Date: 19 Dec 2011 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
There is a whole bunch of layers to this story. Each layer only reveals more layers yet to be discovered. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Layers there are. It's a tedious unveiling process that I try not to overwhelm with. Thanks for your patience. :)
Date: 19 Dec 2011 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
She is a sneaky minx!
Author's Response:
HeHe... love her! ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
Will you explain what happened to B's dad & brother?
Author's Response:
Yes, the details are coming slowly but surely. There's more than a lot of angst coming. :(
Date: 19 Dec 2011 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
Aww. I love when they kiss and make up.........well, make up at least. Looking forward to a kiss. Ha! Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Edward definitely needs to pucker up again. But it may be a while... :(
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
I love this story sooo much!
Author's Response:
Wow! Thank you!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
wow what a gripping chapter!!! TY for another powerful chapter in the heartwrenching tale of a tortured duaghter who simply needs and desires love....
Now I need to nead over to C&B and catch the last two chapters...I love Calire and Jaimin they are just as powerful and emotionally engrossing as Edward and Bella....Merry Christmas wonderful Author!!!! :-)
Author's Response:
Hmmm... is there a theme to my mother/daughter relationships? Yikes. Well...
But I think Claire's mother still takes the prize. Or took, since I showed her ;) She deserved it.
Merry Christmas, hon.
xo,
Mel
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2011 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
It's killing me trying to figure out what happened in the past to Bella to make their dynamics the way it is today.
Author's Response:
The answers will come, I promise. Sorry if it's frustrating you, but thank you for sticking with me.
Date: 19 Dec 2011 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
wow what horrible mother :( balme a child..
have a wonderful holiday in tell next time
Author's Response:
She is definitely horrible. There's a lot of heartbreaking back story yet to be revealed :(
Thank you, and a wonderful holiday to you too.
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
B isn't as innocent as she lets on. Maybe she should be the one in Aro's confines, instead of that sneaky snake.
Author's Response:
Ummm... what does that mean? She's an angel! ;)
Date: 15 Dec 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
Intriguing start to what sounds like a complicated tale. Diving into the deep end of the pool.
Author's Response:
Thank you. Just holler if you need a life preserver ;)
Date: 07 Dec 2011 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
i read your long ass a/n....like i tell other authors...fuck em. this is YOUR story not theirs. you write what you want...it;s what's in your head and in your heart. i have readmany fics where edward and bella never get together....so what. all stories cannot be the same. it gets boring. so on with it lady!!
p.s.
it's on like donkey kong
Author's Response:
Thank you for your support, I know I shouldn't let things get to me. I'll have to try harder to be 'tough'. If these characters and this story didn't mean anything to me it would be easy, but I love them, so...
xo,
Mel
Date: 07 Dec 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
damn that's fucked up
Author's Response:
Aaah, well...
Thanks for reading:)
Date: 04 Dec 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
good chapter love the special bond between jasper and bella wonder what jasper will say to edward..... he will deserve it to.. love it when authers reply your right alot don't but some do :)
Author's Response:
Well, thank you, and I'm sorry it took me so long to respond. The 3 WIPs and the Christmas story I just posted have kept me beyond busy, not to mention kids and life and working 55 hours a week...
And thank you for seeing that Jasper and Isabella have a special bond, many try to twist it another way, which hurts and baffles me.
I hope you have a wonderful holiday.
xo, Mel
Date: 04 Dec 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
That Bella is a sneaky one! Edward picked the wrong girl to play with. Ha!
