Date: 17 Jan 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 1
That was great. Finally a cheatella. I'm so sick of Whoreward. I loved it!!
Date: 12 Jan 2012 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hi.
I am person who hates cheating but I loved your story:
1. This is probably the first story where the cheater is B and not E.
2. E was so sweet about it. If it happened to me, I would kill her but he was just so perfect.
3. He didn´t forgive her immediately and I am really really glad for it that she had to wait for it.
4. I hate Chip.
5. I was very well written.
6. Jake (their son) was so cool. I just hope that my kids (if I will have any) will be so open with me.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 1
Though the reason for the split was overtly Bella's fault, Edward should shoulder some of the blame. Busy career be damned, if you don't tend to your marriage and your family, you just beg for trouble. Glad they found their way back to each other. It's a pretty cute story all around.
Date: 12 Aug 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 1
Oh my, I really loved your story. It truly was one of the best one-shots I've read. Thanks for writing! =)
Date: 06 Aug 2011 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow, usually its edward who cheats lol hehe.
Date: 06 Aug 2011 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
Good story. I hope he knocked her up again!! Just saying