwww I love his declaration!! It's perfect!!

Reviewer: rengisol Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 53

Fucking fantastic!

Reviewer: Stina91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2012 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 66

Waited a long time to read a new update :)..can't wait for the next..love your fics!

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 66

Tanya is definitely attempting to get under Bella's skin, thinking she will be able to make a move on Edward after exposing Bella for the youngster she is. Thank goodness Edward has been around a bit. He will be able to spot this ruse in a nano second.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 66

I don't like Tanya; I don't trust her either.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 66

Yeah I'm not liking Tanya right now she seems like she either wants Bella or Edward or maybe both?? Lol I just don't trust her but will see can't wait for the next update!! XD

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 66

Theres goes Tanya planting seeds again.

Reviewer: Tinsley Warren Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 66

Tanya should not be trusted! What the hell is she sending eyes over to edward for! 

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 66

thinking tanya is going to try and cause trouble 

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 66

Wow, Tanya is a bit of a bitch... I know she doesn't mean to but still.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 66

Great story so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 66

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Eileen22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 66

Tanya better not have anything up her sleeve. She'll probably try to seduce Edward. 

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 66

I think Tanya's a troll who just found something sweet looking in Edward.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 66

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 66

ok Tanya.  Why'd ya have to taint her bubblegum bubble.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 66

Please tell me that porn star Tanya will not come between them. And will not try for a threesome, either-she is obviously jealous of Bella

Reviewer: Shadowed by Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 66

Ahhh something fishy about Tanya

Reviewer: ecullensgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 66

I wouldn't trust Tanya if I was Bella.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 66

Oh, Tanya sounds like a treat. I can not wait for dinner. lol :)

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 66

Great chapter -- but seeing Tanya's name in fan fic never bodes well :)

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 66

Don't trust Tanya! 

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 66

Tanya is a jealous bitch, I bet she was trying to make Bella insecure on her relationship with Edward, that bitch wants him. I can't wait to see what happens next.

xoxox

Mina

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 66

F'ing Tanya. She's gonna try to get into beg with him, huh. 

Hell who wouldn't want Edward for dinner, dessert, breakfast, lunch, hell even a snack!

 

Reviewer: mar76 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 66

tanya is going to  cause problems damn bella should not have agreed to  dinner im thinking tanya wants edward or a threesome

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 66

SO amazing!  I really hope Tanya won't be too much trouble.

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 66

Bella, be careful of Tanya - she's pure poison.

Reviewer: glock26girl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Oct 2012 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 65

I know I'm asking a lots but a little of them both in the POV's,,they need each other they they need air to breathe.

Reviewer: mstre11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 65

*NICE* I would love to hear the proposal in EPOV!!See ya next time.:)

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2012 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 65

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 65

Thanks for the updates.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 64

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 63

Great update.

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 65

Yeah, thanks for coming back to the story. Great chapter:-)

EPOV outtake is my vote.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 65

I think I'd like to hear the proposal from Edward's perspective.
I'm sure Tanya and the rest of the crew heard everything! Haha.

Reviewer: Misti Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 65

I would love to read the outtake in EPOV. I want to see if he was nervous at all & I love knowing what's going on in his head. 

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 65

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 65

woo hoo. Yummy trailer time

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 65

I always love an EPOV!! XD

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 65

I love this fic. I'd like to see an outtake in EPOV, maybe we could see what he thinks about her travelling so much

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 65

I think I would like it in Edward POV.  that was hot.

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 65

i think you must be dealing with a tragedy in RL but it is not my place to ask.  I feel close to all the authors I read but know you don't know me from a signpost.....I love reading all the things that you so generously give us and very much appreciate how you all do it for the love of it and not for any monitary gain....thank you for hours upon hours of delicious entertainment!!!  I'm glad you're finishing up this story and would love to hear from you, at your leisure, about what you plan to do next.  Finish up stories that are WIPs?  Write new stories?  Publish completed stories? Thank you so much for your efforts and I look forward to whatever comes next!!

Judy

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 64

Men!  Edward is very turned on at the sight of 2 woman having sex, even if it is simulated!  What man wouldn't be? I find it very amusing...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 63

quite a jump in this chapter from the last... he's really going to watch her film a sex scene??  he's either really brave, really secure, or maybe both!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 62

He's not afraid to let her know....that is sexy in and of itself!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 61

well that went better after the initial shock....hope you are doing well, my dear, from what you've hinted in the A/Ns, you had some nasty RL stuff to deal with....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 60

Jasper's reaction is very cute and can only be good for Alice in the long run....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 59

loved the superhero roleplay!  I kind of know how Alice will react, but can't wait to see how you write it...Esme recognized her but I don't think Carlisle did....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 58

Alice will freak!!!  LOL! 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 57

winding down, I see....where do we go from here?

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 56

love this story...which one of yours should I read next?  I want to read the serial killer one but you haven't finished it yet, nor are you currently updating it....so which one shall I choose??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 55

found and purchased both you Kindle books....you are L.J. Anderson, right?  Please tell me where I can sign up to be notified when you publish more....

Reviewer: smlpate Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 65

My OT vote: Split!  His in the beginning with asking and then gets with response and after! **wags eyebrows** loL

i love their chemistry!  And I love their connection!  

Thanks for the info on the engagement!  I actually went back a couple to check if I didn't remember!  Lol!  Then I figured you would let us know. 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 54

sex and pancakes....what more could a girl ask for?  I've read a few of yours so I may try a couple more...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 53

hope she remembers in the morning....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 52

will she fall asleep before he can give it to her???  i bet so....In case you havent' noticed, I am totally infatuated with this little drabble of yours...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 51

me!  I think you just may do that....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 50

she's going to have one hell of a hangover tomorrow...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 49

got the feeling it ain't gonna happen tonight....she'll pass out...

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 48

geez, where is my Edward like this?  add in that he's a sci-fi and/or computer nerd, and my ideal man would be complete....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 47

some place she'd never expect, probably.  she is such a horn dog!  isn't that usually the guy's thing? LOL what kind of woman's libber am I??

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 46

hot guy, hot car, what's not to love....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 45

so sweet, these 2...

Reviewer: 84Gemma Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 65

Outtake in EPOV please. As for the wedding bring it on :) 

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 44

so I see you're still not done here after 65 chapters....hmmmm....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 43

glad to hear you have plans for a couple dozen more chapters....I'm reading it all today in a marathon....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 42

that didn't take long....LOL!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 41

she's full of bravado, this little girl....

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 40

these 2 were MADE for each other....

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 65

I so missed these two together..they are so hot. :)  I would love to see and outtake of the proposal!!! EPOV would be fun, but whichever you choose will be great :)

Reviewer: shenaniwhatagans Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 64

A girl on girl love scene...either I totally forgot that from before or it wasn't said until now.  Yeah, Edward totally had a different reaction based on that fact alone!!! That trailer is going to be rocking for the next two hours <3

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