Date: 13 Oct 2012 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
Im embrassed for her
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2: A New Chapter in Her Life
Too funny where she put her hat
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH OMG OMG OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SOOOOOOOOOOO GOOD!!!!!!!!!!! I MEAN THE BEGINNING I WAS LIKE GOD EWARD YOUR SUCH AN ASSHOLE AND THEN NOW IM ALL AWWWWWWWWWWWWWW LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE!!!!!!!!!!!! GOD THEY HAVE TO GET TOGETHER AND ERIC BETTER NOT DO ANYTHING AND IF IRINA OR TANYA OR ANY OF HIS OTHER SKANK HOES SHOW UP NO HAPPINESS BUT OMG SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CUTE AND GOD IT MAKES ME LAUGH SO HARD AND MELT AT OTHERS AND BAHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!! ITS EVEN BETTER ESPECIALLY WITH BD2 COMING UP NEXT MONTH!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Sep 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
Copy of my FFN review:
OMG the beginning of this chapter wasn't just an awkward moment, it was THE most awkward moment ever in FF history, Haha Floved it... big surprise right?
Harry Potter? Damn, I really thought it'd be Star Trek/Wars.
I want some of that cake now... just send some to little old Denmark... please please... It'll be fine, I'm sure;P
OK on a more serious note Carlisle and Esme's story was beautiful, and if he wasn't already married, I would want him... I want a man who would do that for me too
And a lightbulb has been turned on... Bella is finally seeing the light... well she's still questioning it, but the light is on... yeay. I just hope she wont get to freaked out when she finds out about everyone knowing her little hobby... But yeah don't think that's going to happen... She's going to freak out big time
Adele moment in the end: Beautiful
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
I freaking loved the chapter, the only thing missing was a little chaste kiss right there at the end. Thanks for updating. Hope to c u soon!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
Sawooon! I think I just had a heart attack! I need emtward stat! I got chills reading that end it was so good. Best ff I have ever read! You make me laugh and you make me nearly pee my pants in excitement! I can't wait for more! Now if you'll excuse me I have to go mop up a puddle. ;)
Date: 24 Sep 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
Everyone needs to leave so they can actually talk and not through music. Edward needs to clear the air after he has declared himself madly in love with Bella. Hopefully she will be so happy about the first part that she won't be upset about the fan fiction part. She should just laugh it off and be glad that she is so popular. Just think all her friends read her stories and they didn't know it was her. She should be flattered.
Date: 23 Sep 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
I was so caught up in the chapter that I forgot they've only known each other for a few days. Looking forward to reading how Edward is going to handle telling Bella his "secret."
Date: 22 Sep 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
great chapter. I love the song list at the end. looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
All is good the kissing needs to begin lol
Date: 21 Sep 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 39: The Hot Seat & Rising Temperatures
Awwwww!! Total fluffiness!! Love it!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
oh frack me..caught by strawberry scented shampoo...damn you herbal essence hahahaha....yeah i laigh at my own jokes dont judge ;). seriously i cant put my phone down. and its almost 3am. darn you and you amazing writing skills.
Date: 21 Sep 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 10: Into the Lair
i know its only a story but my heart is literally about to beat out of my chest. i feel like im gonna have a heart attack for bella. your decriptive on your writing that im completely sucked in. And now completely crazy over this story.GAH!!!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
okay that's it im totally and officially in love with this story! my husband think im crazy with all my facial expressions, comments, and less than verbal comments. assward and bitchbella anr my new addiction.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 38: Falling Into Place
Eric writes fanfiction to to funny. I love the interaction between Bella and Edward if they dont kiss by the end of the night I will be bummed lol
Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 37: The Importance and Portents of Dreams
That was priceless love there first dance. Love Angela she is such a good friend and so smart
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 38: Falling Into Place
I am glad that Edward has gotten Angela's approval. That was a big step forward for him. Bella should have known better than to use staples on posters for her classroom. Teachers use posters and other art work over and over again and staples damage the corners. That is why you put them up with art gum. It doesn't mark up the walls or damage the posters. Plus most schools walls are cinderblock, so staples don't work. I like seeing the playful side of Bella and Edward. It seems that his friends don't get to see this very often either.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 38: Falling Into Place
Hahaha Eric.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 38: Falling Into Place
Copy of my review on FFN(with mistaken ideas and all;P):
LOOOOOOOL Eric writing FF... Oh you just keep coming up with all the stuff I had never expected;P
Another great chappi:D
And I start to wonder... Is everything going to end up being revealed at this party afterall? hmmm
Please tell me Eric isn't writing Starfic's as well... I see him more as a Starwars/Trekki fic writer... hmmm maybe idk
I loved the BBQ tool duel... that was HOOOOT:D
Oh Alice... you gotta love that girl... devious little pixie... plan away girl, plan away
Angela really should be some kind of lifecoach or something... Making Bella see the things that she is obviously oblivious to otherwise.
