Date: 04 Sep 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
Ohhhh
Another cliffie! Please don't keep me hanging too long, my fingernails won't be able to take it.
Great chapter.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
Way too long between updates. I want to know what happens but weeks between is too much and if i didnt have this story saved in my bookmarks i would totally forget about it
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
oh crap! not good.. jasper is such an ass! this is all his fault to the max!!!! i hope bella is okay! ed is going to freak!!! i hope you pound the crap out of Jasper!!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2012 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
Boy, oh boy I would so love to drop kick Jasper! He better know where the blame is placed here! And please, oh please Edward know that you are not at fault! Bella needs you now more than ever! I hope that Bella is going to be okay, not only for her sake, but for her whole family's.
Hey, can Alice whip Jasper's ass? After probably Sam & Emmett of course!
You me now have me on the edge of my seat, gripping the edge, waiting for the next update! Please don't let us wait too long! Thanks for this excitingly amazing , if not a little scary now, one!
peach
Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
who could live in this mess?/ I mean really it is drama filled. Treat like she is 12 for how ever long and she will rebel. She needs to grow up. PERIOD.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
No, don't leave it like that! So mean.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
Woman! Omg!!!!!!!!
How do you leave it right there?
Jasper is a fucking asshole! Wow, just wow!
That was Definatley a chapter worth waiting for!
I hope you post again soon:). Please!
That's all I have to say.....
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
Oh shit! Please let her be okay and this to be Jasper's wake up call to stop being a jackass.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 27: Right and Wrong
OMG Jasper is such a dick!!!! Edward you should have went after her.. please let her be alright.
Date: 04 Aug 2012 12:09 PM Title: Chapter 26: Closer
Come on jaser quit being an ass.....Ed youare sooo sweet! Love you!
Date: 03 Aug 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 26: Closer
I am glad Alice got in the middle of this. Finally.
Date: 03 Aug 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 26: Closer
Can Jasper see the light perhaps or will he plunge back into the dark depths of despair again?
Great writing.
Date: 03 Aug 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 26: Closer
Best chapter yet!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2012 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 26: Closer
Awwww,! That was sooo good! Alice is kicking ass! And jasper is starting to see!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 25: Value
this story is remarkable i am blessed with having experienced it so far thank you for sharing
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
i can't stop crying it's so sad to see her so helpless and broken
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
i agree edward you are the scum of the eaerth and don't deserve bella . bella get fixed up, get you a very hot guy and go for it with someone new. he sure don't deeserve you.
and emmett you sorry piece of shit you are not looking at her as a woman but a child.
and jasper you sorry piece of excuse of a brother your sisters happinessness means this little to you than up your ass with the controlling attitude
bella get a different guy stop hanging with all of them you and rose take off and leave them in your dust.
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
well it's now time to confess how you feel by edward huray!!!
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 9 : Pre-game
bella make him breathless
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 : Masochists
don't get involved edward the bimbo whore has arrived
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
wow !!! hurray!!! go bella baby let the jetrk have it
Date: 15 Jul 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 5 : Strategy
jasper needs to realize edward would do anything to protect bella and he needs to leave edward alone. so what if he is older he has always put her first and protectsd her and he L O V E S her.when will he accept that?
Date: 14 Jul 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 4 : Shattered Comfort
edward proved to her again he was all she needed t6hen he would do any thing for her
Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 25: Value
Oh jasper what are you doing? Can't wait for more!
Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
I love this story, truely.. But I have to say Bella frustrates me sometimes. She has all these guys protecting her, like the world revolves around her. All the guys have said it, and she expects it. She seems so spoiled in that way. I mean I get where they're all coming from, losing your father and brother and getting blamed for it by your mother? I can't even imagine what that must be like. But come on! In one of the past chapters she blames Edward for thinking the world revolves around him, when she herself has said that the world revolves around her..
I realize this maybe came off a bit harsh, but argh I got frustrated :p
I read some other reviews who didn't get Bella's assumption about Edward and Rose, but in this instance I completely get her. What was she supposed to think?
Anyway, I'm sticking with this story :) don't interpret my rant as me not liking your story 'cause I do :p
*if I left some spelling mistakes, sorry but autocorrect is killing me ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 25: Value
Hi hon! I just wanted to tell u that I love your stories, and will read them no matter how long it takes for u to update. I hope things start looking up for u soon!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 25: Value
Well, I know what to say. I just love this story!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 25: Value
I'm soo happy to see you updated:) I hope you got everything fixed right!
