Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 82 Hungers
I really hope Victoria does not get her hands on Bella.....not at all!
Author's Response:
Oh my, this is going to be frustrating for you!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 83 Taken
DAMN IT!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yes, my sentiments exactly.
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 83 Taken
FUUUUUCK!! OK, I was not expecting that one! You have got to be kidding me. How did they not smell him? Just FUUUUCK!!!!!
You cant leave me like this. I cant say that I didnt like any of this one. She managed to get her and I didnt even see it coming.
But I will say this...I cant wait to see Edward and Jake rip Vic and Riley up. There is NO WAY that they will get off in an easy form. As much as I do not like Jake, he is gonna lose it when he gets wind of this one.
COME ON, GIMME GIMME GIMME. Loves <3
Author's Response:
I told you that the update would not be setteling! This is the second one today, more in the morning! The rollercoaster is just going up the hill . . .
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 82 Hungers
Sorry I didnt post this last night, got really tired and fell alseep reading on the couch.
As usual, Sam needs a doggy valium...lol I told youi that Mason and Bella together are gonna make 1 hell of a massive power source. Vic is delusional as usual.
Think the blood is gonna do more to them then they realize, sex wise it seems. But I think there is something else with the 3 of them together. Not sure, but gonna be interesting.
Loves <3
Author's Response:
You KILL me with the doggie valium idea! he needs a full prescription!
Unfortunately, Victoria is smart, too!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 82 Hungers
can we maybe get like 2 updates a day or 3 or 10? I love this story! And the suspense is killing me!
Author's Response:
Tell you what, I'll update again today . . . but it is NOT going to relieve anything!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 82 Hungers
well im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Not sure you're really going to feel that way . . .
Date: 03 Aug 2011 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend
Can't wait to see when Mason is born ;-)
Author's Response:
I hope I can surprise you with it! He will make an appearance soon!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Oh come on...you know you want toooooooo!!!!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
More coming soon . . .
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend
woohooo ......so cant wait for tomorrows update!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you're reading both stories! i love your reviews!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend
Of course theyll get thru it. I have a feeling that little Mason is gonna make for one hell of a fight with Vic. I think with Bella's power and whatever this little guy can do, that Vic is in for the ride of her existence when she comes for Bells, not that shes gonna get close enough!!!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
I love your enthusiasm! You energize me to put up another chapter - I'm having trouble resisting! lol
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend
ABSOLUTELY, SAM NEEDS TO GET WITH THE PROGRAM. MAYBE SAM AND JACOB COULD HELP "KEEP WATCH" WIT EMMETT AND JASPER WHILE CARLISLE AND EDWARD DELIVER MASEN. THAT WAY SAM AND SUE CAN SEE THAT MASEN WON'T BE A PROBLEM. AND MAYBE EVEN SAM CAN HELP GET RILEY AND VICTORIA, TOO PERFECT HUH???
Author's Response:
Great idea! We have yet to see how Masen will be born . . . there is also Victoria to consider!
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend
emily sure is trying to et sam straight! and mason is too cute!!! awesome he can communicate with edward! cant wait till he is born!!
Author's Response:
Sam is going to take some work - but Masen is coming very very soon!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend
excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Glad you're still hanging in there! thanks for reviewing!
Date: 03 Aug 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend
Loved all the different POV in this chapter!!! In other stories I've read, I can't wait for Edward and Bella time, but with your story I like hearing about each and everyone of the characters. I feel as though I can see what your writing, and It'll be very sad if any of them die....even Sam (for Emily's sake)...lol
Thankyou for continuing to write this wonderful story!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoy all the POV's! It seems to confuse some of the readers, but I love getting the different ideas of each character! Glad you feel as though you are in the room with them, that's what I'm going for!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
Well I went back and read this chapter for a second time and felt my teeny review was not enough to thank you for the wonderful talent you show so I decided to delete it and write again.
You have portrayed the relationship between Jacob and Bella so beautifully.Your wriitng shows he loves her enough to let her have what she wants, which is Edward.He will also protect her because he loves her.
Your writing provokes very erotic imagery, it really is very good.Thank you for this wonderful story.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - i really try to give you details that would have been noticed had you been thee. If you don't feel as though you are in the room with them, I have failed!
Hope you give the other story I put up today a try - it'll take a handfull of chapters for you to like it at all, especially the goodball ass that Edward is in the beginning!
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 80 Dinner & A Movie
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it - hope you give the other story a try - though the edward starts out as someone to HATE!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 80 Dinner & A Movie
I am enjoying this story so mutch. I read it on my work breaks, at home and anywhere else I can squeez it in ;-) Keep the chapters coming!!!