Hmmm I keep thinking that I'm forgetting something... Oh yeah... One phrase completely flabbergasted me: 'enthralled with the happenstance of an arrangement of features that had aesthetic appeal'... Now, how the hell did you come up with that? I FLOVED it
Date: 09 Sep 2012 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 38: Falling Into Place
ok...
i've been rather silent up until now, but reading this story i understand the importance of feedback, so...
i really like your story and i hope you'll update frequently because i can't to see how do theese two end up toghether.
you are doing a great job !!!!
Date: 08 Sep 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 38: Falling Into Place
Great chapter, love how everyone (even Eric) connects using fanfiction :)
Date: 30 Aug 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 37: The Importance and Portents of Dreams
What a keeper! Love the story.....
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 11: Days of Reckoning
This was a great chapter I was so nervous for Bella and then I was happy because she got away with it ... but i guess not lol
Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 37: The Importance and Portents of Dreams
I think the party has been a big success. Edward should be fine telling Bella about the fanfiction, if he spins it right. Bella already knows that his parents know how they met. He could mention that his mom reads fanfiction and noticed the similiarities of the story and their meeting. She will be embaressed, but then they can laugh at it. Edward can tell Bella how everyone reads fanfiction, even Emmett. Edward can tell Bella how he checked out her other stories and he was impressed by her writing style. Edward has charm and knows how to use it.
Date: 21 Aug 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 37: The Importance and Portents of Dreams
So... I love the flirty banter between Rose and Em... So nice to see that she isn't a cold bitch all the time:)
B and E have the typical 'he/she would never be interested in someone like me' thoughts. I really hope Angela and Esme bring their A-game, in making those two realize each others feelings. I even think Alice has to step in and do some work on B+E. They are absolutely clueless about their chemistry.
I loved E's little internal rant in the beginning of the chapter. And B's rant about the song. They really know how to psyc themself out (is that the way to say it?)
Loved Angela and Eddie's 'talk'. He want to believe, but again the man needs to relax and not think so much.
Why do I get the feeling that the songs to Esme and Carlisle also meant something in regards to Bella?
I can't wait to read more about the hole gang, but I fear B's reaction when the secret is finally out
Date: 19 Aug 2012 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 37: The Importance and Portents of Dreams
I'd love to dance with him to that song, too… :-D
Date: 17 Aug 2012 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
Doh! I didn't even catch the screen name! Still loving this story and the slow burn. I think that's the best part.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
First I want to apologize for getting so far into the story and not leaving a review. This story has drawn me in and I have not wanted to spend time where I could be reading typing up a review.
I love how Edward is slowly coming to the realization that Bella could be "more" to him. She is so completely different from the skank-hos, and I think a slow burn is so much more believable for this story. I also like that Angela suspects the new fanfic reviewer is Edward but is going to watch it play out. I have no doubt that she will step in to back up Bella if need be. I'm also suspecting that the introduction of Ben to the story several chapters back means a possible love interest for Ange?
Anyhoo, I'm off to read some more.
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 37: The Importance and Portents of Dreams
I loooovvveeeed the chapter. It's so good to read a story that makes you smile and laugh while you are reading it. so now how the hell it's Edward going to break the news to Bella? I can't wait for that convo to happen lol. He'll be a stuttering mess and Bella is going to die of mortification. Lol. Can't wait for the next update. I hope to see u soon!!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
I think everyone important knows now except Bella. She is going to feel stupid when it all comes out. I hope she laughs and doesn't get angry. She may think the joke is all on her.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
Nice!!! I like the observation skills and the range of tempo in this chapter.
Date: 20 Jul 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
I LOVE this story and have been following it on FFN...but this site has pictures (yay). I'm always so excited when it updates! I love the sexual tension mixed with humor (every time I think of Rpatz I imagine a strategically placed a**hole hat). Where do you come up with this material? You definitely have a gift.. ;-)
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
Fantastic chapter!
