Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 18
I will check out window once I get caught up in this
Date: 27 Sep 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 17
what's up with Alice
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 15
he is dazzeling
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 14
umm Rob porn would be better than anything
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
I have always been a klutz
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 10
it is amusing and it sounds like you post often which is good because I will get caught up quickly and I hate to wait. You should have more reviews which is why I am trying to comment and review each chapter
Date: 27 Sep 2011 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 8
i am enjoying it so far
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 7
I would waste time with him too
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 5
yay no girlfriend
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
or let him out
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
I am a lesbian and he could turn me around instantly, the only man I have ever been attracted to, hoefully not TMI to share :)
Date: 27 Sep 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 2
we love the landlord and he is fine without the pie
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 64
edward is getting tough with her but he has to make her see. Charlie better do what he needs to do.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 64
Wow. Charlie what a disappointment. I hope she takes Edwards advice.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 63
Can i have Edward he is my hero lol
Date: 26 Sep 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 62
Edward is a good boy he is doing the right thing being strong for Bella when she cant be.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 64
While I do understand Edwards protectiveness of B. I feel he is being a bit harsh. I mean What would he do if it was his mother. Renee is ill she can't help that fact any more than we can help the sky being blue. Did B enable her. Yes did Charlie Yes but come on Edward should not expect B to turn her back on her ILL mother completly. B should take guardianship and then do just what she told Charlie Have the State pay to take care over her and place her in a home where she can be cared for.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 48
Easier said than done Edward.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 47
Is there going to be a shit storm when Bella finds out that Edward is and or tracks Charlie down? I think she will be mad at first, but she will calm down and realize that Edward is only trying to help. At least I hope that's what happens. Also, wasn't it just inevitable that the rent checks were going to bounce eventually? What a mess, huh? xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 46
I love the fluff, thank-you for the fluff. =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 45
Oh lord, I dread that saying, 'the calm before the storm'. I knew it was coming though. xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 36
It sounds like Renee has Bi-Polar disorder; I have an intimate knowledge of that oh so fun disorder. xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 64
Love the chapter. I cant wait to hear what Bella has to say to Phil. It seems like she would be able to do something about the money since Renee is sick. I know I would own half his besiness if it was me some of that money was Bella's. Phil took advantage of Renee he needs his ass kicked and wait for next chapter
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 34
Damn Renee, I want to slap her. Is that wrong? xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 64
well, charlie is an ass!!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh Bella, just spill it to Edward before someone else finds out about Renee and tells him. That probably would not go over well, at all. xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 30
Yeah, I have several theories about Renee. I have to say that the most likely one would be that she is content for now, but that her flakyness will rear it's ugly head soon enough. Or maybe not? Guess I'll have to wait and see. xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 29
I think it will be cathartic for Bella when she tells Edward all about what she has/does endured with Renee. Although I have a feeling he's probably figured some of it out already. I just can't get over how awesome he is; I want one. xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 28
My heart just aches for Bella; she really deserves a 'normal' life. Preferably with Edward, of course. xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 27
I just love your Edward and Bella. =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
Oh I'd bring you soup, even if you weren't sick. It would be a thank-you for writing. Maybe you'd rather have chocolate? How about some Robporn? :D xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
I knew Renee was going to be a pain in the ass, but cripes; she really treats Bella like shit. I think she needs some kind of help. I really love your story, and it's good to throw in some drama into a story. I think it makes it more realistic. Just my opinion. xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 64
Yay! I hope Charlie steps up to the plate-- maybe Edward's family can help too!
Date: 26 Sep 2011 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
What I wouldn't do for an Edward like this one in your story, he's too sweet. I love him. =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 20
*laughing my ass off!* Yeah, worrying about the hammock falling apart was my main focus. :P I love your sense of humor! You're awesome. =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
Aww, poor Alice. Edward is right though, that doesn't give her the right to be such a butt.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can't wait to find out why Alice doesn't like Bella. It can't be the age difference, E is only five yrs older than B. She also can't possibly still be pissed about Kate, that was a yr ago, plus Kate is engaged now. Hmmm.
