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Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Hope they hit it off quicky.  Your Bella really needs a break

she has forgotten to have fun, working nonstop and loosing herself in the process

good to know she has kinky fantasies, that might come handy in the future 

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

How does Edward have the personal folder of Isabella?

if neither Rose nor Bella applied to the Club VIP member

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

Not a BDSM club after all.  That was a very original first encounter, already they have affected each other! 

So Bella is not up for kids, wonder how Edward will react to this news?

Reviewer: beatriz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1

So I'm assuming that the new club they are opening it's a BDSM club and that Bella is a sub?  Maybe he can have both, a wife and a sub if he doesn't scare her away with an early pproposal

interesting premise, on to the next chapter

pd love that he is so affectionate towards Jamie

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 2

the club sounds awesome...but i'd probably make a mess...lol

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

so what kind of club is this? heehee eddie is picking a would be wife from applications...ironic

Reviewer: BandE 4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2012 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 33

I found this story on fanfiction.net but had only been able to read the first chapter before you had to rewrite it because of the new guidelines so I was happy to see the link to this site and I have to say this is one of my favorite stories so far I really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 35

Thanks for letting us know how he knew about her dress. Loved this story :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 34

LOL. That is great. Of course Jamie would fall in love with her.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 33

*sigh* I always love sexy times with Dom and sub :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 32

I loved that chapter. It was nice to see them not only have their own biological child but also adopt Sophia's biological brother. Great job with working all of that out.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 31

That playtime was well planned. They both needed the release and relaxation it provided.

I loved Sophia being welcomed home. That was great :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 30

Awe, it's so sweet how everyone pitched in to help get ready for Sophia.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 29

What a great fairy tale wedding.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 28

LOL, what a way to let the cat out of the bag. At least she wasn't having an erotic dream with Charlie in there.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 27

I have a feeling that wedding is going to be awesome :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

Vicky and Michael are awesome!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 25

Look at the exhibitionist coming out in Bella :) Yay for the upcoming wedding!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 23

The engagement party was awesome. Everything seems to be falling into place for them :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 22

That is such an amazing thing that Rose is willing to do for them.

I love how Alice and Edward are plannign Bella's dream wedding without stressing her.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 21

They are so cute together when they are happy :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 20

I was almost in tears for Bella. I couldn't image feeling that lost about how the person I loved was feeling for me. Thankfully Edward talks with Em and Em talks with Rose. Otherwise that could've been one humongous mess.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 19

Of course something would have to go wrong. There's always problems when things are going so good.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

That was a great first time in the playroom for Bella. Great job with that.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 17

It was nice having all of the family together. If Alice will ever finally get over her hang up with Edward I can see all of them working out happily. At least she is relaxing a bit more each day.

I liked Edward's POV of their shopping trip. Seeing it from his experienced view was nice.

I can't wait for the playroom. I want Edwar to see that he and Bella can have play time and have it not mess up their relationship.

Reviewer: ravenstwimom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I think I read some of this on ffn. Dont know why I didnt finish so I will definitely to that here. I like the first chappie. Thanks for writing.

Reviewer: twilightsatellite Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 35

Enjoyed a lot Edward's memories of his siblings growing up!! And of course to know the mistery behind the necklace and the dress matching! I was surprised he saw her wearing the dress by chance not by stalking! lol

Reviewer: twilightsatellite Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 34

Jamie you're not the only one in love with this woman! ;) He was so sweet!!

Reviewer: twilightsatellite Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 33

wanted to see more sub Edward *wicked grin* 

Reviewer: twilightsatellite Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 32

I loved that they reached their full potential of a hea having both adopted and biological children but at the same time I didn't agree with all the risks Bella took to conceive a biological child. I know I'm not making any sense! lol so just thanks for sharing

Reviewer: twilightsatellite Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 12:39 PM Title: Chapter 29

Their vowes and the vicar's words were SO beautiful!!! Congratz!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 15

Yay! Alice and Bella made up :) I just love the things Jamie says.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

I just knew that dog belonged to his parents. I love how Bella stresses over simple things like meeting the parents. It's great.