Emmett playing gossip girl, Emmett setting himself up continuing the prank of his birthday, Alice and Esme learning things about each other that puts them on common ground, Edward showing affection towards Bella for all the group to see and Angela's gift of deduction. Perfect party if you ask me!
How many secrets will be left at the end of the evening?
Will we eventually hear what the heated discussion between E&B was all about?
Author's Response:
Hi Moltz!
Glad you liked chapter 36. The heated discussion between E & B was at the end of chapter 35--the playlist E had made and which B was misinterpreting and which he explained to her in the hot tub gazebo. Chapter 37 was what was going on outisde while B & E were talking inside and then what followed once they'd had their talk and returned to the party: the birthday song for Emmett, etc.
There will still be some secrets left at the end of the evening, though. ;)
More soon! (Or come join me on Fan Fiction (dot) net...the next chapter is already up there. ;)
thanks for the chapterlove!
-bannerday
-bannerday
Date: 18 Jul 2012 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
Hi Bannerday, I only found your story today. I love fanfiction and as I was off sick today I have spend the whole 10 hours reading your story and I LOVE IT. Can not wait for next chapter x
Author's Response:
Hi nannygoat!
I'm so glad I was able to help keep you entertained while you were off sick. I'll post the next chapter soon, or you can come join me over at Fan Fiction (dot) net...the next chapter is up there. ;)
Thanks for the storylove! Hope you continue to enjoy the read!
-bannerday
[Report This]Date: 16 Jul 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
Best chapter ever! Loved it and Angela is super aware....nothing gets by her...i wonder what she is going to do with this new info?
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
I laughed my ass off for almost the entire chapter, especially with Esme! Lol
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 36: A Work in Progress
Again a copy&paste from my FFn-review:
Oh darn it... I was wrong about the 'Alice-showing-Esme-her-phone'-bannermaking thingy. But oh well a least Alice being the bannermaker was discused, so I wasn't to fare out there... hmmm maybe
Emmett was a great sport about the prank, and I can't wait to see what he's planing as payback, because well, lets face it, with Emmett there's always a retaliation;P
I flove Esme and Angela's perceptivness (is that a word?), I just hope they will be able to guide BE i the right direction.
I really love this story. I know it not nice to say (to the other authors), but your story is the only one I review each chapter, well at least since I was up-to-date. It's not that I don't want to review or that I'm to lazy. I just don't fell comfortable writing in english. I have no problem reading or speaking the language, but I'm a perfectionist and I know that I make mistakes when writing. But because I love this story so much I hope you understand what I'm trying to say anyway:S
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 35: Pieces of Me, Pieces of You
I am glad that Bella accepted Edward's explanation. Edward would not want to hurt Bella. He is working so hard to impress her. He wants her to like the real him, not the one he made up to be cool in college. The real Edward is not a tool. Edward just forgot how to be himself for awhile.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 35: Pieces of Me, Pieces of You
Okay, we/thye made progress.
Thanks for the update.
Date: 01 Jul 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces
As I wrote in my chapet 35 review on FFn: Repost of my review from FFn:
Weeeee a new chapter :D loved it...
Emmett being STARGAZER91= did not see that comming... I had to go back to see what he wrote in his reviews, and now it soooo easy to see
You actually inspired me to design my own Bitch cap (and Bitch-bag)on the net, it arrived a week ago, and I love it. My friends laughed so much when they saw it, and told me to wear it in my car, because that's the only time that I actually AM a Bitch (yeah I have a tendency to yell at the other drivers... woops)
I can't wait to what happens next... What the hell is Edward going to do now?
So I was thinking...
if STARGAZER91=Emmett
then maybe?
Star-Ho=Alice
Crazy4Hockey=Rose
Can't really decide who Jessica might be... hmmmm
Author's Response:
Hi again, Lulu!
I couldn't remember if your name had popped up from both sites or not. That's always a confusing thing. But I love it!
