Date: 08 Aug 2019 9:36 AM Title: Tying up Loose Ends
I have t say that this is the most interesting twist to canon that I have ever read and I thoroughly enjoyed it. I’ve been reading fic in this era this summer and this is in my top 3. Keep writing. Enjoy the rest of your summer. ;-)
Date: 17 Sep 2017 10:43 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends
I love this story, a bit short but great reading
Date: 30 Jun 2015 7:03 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends
awesome story!! ;) i loved your take on the *powers* thanks for completing and posting this on here for us ;D
Date: 30 Jun 2015 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Wedding
how come she had to say obey? thats going to bite her on her a**? :)
Date: 13 Jul 2013 2:55 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends
Fun and entertaining story. Woulld have like to know more of Marcus and Caius reasons for the assault.
Date: 07 May 2013 8:10 PM Title: Prologue
Brilliant! Thank you for sharing such a great story!
The plot and storyline were very compelling and the pacing is absolutely excellent. It moved very quickly from beginning to end without getting bogged down or caught up in fluff or filler.
I really enjoy when writers do interesting things with their characterisations and you managed to make yours a good balance of bravery, strength with the added bonus of the mysterious intrigue of the noblesse.
The fight scenes were VERY well done with the skill of the swordplay and tactical maneuvers easy to picture -- as were your love scenes (of course) *winkwink*.
The juxtaposition of modern mannerisms and speech alongside the customs, regalia and splendor of old world nobility was very entertaining! But my favorite part (other than their beautiful clothing, vestments and armour), was how you managed to keep the canon characters human while accessing and retaining their supernatural powers. It was completely brilliant how you managed to make it a battle of good vs evil based on a prophecy!
Thanks again and I hope we will see more of your period pieces and (love) stories <3
~RoseE. x
Date: 07 May 2013 3:30 AM Title: Tying up Loose Ends
sweet ending
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 07 May 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 24
Glad the fight went well. Would have liked to see why Caius was doing it, or was it just for the power?
Date: 07 May 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War
Great job. Glad they are all working together well and guarding each other's backs.
Date: 07 May 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King
I was worried Aro was in on it but I guess not. Glad too. Hope they will all be ok
Date: 07 May 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat
hmmm guess the kids are Jane and Alec. The white haired guy either Caius or Stephan or Vladamir. Guess we'll see soon.
Date: 07 May 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby
They like those long names huh? Yey for baby coming. Happy dance
Date: 07 May 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed
Cool chapter. Ah the additional evil to come. Poor kid.
Date: 07 May 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
Woo Hoo Riley et al are Dead!!!!. Ah Rings of power I'm guessing?
Date: 07 May 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege
Great job. Glad Mikey is in prison. Should have thrown Diego in there too. Cant wait for Riley to die!!! wanker
Date: 07 May 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Haven Keep
Poor kids being apart. Great plans.
Date: 07 May 2013 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Pregnant
Sad to see it happen but glad they are working together. Sad to see her go though
Date: 06 May 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Conversations over coffee
Smart women. Glad e is growing up.
Date: 06 May 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 12 - In Their Own Rooms
Glad they are doing ok. Hope e proves himself so she doesn't leave.
Date: 06 May 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Honeymoon
Glad they are getting along. The island house sounds wonderful. hmmmm a ancient poem and hidden treasures. Dun Dun Dun!!!
Date: 06 May 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Consummation
Glad he is being good about it. Mikey wont like that happening huh? hee hee.
Date: 06 May 2013 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Wedding
Cant blame B for not letting him off the hook so easily. Skankya needs to be tortured for info.
Date: 06 May 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Willful Misunderstanding
Well at least Paul is dead. Hope Mike follows soon. Go B. Keep on fighting
Date: 06 May 2013 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Becoming Better Acquainted
Ah so its Mikey at the end of the last chapter and this one. Glad they are getting along at least.
Date: 06 May 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Beginning of an Understanding
Glad she is putting her foot down. Paul is going to continue being an issue. Skankya too. Hmmm Guessing paul there at the end?
Date: 06 May 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Betrothal
Love Rose in this one. Ah Jasper is smitten I believe.
Date: 06 May 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Traveling
Sounds like Paul needs to be taken out. Go Bad Ass B and R!!!. Glad Carlisle had a talk with him. Wonder if he'll listen?