Wowza, this one was heart wrenching.
Jasper, Jasper, Jasper. While I understand he feels betrayed. This is his BFF and his sister. Whom he loved with all his heart!
Has he never seen how much Edward cared about her? Edward just needs to tell him why he was a whore, before. That it was his way of dealing with not having Bella!
I hope Alice gets through to the dumbass:) He is hurting her again!
Until your next one!
I'm sorry if people just dont' get it:(
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:36 AM Title: Chapter 25: Value
Your updates are always the best part of my day! Just wanted you to know that I am waiting breathlessly ( but patiently) for Jasper to appear and hope that Alice can work her mojo on him.
We really do appreciate all of the hard work and effort you put in to all of your stories and I know that RL has a bad habit of getting in the way of creativity sometimes, but I just wanted to say THANK YOU for always entertaining us and sucking us into the little worlds you create!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 25: Value
The only way to win with Jasper is live your life. Call him and tell him to his voice mail that he is invited and loved. Then don't call back pestering him. He has to make his mind up to this.
Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 25: Value
Great chapter
Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 25: Value
JASPER IS BEING A REAL DICKHEAD HER'S HURTING HIS SISTER SO MUCH SHE LOVE EDWARD AND EDWARD LOVES HER WHY CAN'T JASPER SEE EDWARD WOULD DO ANYTHING FOR BELLA EVEN GIVE UP ALL HIS OTHER WOMAN FOR SEX AND DO WITHOUT JUST TO BE WITH BELLA TO WAIT FOR HER SO THEY CAN BE TOGETHER FOREVER.
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 25: Value
He better be hurt somewhere to stand her up! So mean! But at this point I'm glad they haven't done it yet, so Jasper doesn't have anything to complain about. Thanks for this :)
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 25: Value
Why isnt Jasper there? Something must be wrong. He wouldnt promise then not show would he?
Date: 09 Jul 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 25: Value
She named there son after him. But still hasn't told him. Still think she is a bitch and Emmtt and Rose is just as bad. I do not see how the three of the could possible redeam themselves. I hope Edward disowns the lot of them! What the did and are doing is unforgivable!! How could he ever forgive his brother for this is beyond me. That's HIS brother!
Date: 25 Jun 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 24: Revelations
Yay, love this story, thanks for the update!
Hoping that Jas can keep his head with her, that she can show understanding too with him.
Looking forward to the next chappie!
Hope you're having a good summer :}
Date: 25 Jun 2012 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 24: Revelations
Great chapter
has Jasper really learned his lesson from this? I hope so.
Hope your computer issues are solved soon
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 24: Revelations
well Hope so..
I still say she is old enough to live alone or perhaps with Alice. She needs to grow up.
Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 24: Revelations
Nice to see jasper is coming around. Not sure he Bella resists attacking Edward. Yum. Lol
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 24: Revelations
WOW! What a chapter, so much emotion in these characters, its truly amazing to read! The talent you have in writing is just awe-inspiring to read, thank you for this incredible story, and I can't wait to see where these characters go from here. Looks like its all coming to a head now, and maybe Jasper is finally seeing the truth and not what he wants to believe. He is so very broken too over the past, and I know when him and Bella sit down and truly discuss what he is really afraid of, that it is going to need a whole box of kleenex to read that chapter! Take care and know that I...along with all your other fans, I'm sure....will wait for however long needed to read this wonderful tale! Until next time....
Date: 25 Jun 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 24: Revelations
So sorry about your laptop, and just update when you can. Great chapter.
Date: 10 Jun 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 15: Breaking Point
i don't blame her:( poor little bugger
Date: 06 Jun 2012 4:36 AM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
So glad you decided to post and not delete this chapter! I love it! Post more often if you can :) You do an awesome job!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
I found you here!!!
Here is me thinking you weren't over here.
More places to love this story!!
Author's Response:
I adore you. You never fail to make me smile. :)
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
I am sorry but I think she should not be acting so timid. If she wants to be with him then be with him. I think she is acting more like she is 13 right now. I know she wants to wait til she is married but she didn't let him do anything and him touching her shirt was too much???? That doesn't sound right.
