Date: 21 Dec 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
Dec. 21, 2012
I have just come to know your stories in Nov. 2012 at Fan Fiction and came to this site to continue with this story (which I am glad you have turned me onto). Your writing makes me laugh, tear up, and aww.
It is amazing with all you have going on in your life that you write and bring joy to your readers. I know it has been awhile since you have written but please know you have followers who anxiously await you and appreciate your creativity and your time.
Wishing you and yours all the best in 2013!
Date: 29 Nov 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward
Im really loving this!
Just to let you know, you should proof read these chapters. You keep re-pasting content that has already been written.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
Okay, I just came over here from fanfiction, to read this story. There are more chapters here then the one in fanfiction. but its at the same place at the end. I joined this site just for your stories they are awesome. Thanks for not quiting ur story.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
Are you gona finish this story
Date: 09 Sep 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
miss your story. good luck
Date: 08 Sep 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
Yes, Yes hanging in with great anticipation. Good luck with the new job and all... You will be great!!!! thanks for the update especially given your busy and all,.
Date: 08 Sep 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
9/12?????????????/eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeekkkkkk what will I do :P No really we understand, I will be waiting on pins and needles for the next update :) And Kick real life's butt back....I hope your new job gets easier!!!
Thank you for the update!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
We are getting closer!! WOOHOO
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
you're back! it is all that matter! we understand you...as long as we have updates it;s just fine!
Date: 08 Sep 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
I hope Charlie is going to be okay. Edward needs to tell Bella when she wakes up. He needs to keep the promise they make to each other. She can handle it. Great job...thanks!
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 83 Babies
great chapter!
congrats on the job even if it is hard... but RL always comes first.... I am trying to get a job now too... but haven't had any luck yet :(
Excited to see more next week!
Date: 05 Sep 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward
Loved it!!! Thank you for the update!!!!
Date: 05 Sep 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 81 Babies
Yah!!!!
Date: 02 Sep 2011 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward
:)dubbel the fun
Author's Response:
YESE yes YES, YOU ACTUALLY WROTE SOMETHING! i'M SOOOOO FRIGGIN EXCITED, RELLY. nOT MAKING FUN OR ANYTHING!
tHANK YOU!!!!!!!
Date: 02 Sep 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream
:)
Date: 02 Sep 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward
Thanks for the update/delivery of the twins, yeah.
Good luck at your new job, hope you have some fun, training can be very trying.
Date: 01 Sep 2011 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward
awwwwwwwww! anyway, goodluck on your training and the new job! leaving us a cliffy! I am so anxious to know what happened to Charlie and....you'll be out for 4 days!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward
hmm hope charlie is alright!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 82 James Masen & Charles Edward
Thank you for updating again before you left. I am so glad the babies are here and are okay. I am really worried about Charlie. He has to be okay! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
I couldn't leave you hanging about the babies!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 81 Babies
I can't wait for the babies! Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 81 Babies
yay for babies! :)
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream
yay! for babies... but still hoping that Charlie is ok :)
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream
those two together are so damn cute.
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream
CAN NOT WAIT!!!!!!! Thank you for updating!!!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery
Sweet!!!!! Thank you for the update!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:09 PM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream
Yeah, oh no though, Charlie's hurt somewhere, I hope he'll get to see the little ones.
Thanks for the update;D)
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy
LOVE it!!!!! Thank you for the update!!!!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 80 Ice Cream
They are so cute together. I can't wait for the babies!!! Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Babies, coming up!
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery
Awe, thanks
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 78 Toy
Awe, hang in there, what's that saying tomorrows just another day. Hopefully better than the last?
Thanks for the update.
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery
Nursery all ready then! When are the boys coming?
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler
oh no!!! Poor Charlie...hope he's okay...
Date: 01 Sep 2011 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery
Great chapter.... hopefully someone will realize something happened to Charlie soon :)
Date: 01 Sep 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 79 Nursery
Very sweet! I love that Bella has Esme. I have to say I am really worried about Charlie though. Great chapter...thanks!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy
Bella horny as ever! the babies coming? Wonder what happened to Charlie?
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler
well, it seems that Lee is an accomplish to all that is happening! I have a feeling he is into that DA and the politician.
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy
With days like that, I find it better to just laugh... Some might think I have gone over the edge and lost it but it is always better than the alternative of crying or screaming...lol! Thanks for the update! ;~)
Date: 31 Aug 2011 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy
Loved this chapter!
Hope your day gets better :)
Date: 31 Aug 2011 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy
I love these two. I hope Edward is right and this is just the babies getting ready to come. I don't want anything to happen to them or Bella. Great job...thanks!!! I hope your day gets better!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 78 Toy
Good luck with all that! Where in Fl do you get to be?
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler
uh oh :(
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler
Oh no, not Charlie. I hope he is going to be okay. That stupid Lee guy needs to be fired! I can't wait to see what is next. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler
Oh wow, poor Charlie, I hope he's okay & left a message somewhere of who he was trying to arrest.