Date: 06 May 2013 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Princess
Hope B is ok. Sounds like she's going to have her work cut out for her. Hmmm now what is hidden in Haven Keep I wonder that everyone wants it?
Poor B.
Date: 06 May 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Prince
Hope that B makes him behave, esp since she bested him once already. Stupid Men.
Date: 06 May 2013 9:31 PM Title: Treaty
oooh Can't wait till B finds out what Daddy did. Sparks will fly. Ah E is a manwhore huh? Lovely.
Date: 06 May 2013 9:28 PM Title: Prologue
oooh Great start Go Bad Ass B
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:26 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends
Thanks for such a wonderful story. :)
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:24 PM Title: Tying up Loose Ends
Cool, nice ending! Glad all worked out for them!
Date: 12 Jul 2012 1:00 AM Title: Tying up Loose Ends
hey
great chapter
it's sad that the story is over..
but I really liked your story!
good to have a happy ending!
bye
Lil
Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great battle! Can't believe we are done! Liked it a lot!
Date: 07 Jun 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War
Thanks for updating. I'm enjoying your story. 'Hope you feel better soon!
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War
Great chapter. :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War
Hope you are feeling better! Thanks for the update
Date: 04 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 22 - Off to War
well it won't take them long to have children lol update soon
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Wedding
consequences for actions..
Date: 04 Jun 2012 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Beginning of an Understanding
Better send Tanya to the barnyard if you want this marriage to happen.
Date: 07 May 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King
Good Story! 'Hope you'll have time for a new chapter soon. Thanks.
Date: 30 Jan 2012 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King
loving the story, i dont want it to end!
Date: 26 Jan 2012 11:04 PM Title: Prologue
really like this so far, please know your appreciated for writing
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King
wow pretty glamorous!! can't wai to see what is going to happen
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat
okay... intersting who is the white haired man? i hope it isn't aro...
Date: 25 Jan 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby
yeah a baby!! :) ed was so cute
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed
cool how you integrated their powers into the story very orginal!!!
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
ed you stud!!! gee charlie you are the man!! what's up with the rings?
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege
yeah they are back together!
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Haven Keep
okay so everyone knows of the plan.
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Pregnant
okay but she was going to leave him before... i am confused. she told him she was going to leave him for what he did with tanya.. now it is a plan to get riley? again this is confusing
Date: 25 Jan 2012 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Conversations over coffee
what are the plans? i am confused about the whole thing. they have feelings for each other why would she leave him? can't wait to find out
Date: 25 Jan 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King
That was quit the cerimony.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 21 - United under the High King
Bella and Edward have accepted a very dangerous and difficult task. Along with Jasper and Alice they have quite the task ahead.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 12 - In Their Own Rooms
oh boy heartbreak to come i feel it...
Date: 24 Jan 2012 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Honeymoon
Bolt castle is way cool been there many times since i am from new york state. Cool love that you used it. so ed is to be the king of all.. can't wait to see that!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Consummation
that would suck ass to have someone listen in the first time.. yuk.. it's not easy being royal.
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 9 - Wedding
the deed is done.. what will happen.. i can't wait!!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Willful Misunderstanding
oh ed you get what you deserve.. bella you are tough as nails! I love it!!! :)
Date: 24 Jan 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Becoming Better Acquainted
HOT.. i would like to have a friend like rose... ha!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Beginning of an Understanding
oh paul will conspire to get between them..why do i have a feeling ed is gong to be set up into a bad situation and she is going to go off on him.... hummm can't wait to read more
Date: 24 Jan 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Betrothal
oh boy let it begin!!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Traveling
oh boy bella you are tough tough tough!! love it... can't wait till you had ed his ass!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Princess
oh there will be fireworks i can't wait.. ed is going to be dressed down by his wife!! :)
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Prince
oh boy i pity ed she will beat the crap out of him.. can't wait!! :)
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:29 PM Title: Treaty
oh boy wild bella can't wait!!! and a-hole ed!! yeah!!!!
Date: 24 Jan 2012 6:25 PM Title: Prologue
love it go kick ass bella!!! happy 100th review!:)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat
hey
WOW great chapter!
now we know what we r faced with!
that's great!
but it kind of scares me!
bye
Lil
Date: 04 Jan 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat
That is eerily too cool.
