Date: 21 Apr 2012 11:51 AM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On
Wonderful chapter. Hate to see it end, but all good things must. Which I think who ever coined that phrased must have been very sad.
Thanks for updating.
How sad for little Cayden to be miserable for so long. Much love out here to you and your family. Take care.
Date: 21 Apr 2012 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 31 Still Holding On
All I want to know is when are they getting married? ;-)
Date: 16 Apr 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
aaaahhhh i wanna know! when is the next update?
[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
Glad you took YOUR story in the direction you felt best suited the storyline. I approved whole heartedly.
Feeling sad for Carlisle. Can't believe he was dumped. I believe in working through struggles in a marriage. Not home wreakers, thinking they can offer something better. His honesty spoke volumes of his love for his son. Maybe he can find some live along the way himself.
Date: 08 Apr 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
I was not expecting 3 1/2 later... anyway I loved the chapter and how his dad is gonna help him out.. can't wait for their reunion..
Date: 08 Apr 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
Yay for his dad helping him :) Can't wait to read the next one!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
I am so happy he still loves her. Ithought how you handled the last chapter was perfect. I hope RL gives you time to write. I love all your stories and I really appreciate all your efforts.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
Interesting chapter, it seemed to me like real life, especially in these days when the differences between ages are blurry, mainly because of good genes or successful surgery.I respect very much your opinion about your work and I think that in here there is something for everyone.Somewhere it was said"keep walking", so you should do just that.
Date: 07 Apr 2012 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
I love this story :) and i trusted that there was going to be a HEA and lookey there ^_^ hehe can't wait for more :D x
Date: 07 Apr 2012 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
Well, Esme is a little hypocrite isn't she, sneaking around w/ a younger man.
Poor Edward, thankfully Carlisle has stepped up to be the father he needs.
Thanks for the update. And as always, thank you for writing. Wonderful story.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
Crazy yhat it took him so long to find that letter! Cannot wait to see how he will find her
Date: 07 Apr 2012 8:00 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
Great chapter:)
Date: 07 Apr 2012 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
So it took a lot longer for Edward to find this letter than I thought it would, but late is better than never, isn't it?
I'm not sure about the clues, maybe the universities Bella suggested?
I wonder what Bella has done all this time...
Date: 07 Apr 2012 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
hurray!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
Wow! I wasn't expecting a 3 1/2 year time jump.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
I rushed when I saw this in my inbox. OMG 3 & 1/2 years well I could so see him throwing the bag in the back of his closet and forgeting about it, I found so much stuff when I cleaned mine out. I just hope that she hasn't moved on yet.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
Ok....going to review here for the last chapter.
Are the words she referred to in the letter the 3 universities Edward should look fr her at?
Cant believe he never found the letter until now! Aarrrgghhh.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 30 The Letter
I'm so sorry you got such negativity....no one deserves that. We all have choices...to read or not. I'm just glad talented writers such as yourself, choose to share your words with us.
Constructive critisim is good, bashing is not.
I thought all the chapters were good ones. Even the one when she says good bye. I got it. She had no choice and I'd have done the same.
So.....what are the words?? Guess I gotta reread!
Great job & looking forward to the next one!
Bravo Carlisle!
Date: 04 Apr 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
A sad chapter. But I liked how you turned this scene to Bella forcing the goodbye and the way it fitted in here perfectly.
Date: 02 Apr 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
:( Poor Bella and Edward.... can't wait to read the next one! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
Giving me the sniffles. In the realm of fiction there can be a HEA, but in real life she would be very lucky to not be in jail. But the heart wants what the heart wants. I think that's the phrase, if not, it's still true. Thanks for updating. Take care of You and your family. Xo
Date: 02 Apr 2012 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
OMG! This is so much like NM. This is going to be interesting. Hopefully, less drama than NM.
Date: 02 Apr 2012 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
looking forward to the next chaptger
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
Aww, shit come on Carlisle you didn't tell your wife you allowed them to talk but than again ya'll abandoned ya'll son all the damn time and you really thought he wouldn't get a mommy complex.
I so hope he saw that letter and why did she move Emmett but I guess I can understand cause Edward would have been questioning him about his mom.
Date: 01 Apr 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
AHHHH... They heart fail and tears!!!!! I'm glad you keep drillin gin our heads HEA... HEA... It's the only thing keeping me sane here. AHHHH!!!!
What did the letter say... Is he in a funk so much he hasnt emptied his bag? Damn... The heart fail!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
Sad stuff!
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
SOB! SNIFF, reach for a hankie.