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 16
So, how old is Edward? Not that it really matters; I'm just really curious now. Hopefully you mention it later in your story. Oh, and I love Esme and vest wearing Carlisle. =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 14
I just adore your story! =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
You are killing me! I absolutely love the banter between E/B! Love your story. =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well I for one will definately be sticking around; I really love this story. I'm looking forward to seeing just what Edward and Bella's relationship will be, just friends or maybe more? =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
Your a/n's are so cute! =)
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 5
Ah, the mysteries of Edward Cullen. I can't wait to see what happens next and if Renee will really have to pull up stakes and leave in six months. =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 4
*giggles* Edward is a trip! He's to friggin nice, what's that all about? I love your story so far, it's so fun. I wanted to pout when Edward said he had a girlfriend. Oh well, maybe not for long? I just love your characters so far, I'm sure I'll love all of them if they are as different and fun as E/B. =) xoxo
Date: 26 Sep 2011 8:00 AM Title: Prologue
I am soooo looking forward to reading your story! =)
Date: 25 Sep 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 61
As long as she can remember how much he loves her she should be ok she has the support she has never had.
Date: 25 Sep 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 61
Great lot of chapters! Hope Bella is brave enough with Edwards help to stay away from Renee!
Awesome storie!
Date: 25 Sep 2011 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 61
Hmmm I'd have shower sex with him even without crazy people!! That sounded totally wrong!!
Date: 24 Sep 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 60
edward is the best
Date: 24 Sep 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 59
I am so proud of her she did the right thing now maybe they can all get help. Edward has to be freaking out
Date: 24 Sep 2011 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 61
Hello iambeagle,
I really love your story. Please go on!!!
Lol - Tiina
Date: 24 Sep 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 61
I couldn't get past the lack of protection! (You made a point of them using protection before - and now they didn't.)
I know it doesn't necessarily mean anything...
Date: 24 Sep 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 61
I thought we weren't getting another one till tomorrow, Not that I'm complaining :D
Author's Response:
Nah, my problem is that I upload to FFn first so sometimes these updates are a day or so behind... so the A/N's don't usually apply to anything over here on TWCS lol! That's why sometimes there are like 5 or 6 updates a day because I forget to upload over here! My bad.
Date: 24 Sep 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 60
Awesome like always. Thank u so much for both updates. Can't wait for the next one
Date: 24 Sep 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 31
What's up with Alice? Poor Bella.
Date: 23 Sep 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 58
Thanx, I knew u were as a great as I thought. Thanx for that extra chapter ;). Have a great day and even better wknd ;)
Date: 23 Sep 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Umm.. I think that I am with Bella on that whole hammock thing.. They belong outside not inside a house unless you live in a hut on an island.
Date: 23 Sep 2011 7:53 AM Title: Prologue
Oh man!!! Why do I think that things are going to be interesting?
Date: 23 Sep 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 58
Im so proud of her she should go to the hospital
Date: 23 Sep 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 57
I love it calling the po-po
Date: 23 Sep 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 56
Please tell me it is Emmett and not Phil
Date: 23 Sep 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 57
Jesus, I love you and I love the fact that u update way more than everyone else, but can u gives us one or two more? Please, pretty please :(
Date: 22 Sep 2011 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 55
Heeeeelp! Edwaaard!
OMG@&%$!
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 55
This one she can't let go. hospital, police, charges all have to happen.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 55
ohhhhhhhhhhh, not a cliff!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 55
wow, fantastically written. I'm scared for Bella......
Author's Response:
Oh my gosh, really you are so sweet. Thank you so much.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 55
Edward's gonna be pissed!!
Author's Response:
Oh, most definitetly.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 55
I think Phil found an idoit to give him all of her money. Renee needs to go to the hospital for the crazy and Bella just needs to go to the hospital because the crazy tryed to kill her SHIT get home Edward
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 54
Your A/Ns are creeping me the F#@k out! I'll probably have nightmares tonight. I wish Edward and Emmet were here to keep me company.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 52
I love Emmet so much! He is the perfect comedy relief.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 54
Wow Bella is pissed will she do what Edward said
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 53
Now shit is going to hit the fan.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 52
Im afraid a hole lot of shit will go wrong in four days. What is up with Renee???
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 51
Your to funny. I love he gave her the key I hope she uses it.
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 50
I hope Charlie comes around
Date: 22 Sep 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 54
friggin frig@%$#@ Renee!
I want to give Bella a big hug...poor girl.