Author's Response:
Let's face it, the man doesn't stand a chance ;)
[Report This]Date: 04 Dec 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
My dear author - you are wonderful and creative...your Stories (note plural) are wonderful and very gripping emotionally... I like to say reading your writing are like watching a painter create or a pianist feel the music.... your a very emotionally gripping writer... That's a good thing as far as I am concerned...I love Claire and Jamin as much as I do Edward and Isabella...so you hang in there and carry on your stories at your pace and in the end you will have accomplished pieces you as yournadoeing fans are more than satisfied with.... You rock and please continue being and feeling inspired.... till your next update know that I am so loving your works... A Fan of emense proportions!!!! Kathy
Author's Response:
Oh!!! You're so sweet! You know, I get knocked on my ass, and then someone like you says something like this and it takes all of the cruel and ugly away. Thank you so much for your wonderful and supportive words. You bring tears to my eyes. As for inspiration, I have more than there is time. I don't know where it comes from, honestly, because RL is not kind to me. I guess my head is my only escape. And I'll go ahead and tell you, I just posted a new story yesterday, something for Christmas. It's very sweet, and different for me, but I think very special. What little response I've gotten from it so far tells me I might be right about that, and it means a lot. It's called Cups Full of Wishes if you want to take a peek. :)
Thanks again, hon, and I hope you have a wonderful holiday.
xo, Mel
Date: 04 Dec 2011 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
can't wait for Jasper to kick Edwards ass!! Go Jasper!!
Author's Response:
Eek. Well... ;)
Date: 04 Dec 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
I seriously can't believe people bitched you out because of the last couple of chapters. It's called plot people...heard of it? Geez...anyway...I'm really enjoying your story. Keep up the great work! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! And, in my experience, most readers aren't the least bit interested in plot. I'm constantly bitched at for too much back story in this and not enough getting to the point. Well, too bad for them, they can leave, which they probably already have. There's plenty of happily-ever-after-in-a-hurry smut out there. They can go read that. ;)
Date: 04 Dec 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
Can't wait to see Jasper's confrontation with Edward and what's going thru Edward's head.
Author's Response:
It was a bit odd for me not having him around for the last chapter, but since he's been hiding...
Date: 03 Dec 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
Wonderful chapter. Isabella, like most spoiled little girls, has grown up to be a master manipulator of the people around her.
Author's Response:
Hmmm... perhaps, but not with spiteful intentions, which some readers seem to think she's displaying. I was a bit saddened by that interpretation, because I think Isabella is very misunderstood, but I can't control how people think, I can only hope they gain a better understanding. Or keep their mean comments to themselves... ;)
As for my feelings on her manipulative tendencies... what choice do they leave her?
Date: 03 Dec 2011 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
no I do not want anything from him. I want Bella to have a guy that Jasper will approve of and then let her grow away from Edward and the need for him. Let him see that she DOES NOT NEED him anymore.
Author's Response:
I must admit I was surprised by this, You don't want them together? Or you just don't want her to 'need' him? And... I'm not so sure Jasper would approve of ANY guy ;)
Date: 03 Dec 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
I personally love all your chapters. I'm glad that there are bumps and detours in the road ahead for this two otherwise where's the fun in them finally overcoming everything to be together. I hoping and kinda figured when I started reading that it wouldn't happen right away. There's to much past and things for them to ovecome to be together for it to happen this soon. You have a wonderful story and I am happy with the way it's going. I like when Edward screws up and needs to make amends. Also, logic tells us that even if he wants her and all he can't just spring kissing her on Jasper the protactive brother, espiecially with what just happened a few chapters back with his assistant. Jasper would have gladly helped Emmett beat him up and Bella would have been even more unhappy with the lot of them. I will be eagerly waiting your return from Paris and the next update but no matter how long it takes I will be here. I hope that you have a nice and safe trip. Take care and thank you for the story and update. Until next time.
Author's Response:
Your feelings about things are a breath of fresh air, because so many readers are impatient for everything they want to just happen and happen yesterday. So, thank you for your understanding and supportive words. They are not perfect characters on perfect paths. What would be the fun of that? ;)
As for 'Paris', it was a reference to my original fiction Clear and Bright (also posted here) which is set in Paris. I had a very special chapter to write and I didn't know how long it would keep me. I get lost when I'm with them. (But it's finished now and I'm working on the next installment of this.) Some readers are reading C&B as well and understood the reference, didn't mean to mislead. Unfortunately the real Paris is probably a dream never to be realized for me.
Thank you for reading and sharing your words, and for sticking around for a not so perfectly paved road ahead.
Date: 01 Dec 2011 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
Poor girl. She has got to stand up and say, I am WOMAN HEAR ME ROAR.