I didn't do a good job at all about getting through the reviews of chapter 35. I think I maybe answered a fourth of them and then that was it. I still have them in my email inbox and I guess I am just going to delete the majority because they are from nearly a month ago. Seems kind of lame to go back to them now. No one will have any clue what I'm referring to iin their past reviews. LOL
I love that you went back to check out what Em had to say previously. It's so obviously him now, isn't it? I think a reader could go back and re-read this story and get a completely different perspective, knowing what's coming ahead in so many of these crazy little instances. ;)
I love that you designed your own bitch hat and bag. That is a total crack up. And you're wearing the hat in your car when you crive, because that's when you are a bitch? I'll know to keep a look out for bitches while driving. LOL
It's fun to see how some of your previous guesses were spot on regarding who's who.
Thanks for the multiple reviews from multiple sites. LOL Take care.
-bannerday
Date: 01 Jul 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 35: Pieces of Me, Pieces of You
well surprice surprice... again I FLOVED the chapter:D
I can't wait to se what Emmett's reaction will be to the next song.
Very insightfull to find out Edwards motivation for the songchoices. Offcause Bella would misunderstand his playlist LOL
And was Alice showing off her banner to Esme on her phone? or am I putting to much thought into that observation... hmmm
PS. did you know you've posted chapter 34 twice here on TWCS;P
Author's Response:
Hi Lulu!
Whoops! Yeah, thanks, I realized I had 34 up twice and just fixed that.
I'm glad you liked getting Edward's reasoning behind his song choices. Of course it made things much clearer to Bella and she's not thinking they were all songs about her and her foolishness. Now she knows they're about HIS foolishness too! lol
You'll find out in the next chapter what Alice was showing on her phone.
thank you for the review.
-bannerday
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
This story is absolutly fantastic. please keep writing, I am a reader that lurks around reading but usually am to shy to do a review but this story is just so good. Please keep writing. I defenitly be telling my friends to read it. =D
Date: 28 Jun 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
Oh my god Bella heard them didn't she!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Jun 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
Bella has to know what is going on especially after the last part in the backyard. Emmett and Alice are not quiet people. Bella has been watching Edward like a hawk. She could probably read their lips what she couldn't hear. Bella is an observer of the world and Emmett and Alice are big mouths.
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
OMG YES:D I was right about Alice being Star-Ho...weeeeee high five-ing (is that a word? if so, I'm pretty sure I spelled it wrong) myself.
Loved Emmett's thoughts on Bella being Bellybeans and if she did do the hat-trick:D LMAO Actually I just think I loved Emmett in general in this chapter... Reading to his Nana... sooo sweet... and him reading MoHU... again LMAO.
And Eddieboy just keep getting more and more freeked out... hahahaha I FLOVE this story
Oh yeah my bitch back and cap... I still wear those... I actually used my back (not intentionally) when I went on a jobinterview last week. The interviewer ask about the back, which I had not even thought about might not be a good idea, so I told him about my reading, and about my completly ironic and sarcastic humor, and he just laughed and sad it sounded like I had a great sence of humor:D
Date: 23 Jun 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
What will Bella ask him? She will hear the conversatio? I can't wait for the next chapter! :-))
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
Oh, that was priceless!
Subterfuge is an understatement pertaining to this convoluted he knows-she knows by word of mouth with privacy encroached upon revealing secrets. Poor Edward.
I hope Bella's sweet demeanor will not be injured from Edward's avoidance during his garden party.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2012 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
Cheese and rice - I'm laughing sooo hard I'm crying. I'm all bruised up and don't need to be laughing at all. I'm in pain, this is the funniest fucking chapter yet. Emmett, love love love this Emmie.
Hope the next update comes a little sorry. Maybe I'll be healed enough to read.
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2012 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
Loved it!!!!!! I was wondering when were u going to update. U make me laugh so damn hard lol. I freaking loved the chapter. Thank you so much for updating, I feel bad for Bella, and I can't believ freaking Alice makes her damn banners lmao, to freaking funny. Small world and all. Haha. Hope to c u soon!!!!
Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 34: Missing Pieces...aka WHAT?
Thanks for the update.
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em
Still no kissing. Geeshhh
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
I am getting impatient here. I mean we have had 31 chapters and no action between Bella and Edward. I mean like kissing or lemons. This has been one funny story dont get me wrong but I like to see action too.
Date: 09 Jun 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
Ah, I am so glad to have found you over here :) Have followed you over here from fanfail.net so very pleased you have my fave WIP on here. Now to just spend the rest of my weekend catching up as I think I may be behind on last couple of chaps/reviews.
