Date: 10 Apr 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 13
well... jasper is in deep. i hope this doesn't get him killed. can't wait for more
Date: 28 Mar 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 13
wow!!! there's so much going on!!! Nice lemon at the end, but ewwww with the butt part!! lol can't wait for more!
Date: 28 Mar 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 13
loved the chapter
Date: 08 Mar 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
CIA mike intersting.. hope he doesn't pull Ed down too... can't wait for more
Date: 08 Mar 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 12
loved the chapter !
Date: 07 Mar 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Lovin here!!!!
Awesome chapter Bekki! I'm enjoying getting involved in their day to day lives. So many characters...great chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Mar 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hey girl I'm really lovin this story. Mike was a surprise. And Jacob as B's brother is perfect. I can't wait until the next update. And Jess being alive was a fucking twist from hell. Aro is one twisted fuck. See you soon
Date: 04 Mar 2012 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Really great story. Can't wait to read more. May I say I love the cliffhanger.
[Report This]Date: 27 Feb 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh man! Jess is still going to be a problem for them. Guessing mike is a fed too ? Love it!a
Date: 27 Feb 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 11
There were so many OMG moments in the chapter. First of all, Edward is a dick!, (But a hot one ;) ) Poor Derrick... But most importantly, Jessica is alive?!?!?!?!? please update soon!!!
Date: 26 Feb 2012 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh boy....can't wait for more!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
wow so jessica is still alive and will be a problem the cullens aren't aware of
good luck guys.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 11
Can't wait for more
Date: 26 Feb 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 11
loved it looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 22 Feb 2012 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
lol, cockblocking!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10
well i truly hope voluturi got jessica
she was a pain in the ass
well seems em and rose took their free lay as oh well.
love the story
Date: 19 Feb 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 10
Cool no more Jess...maybe. But that got more problems coming
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
It's been a long time....story is I can see it going different direction.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 10
Well you are progressing. Hard to review. I am not sure where we are here. Jessica was captured by Aro. The Fed's are on to Alice and Edward being siblings. Em & Rose like 3 some's with other women.
Yep that is it.
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
i love the story and hated Jessica and Lauren....
Date: 19 Feb 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
loved the chapter looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 10
Loved it!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
hum jessica is dangerous.. you weren't so smart alice... can't wait to see what is going to happen.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
em you and rose are kinky as hell!!! poor ed
Date: 06 Feb 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 7
thank making ed so mature about the whole thing!
Date: 06 Feb 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
wow pretty deep....
Date: 06 Feb 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 3
interesting... that is some kinda twist... bella is a piece of work. i can't believe she cheated on ed.. yuk just yuk....
Date: 06 Feb 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
hum interesting... ed sure is something else...so alice is the long lost sister?
Date: 03 Feb 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 9
Yikes, that wasn't very smart of Alice to leave that kind of evidence laying around knowing Jessica was staying with her. Sounds like Jessica is going to have to get whacked now...
Date: 02 Feb 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hey review whore!! LOL
I'm doing my part to feed your addiction!!!
Awesome chapter...alot of things covered and the story is flowing.
Loved it!!!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 9
OMG I can't believe that Jessica hass the nerve to say those things... Yea they are having twins- how exciting!
So intriguing!
[Report This]Date: 02 Feb 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
man i will take jessica out.
i do not know how she has made it this far. she must have some mad skills in the bedroom that noone has smothered her to death yet
wow so all the boys are decided to be made men
love it
Date: 02 Feb 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
looking forward to the next chapgter
Date: 02 Feb 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 9
hehehe yeah i can see most of the cullens and even jasper vying to take out jessica....loved the chappy
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2012 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 8
omg seems jessica is going to bring a whole another atmosphere to this story
wow it seems rose and em just might get their grove on with ms jessica. look out things are heating up
i am thrilled edward got to talk with his mom. heartbreaking
love it
Date: 25 Jan 2012 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 8
Bella might deck her. Rose and Emmett may bed her..What will Edward do?
Date: 25 Jan 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 8
loved the chapter looking forward to mroe
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
Geez, my prayers go out to Alley-Cat on her new partner during the next two weeks, hopefully she will find some way to off her... Hahaha Just kidding...
Seriously, that was over the top when Edward finally got to talk with his Mother...
Date: 19 Jan 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hard subject especially in the Mafia life. Hard to be a teen trying to figure out their sexuality. Edward surprised me, he did well.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 5
well I am with Bella on this. I would be livid. I would not want my kid in that mess. If he got in it I would want him out.
Date: 19 Jan 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
Awwww how sweet!