Author's Response:
In her way, perhaps. This is new territory for her, she'll find her way through it.
Date: 30 Nov 2011 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
grrrrrr i would want to slap the helll out of all three of them :( poor bella hurts the most.....can't wait to find out why edward is the way he is
Author's Response:
Edward baffles a girl's mind... even mine sometimes ;)
As for Isabella, yes she does. I wish more people felt for her than most, who just insult her. I think she's lovable. It hurts that most don't seem to agree.
Thank you for your thoughts. They're always appreciated.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
Ok I say Isabella needs to make Edward's dumb ass jealous. And then ignore his ass. See his heart break for once.......LOL
Author's Response:
This makes me smile for reasons I can't explain. Not at this time, anyway. Perhaps I won't need to before long ;)
Date: 28 Nov 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
Love the chapter, Maybe now she can try to move on from Slutward. I know he didnt mean the words he said to her because he is a coward and cant be honest about his feelings. I just want to see Bella move on and act her age and have fun. She also needs to stop letting people treat her like a child. cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
Well, as much as I think it bothers many, there is an innocence to Isabella that will always be there. It doesn't mean she can't or won't be strong, but she's led a very protected and sheltered life for a very long time, and that has certainly had some impact on who she is. I hope strong-minded readers can find it in them to love her in spite of it.
As always, thank you for your thoughts.
Date: 28 Nov 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
Please say there's an update coming soon!
Author's Response:
Eek... I am already working on it, but I can't promise how soon it will be posted. I desperately need to spend some time with Claire and Jaimin (Clear and Bright), but I'll do my best to get it up as soon as I can. I'm getting pulled in so many directions... doing 3 WIPs is tough! :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 3 : Ruin
OH MY GOD! I hope Edward hears her and gets there or calls the police! James should be in jail!
So why is Jasper so overprotective of Bella? That isn't normal...why would he not let her grow up or mature. Has she ever dated? Would he let her? Where are their parents? What is the age difference between Bella and Jasper and Edward? Sorry, I know there are a lot of questions but I am dying to know more details!
OK, going to catch up now! I hope you update quickly!
Author's Response:
James should be... well, I personally would like him to have a meet and greet with Bella from Say Goodbye. THAT would be a hoot. As for THIS Isabella, her fate, and Edward's part in it are just a chapter away. Which you may or may not have read by now?
I know there are a lot of questions, but they'll all be answered in time, I promise. As for their ages, which I hinted at, but perhaps didn't come right out and say... Isabella is 22. Jasper and Edward are both 30.
I hope you're still with me :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 : Illicit Behavior
So, was Bella really there again or was he dreaming? What is going on here? I really want to know why Edward can't be with Bella? What is her deal and why is she so sheltered and need permission or approval to leave her house or go out? More details please!!!!
Author's Response:
It was, unfortunately for her, REAL. Poor thing... The next chapter will answer some of your questions, I think. Others may take a little time :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
WOW! That was an intense chapter! So, is Bella married to his brother? His best friend? Lord, please don't tell me she's his sister!
I wish you would update more frequently. Just found this story but seems like maybe you only do it about once a month, right? I feel like I'm hooked already though...going to catch up and then pine away for more!
Author's Response:
All of your questions will be answered soon. Some within the next chapter or two. As for updates, They are usually anywhere between a week to two weeks apart. I write two other WIPs, so I try to balance them as best I can. Thank you for reading! I hope to hear from you again. :)
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
Poor Bella! How will she react now that Edward has said she's nothing?
Author's Response:
Don't you want to just give her a great big hug? :(
Date: 26 Nov 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
Damn all 3 of them!
Author's Response:
My boys are getting NO LOVE in this one... Not even Emmett, which is rare. But I understand, of course ;)
Date: 26 Nov 2011 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 : Illicit Behavior
again.....
Author's Response:
Well, a few people requested a BPOV... and I was already writing it, if only for myself... but I decided to share. Next chapter is NEW, cross my heart. If that's what you meant.
[Report This]Date: 26 Nov 2011 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
mercy FOUL FOUL TECHNICAL FOUL!!! Just how many ways can a heart break poor Isabella Poor Edward too for that matter....he's fighting such a losing battle of his heart!!!