I love this story, keep up the good work Bannerday! xoxo
Date: 09 Jun 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Story Has to Start Somewhere
well hell - not sure if my review / post went through. I'm saving this as a favorite on this site as I don't want to chance losing you on the other site.
Date: 08 Jun 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It
Sorry for not reviewing enough. It's an amazing story.
I'm reading over here this weekend since I'm boycotting fanfiction.net - LOL.
So happy I found you <3
[Report This]Date: 15 May 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces
Great way to cap off that chapter; stargazer91 meets Ethan Collins! Emmett reads fanfiction, LMAO!
Can this get any more convoluted? Just add James.
Date: 15 May 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces
There is a lot of secrets and sneaky stuff going on at this party. Bella is pretty smart she might figure out that many of her readers are people she knows. They better be careful how they respond or come clean. I think Bella and Edward are cute and are doing just fine on their own. I hope all these people don't interfere and complicate things. They can really mess this if they try to manipulate the situation.
Date: 15 May 2012 2:01 PM Title: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces
LMAO I normally don't review till the end of a story, but I had to tell you how much I love this one. I have been laughing ,crying, and laughing till I cry through the whole thing. I love the whole fanfic writer angle. I look foward to the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces
Loved the chapter. U always make me laugh so hard. Thanx so much for updating
Date: 12 May 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 33: Conversation Pieces
Okay, now really LMAO.
Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em
Meet and greets can be amazingly awkard or intriguing as people let their guard down.
Alice is a bit over protective of Bella but given her brother's track record and the fact that he hasn't confided in her as to his changing ways, we really can't blame her.
Looking forward to Esme's assessment of Bella's character knowing she is the author of a story about her son. Let the laughs continue!
Date: 27 Apr 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em
Alice needs to calm down. She would not want Edward all up in her business. She needs to take to listen to him when he says he is changing. She also needs to trust Bella. She is a smart girl when she wants to be. She seems to have a level head in this story. Alice looked like a fool out on the patio. She needs to trust her brother. She says she loves him.
[Report This]Date: 26 Apr 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em
Holy crap can i just say, this story is AMAZING! Im usually one of the people you have so aptly named "lurkers" but when i started reading this story (which was actually two days ago) i honestly wanted to review for every chapter but when i got to the end of it i was too egar to read the next one that i never did. So here i am now reviewing just to say holy crap this fic is amazing. i have never laughed so hard in my life! I genuinely believe this is a real event because your writing is so great. I must say i really luv how you have the pow's of both characters with some others thrown in for good measure and the fact that you do it so well without any confusion is something you should be bloody proud of yourself for. You have created a crazy person in me as i will now become slightly obsesses and look up this story everyday just to see if you have updated. No pressure or anything =P.
Anywho, thought i would drop you a review just to remind you that your work is adored.
Thanks again and good luck with the rest.
P.S While your mentioning songs thought i might mention one that you might like, heard it the other day and immediately thought of this fic its called "I Should Go" by Levi Kreis. I know thats totally random, but meh!
Date: 22 Apr 2012 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 32: Allie and Jazz and Rosie and Em
Jasper and Emmett and Joe Cocker, my goodness I about peed on myself that was so dang funny!!! Please post sooner than later. I was experiencing withdrawals.
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2012 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
My goodness, that was an eventful meet and greet. And half if the guest are yet to arrive. Can't wait for mom and dad to arrive.
Did Jasper decide to not change his costume after a re-enactment was staged?
The 'key' moment in the garage was awkwardly sweet. So many moments if mortification for E&B and the night is still young.
I think Edward heard Jessica's little tirade about Bella's FFN story.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
oh MY FREAKING GOSH!
You, my dear are effin IN-damn-CREDIBLE!
I don't know h ow you keep all of this separate in your mind, but you need an award for best complex story and most creative twists!
I give you....the licorice DNA award......licorice is twisted and DNA is complex!
There ya go darlin'!
Yes, I know....I'm a dweeb.
I loved it and love you!
Jessica is a big dummy!
Date: 09 Apr 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7: Aide-de-Camp Black
Poor Edward had a little fright with Jake. That was great and can't wait to read the next chapter.
Date: 09 Apr 2012 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 6: Moving Right Along
It just keeps getting better and better! Thankyou so much for this wonderful story!