Author's Response:
So glad Purple Passion is passionate about this story! Hope you give the other story i put up today a chance, it is hard to read at the beginning! Edward being a jerk is difficult to digest!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 80 Dinner & A Movie
emily is going to tell same to grow up i hope!
Author's Response:
Emily is going to try!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 80 Dinner & A Movie
Love the fluff, and how Jake sticks up for the cullens, I really like this Jacob, not for Bella of course, but he deserves to imprint on someone! Your daily updates are just so great, but it's so hard to wait even a day, your story is so good!!! How can we convince you to post another chapter today??? :)))))
Author's Response:
I would love to post a chapter each and every morning and afternoon, unfortunately i only write about 2 a week . . . so there will come a point when you will have to wait even longer than you do now! sORRY!!!!!
Date: 02 Aug 2011 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 80 Dinner & A Movie
Laughing over chick flicks.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! I thought Edward's lack of understand would show itself if he had to deal with the results of a chick flick!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 10:07 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
Thank you...an exqusite exercise in the beauty of love.
Author's Response:
I am soo glad you see it that way . . . I do too!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed them, thank you for leaving me a note!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives
CAN'T WAIT 4 MORE!!!!
Author's Response:
Your escitement is contageous! I can hardly resist putting another chapter up today!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives
What a sweet story! Please go on!
Tiina
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying it, and thankful to you for leaving a review!
i really like to get to know the readers a little, and I enjoy getting a review on each chapter, sort of to tell me what things they liked in the story and which things they didn't . . . but mostly for me to gage if I'm getting the feelings across that I intended to!
Thanks again for reviewing and I hope to hear from you!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives
Bumpy is to be expected with Victoria and Sam around......eeeek.
As always......loved the update!!!
Author's Response:
Well, bumpy it will be! Hope you enjoy it!
Date: 01 Aug 2011 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives
excited to see what happens with sam there !
Author's Response:
SAM IS JUST SO DAMNED MEAN!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives
I like bumpy...as long as we get to kill the bitch Vic...lol
Sam needs a doggy valium...hahaha
Loves <3
Author's Response:
ROFLMAO! Doggie Valium! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives
emily is soo sweet! i think she will get sam under control quickly....i hope....cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
It's killing me as well not to post another chapter today!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2011 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 74 Fishing
You can feel it getting closer...
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 72 Sightseeing
Totally am...
Date: 31 Jul 2011 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
im glad that jake is there to stick up for bella and the cullens! excited for the next chapte r
Author's Response:
Glad you are still enjoying the story! Lots more to come!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
Very, very nice ;-) I really enjoied everyone's point of views. Keep the chapters coming!!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you are still enjoying it!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
Um, yeah, um, I rilly, rilly liked this.....um, 'brightening up' ya got goin' on here. HAHAHAHAHAHA! 'scuse me, sorry. hehe... Most enlightening. erm
Author's Response:
Lots more "brightening" to come! lol! Glad it came off well, I always wonder if the lemons are hot and believable!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
wow!!! well we all know Edward heard Jacobs thoughts and knew he was watching.....
Author's Response:
Yea, he did. he was all "she's mine and you need to see that", along with not wanting to upset Bella. He mentions it in a later chapter . . .
Date: 31 Jul 2011 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
I love this story. I 'm glad I found it on fanfiction. Keep up the cool story
jukie
Author's Response:
Thanks for continuing to review here, this is the edited and revised edition!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
WOW, I THINK EVERYONE READING THIS NEEDS A COLD SHOWER NOW!!! LOL!!! THAT WAS GREAT!!!! I JUST HOPE JACOB , EMILY AN D SUE AS WELL AS BELLA CAN CONVINCE SAM OF EDWARDS LOVE FOR BELLA. OF COURSE, NOW THAT JACOBS PHASED HE CAN MAKE THE DECISION TO ALLOW HER CHANGE, RIGHT?? NO PROBLEMS THERE, JUST ENDING VICTORIA!!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad it came off as HOT! Edward is just so insecure still!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
whew what a lemon!! wow! i could nnot imagine what it would feel like to have edward have a orgasm repeatedly inside me..must have been cold haha!
Author's Response:
Hope it was good for you! lol
I love lemons on Sundays when there is nothing else to do!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 2:17 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
Poor Jacob. He needs to imprint on someone ASAP.
Author's Response:
Not to worry - Jacob will be taken care of!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
Loved it!! I'm curious though, why didn't Edward hear what Jake was thinking and seeing. I can't imagine Edward being okay with Jake seeing Bella naked......
Author's Response:
Edward did know that Jake was there - he will explain it in the next chapter, but I will tell you in part . . . he was just unwilling to interrupt what they were doing, and telling Bella that Jake was there would have upset her. Edward NEVER upsets Bella if he can avoid it!