Author's Response:
I'm glad someone understands that he's hurting too. :(
Date: 26 Nov 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
Oh, Edward just pissed me off. He doesn't deserve Bella if he's going to be harsh like that. She should get 4 shots at the line 'cuz that was like a technical foul! Ha!
Author's Response:
oooooooh... Everyone is so mad at Edward. I understand why, but we all know he didn't mean it. :(
Date: 26 Nov 2011 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
damn
Author's Response:
Is that good or bad? ;)
Date: 26 Nov 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
I think she needs to kick all their asses, and move the hell out, She can survive on her own. Shes a big girl, and they need to let what happens happen.
Author's Response:
Hmmm... someone else suggested that, but that hasn't posted yet. Keep an eye out for an outtake in a month or two... whenever I'm allowed to post it. ;)
Date: 22 Nov 2011 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
Wow...I am floored..Talk about a crsendo of lust. I am really interested to have the reason for all of the over pretectiveness of the guys and Rose, but having Edward give into his feelings for Bella was just wow! Can't wait to find out what Jasper does now. I hope Bella hands him his butt.
Thanks for the story. Look forward to many more chapters in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you! There are many reasons why they are all so protective of Isabella, they'll be revealed slowly, as back story is weaved in. Thanks for reading and I hope to hear from you again :)
Date: 19 Nov 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
I am loving this story, I read everything you have here and can't wait for more. P;ease updat soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! If you haven't already seen, Chapter 11 is now posted :)
Date: 15 Nov 2011 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
This story seems good so far
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'll wait to see if you still think so after the next one ;)
Date: 15 Nov 2011 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
Uh oh !!!! Here comes Emmett PLEASE not Jasper!!! Go Bella!!!
Author's Response:
All of the 'Please not Jasper!' comments have really made me laugh. But since Chapter 11 is up, perhaps you already know if it is or isn't. ;)
Date: 15 Nov 2011 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
hmmmmm....that was kinda mean. Pulling me in and then BAM slam the door on my face.
It's ok. I will be waiting for the next chapter. LOL
Author's Response:
Awwww... I'm so sorry! Sort of ;) Just imagine how long poor Isabella has waited...
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
AAAAHHHH!!! PLEASE update SOON!! I can't wait for the next chapter!! Keep up the excellent work, you are amazing!!
Author's Response:
Wow, thank you so much! Chapter 11 is up, if you haven't already seen/read it. I try not to get so behind on these that I don't know what's what, but I blew it on this chapter. Thank you again, I'm beyond flattered :)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
looking forward t otheenxt chapter
Author's Response:
I'm behind on replies and reviews, but it is up if you don't already know :) Thank you, as always, for reading.
Date: 14 Nov 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
You know, I am going to just say this. He may be nasty and older, but her decision is what matters. Jasper has seens this coming and he needs to let her make her own decision. He can just tell Edward, "if you hurt her, I promise to kill you". Then back off and let them make their own decisions. She has to do this on her own.
Author's Response:
Hmmm... Edward is eight years older. If she were 16- nasty. But 22? I don't see it that way, but to each their own. As for making their own decisions... absolutely. Are you listening Jasper??? ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
Oh I just hope it's not Jasper. Maybe it is Rosalie just wishful thinking for Edward, cause Jasper and Emmmet would kill him. Please update soon!
Author's Response:
Update is up, if you haven't seen, since I'm behind on replies... I try. Why does no one want it to be Jasper? ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
awwww shit lol
Author's Response:
well said ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
Hi Jasper. Knew that was coming.
Author's Response:
Hmmmm.... maybe. Maybe not.
Date: 14 Nov 2011 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
WOW!!! Update soon!
Author's Response:
Not sure if you've seen it yet, but it is up. Hope it's not too disappointing. And thank you for WOW :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
Not fair!
Author's Response:
I completely agree with you! ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 12:38 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
WTF...... Are u planning on updating soon? cause this isone hell of a cliffie
Author's Response:
Some chapters come faster than others, but writing 2 other WIPs and dealing with RL sometimes kicks my bum. And I get behind on these... I promise I do my best! But... it is up! ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
Ruh-oh! Guess Jasper's back.
