Date: 14 Sep 2011 11:55 AM Title: Prologue
I'm not normally a Rose fan, but I do like Em. So that being said I will give this a go.
Author's Response:
Hi
thank you and in that case I hope you like it and what I did to Rose. I tried to give her something behind just mouthing off.
Let me know what you think
Nelly/Elvie
Date: 14 Sep 2011 11:12 AM Title: Part Seven
Fantastic!!
Author's Response:
Thank you sweets.
Date: 26 Aug 2011 10:53 AM Title: Part Six
I agree, what the hell is up with the reviews? I mean seriously!! I've read a butt load of stories over the last 3 years and I do mean a TON!!! This is a great story and well written.
Your Emmett sounds just like what I imagined him to be. Love it!!!
Keep it up, honey!!! You're doing great!! Everyone else is missing out......but NOT me!! :) I'm the smart one, reading your story.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:22 PM Title: Part Two
Love me some Emmett!! I'm an Edward girl, all the way but Emmett runs a close 2nd. Yummy!!!
Really enjoying this story thus far. Can't wait for more!!
Author's Response:
Hey
Thank you so much for talking your time to review and then bother with 3. I feel honored.
I am happy to see you are enjoying this story. I had fun writing it.
If you didn't catch it reading the chapters. Prima Nocte is a parallel story to Four Weeks, which is about Jasper and how she met Alice. It is the same story, just from Jasper's POV. I thought I'd twist it up a bit and make Jasper a woman.
If you are looking for some Edward and Bella action check out Starting Over, that will explain about their daughter and a lot of other stuff. If you read I hope to see a comment or two from you
Thank you for your support.
Elvirina/Nelly
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:18 PM Title: Part One
Jasper as a woman and Alice as a lesi. Funny!!!
Can't wait to see where Edward and Bella are coming from since they already have a two year old daughter and Edward and Rosalie just broke up?
Cuteness on Emmett's play on Rose's shoes and dress. Clever.
Date: 16 Jul 2011 2:15 PM Title: Prologue
I've already read all the 3 chapters and noticed you don't have any reviews, yet, so I'd thought I'd leave you 3 reviews.
Enjoyed the Prologue. Interesting story line.