Date: 11 Oct 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?
I say she should stay clear of him. Work and that is it. He is not Jasper.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Apologies for my delayed response.
You're definitely right, Edward isn't Jasper. Not even close. But, Edward does have some good bones in his body, and they might start cropping up here and there as we go.
Give him a chance, he might change your mind. ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 11 Oct 2011 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?
Well all I can say is Edward is going to be in deep shit at some point in this story when Bella finds out he made a bet. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry I was so crappy with my response time, my resolution for 2012 is to improve in this area! ;)
I'm glad you liked the first chapter! I hope you've had the chance to read more and are enjoying the story so far.
Yes, yes, Edward will be in some trouble ... But, that's a bit off in the future, and I don't want to spoil the fun now. ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?
Love the chapter. Jasper better start thinking about how he it going to look on his relationship with Alice when she finds out that they had a bet going on about her bestfriend. Surely he cant think that Alice would be ok with that and still see him
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :)
Up until recently, Jasper hadn't put much thought into the potential consequences of his behavior, or his part in the whole bet. He'll start doing some heavy thinking in the future though and things might change ... or they might not. You'll see. :)
I hope you've enjoy what's happened after this chapter! And that you continue to enjoy the rest of the story!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 11 Oct 2011 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?
Oh they are so gonna fall!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review hun! :)
Falling, falling, falling ... That they are doing.
How far will they fall? Well ... You'll see! ;)
Thanks for reading!
xoxo
Date: 11 Oct 2011 6:43 AM Title: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?
I think Bella needs to rethink the friend with benifits lol
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :) Sorry this reply took so long!
LOL - I agree! Who wouldn't want to be friends with benefits with Cockyward? ;) I sure would!
I hope you've enjoyed what's come in chapters following this!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 5: Can We Be Friends?
interesting to find out the real issues these two have in there pasts that turned them into the people they are now!!!!! I'm curious about the one from GQ magazine!!! Very good story
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review hun! :)
I'm about to post the outtakes that will start to paint better pictures of Bella and Edward's back stories, so this should satisfy your curiousity I hope. They're going to be coming each month, one for Bella and one for Edward. I hope you like them - I'm excited to hear your thoughts!
Thanks for being such a loyal reader! :)
xoxo
Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines
I'm intrigued with this story... I'm sure this "bet" will not end well.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry for the delay in my response!
I hope you're still intrigued with the story! I'm glad you enjoyed it!
The bet ... Oh lordy. I wish I could say which way it would end, but, alas ... You'll hafta read on and see!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 03 Oct 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
Thanks for the chapter. I hope u update soon! How about Endless night? Please :D
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry it took so long for this reply!
You're welcome, and I hope you're still enjoying the story! I know there's been a few updates to both stories since, but I'm currently working on the newest chapter for EN, which I hope sincerely to have up by the end of the weekend. I have a O/S I'm doing for a charity compilation as well, so that's got a bit of priority right now, but one of my 2012 life goals is to update more frequently. :)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 02 Oct 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
This is really a good story
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) I apologize for the delay in response!
I'm so glad you like the story! I hope you've kept reading and that you've enjoyed what's transpired in the chapters following this one!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 02 Oct 2011 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
geez he's a horrible edward
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry for the delay in my response!
He's not the most prim and proper Edward, but I assure you, there is a soul buried deep down in there, and it will start to surface. If you check out the outtakes that I'm going to be posting, you might find a wee bit of empathy for him as his back story is revealed.
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 02 Oct 2011 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
They are both getting under each others skin. If he is going to want her to fall in love with him he has to stop being such a man whore.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :)
They definitely started getting under each other's skin early on. Now the question is will they continue to burrow further into one another's hearts or ... ?
Edward will slow down the pants dropping. (I know you've read more and you've reviewed, so you probably know he's calmed down a bit.) ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 02 Oct 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
I don't think Bella should get any where near SLUTWARD he might give her an airborne STD..........LOL Not the way to make Bella fall in love with him by screwing randoms at a bar where she is at.....LOL Esp when she sees him leave with said random. Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) I apologize for taking so long to respond!