More, please. :-)
Author's Response:
More is up! Sort of. Which you may already know... but since I'm behind on the reviews, I don't know that right this moment ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
Oh my. Yep, that's a good chapter. Please God let it be Emmett and not Jasper that walks in.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Hmmm... no one wants it to be Jasper... wonder why? ;)
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
holy shit holy shit don't let Jasper beat the crap out of Edward.. He and Bella love each other deeply...very deeply.....
Author's Response:
No one is hurting my Edward! Unless Isabella decides she feels the need to smack him one of these days ;)
Date: 14 Nov 2011 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
Ugh you killed me with that ending!! I'm hoping its Emmett and not Jasper!!
Author's Response:
I think it killed us all...
Date: 07 Nov 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 9 : Pre-game
their all alone :)
Author's Response:
Aaaah... yes they are. *sigh*
Date: 07 Nov 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 9 : Pre-game
really? i'm gonna cry. you leave us in this suspense?
Can´t wait for the next one. loving it (i started the story today)
Author's Response:
Thank you. Readers seem to have a love/hate relationship with this story. I hope you stick with us :)
Date: 05 Nov 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 9 : Pre-game
Alright Bella, you've got him all alone. Time to give him a tiny taste of what he's missing. Right?! Please continue. I love this story.
Author's Response:
What I wouldn't give to have him all alone...
And continue I will, we have a long way to go. Thank You.
Date: 04 Nov 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 9 : Pre-game
Well well, just you and me. Oh my
Author's Response:
It was certainly a moment of hope...
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2011 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 9 : Pre-game
Alone at last even if only for a few minutes. I hope she at least gets a kiss.
Author's Response:
Oh, I hope! I hope! ;)
Date: 04 Nov 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 9 : Pre-game
looking forward to the enxt chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Nov 2011 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
okay He must have cheated on Isabella and that is why he can no longer have her. Dummy
Author's Response:
This made me laugh! You'll have to keep reading to see if you're right ;)
Date: 21 Oct 2011 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
why doesnt bella become his new assistant? she currently has free time on her hands and it would bring them closer....and keep others away from E's pants....;) looking fwd to the next chapter!
Author's Response:
You're quite the clever girl. I'll leave it at that, for fear of saying too much ;)
Thanks for reading!
Date: 21 Oct 2011 4:44 AM Title: Chapter 8 : Masochists
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 : Masochists
Please let him keep it in his pants!
Author's Response:
Until Isabella is ready for it! :P
Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 8 : Masochists
Can't wait to see what happens next. :-)
Author's Response:
Thank you! :)
Date: 20 Oct 2011 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
Woah. Bella took Dutch Courage to the extreme. Glad I'm not her come the morning... wonder how much she'll remember??
Author's Response:
What can I say... the girl wants her man! :)
Date: 20 Oct 2011 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 8 : Masochists
Game night should be interesting.
Author's Response:
If we ever get there ;) I have a tendency to take the long way. Thanks, as always!
Date: 20 Oct 2011 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 8 : Masochists
Glad to see Bella is still determined as ever to snag Edward. Really, that man needs to keep it in his pants. He's the boss. He can't be screwing his employees......sexual harrassment suit waiting to happen. Thought he was smarter than that. I cannot wait to see what happens during game night. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
Shame on you, Edward! See how upset you make everyone? Isabella should crack open another bottle and give you a spanking! Hmmm... or a hair tug, at least ;)
Thanks for sticking with us!
Date: 16 Oct 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
looking forward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
love how bella put him in his place
Author's Response:
The derailed Masen caboose! ;)
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
WOW, she has her battle armor on and I love it.