Author's Response:
You're taking things a bit to literally. She just wasn't ready for him to take it off of her. I don't think there's anything wrong with her being a little nervous about that, and neither did he. He stopped without her having to ask him to. He's going to be as patient as she needs him to be.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
Death by blue balls? Painful, but not life threatening.
What fun, watching him squirm!
Great writing.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
I think we keep getting into this circle. We go around and around and get no where. We are in the no where zone.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
Oh, Hell!! He is a Whore dog!! He can take it. Can u tell us there ages? I sometimes think Bella is like 16. Then others 19-21. Edward like 25-35.. Help!!!
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
let her have some fun, its one thing she has been wanting for so long. Great job, and please please dont scare me like that again, When i read the authors note Im thinking shit, shes going to pull this story and leave me wondering so many what ifs. Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
:)
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
I'm so glad you posted and didn't delete! I love this! I keep wondering how far they'll get before Jasper shows up and ruins it...
Date: 03 Jun 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23: Pain and Suffering
Oh boy! Poor Ed! Can't wait for more!
Date: 26 May 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
Wonderful story! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
I love this story and how Bella is being assertive in what she wants and needs with Edward. I love their first date and how it is going along. I hope I don't have to wait too long for the next chapter :)
Date: 21 May 2012 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
:)
[Report This]Date: 21 May 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
I'm glad they had a good first date. I have a sinking feeling though that Jasper is going to show up at Edward's house and try to ruin things...or maybe he'll see the truth - Edward & Bella love each other.
Date: 20 May 2012 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
nope not mad, just hopeful that you will update soon;)
i love her and how she is pushing him and i oove how he is keeping his ground, for now:)
Date: 20 May 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
I get that Edward has known Bella since she was a child. I get that Edward was a man whore. I get the Jasper is jumping off his rocker thinking he let his brother down. I get that they want Bella to stay a child. What I don't get, and I went back trying to figure it out. 1. What was Roses reason for not wanting Bella and Edward together. 2 Why after everything that happen that Jasper can not come to terms that Bella has grown up. 3. Edwards deal with Bella, he wants her... He thinks.
Date: 20 May 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
Bella's going to need to grow a thick skin to deal with all the skeletons in Edward's closet. Those two are just the first in a very long line.
No, not mad...because I know the next chapter will be worth it.
Update soon, please.
Date: 20 May 2012 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
Of course you left us there. sigh.
Date: 20 May 2012 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 22: The Little Things
Nope not mad happy for the update...jasper is going to go crazy I have a feeling. Can't wait for more!
Date: 20 May 2012 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 21: Firsts
love them! i love that they are soo open with each other now!
jasper, jasper, jasper
Date: 20 May 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
i fing love her right now! poor jasper is gonna have a heart attack!
Date: 20 May 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
i fing love drunk mad at edward bella:)
Date: 08 May 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 19: Nice and Not
yeah and ed steps up to the plate he might turn his woman antaomy part into a male one for once. Good job sam!! i am glad that others know what bella needs and it is to grow up!!
Date: 08 May 2012 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 18: Dirty
yeah!! alright ed you better be in it for the fight of your life. and jasper, alice is going to put you in your place!!!
Date: 08 May 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 17: Beneath the Surface
well that was really dumb ed. i thought you would step up to the plate but you are a huge woman's anataomy part!!! a huge one.... you have done yourself in.. and jasper grow some and open your eyes!!
Date: 08 May 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 16: Fire
yeah great timing. i don't want to see riley hurt but hey use him bella!!! ed you are such a girl antaomy part!!! a huge one!!!
Date: 08 May 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 15: Breaking Point
i am so glad that he didn't that would have been way over the top way!!! i am glad she is going to go out on a date i hope she does it right in front of his face!!! can't wait to see what is going to happen
Date: 08 May 2012 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 14: Lost
ed you are a huge dumb ass!!!
Date: 08 May 2012 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 13: For Her
wow what a bitch for a mom! wow just wow. i can see why the protect her but she does need to grow and not be smoothered
Date: 08 May 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
oh boy thsi sisn't going to be pretty. i wonder what jasper is going to say to him. Ed.. damn you need to grow up!!!
Date: 08 May 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 11: It Was Nothing
well that sucked! wow you sure know how to put out a fire ed! wow you really hurt her with that!