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks
;D)
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 77 Tyler
Lee needs his ass fired! Starting to think he is working for Victoria and James!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks
no kidding so proud of you Mrs Isabella Cullen
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 75 Information
come on Mike fess up with any and all information please!!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye
understand about RL and the tolls it can take.. take caee of you and know that this story is LOVED... Yes at least they know that something smells in Denmark
Date: 31 Aug 2011 10:08 AM Title: Chapter 73 Waiting
I hate moving...and spiders... now for the review.... Damn I hope he remembers to tell Charlie about Tori
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 72 Plans
well I'll be that Bitch!!!! Tori!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 71Ups & Downs
smack smack Office Lee got that hey officer are you friends with Tyler or something???
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 70 Loosing
poor Edward continually having to defend himself... Listen up!!! Hear my words, his wife believes him loves him and totally 100% trusts and has faith in him what would his motivation in hurting Jessica be you silly nosey busy bodies !!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 69 Forced
yes I liked that he dropped something like that to Miss gossip monger
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 68 Evidence
wow!!! let Edward save that baby
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 67 Duty
I am so glad that my opinion last chapter was just confirmed once morenwith this one.. he is a caring dr for his patients that have no voice, and the mother is the incubator for that patient.. you don't getnthe sense he doesn't care what happened to Jessica because he clearly does but at the same time its mot like he has feelimgs for her like he does for his wife.. Charlie is a honest person who will be impartial and honest... loved the way he addressed those gossips at the hospital he's right they should know of his compassion for hs patients at this point...
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 66 Questions
well honestly I think his reactions are logical!!! Meaning that he isn't emotionally connected to her she has after all lied about him over and over... on top of that he has tried to show compassion because of her unborn child and each time it bites him in the butt!!!! Edward is a compassionate doctor that doesn't mean tht he should be overly emotional about someone that he knows thats neen hurt.. make sense??!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 65 Happenings
Edward teuly is a compassionate doctor, wno just adores his wife love, the trust these two have in one another!!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 48 Life
Yes, Esme is wonderful and thankfully they have her!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 47 Strange
I love Nurse Cope
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 46 Back to Work
gosh Jane catch a grouchy pill or two with your morning cherrio's???? something doesn't look good here
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 45 Back Home
love this story
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 63 No Doubt
Hell yeah!!! we alllll need a Edward, but lets not forget that Only Bella makes him this way.. they complete each other....
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 62 Uncertain Actions
Love these sex starved newlyweds..... they do have 5 yrs to make upnfor after all
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 61 Intentions
I hope you have some painful and horrific planned for Tyler
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 60 Advice
Bella is a great partner for Edward, so sad that Jessica couldn't find that in her life along the way
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 59 Confrontation
jealousy is a horrible thing... sad sad sad Jessica
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 58 No Contact
you kinda have to feel sad for Jessica even tjough you know that something horrible and a forboding is being felt...
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 57 Explain
continuation of loving Charlie!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 56 July 4th
love that Charlie finally saw the light
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 55 Rough
tyler is horrible... so that time that both Bella and Edward were in Hawaii Tyler had beat up Jessica and that's why she wasn't there either... I seeeee!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 54 Obnoxious
feel sad for Jessica' not to say thst she couldn't make a better life for herself and her baby but she is looking for the quick get rich scheme!!!
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 53 Blackmail
Jessica what on earth girlie sad she has so little pride... truly truly sad...
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 52 Toy?
yes yes we all could use a needy Edward!!! that's for sure
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 51 Somewhere in a bar . . .
tyler is horrible but love this story
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 50 Shopping
such a wonderful story
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 49 Lawyers
love this story
Date: 31 Aug 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 64 Bonus
holy hell that was hot... okay I read some of the chapters on my android and couldn't review, but promise to go back and review those chapters...
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks
I loce a fierce Esme! Glad you put her back to the picture!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks
:)
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 75 Information
:)
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 74 Private Eye
:)
Date: 30 Aug 2011 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks
YOU GO BELLA! WOOT WOOOT!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 76 Poking Sticks
Way to go Bella. I love how she set everyone straight. I wish they would listen already. I also love how Esme let Edward have it. Always trying to keep her boy in line. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 43 Jessica (V)
time for work no more reading today!!! read the rest after work tonight!~ Hum what is Jessica up to!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 42 Trust (V)
I guessed right at the end of the last chapter!!!! Yea!!!! Oh Shit Jessica! What the Hell!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 41 Angela (V)
she will trust him!!! I know she will!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 40 Checking In (V)
Oh shit, I don't like bad surprises!!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 39 Surprise (V)
Yea!!! to all that!!!!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 38 Family (V)
Dang! Can't they get some nooky before being swallowed by all the family love~~~~ LOL!!!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 37 I Want to See You (V)
Yes, of course he liked that idea... he's a smart husband that has just discovered another talent his wonderful wife possess....
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 36 New (V)
Yes, Yes, I think she likes what she sees,,,,,
Date: 30 Aug 2011 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 35 Renee & Charlie (V)
I can see Charlie's side too, but he did know that Edward had searched for Bella, high and low, so for him to think that Edward left Bella well that was silly on his part....