Author's Response:
Warriorella! ;) Thank you for reading!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
Loved how Bella put Edward in his place and forced his hand a tad bit. Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response:
I think she's the only one that he would take that from. Good for her for letting him have it! :)
Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
Great chapter....you should give Bella a little bit more wine every now and again...LOL
Author's Response:
Thank you! Andthat is quite thepoular opinion. It makes me smile. Team Pinot Grigio? ;)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
Excellent!!! Can't wait for more!! You are doing an amazing job!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
OH MY GOD!!! Just AMAZING!!! This chapter was by far the best I have ever read in any story, it was perfectly done! Isabella told Edward exactly what he needed to hear from her and it was just incredible, I'm at a loss for words, unreal! Hope you give us Edward's take on everything she said, and hopefully he thinks long and hard about it! Her speech was just spot on perfect for her to let him know that she is on to his feelings and that she is there if he just wisens up! I hope like hell she keeps the backbone and tells Jasper to back off too, she is so eloquently spoken I am sure she can do it without bringing him down and getting him to angry at her lol! In the end...she has to do what is right in her heart and that is to go after Edward once and for all obviously. Yikes, I will just shut up now, just really loved this chapter! Take care until next time, and thank you very much for this incredible story!!!
Author's Response:
Wow. Wow, wow, wow, isall I can say. Thank you so much, I am so very flattered by your words.
I was real proud of my girl for her spitfire ways! She'll get his attention if it's the last thing she does :) I DID write an EPOV of Sugar and Spice, which I donated to Fandom4Texas, so if you don't get to see it there, it will come here eventually. Whenever the rules allow.
Thank you again for your wonderful words, Mel
Date: 10 Oct 2011 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
Love the chapter. Im glad she let slutward have it
Author's Response:
He had it coming, that's for sure! ;)
Date: 10 Oct 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
Whooo hooooooo go Isabella ! Now if Slutward can keep it in his pants long enough.......LOL Thanks :)
Author's Response:
Edward needs pants with locking zippers. Shame on him! ;) Thank you for reading!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
Good chapter! I loved Bella giving Slutward what for! The Game needs to be ON; Too much sexual frustration. Bella needs to tell Jasper to worry about his own love life while she is at it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! Go Bella! As for Jasper... even if she tells him, I'm not sure he would listen to her. It is NOT an easy road ahead!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
I can't wait for Bella to up her game... GAME ON!!!
Author's Response:
Edward Masen won't know what hit him! :P Thanks for reading!
Date: 10 Oct 2011 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
Drunk, beligerent Bella rocks. Great update.
Author's Response:
I agree! And thank you! :)
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2011 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
I love Bella's jabs at Edward, especially about her pie. Now will he step up and go for it?
Also, I still want to know what happened in the past to her other brother and why Jasper thinks she's so fragile and off-limits to everyone. Just asking...
Author's Response:
I, for one, was proud of my girl. Sugar and Spice, indeed! As for the 'details', there are many more to come. I know... I keep saying that. But I promise :)
Date: 06 Oct 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
OK, I couldn't stop reading this 'til I was all caught up. Love this story. Flawed characters are my favorite. Yep, Edward needs to fire the slutty secretary. Look forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm so flattered! And flawed, too, perhaps. Or definitely ;)
Date: 06 Oct 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 5 : Strategy
Yea!! I see a little light at the end of the tunnel. Getting harder and harder for Edward and Bella to keep up the pretenses. Glad to have some explanation for the overprotectiveness they all have towards Bella. Now, she just needs to step up and be her own woman and Edward needs to get over his self-flagellation and make a move. Easier said than done, right?
Author's Response:
Easier said than done, yes, but I think some progress is at this point soon to be made. If I weren't so behind, I might remember if you know that or not. But I promise I'm trying :)
Date: 06 Oct 2011 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 3 : Ruin
Good Lord! She is an adult. I'd hate everyone treating me like a child. Really those boys need to back the hell off.
Author's Response:
You tell 'em!
But, she loves them nonetheless. As do I. ;)
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2011 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
I like Rose and Bella's talk at the beginning of this chapter. I can't see why Rose doesn't think she's worthy of someone nice in her life. She doesn't constantly have to date losers to get attention. At least she has Bella to reassure her and give her support.