Date: 09 Apr 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 5: From Bad to Unimaginably Worse
That was so good! They will be so good together, please tell me there is a HEA for the couple!
Date: 09 Apr 2012 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It
Fabulous!!!!!! I had tears laughing so hard! I can't wait to read the next chapter, and I just love it and I am sure that the next chapters are just as good!
Date: 08 Apr 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
"Bittersweet Symphony" makes me think of Ryan Phillipe in "Cruel Intentions". One of my fav movies and songs.
Love the update. Been waiting to party for awhile, so at least it's getting started.
Thanks for writing.
[Report This]Date: 07 Apr 2012 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 31: Shocks and Surprises
Huh, small world and all that. I felt bad for Bella especially on how so many ppl are reading their story as she writes it. I'm pretty sure Alice does too right? If Esme reads it, Alice is bound to read them too
Date: 30 Mar 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
I hope Edward and Bella handle Mikes big Mouth well. They need to tell everyone that it is a inside joke between the two of them and drop the whole subject. Bella needs to stake her claim on Edward and stare down Jessica. She needs to keep her eyes off of Edward. Edward needs to make sure he lets Jessica know that he is not interested in her at all.
[Report This]Date: 30 Mar 2012 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Great stuff! So funny about Mike showing up!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2012 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Loved it. I was worried you forgot about us. When I got the notice that it was updated, I was so excited. Sorry that I wasn't able to review right away, but I am back to read it again and review. Angela is a smart one! I love her. And I love the fact that Edward is so antsy in regards to his mom reading the story, and himself too.
Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 27 Mar 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
This is SOOO GREAT!!!!
definitely worth waiting for
Thank you for all the details and I absolutely love the fun between E&B and the house tours
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Like father like son, a chip off the old 'rack' LOL!
Can't believe be went looking for his mother's review. Too funny!
Loved the tongue in cheek meeting at Bella's over the ladder and then reciprocated at Edward's during the tour. The blue room of mystery, Hahaha. Bella's imagination should stick to writing before she gets into more mischief.
Bella thought this party might be awkward for her; I think Edward's level of unease just increased 10 fold. And he was being such a pleasant host earlier. This should be an amusing night. Newton is going to be a pain in the ass. Maybe he needs a hat!
Can't wait for Esme and Carlisle to arrive.
Date: 25 Mar 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Please post more soon, I can't stand the suspense any longer
Date: 24 Mar 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Sparks? I wouldn't call them sparks, well maybe. Now if they were flirting then I would call them sparks but it just seems that they are being friendly. I thought Esme's review was hilarious and I could actually picture Edward laughing his ass off on his couch. That was too funny. Like father like son. lol I am thinking there are a lot more people that are reading her story that are in there immediate circle and everyone is going to start figuriing it out. I think Angela already did. She is a smart cookie.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Chuckling at his internal monologue to Brenda/Alice. Loved it. Made me smile the whole time I was reading. BTW - female here. ;-)
Thanks for updating.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
Loved it, especially when Edward reads Esme's review. It's like when you're envisioning your parents having sex...blegh. LOL I think Edward is headed in the right direction and can't wait to see how things progress.
Date: 24 Mar 2012 9:05 AM Title: Chapter 30: Secrets and Sparks
The reaction of Edward read the review when Esme was fantastic! I could not stop laughing.. :-)
Date: 19 Mar 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
I think the response from Bella encouraged Edward even more to change. He knows what kind of person he wants to be because he has a goal in mind. He never thought of a happily ever after, but now he thinks it would not be a bad thing with the right person. Bella has opened his eyes to a whole new potential to work towards.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2012 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
I absolutely love this story. Yes, some of it is repetitive BUT that's okay b/c I understand what your are trying to accomplish.
I laugh and giggle may way through and sometimes I palm plant my hand on my forehead at some of the shiat that happens. It is soo funny and well thought and written out. Very creative!!
Hope you updated soon.
[Report This]Date: 15 Mar 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 22: Angela Weber and the Mexican Mandate
OMGosh!! I'm loving this story!! Makes me laugh out loud and surprises at every turn! What a creative imagination you have!! You are soo funny!! Love it!!
[Report This]Date: 11 Mar 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 4: Mr. Silk Pants a.k.a. Mr. Big Stuff
Haha, the ball cap is, quite literally, an asshat! Hahahahaha!! Love this story and am glad I do not have to wait for an update!!