Date: 19 Jan 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
With Edward's mother dead, Alice could be a half sister. Maybe.
[Report This]Date: 19 Jan 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 7
wow so much to deal with being a teenager. we as parents want so much to protect them. so much to explore. i am glad the line of communication is there
my son just came out and i am thrilled he is no longer hiding it. not good for them to pull into themselves and not feel as if they have a support system
it is good for seth to explore and see what he wants and who he likes
love it
Date: 18 Jan 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2012 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 6
well seems seth has alot to think about
it is alot for a young guy to figure out. i think they always know though
my son just recently came out. but he tried not to be confronted with it and turned to drugs and alchol. i am totally supportive of him but all young kids grasp with them getting older and the decisions they make.
great chapter
Date: 09 Jan 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well that was alot of info shared....an unexpected to boot!!!
Date: 07 Jan 2012 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
there is nothing here except authors notes and end notes..can't wait to read this..
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know. I think I have it fixed. Let me know what you think:)
Date: 07 Jan 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hope this is not a glitch but I don't see 4500 words ... maybe 400 words,. I thought maybe you should know this.
Author's Response:
Sorry. I think I have it fixed. Let me know what you think. Thanks for letting me know about the glich :)
Date: 06 Jan 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 6
WOW didn't see that coming...
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2011 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
WOW, this was a heavy chapter. A lot of details came out of this. I guess Edward will try to keep the remaining kids out of this. At least he didn't promise he said he would try.
Date: 26 Dec 2011 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 5
That chapter was soooo good!! The part in the begining with the hoover was LOL funny, but the rest of the chapter was so deep and emotional, I think we really got some insight inro the characters!! I cant wait for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Dec 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 5
seems seth has alot of growing and learning the real meaning of his father's business. i hope he listens. it was maybe wrong of what edward did but just maybe this lesson will make him think and save his life who knows.
man bella and edward have one heck of a life. their relationship seems spot on. love it
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
Really cool chapter!
Date: 22 Dec 2011 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 5
looking forward tothe next chapter
[Report This]Date: 22 Dec 2011 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
TY for the update, great chapter and yes, sadly I thought that might happen.. Oh brother..... beware twins no doey the crime if you can't doey the "Cullen Style" time!!! meaning meeting with the Twins! Yikes~
Okay till next time! Happy Holidays!
Date: 07 Dec 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 4
I really like it!!!!! Can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 06 Dec 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 4
yay!!!!! everything is out and jasper and alice are married awesome!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Awesome come together summary. I can't believe that they are twins.
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 4
twin sister...okay I can deal with that!! can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow! that's all I can say about this chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
this is sooooo good... I love My MobWard who is hot and faithful for his Bella... this sounds really interesting...haven't figured out the connection with Alice yet...
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
its very good and I look forward to more
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 4
love it
all out in the open and i know for ali she is in heaven being back with her family and getting to knew them
i hope by her getting close doesn't put her mom in danger
i am looking forward to more
love it
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story!,!! Can't wait for more!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Love this story so far. Waiting to see how this works out with Edward keeping a secret from Bella regarding Alice. keep the chapters coming!
Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 29 Nov 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 3
I love this stories DRAMA!!!
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 3
I enjoyed the update and can't wait to read more and find out who Alice is.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 3
Bella really cheated on Edward. Is she crazy?! Who would want to cheat if they had Edward! Great chapter. Want to know how Alice is involved. I bet Edwards father is her father as well.
Date: 25 Nov 2011 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 3
loved it ! looking forward ot the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 2
The ending was too cute!
Date: 14 Nov 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great!!! So i'm assuming that Alice is like thier "lost" sister....right?
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2011 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I like is so far. its got some funny points too. is it told mostly thru the women?
Date: 11 Nov 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
I think Alice is related to the Cullens.
Date: 11 Nov 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 2
loved it looking forward to seeing what happens next
Date: 04 Nov 2011 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
This story has my interest. I can't wait to read more and find out who Alice is. I have a feeling she's a sibling or some type of relative to Edward.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow, really intersting!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 1
OK, good so far. I am confused with Alice's role though.
Date: 03 Nov 2011 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
Great story can't wait for the rest of the story.
[Report This]Date: 03 Nov 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
loved it so far and cant wiat to see what you do with it! can u post a list of everyones ages and kids names and ages??
Author's Response:
I added names and ages to chapter one. Hope that makes sense.
THanks for reading,
B
Date: 03 Nov 2011 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
looking forward t seeing where this leads to
Date: 03 Nov 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Reads like it is going to be great