[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
Oh, no!
Date: 18 Feb 2012 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
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Date: 18 Feb 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
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Date: 18 Feb 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
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Date: 18 Feb 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving
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Date: 18 Feb 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
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Date: 18 Feb 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
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Date: 18 Feb 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
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[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2012 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
Oh Goodness, the shit is going to hit the fan cause I still say Edward is sixteen.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
Loved this chapter.... Can't wait to read the next one... even if Scumbanner will be back.... hopefully Bella can put him in his place and he will back off.
Date: 13 Feb 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
Aww how sweet he told her he loved her... Edward and Bella will always triumph!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Feb 2012 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
while I loved the chapter and the fact that they said their ILY's and hate to be a spoil sport I just want to say... oh oh!
Now that they're so happy I am pretty sure it'll all go down the drain in the next two chapters! I wouldn't be surprised if Scumbanner and/or Emmett found out about them.
Alice
Date: 13 Feb 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
A very fulfilling chapter,from the emotional point of view.As it should be, in my opinion.
Date: 12 Feb 2012 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 22 Confessions of the Soul
lovely ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Feb 2012 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving
Oh shit, Bella no!!!!!!!!!!! I still think that Edward is 16 so this will not end well.
Date: 08 Feb 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving
ha, I thought Em was going to come home early in catch them... well, I am sure Edward feels the same too! they are so cute. i hope they hold it together when the storm comes
Date: 08 Feb 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving
oh wow! well I am most certain she won't remember it but I think I'll hang with the romans on whether she meant it or not... in vino veritas in wine lies truth :-D
loved the update! great job!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2012 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving
I say this every review - I LOVE THIS STORY. Great update. Alcohol just made her tongue looser, it was something she already knew. Don't think he'll be freaked by it, pretty sure he's head over heels for too.
Thanks for writing. xo
Date: 08 Feb 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving
you gotta love the courage that and alcohol induced daze will give you!! :) Can't wait to read more!
Date: 08 Feb 2012 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 21 Thanksgiving
looking forward to the next chatper
Date: 07 Feb 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
Great chapter... I am thinking that we haven't seen the last of Scumbanner.... don't think he would give up that easily.... also I think that Esme might be thinking something is up... well you never know :) Can't wait to see how their week goes!! :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
I just hope that this doesn't blow up in there faces
Date: 05 Feb 2012 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 04 Feb 2012 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
i wonder how all this will play out
[Report This]Date: 04 Feb 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
I believe there about to be lots of hot sex ahead. I still think Ed's only sixteen in all excellerated classes and jumped a grade.
LOVE this story. Love your writing.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
I wonder how our Esme will handle things when she finds out it is our Bella Edward is seeing??
Date: 04 Feb 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
It must go well in my opinion.I`m not a mind reader but I would like to think that the age difference in our times is not an issue, so I hope they will be together in the end and the week they`ll spend will help their relationship.About Scumbanner,I think he must be somehow punished,he must learn his lesson.
Date: 04 Feb 2012 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
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Date: 04 Feb 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 20 Unlikely Meeting
wahooo.......Bella will be giving thanks after the week with her cub!
great as ever :-)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jan 2012 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
I LOVE THIS STORY , BUT YA GOTTA GIVE HOW OLD ID OUR DEAR SWEET EDWARD AND IS HE HUMAN???? ??
Date: 29 Jan 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
Sweet!!!! Loving this story!!!Thank you for your work!
Date: 29 Jan 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
Sweet, I hope they end up together, call me a hopeless romantic but they deserve it.Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jan 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
Wait are you saying he is pertending, hum! FBI maybe, LOL. I am so enjoying your new story too!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
Loved it!! :) Can't wait to read more... hopefully Emmett listens to her, but I am going to guess he isn't.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
Maybe 19? could have missed a year of school traveling with his parents. still too young for Bella, but love can overlook biological age sometimes.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
Great chapter!
Date: 28 Jan 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
Good update. I just can't see this with Happy Ending. He's gonna be hurt, and she'll probably be devestated. Loving the story.