Date: 08 May 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 10 : Slammed
well it's jasper or emmett. it is a toss up. wow that was bold i wasn't expecting that!!
Date: 08 May 2012 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 9 : Pre-game
Oh boy.. i am sick of self love and blow jobs.. you two need to get it on!!!
Date: 08 May 2012 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 : Masochists
Jasper you need ti let bella grow up stop sticking your nose into stuff that does not concern you!!
Date: 08 May 2012 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 7 : Sugar and Spice
way to go.. i like you like this bella.. all spit and fire. he deserves it totally. put him in his place!!
Date: 08 May 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 6 : A Gracious Heart
oh ed you keep stepping in it.. grow up!
Date: 07 May 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 5 : Strategy
so not right he can't choose for her!! come on ed wake up you can be with her!!
Date: 07 May 2012 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 4 : Shattered Comfort
this is deep are you going to explain why they hover... wow.. ed you can change and you can love her stop it!!!!
Date: 07 May 2012 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3 : Ruin
oh boy so ed doesn't think he can have her because she is jasper's sister. Jasper is a dominering a-hole why does he treat her like that.. it's kinda sick.....
Date: 07 May 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 : Illicit Behavior
oh boy,... why can't he have her he can change... tortured him tortured her... wowo
Date: 07 May 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 : Shame
hummm what happened.. you are a tortured soul
Date: 05 May 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
You know, I don't think Edward should be punished. The way your story is going it seems to me that Isabella is spoiled. Why is it that most of the stories I read when Edward tries to protect Bella from himself everyone wants his head or other anatomy on a platter? I don't get it.
Date: 03 May 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 12: Drafted
Sorry that people are giving you grief for your story. I happen to really like it, so to hell with them that don't appreciate it!!
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 21: Firsts
Great chapter. Feels like Jasper is trying. It will take some time for him to even start to accept Edward with Bella. But I can understand it. I just hope Bella will listen to Edward and talk with her brother.
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2012 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 21: Firsts
Poor Bella! I hope Jasper gets his act together soon before he loses his relationship with his sister forever.
Have you ever said (I don't think you have) how their brother and father died? Is it important to the story? I'm wondering because you mentioned previously that their mother blames Bella for their deaths.
I'm looking forward to when the story ends and I can go back and read again from the beginning to absorb it all.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2012 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 21: Firsts
Aww, so sweet.
Date: 02 May 2012 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 21: Firsts
What a chapter! Hurricane Jasper wreaked through leaving destruction in his path.
Poor Bella, hearing those words from Jasper of all people, but poor Jasper, the ramblings of a drunken fool have come back to bite him.
Excellent writing.
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 21: Firsts
Wow..WOW..Wow!! I am very grateful you decided not to scrap this chapter this time, because it is incredible! This story is just so amazing, and I am honored to get to be here for the ride. Can't wait to see where they all go from here now. Boy does Jasper have some major eye opening to do, and Isabella is about to pull the shades back from his eyes now that Edward has her going in the right direction. Just an awesome chapter, and waiting with baited breath for the next! Take care until next time!!!
Date: 19 Apr 2012 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 20: Once Upon a Time
So it sounds like they are not going to have sex until he decides to marry her. :( That is depressing. I mean yes she deserves the fairy tale but I am impatient and want the lemons. I dont want to wait for the Epilogue to read the lemon and then the story ends. That makes me so mad when authors do that.
Date: 11 Apr 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 20: Once Upon a Time
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 20: Once Upon a Time
I love this story with everything in me. Just read through to here. I'm so glad I didnt find it before though. I would have died a thousand deaths having to wait in between some of those horribly angst ridden chapters. I'm glad I got all the way to where Edward has risen to the battle.
Date: 11 Apr 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 18: Dirty
Oh my, this story is really hard to read! But in a very good way. I hope Edward finally gets a grip and builds up the courage to finally take what's his! :)
I don't know who and why attacked you for this amazing story, but they were definitely wrong. This story is deep and meaningful, carrying a message to everyone who is afraid to hope in something pure and unadultered. This story is beautiful and please update soon...
ps. Jasper needs to get laid. ASAP. lol
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2012 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 20: Once Upon a Time
Loved seeing Edward show her the beginning of their HEA. Can't wait to see Alice get ahold of Jasper and turn his head around. Who will Emmett get?