Date: 10 Mar 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
Thanks for the update! I had to laugh when reading Edwards internal dialogue about his mother's chat. Funny... I can't wait to read about the BBQ. I hope there will be further advance into the seduction on the way! I truely can't wait to see how you reveal his true identity as a reader of "her" Fan fic I bet Angela and her keen insights will be a part of that reveal????
Well, as usual...I'm waiting patiently with visions bodies rubbing and twitching over and under 100% Egyptian Cotton. You know they should call this fantasy fiction rather than fanfiction. Although I can't imagine the fantasy without our favorite characters..it would'nt be the same...just sayin'
Date: 10 Mar 2012 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
I want to go buy new bedding just so I can make innuendos to the salesman. (I would be sure to wear my Asshole hat while doing so!)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
Angela's intuition may gave her playing Cupid if she's not careful. Hehe
The inference that both Edward and Bella need to change a few things in their lives is strong in this chapter.
Sheet shopping with Edward was interesting. Laughed at the aggressive fiancee shredding sheets and destroying feather pillows comment!
Looking forward to the party.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
I love that he changed his sheets and pillows. I think that was a great start. Who wants to keep around sheets stained by ho's? YUK. I do think he should not keep reading her story without telling her he knows. But then again she is writing about him without his permission. So I guess they are even. I just hope things will start getting better for them and he can "Pop her cherry" LOL.
Date: 10 Mar 2012 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
Angela is a genius, he already understood everything!
I can't wait for the next chapter! Esme is coming! :-)
[Report This]Date: 10 Mar 2012 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 29: Word Processing
Yea! I was so scared that you ran off with Edward! Boy that Ange is a smart one. Cant wait for the bbq. Love that he got new sheets.
Date: 09 Mar 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Review Reply from Starlighted.net
Edward must have been so excited to get this lengthy email fom Bella. He will have to up his game and work even harder to be the best Edward and man for Bella. You know that is what he really wants to be.
Date: 25 Feb 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 28: A Review Reply from Starlighted.net
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO......I'm all caught up!!!! Please, please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 25 Feb 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 23: McCarty Party of Five
Ok....ok.....so I'm guilty of being a "lurker"! I'll just say that it's because I couldn't stop reading! Your story is that freaking good! I was reading this particular chapter this morning around 4 a.m. and actually busted out laughing when the pager went off in Bella's pants. OMG.....good stuff!!!! I HATE those things because they make me jump and for some reason everyone loves to make me hold onto to them when we go out. I CANNOT wait to see what you have in store for these characters!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 28: A Review Reply from Starlighted.net
Wow, Bella really did take everything 'Stardusted' wrote to heart. I like how she broke it down, even giving small bits of insight on herself. She seems so playful in this environment. Little does she know that Edward will be able to pick up on this and ponder what he can do to incorporate this into the changes he is making on his own. She is an external force working on him. She may not be using direct force but her natural forces are definitely causing a reaction of much needed change for Edward to find his HEA.
Looking forward to the continuation of their newest form of communication. Working through their thoughts and some awkwardness that they might not be able to in person.
Hope he doesn't abuse this relationship of words undermining the possibility of their "maybe more".
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 27: Illuminating Events
Just knew Esme had a thing for fanfiction. Go figure, she would find a way to once again reprimand Edward for his re-dick-ulous behavior. His mortification at his mother's revelation was just another form of payback to Bella.
I'm wondering how many others really do know that Edward is the soul inspiration for Bella's creative outlet of writing 'From Hate to Heat'? This could get more and more entertaining as the story progresses.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 26: Discussion and Dissection
The list of unused pen names is a very creative collection representing Edwards unsavory behavior. Loved them all!
It's amazing that this story has taken place over the period of one week. What a roller-coaster ride these two have been on.
Will Bella's spying behavior cause her more heartache?
Angela is quite the conniving friend. Subtle or maybe not so subtly pushing Bella towards a potential relationship. Glad she has her back, though.
Can't wait to read more on how Bella convinces her newest fan that he is worthy of more.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 25: When the Shit Hits the Fan Fiction
I'm glad he took the risk and read her story.
How does he plan on steering the course of action? Can't wait to read his review and her response.
Date: 23 Feb 2012 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 3: If the Hat Fits, Wear It
Er...so I kind of love this story so far! I actually laughed so hard this chappie I had tears. On to the next...