Date: 28 Jan 2012 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
Great chapter as always. They have classified themselves as being in a relationship. I love how both Edward and Em want to protect Bella, but shes right they could seriously get into trouble. But something tells me that even though they may not act on it right away, its still in their back pocket.... LOVE the lemony goodness. Keep up the awesome work.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
He's 16 isn't he? I know he is.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jan 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
hold on...did i miss somethig.. edward is pretending to be a student??? so emmett may not have to kill him afterall??
Date: 28 Jan 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 19 Statuses
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2012 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
I really love this story! you're a great writer!
and my theory is Rose and Em will be invited to Alice's and Jasper's place and Bella and Edward will be there and there will be a huge shitstorm but in the end it'll be all alright!
Alice
Date: 20 Jan 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
Oh I like the 21 Jumpstreet idea...
[Report This]Date: 16 Jan 2012 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
That sucks. Now when Em finds out its gonna be worse.
Date: 15 Jan 2012 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
wow... poor Edward about to get his ass kicked! LOL I love that conspiracy theory... but that might mess things up with Bella the cougar :) ... hopefully if that is the truth, he is still a bit younger than her... either that or she will be too far gone at that point to care about his age :) Can't wait to read the next one!!!
Date: 15 Jan 2012 10:56 AM Title: Prologue
Read some of the other reviews, I had considered him being undercover, wouldn't she be the one in trouble if he was?
Update soon please of I'll lose sleep
Date: 15 Jan 2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
Oh my, he's lovely and protective and I'm sucked right in and hoping for a HEA!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2012 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
OMG HOT! Sorry I haven't reviewed before now, but I'd read straight through not wanting to pause to review, then at 2in the morning I had to sleep, now I'm wishing I'd waited until you'd finished writing because a few more chapters and I'll be caught up and I'm not patient!
Younger men really aren't my thing but I would definately make an exception for Edward (and Rob!) Thanks
[Report This]Date: 15 Jan 2012 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
Haha, I still say he's sixteen but hopefully they could hold out on telling Emmett until after graduation.
Date: 15 Jan 2012 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
Hadn't considered he was in school undercover. Hummm.... Narc huh. When, Emmett finds out it 'ain't' gonna be pretty. Edwards going to have think fast and use Rose has his defense.
Date: 14 Jan 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
ohhh, i like that therory! Kije looking for evidence on the teacher that's after bella.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
I love your story my dear !
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
I guess I never thought how this would impact Em. Even though he is dating someone older. Maybe it's diffferent to them because its not their mom.
[Report This]Date: 13 Jan 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
OH MY GOODNESS....like Bella's son-- Em is going to hit the fan!!! I am hoping that these two are able to overcome what is bound to happen. Maybe Rose will be able to explain to him why it is not a problem. BUt I know Em is going to be hurt, especially after this talk...but what did he think Edward would say... oh boy! update soon! love it
Date: 13 Jan 2012 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
Thanks for the update, and OMG I thought em would catch on, maybe hes not so blind after all. and poor E and B they are just getting started and already SHIT has hit the fan. maybe the next chapter will make edward happy? ( hint hint) Keep up the awesome work.
Date: 13 Jan 2012 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
I'm really enjoying this story. Hopefully in time Emmett will come to understand Edward and Bella's feeling for one another.
Date: 13 Jan 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 18 Bad Dreams
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
i wonder are Rose and Alice friends.. I actually thought that was how Em was going to find out about his mom and how she was going to find out his own cougar
Date: 03 Jan 2012 6:47 AM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
Glad that Edward came to Bellas rescue
Date: 02 Jan 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
Great chapter... poor Bella and all those unwanted date opportunities... and yeah it's not like she can tell them, "sorry I am into younger men, and actually have one, you might know him as one of the students here" LOL yeah that isn't gonna work, but hopefully now that Edward knows about Scumbanner and told Emmett they will keep him away from her. Sorry to hear about your night in the bathroom, I can't drink tequila, but I was pretty hungover yesterday as well! LOL Can't wait till the next chapter!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
great chapter as always ... happy new year
Date: 02 Jan 2012 8:50 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
Gotta love Edward gettin all protector on Banner... But I can see Banner being all "shyt hits the fan" for them too. Can't wait to see what Em n E do to Banner... So many teenage possibilities.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 8:09 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
OMG, Edward yes! I would have kicked banner in the balls...he probably rapes girls.