Hope you enjoyed it, even if Jake did get an eyefull!
(Jake was only actually looking for a very few minutes - he just got an eye full!)
Date: 31 Jul 2011 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon
i lobe this chapters;)
Author's Response:
Excellent! Thanks for leting me know!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom
This all sounds like a dream come true. Lovely
:)
Author's Response:
Wait till next chapter - really a dream come true!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise
I love this stronger Bella who takes control more. Edward is not the pomposs ass he is in Eclipse. She is much more realistic too.
I am loving your story.
Author's Response:
I am so glad you think they are more realisic! I hated the part in Breaking Dawn when he immediately wanted to get rid of the baby, no discussion, nothing!
And it never let them have a life once she was pregnant! I wanted her to take some sort of initiative over things they did!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
So lovely....Arrrrrrrh!
Plus naked Edward...mmmmmmmm!
Author's Response:
I love the idea of a private island and naked Edwad fo two weeks! Hope you enjoyed the honeymoon!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
I am loving your story.
Author's Response:
Hope loosing Jessica wasn't a big deal for you - I hate killing off people, but sometimes you just have to!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
Wow, it's a little hot in here...wait it's Very, Very hot.
Swoon
Author's Response:
I was kind of worried that this chapter was a little over the top, but he is a vampire after all!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 77 Insurance
i have to tell you i love this story. do you know how many chp. yyou are planning on writing since we really have not seen Tanya or aro yet. keep going we will keep ready. it has been great. please do not let Vic get to Bella
Author's Response:
There are lota of chapters, but if I tell you how many there are at the present time, it might give away too much! Hope you like long stories and keep reading!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
Wonderful story. I loved the last chapter and i'm glad that Edward continued to be intimate with Bella.
Author's Response:
I'm so sure Bella would get her way in the end, regardless. Edward really can say no to nothing around her!
Date: 31 Jul 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 77 Insurance
Looking forward to Sunday's chapter since you make it sound so wonderful. I will definitely be waiting.
Author's Response:
i really do like the next chapter, kind of a calm. It's called a winter afternoon, and perfect for a Sunday afternoon . . .
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter
yeah, good for Renee.
Author's Response:
I tried to make Renee still kind of a flake, but much more sure of her daughter, and behind her!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie
I hope Charlie does not succeed in breaking them apart.
Author's Response:
CHARLIE IS SO THE TYPICAL SOUTHERN GEORGIA DAD, HE IS JUST SO SURE HE'S RIGHT!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
Loving it!
Author's Response:
So glad you'r enJoying the ride!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire
So hot. I love this Edward -not the moody bloke he is often portrayed at in fan fiction.
love this story
:)
Author's Response:
Ha! I waws waiting to hear what you thought of chapter 9! No response on the cliffie when he was over her on the race track with blood on his mouth?
Edward is still moody, just in a kind of different way I think!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 77 Insurance
Seriously...you are best updater on this site!!!! I don't always leave reviews like I should, but with your story I always want to! I'm glad Emily is coming, hopefully she will put Sam in his place!!!! haha
Author's Response:
Thank you so for the reviews you leave, they really encourage me to continue the story and the regular updates! Emily will be a calming factor, that;s for sure - - - maybe just not enough . . .
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 77 Insurance
i was soo excited when i got the email that you updated again!! lad emily kinda seems to understand the cullens are good and i think she will be abig help with sam he is gonna flip when he sees bella pregnant and hears them having sex....
Author's Response:
True, and with werewolf hearing, there is just no way he won't hear them having sex! lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 4 Planes & Plans
So sad but so good. Glad you haven't gone down the death by volturi option- at least so far.
Author's Response:
Nope, Edward realized he was wrong way before he got to the killing himself part!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 77 Insurance
Mwah, mwah,mwah!! I do appreciate your efforts!! And I'm soooo glad that Emily is coming along with Sam~~somebody has to smack him upside the head to get his attention, and then knock some sense into him. Ahem. heehee!
Author's Response:
Emily is certain to be the voice of reason where Sam is concerned, anyway! thank you so for continuing to review!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 77 Insurance
WOW, I HOPE SAM DOESN'T CAUSE TO MUCH TROUBLE....MAYBE EMILY WILL PUT HIM IN HIS PLACE. IF SHE WON'T BELLA WILL!!!!
Author's Response:
Sam is a brat and he is going to cause LOTS of trouble, in spite of Emily!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 Cobwebs
Such good description. Your story is pulling me in already.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much!
i rally lovd doing this chapter because Edward is just so out of it, it was fun to write!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 4:43 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Such a good start. Even though you describe similar things to the SM books your writing is evocative and original in portrayal.