And if I ever wanted to beat the crap out of a character, Edward would definitely be the recipient of that beat down. How dare he do that with his secretary when he's on his way to go see Bella? I don't care if she's flaunting it in front of him and I don't care that he was always the type of guy to take advantage of that in the past, he should have had more sense than to go there this time. He wants Bella but knows he can't have her because Jasper will kill him, but behavior like that is one of the reasons why Jasper feels that way. Ugh I just want to kill him for doing that. Bella has every right to be upset and I'm kind of glad she got drunk enough to be able to tell him off because I don't think she would have done so otherwise. And as far as the pedestal goes, he's lucky she didn't knock him off of it, beat him with it a few times and then shoved it up his ass sideways for doing what he did. I, for one, hope she makes him suffer for this one. Okay sorry...rant over. Can you can tell that Edward's behavior really bothered me? LOL
Anyway, great chapter again. I really can't wait to see what Edward will do to get himself out of this mess. I see some ass-kissing of epic proportions coming out of this. Whatever it is, Bella better not make it easy on him. Can't wait for the next update. Much love to you - D
Author's Response:
You crack me up. Poor Edward... yeah, I know... he's an ass. But I'm hopelessly devoted. ;) As is Isabella, it would seem. A couple of suckers for a pretty face we are.
As always, thanks for reading and making me laugh with your reviews! xo, Mel
Date: 06 Oct 2011 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 : Illicit Behavior
Wow. Edward is seriously screwed in the head. Liking this story. Feel bad for Bella right about now.
Author's Response:
He has some issues, perhaps ;) Thank you for reading. I hope you're still with me :)
Date: 05 Oct 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
Yep, I'd say he's a little screwed up in the head. Should be interesting.
Author's Response:
Aren't we all on some level? ;) ~CM
Date: 05 Oct 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
Love the chapter. Edward still makes me sick with how he treats women but they dont seem to mind. I would love to see Bella move on from him for alittle bit. I hates how he just fucks what ever he wants and claims to love Bella. I hate that Bella knows what he is doing and is still there for the cocky bastard, she needs to have more respect for herself and move on. She is a grown women she needs to go out and have a good time (WITHOUT EDWARD OR THE OTHER GUYS) and act her age and stop being to responsiable all the time cant wait for next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you. Edward... well, what can I say? The man needs a good woman to set him straight. Bella... (GOOD WOMAN;) may see him through rose colored glass, but she's not blind. And she's who she is. I hope you can find something to like about her, even if your hopes aren't realized. But we'll see. ;) ~CM
Date: 05 Oct 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
wow. just wow
Author's Response:
Hmmmm.... is that good or bad? ;) ~CM
Date: 05 Oct 2011 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
why does he do that?
Author's Response:
WHY DO MEN DO ANYTHING? ;) ~CM
Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you! ~CM
Date: 05 Oct 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
I thought you had a plan???
Author's Response:
I promise I do. Patience, my sweet. :) ~CM
Date: 05 Oct 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
Have you given Edward, Jasper & Emmett's ages?
Author's Response:
They're all around 30. I never said specifically, but some did the math from other details. ;) ~CM
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2011 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
Wonderful!!! I LOVE this story and I can't wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the excellent work! You are AWESOME!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!! I'm beyond flattered. :) ~CM
Date: 04 Oct 2011 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 : Illicit Behavior
I am so lost with this. why is she off limits?
Author's Response:
All of the answers will come in time. I hope you stick around for them. :) ~CM
Date: 04 Oct 2011 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
I kinda like drunk Bella. :)
Great chapter though Edward needs to keep it in his pants...lol
Author's Response:
Drunk Bella seems to be a hit. Finally, my girl stops taking a beating! Edward... well... shame on him! ;) ~CM
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 5 : Strategy
Just found your story and I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter!!! Keep up the excellent work!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! :) ~CM
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2011 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
He has some real issues!
Author's Response:
Perhaps. But I have hope for him. ~CM
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 5 : Strategy
so glad to see a new chapter, Jasper has to stop treating Bella like a baby and Edward needs to tell him how he feels
Author's Response:
The girl has the tolerance and patience of a saint, don't you think? Bless her heart... and theirs ;) Thank you! ~CM
Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 5 : Strategy
looking foward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you! ~CM