LMAO @ SLUTWARD. He might need a book with a title to the effect of 'Dating for Dummies,' LOL! He'll improve though in some ways, I promise! ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 02 Oct 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
looking foward to seeing what ahppens
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! :) Sorry I took so long to reply!
I hope you've enjoyed what's happened in future chapters! I know you've been reviewing regularly, so I'm pretty sure you're caught up on the madness. All the excitement is about to begin, so get ready! ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2011 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
wow this is getting better and better...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review my dear! :)
I hope that it continues to get better and better for you. I have a sneaking suspicion it will! ;)
Thanks for reading!
xoxo
Date: 02 Oct 2011 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
What a whore!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :)
LOL someone else referred to him as 'SLUTWARD' and I thought that was funny too! He has a pants-dropping problem. Hopefully Bella can help correct that! ;)
Thanks for reading!
xoxo
Date: 02 Oct 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
Love the chapter. I really hope bella wasnt jealous about taking some random girl home, she needs to step up her game.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) I'm sorry my reply is so late!
Bella is cautious with her heart. There's a few reasons why, which will be revealed in the outtakes I'll be posting. Don't worry though, the ante is going to get upped and, well ... You'll see. ;)
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
Date: 02 Oct 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 4: Putting Plans in Motion
I will love you forever for this. Seriously... FOREVER.
Author's Response:
:)
Any time you want a guest-starring role let me know! Hehe...
*MUAH*
<3<3
Date: 01 Oct 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
Very good story so far
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) I'm sorry it took me so long to respond!
I'm glad you liked the story! I hope that you've continued reading and that you still like it! We've reached a nice jumping off point here, things are only going to get more interesting and intense as we go now!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2011 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
I just finished the posted chapters for " Endless Nights" and I loved the writing in it. So here I am loving this one even better. I hope u update pretty soon. Only three chapters here so far :(. Can't wait to read some more
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry it took me so long to reply!
I'm glad you liked Endless Night! That one isn't too popular, but it's my first fanfic I started and it's kind of my baby, so any time I hear about people reading it and enjoying it, I smile.
I'm also glad you liked this one! I hope you've continued to read (I know the last few updates have taken a while - RL was nuts for a bit there)! Things are about to get really exciting, so I'm looking forward to hearing what everyone thinks!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
Yes that back story should be interesting!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry it took so long for me to get a response out!
I'll be posting the first two chapters of the back story outtakes on here tomorrow! I'm not sure if you follow the story over at fanfiction.net or not, but they're already up over there! :) I hope you enjoy them!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
What did he do to Jess and I think he will have a chalenge ahead with Bella.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delayed response to your review! I've been kept uber busy with RL, work, school, and writing and am just now getting a chance to sit down and respond to all of the TWCS ones. :)
Thank you for reading! I have a series out outtakes that I'll be releasing that will give insight into the Jess situation. The first one for Edward was posted in the Fandom 4 Texas compilation, so unfortunately his outtakes won't start publicly til after January 1, but the Bella outtakes will start soon so everyone can catch up with her backstory as well!
I do agree with you (and I'm sure you've seen if you've continued reading), there's a challenge ahead. Edward has never been one to back down from a challenge though, so ... You'll see where it gets him!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
I Like it!!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delayed response with the review! I read them all regularly, but I've been so busy with RL, school, work, and writing that I just haven't had time to get to replying until now! :)
Thank you for the review! And I'm glad you like the story! I hope you've continued reading and that you still like the course of events and how the characters are developing.
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines
And Bella thought she was a nobody lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry it took so long to respond!
LOL yes, Bella believes she's a 'nobody.' That's her comfort zone. She's quite obviously recognized by somebody though. ;)
I hope you've enjoyed the story as it's progressed!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?
This sounds like fun
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) My response time sucks, and I'm sorry for that!