Hope your child's medical issues are sorted out soon.
looking forward to update
Date: 01 Apr 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 29 Letting Go
Why post this if you are going to leave us with that? I didn't see the point of it. I would have rather waited months for two chapters instead of reading this. Thank you for the lovely warning.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 28 Options
I trust that Bella and Edward will find their way as one.So much angst in this chapter.But a great chapter.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 28 Options
Just heartbroken right now! There is no other option for her right now. He is just a minor. I as a mother would be just as furious as Esme.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 28 Options
Aaahhh... now I really want to know what is going to happen...
But I totally understand that there are other, more important things in your life than updating this story. I just hope it won't be too long...
Date: 27 Mar 2012 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 28 Options
Nonononono! Ahhh! How can I believe this is a hea story when you leave it like you did in chapter 28? I couldn't stop crying. I hope it gets better.
[Report This]Date: 27 Mar 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 28 Options
Who didn't see this train wreck on the horizon?
Laws are ment to protect.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2012 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 28 Options
Sorry about RL/your so. Appreciate the update even if it is a horrrific cliffie. And, you just had to try to make me cry.
Take care of yourself & family, we/I'll be waiting when you can get back.
BTW but I'm Team Peeta. Have been since the first book. Just got back from movie, damn hand-held cameras make me nauseous.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 28 Options
OMG I said it was Esme, didn't I say Bella needed to quit her job maybe not move but definitely leave Edward alone until he was legal. OMG Bella is not that old so calm down Esme but if I was a mom I would have did the same thing especially since Bella was all up in Esme's face at that dinner.
Keeping your baby in my prayers...side note please don't let Bella be pregnant.
Date: 26 Mar 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 28 Options
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 20 Mar 2012 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 27 Approval
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Edward uh oh God is it his mom
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 27 Approval
Amazing chapter! Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 19 Mar 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
:)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
:)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
:)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 27 Approval
i live in sc and will join in the riot! looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 19 Mar 2012 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 27 Approval
Oh no!! please tell me that Edward will be fine... Momma bear will be making her appearance im sure to be at Edwards side.. she will have her dealings with Edwards mom im sure.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 27 Approval
Very emotional chapter!! Great job!
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2012 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 27 Approval
Amazing chapter! Cannot wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
I literally read this entire story today. i was hooked. I can't wait for the next update!
Date: 12 Mar 2012 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
Oh what an emotional mess for everyone. Love your writing.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
STOP WITH THE CLIFFEES! Update sooon!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
OMG answer the phone and transfer schools. Text and email him but don't see or date him until he is of age. Work it out with Emmett, get your kid back.
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
So he's 17, in some states that is an adult. Not in mine, but in some. For freaking sake it's just a story. FICTION people, FICTION.
Smmiskimen, so sorry. This really pisses me off. You're are an amazing writer with some great stories. I'll read anything you write.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
If she doesn't answer her phone I'm gonna be pissed! also I am pretty sure Emmett will come to his senses... I have faith in you promising a HEA!
loved the chapter!
Alice
Date: 10 Mar 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
looking forward to more
Date: 10 Mar 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
She must answer because she loves him.And they will be together one way or the other.Emmett is not innocent so, he shouldn`t blame Edward or his mom.Maybe Charlie should hear about everything;I think he loves his daughter too much to not understand and accept eventually.And Carlisle and Esme...well...they should care enough for Edward to accept who he loves.This story is very captivating.
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
*squeals* OMG MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
Alice has a very valid point. But, perceptions and reality will be the impediments for the near future.
Once Carlisle and Esme find out they may want to press charges.
Alice reacted to Rose and Emmett, why?
Date: 10 Mar 2012 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
Really 500 people wow . bet they we regret that :D
Date: 10 Mar 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 26 False Explanations
I just finished my teacher/student relationship story. It was fascinating learning about the laws concerning age of consent vs. being in an authority position over the younger person.
I'm enjoying this story. Such drama!
Date: 04 Mar 2012 6:08 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
FIX IT!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
I love Cubward. Come to mama bear & let me link your wounds!
[Report This]Date: 04 Mar 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
I'm just so scared for what willl happen next.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
Poor baby. Got is face kicked in and his torn torn up. Physcially, mentally, and emotionally fucked up.
Great chapter, thanks for the update.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
looking forward to the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
My heart breaks for all parties involved.
The boys really do need each other. How will they begin to mend such a shredded relationship. I'm almost ready to blame Isabella due to her selfish behavior.
