Date: 19 Mar 2015 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 1
Enjoyed reading. Going to check out your profile and your other stories.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
not a bad story but if he is so concerned about hurting her why does she have welts and bruises on her ass kind of a contrdiction isnt it
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was hot has hell.. @@@@ awesome writting.. You can feel her's and his excitment.. awesome..
Date: 16 Aug 2011 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 1
Is it hot in here or just me? *giggle* Hmmm.....so I am wondering if Bella will ever do that again? Yes? No? It will be interesting to find out.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 1
I liked it, a lot.
Bella broke the rules, and was caught. What would have happened if she hadn't been caught? She might have snapped out of it or kept going. If it was the second, she might have done it again and might be caught eventually. But she was discoverd just as she was getting started. Edward wasn't happy and thought of a very good punishment, a way she will never try it again. Then Bella was able to explain to him in their private moment the reasons behind her actions. Her concern of him not understanding was unnecessary. They have gotten through this situation, but what will happen if she does something wrong again?
I like the title for the story and hope to see it up soon.
Date: 14 Aug 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Continuation could be awesome