Date: 04 Jan 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat
Certain things are becoming clearer while others remain obscure. It is however, a good omen, to have things cleared out a bit.
They all have been sumoned and no one has a good feeling about it. Still they must go... we'll see how things go...
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat
So at least they know a little more about what they have to go against.
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat
Now, Im curious, does Aro want to get them all together to use these 3 people to destroy Edward, Bella and group or use them to defeat the 3. Hmmm. Im very proud Edward and Bellas relationship is going well and strong, and Edward hasnt screwed up, I did have a little bit of doubt with his history. Great update!!!
Date: 04 Jan 2012 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Assessing the Threat
good Chapter.....
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby
ahh they have a son
edward so loves his queen
he has proven to be a good man/husband/king
love it
Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby
The baby is here, both him and Bella fine. Things have been good for them, but it can't last too long. When this threat arrives they will be ready, they have been working hard for it.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby
hey
great!
the Baby is there... sweet!
and it's a boy!
soooo great!
hopefully nothing will happen to Carlisle Charles!
bye
Lil
Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby
How wonderful a baby boy cant wait for more
Date: 01 Jan 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby
beautiful chapter!
Date: 01 Jan 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Baby, Oh Baby
Good Chapter.....
Date: 30 Dec 2011 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed
hey
great chap!
they all get their rings... great!
I hope they win against the cloud!
bye
Lil
Date: 30 Dec 2011 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed
Love the rings the power how cool and by the way after hot sex ya the other rings go to Jasper and Alice lol.
Date: 30 Dec 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed
i love that they have come together
wow who would have thought edward would be in love and expecting his first child. he has come along way. bella is defintly happyy for him
love it
Date: 30 Dec 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed
Good Chapter....
Date: 30 Dec 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed
Another great chapter! I am so glad things are working out for our royal couple
Date: 30 Dec 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Secrets Revealed
It seems they all won't be enjoying a long period of peace. They need to help those in need, even if they are far.
The cloud seems to take people and life away from a place, does it move? If so, where is it going now and of course, who is behind it?
Date: 29 Dec 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
Did I miss something? When did they get the rings?
Date: 29 Dec 2011 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
Wow, you have added so much since I read last!
Loving it. I hope this not the end!
Fiorella
Date: 27 Dec 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
wasn't Paul already dead ?
(...)
Our priority was to protect the Princess so with only ten men with me, I was forced to let them go. Oh, and Lord Paul was there. I killed him.
Seth said this, after ?Bella was rescued, after the episode with Tanya
Date: 27 Dec 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
Loved this chapter! can't wait for the next!
Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
Good Chapter....
Date: 27 Dec 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
hey
great chpter!
I really liked it!
Edward and BElla really love each other...
but the bodyguard is kind of creepy...
bye
Lil
Date: 27 Dec 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
It was an impressive battle. And the journey to it as well. Bella is a just and fair queen. She offered the enemy a chance to leave, some took it, others didn't. She was sure of herself and the man next to her oly strenghten her. I'm guessing it was asurprise to everyone when Edward's presence was revealed.
Now it's time for more revelations...
Date: 26 Dec 2011 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
Love the man in the mask ;) Thank god Riley is gone.
Date: 26 Dec 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
love the story
i love that edward was bella's bodyguard. he truly loves his wife. i am glad he was able to settle his ways and know he has a good women. she will truly rule with him and they will be sucessful. she is good and people are loyal to her. she deserves her people.
Date: 26 Dec 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Rescue
Soo glad to see an update today!! Finished reading Chapter 17 earlier this morning and was thrilled to see 18. Thank you!!
Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege
i love medieval stories so thanks it's beautiful!
Date: 25 Dec 2011 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 12 - In Their Own Rooms
Just so you know, I gave you a 9 rating on the last chapter by accident. I meant to hit 10. Love this story!!! Merry Christmas!!
Date: 24 Dec 2011 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege
If I had away to keep this book after it was done, I would. It is wonderful, well written and has an incredooble plot. Thanks for writing and updating daily.
Date: 24 Dec 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Siege
I'm so anxious right now. My stomach is flip-flopping.