You promise a HEA. Well, have at it.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
i love this fic....i just ran in to it about 4 days ago and i was hooked.I spent all night reading hoping there was more...yeppy you updated...i was happy. i can't wait for more i tell you. wow!charlie picked up edward in the middle of the road.
what are the chances of that?
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
I wanna hug Edward! that is all! oh and I loved the chapter!
Alice
Date: 03 Mar 2012 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
Cubward is so sensitive and sexy. Makes me want to comfort him ;)
Date: 03 Mar 2012 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
He must pull through,he must.You made him to be a fighter, at least he seems like that.And I think Bella will see that what she had with Edward is unique and wonderful.And she needs that in her life.My humble opinion.
Date: 03 Mar 2012 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 25 Half Truths
I'm cringing at the thought of Charlie bringing this up to Emmet. Things could get ugly. Well, uglier.
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
I'm sure Alice will help her through this. Bright side-on his next birthday he turns 18.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
OMG seventeen? You broke me. There are no more words. :(
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
Well kiss my grits, you blew me away with this chapter. I fell into the 18yearoldmode as well. Speechless!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
Excellent! While I understand the shock of Edward only being 17....they can just cool it until he's 18!
[Report This]Date: 24 Feb 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
Well, at least he was one year older than I kept saying but Bella had to have known that Emmett would react like that. Oh, God please don't let Bella go to jail, hopefully 17 is legal in Washington.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
I am not going to lie.. I was a bit confused in previous chapters. I remember the beginning you noting Edward was 17 but then I think along the way I was thinking he was actually much older than 18 doing some undercover work or something... Don't ask where that came from, I guess my mind just wanted everything to be ok with these two. Well, so how is Em going to get Rose back and how is Edward going to get his bella. I know it is wrong from me to want these couples together but i do...
Date: 23 Feb 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
I think that the society in which we are living now is the most hypocritical af all times.I`m going to hope for the HEA you mentioned,because love should overcome all difficulties, if only here.Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
I really really loved the chapter! I truly did! I thought it was great! I hope E&B and Em&R do find a way around the age gaps but since you promised a HEA I am pretty sure they will. again I loved the chapter!
Alice
Date: 23 Feb 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
Had to come out. Thx for the update
Date: 23 Feb 2012 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
Hot damn!!!! That was pretty epic.its gonna be a downfall and I'm and not that th guys aren't around... I see scumbanner poking his head around and maybe something worse? Ohh b&e, I'm sticking around but glad that ur hiding in ur bomb shelter and that you have reception to type and update as soon as possible ;)... Just cuzz how fuckin fail this chapter was HAHA!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
I think we all need to remember it is a story (a very good one) and we choose to read or not to read, so don't take any flack for it.
I'm anxious and curious, how the f*** are you going to make this mess a HEA?
Date: 23 Feb 2012 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
wow ... so Emmett got a big shock and dumped as well, Such a hard situation for all of them, Can't wait to read more!
Date: 23 Feb 2012 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
Please ....can't wait for the next chapter and a HEA for all of them!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
I actually expected this and I am loving it, can't wait for more soon plese and thank you!
Date: 23 Feb 2012 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
looking forward to more
Date: 23 Feb 2012 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
What a chapter. I really thought he was 18, and that Em was talking bout his big bday of when he tuned 18. Poor everyone, i feel bad for them all. Need more. GREAT JOB
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
Really looking forward to the next chatper! Curious to see what Bella and Emmets relationship will be like as well as Bella and Edward!
Date: 23 Feb 2012 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 24 The Truth Comes Out
dun....dun...dun....
it had to happen :-)
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
omg so funny but its Emmett thats home huh huh !!!
Date: 21 Feb 2012 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
Scumbanner is going down! *grin* but it looks like Emmett finally found out about his mom and his best friend...
loved the chapter! can't wait for what comes next!
Alice
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
I hate when people steal.
OMG it's Emmett, I just hope the pictures don't backfire on Bella and Edward.
Date: 19 Feb 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
looking forward to the next chapter
Date: 19 Feb 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
I am so sorry to hear about what has happened. I know I have enjoyed several of your stories, especially this one.
I look forward to the next chapter. Is Em bringing his own Cougar Town home?
Date: 19 Feb 2012 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
is it em????is rose with him??
[Report This]Date: 18 Feb 2012 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 23 The Port Motel
All I can say is "Who the fuck is this Ita chick and what the hell is she doing?"
Un-fucking-believable!!! So sorry.
Chapter - Hummm, Emmett?? Me thinks the shit-tith will be hitting the fan. Great update. And as a true fan, I truly appreciate you writing in this type forum for the masses. Your writing is steller. xo Bev