Emmett is going to go crazy
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
Shit, yeah, she needs to report his ass.
Date: 02 Jan 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
Edward to the rescue! Can't say it enough, I just love my Edward! poor Bella
Date: 02 Jan 2012 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
Way to fight dirty Edward - you go sweetie!
Good chapter, thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
Oooh! I cant wait for the next update! Im thinkin' lil Eddie & Emmy are gonna kick some Banner butt! LOL. Great update... Happy New Year, Love! May 2012 be filled with love, joy and happiness!
Date: 02 Jan 2012 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 17 Unwanted Advances
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 28 Dec 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
Great chapter!!! Gotta love the bluntness that is Alice! LOL Can't wait to read the next one!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
Alice was right but she should have warned Bella first. That would have been something if Emmett & Rose would have popped up at the dinner too.
Date: 27 Dec 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
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Date: 27 Dec 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
Love love love it....... more soon please?
Date: 26 Dec 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 26 Dec 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
Excellent chapter. I married my cub and we had a wonderful life and marriage for 16 years. He went back t being an active druggie and it ended. I so hope this story is one with an HEA ending.
Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 16 Date Night
Thanks for the update. Loving this story
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2011 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
LOL, Alice. Yeah he needs to talke with her. Maybe Rose might be at diner too!
Date: 16 Dec 2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
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Date: 16 Dec 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
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Date: 15 Dec 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 13 First Time
I can't believe you didn't cock block them. Now that we know Emmett is sneaking out to go on a date with who we can only guess is an older Rosalie I guess he won't be able to get to mad at Edward and Bella when he finds out about them which I'm sure he will at some point. I hope Bella doesn't get into trouble for being with Edward, that would be awful and I'm sure it would make Edward feel guilty.
Date: 15 Dec 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 11 Thursday
These chapters are killing me they are using food as fore play and don't even realize what they're doing. I can't wait for the weekend to get here to see if you are going to find a new way to cock block these two.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
Alice and Jasper but now I don't know. Emmett cockblocking as usual.
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
love it hurry and post soon !!
Date: 13 Dec 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 13 Dec 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
Great chapter... and I had a feeling that Emmett was with Rose.... hopefully that will help when Bella and Edward's relationship comes out, though I doubt it.... and I would assume that they are eating with Alice and Jasper and I really hope that Edward didn't lie and is only 17 cuz that would really mess up some stuff! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 13 Dec 2011 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
i am sure the friend is Alice and younger Jaz!!
Well can't wait to see what happens when Bella learns of Em and his much older Rose... I wonder if she will accept a couger like herself wanting/having her son???
Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
Damn... The rose situation can easily blow up with Bella becoming friends with Alice and jasper who also know rose. Ruh roh!!! And that lil couple is who I assume is having dinner, it'll be interesting too see the dynamic. As for Edwards secret, I'm guessing it's his age... Either already 18 (which would make it too easy), 16 cuzz he's super smart (which would make it extremely hard) or 17 (which is almost legal but not quite yet). Can't wait for next update...
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2011 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 15 Declarations and Complications
I don't remember him actually telling her he was 18, did he? If he didn't, that's on her she should have made sure about his date of birth.
Date: 07 Dec 2011 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
i love it cant wait till the next one
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
I hope you update this story soon...I would love to see the finished product!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 7:38 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
First and foremost, you rock! I'm loving Cubward and if when I'm in my late thirties or forties and single I'm totally going to be a cougar.
I have this feeling that Edward was going to tell Bella that he is sixteen not eighteen like she thinks cause I was sixteen and a senior so it can happen and that would example the big b-day party. Shit would truly hit the fan if that was true.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
Yum!! Nothing like an eager beaver!
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
Excited to see the update. And, you didn't disappoint. But, Grrrr, a damn cliffie at the worst moment. You're killing me.
Love the story, love your writing.
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
Finally, I understand. It's been bugging me as to how the prologue was going to fit into the story. Did you have fun messing with my mind?
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
loved it
Date: 05 Dec 2011 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 14 Roles and Teachings
great story i like how you left it off it seemed fitting cant wait to see read more