Sex on the car in the garage is hot. Every fic needs that :)

Yay for good mom hugs!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Peter and Charlotte are awesome. Bella definitely needed to meet them.

What an ending to that chapter. Thank God I don't have to wait for an update ;)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 12

I'm glad they didn't wait. They both needed that connection. I also think Edward needed some affection outside of the playroom or a controlled scene. Nothing better than spur of the moment outdoor sex :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 11

Wow, I didn't expect that blow up between Bella and Alice. I can see why Alice was so upset but I also see why Bella was hurt by her blow up.

I think Bella is going to push Edward to his limits. I'm sure they can work out a happy medium for both of them. They are so cute together :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

Yay, they've talked and are going to work this all out together. I bet they can work out something that will make both of them happy.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 9

At least she didn't slam the door in his face.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 8

Okay, a little more clarification in the Bella/Renee puzzle. I'm going to assume that pregnancy brought on a hormonal/chemical imbalance that caused Renee to become unstable. I'm sure that's why Bella is afraid to have kids.

I knew it wouldn't go well when Bella found out her mystery man was Edward Cullen.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

Now you've got me wondering why Bella doesn't want to have kids. I'm thinking it's something to do with her mom. Something inherited.

Uh oh. Edward is going to have his work cut out for him with Bella's preocnceived notions of him.

Poor Rose.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

I love Bella's interactions with James. It's so sweet and pure. That is the real, happy Bella coming out :)

Edward is smooth. What a way to "introduce" himself to her.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, poor Bella. She needs Edward as much as he needs her.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4

Poor Edward. That is a huge change he wants to make and it will definitely take work. I wonder how Bella will react when she finds out.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

Yay, we finally meet Alice and Jasper. Poor Jasper. Those pregnant hormones can be a bitch.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2

I think this is the first time I've read Edward owning a restaurant/club like that.

Interesting background on Bella. It looks like Edward is going to have to work hard to get Bella to want kids.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 1

This seems like it will be an interesting story. I like how you handled James and his disability.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 12

Got to say there are so many amazing characters in this, adore Jamie, the usual suspects are a giggle and I do like Gianna. Nice lemon by the way.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 11

He makes her feel normal...she is still traumatised from her childhood...they love each other.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 10

Love the Sam in this...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

Don't think he is or was who she thought he was.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 8

She is amazing...got to say i o have some sympathy for Emmett.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

She is great and he is sooooo sweet...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

W0nderful ending to this chapter...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 5

This has become one of the best stories I have read in ages...

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am going to enjoy reading this again!

Reviewer: wuogkat Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow... you obviously have issues with pregnant women.

It makes your fic hard to read, because I kind of want to smack you around.



Author's Response:

Hi and thanks for your review...

I have, in fact, 5 children myself, so have no issues with pregnant women whatsoever and I actually miss being pregnant, but oh well.

I'm sorry you find the story hard to read, but I learnt long ago that I can't please everyone.

Thanks for the heads up for wanting to 'smack me around', I'll make sure I dodge.

All the best, Tammy x

Reviewer: bellward87 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Good start so far.

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

Edward is so caring

 

 

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 16

I feel so for Bella

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

I can't wait if they will a baby

Reviewer: mummyb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 35

I found you I as a reader have also jumped ship thanks to authors like you I have been able to follow my favorites and also discover new stories......Fan fictions loss is Twcs gain

Reviewer: Cullenbabe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2012 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

that was awesome lemon

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 2

Different...

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2012 9:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Seems he has found something he wants...as has Emmett.

Reviewer: Tweemad Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 1

I'm not following your math here.  If Edward is 39, and Esme is 55, then she was 16 when she had him.  And if they got the twins as babies when Edward was 17 and he is now 39, then Jaime is now 22 and would have graduated from high school severeal years ago.  What am I missing?

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 1

Thanks seems like a good story

Author's Response:

Thanks hun, more chapters will be going by the end of the day :) xx

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