I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter! I hope you've continued the story, and if so, I'm curious to hear what you think! :)
My goal is to keep it fun but of course have a bit of angst and drama woven in there as well!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
Well nice start, I hope you update often.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delayed response to the review! School, work, RL, and my writing has kept me so busy I haven't had a breather to get to these! :)
I'm glad you liked the way the story started! I hope you've continued reading and that you like what's transpiring!
I will be trying to update every 2-3 weeks for now, and hopefully once we hit the New Year I can bump that up to every week because my classload will diminish greatly!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?
lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :) Sorry it took so long to respond!
I'm glad the story amused you! I had hoped people would get a fair dosage of angst, humor, and a bit of romance in there too, so to see people laugh, makes me smile!
I hope you've enjoyed it as it's continued!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines
I like how you jump back and forth in POV's in this story.
Cocky bastard isn't he!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! And apologies for the delayed response! :)
I'm glad you like the change in POVs. I thought that was the best way to get the story across. I know some people have expressed dislike for it, but I do believe it'll continue throughout the entire story. I want everyone to know what's going on in both Bella and Edward's heads throughout this journey!
I hope you're enjoying the story and how it's continued!
Thank you for reading! :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
great chapter more please!!!!
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delayed response in my review! RL has finally caught up with me and school, work, and trying to keep track of all my writing has distracted me from responding to reviews! :)
I'm glad you like the story! I know you're a regular reader now, which I appreciate greatly, and I hope you're liking what's transpired. I also hope you like what's coming in the future for our lovely couples!
Thank you for reading!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2011 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?
rich boys with nothing better to do, than bet on love
i wonder if anyone ever turned down edward. i doubt it
rich boy has his work cut out for him
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I'm sorry it took so long to respond, RL, work, school, and my wriitng have kept me ridiculously busy lately. I'm glad I finally have a chance to sit down and do this! :)
Sadly, nobody has ever turned Edward down. Until Bella came along ... And she's about to teach him a lesson and send him off ot the school of hard knocks. ;)
You are certainly right ... rich boys with nothing better to do. Perhaps their mindframes will change as the story moves forward.
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?
Really good forgot to review !!!! Please keep going very good
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review!! :)
I will definitely keep going! The whole story is mapped out in my head, so it's just a matter of continuing to get it down on paper and giving it to everyone to read, enjoy (hopefully), and review!
Thank you for being a loyal reader and all your reviews! They put a smile on my face each time I see one! :)
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2011 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2: Nothing but the Headlines
Great story!!! This is going to ne pretty entertaining I think, since its already drawing me in
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! :)
I'm glad you like the story and I'm glad it's drawing you in! I certainly hope it continues to keep your attention as the action starts to pick up and the fun begins!
I strive to please, entertainment is the main game with Hot Commodity, and I hope I can deliver something special that people will remember. :)
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 1: Wanna Make a Bet?
I think he has gotten in way too deep and Bella is going to teach him quite a few things beore she throws him the life jacket!
Author's Response:
I apologize for the delay in responding to your review! RL, work, school, and my writing have kept me in the saddle, but I finally have some time now to get to the TWCS reviews! :)
Thank you for the review! I would have to agree with you, Edward has certainly gotten himself in too deep. And you're right, Bella will teach him a few things, but I think what she teaches him might be a bit different than what everyone expects. AND .... Edward just might be teaching Bella a few things too. Perhaps they'll have to share a life boat? ;)
Thank you for the review! :)
xoxo
Date: 29 Sep 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 3: Business, Not Pleasure
Love the chapter I really hope that Bella doesnt cave first and give in to him he is way to cocky and needs to be brought down some. He may be cute but after finding out how many chicks he had banged should have been a turn off, Who wants a walking STD to be in there bed. Theres no way he never caught anything being with that many people. cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delayed response! I've been so busy with school, work, RL, and trying to keep up with writing that I've been slacking majorly on my HC review responses!
Thank you for reviewing! I literally LMAO when I read your walking STD comment! LOL!
If you've kept reading you'll see both are starting to cave just a wee bit. Don't worry, there's plenty of angst/resistance/cute moments/fun ahead in the coming chapters!
Thank you for reading! :)
xoxo