I love Charlie's point of view and the idea that Bella gets spotted cliff diving.
I rememember pier diving as a young child and of course my siblings and I were spotted. Ouch!
Author's Response:
I love LOVE love having a new reader. I have seen your reviews on my iphone all day while I have been away fom my computer and cleaning my house that I have just moved from! It is sooo excitinv to have someone start reading and actually review and let you know their thoughts on each of the chapters! it's almost like living it again with them, and each person sees something different than everyone else!
the first chapter is the most boring to me, and I;m always excited when someone maks it in a few chapters, cause if they make it through chapter 10, they usually stay!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 76 Encounter
GREAT AS ALWAYS, POOR JACOB.....I KINDA FEEL SORRY FOR VICTORIA AND WHAT SHE HAS COMING FOR HER, NOT!!! LOL!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for always reviewing and telling me the parts of the chapter you liked. It's okay to let me know if you hate some of it as well, I really want to know how each and every thing I write comes across!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 76 Encounter
I'm in Phoenix,AZ.
I love loved it as always!!!!
Victoria is one sneaky villion!!! I'm thinking they just can't be friends.....lol
I'm hoping Mason is the one to end her....that would be something!
Author's Response:
I love Phoenix! My brother lives there and I get to visit so rarely!
Victoria is crafty, that's for sure . . . but then she had b een with JHames for decades and I supposed they learned from each other how to be dasterdly.
Enjoy tomorrow's update, it's a last little positive before the hammer falls!
Author's Response:
I love Phoenix! My brother lives there and I get to visit so rarely!
Victoria is crafty, that's for sure . . . but then she had b een with JHames for decades and I supposed they learned from each other how to be dasterdly.
Enjoy tomorrow's update, it's a last little positive before the hammer falls!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 76 Encounter
Totally agree with you on waiting for updates. I LOVE how you update almost daily. Please don't stop. I'm definitely stressed about Victoria and Riley.
Author's Response:
I think I missed a couple of days that my internet was off, other than that, updating each day has been eaxy because I have written a dozen or so chapters ahead! It is killing me not to just post them! lol
If you're getting stressed of=ver Victoria, then I'm doing my job. the anxiety level is only gong to go up - - - really up . . .
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 76 Encounter
that chapter brought tears to my eyes!!! Loved it!!!
Author's Response:
Victoria has her plan well thought out! Glad you enjoyed the chapter! Tell me, I'm not too familiar with this site, how is it that you know right away when I post something? i have a couple of stories that I;'m reading and I just have to go and look at them and remember what dhapter I had been oin! lol
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 76 Encounter
man i canot beliebe that victoria got away anger is only going to fuel jake and the cullens to oush harder ar catching her! great chapter!!
Author's Response:
That Victoria is crafty, and she has had all the time whe wanted to prepare for this!
Date: 30 Jul 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 75 Fireworks
excited to see what happens to victoria !
Author's Response:
I wish I could end her, she is just so hateful, but everyone cn learn . . . right?
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 75 Fireworks
GETTING VERY INTERESTING, AS USUAL!!!
Author's Response:
It's about top get REALLY interesting, angsty and tense!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 75 Fireworks
OK, now were talking!!!!! Lets get this showdown on!!! Im almost as giddy for this as I was when Edward got her after the accident!!!!!! Gimme Gimme Gimme woman!!! Loves <3
Author's Response:
I;m excited, too! it is all I can do not to post a couple of chapters a day or more! i am trying to stick to one a day, but as the excitement grows it;s gonna be hard!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 75 Fireworks
Edward and Jake need to team up, and put Sam in his place.....haha!!!
As always loved the update, it's like my morning coffee, always there when I get up...hehe
Thank You!!!!
Author's Response:
I love that this story is like youyr morning coffee! I usually have mine while i upload the day's chapter! I live in Georgia, USA, what's your time zone?
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 75 Fireworks
loved it! and seems like sue is starting to come around glad she is going to be there when sam arrives.....and poor edward he is just so scared for bella. ohh victoria is getting brave....cnt wait to see what happends next!!
Author's Response:
Yes, Sue staying will be a big help with Sam, that's for sure! he is such an ***
Date: 29 Jul 2011 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 75 Fireworks
Oh~I just can't stand it! I know something bad is going to happen, and I'm so nervous and jittery!!
Author's Response:
Yea! That means I'm doing my job! Hope you continue to enjoiy the story!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 75 Fireworks
Love Sue's ideas. Emmett is so funny.
Author's Response:
Emmett is an absolute blast to write, he just says what ever the hell he thinks!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2011 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 74 Fishing
GREAT CHAPTER, AS USUAL!!! COUNTING DOWN TILL BABY TIME, SURELY MASEN CAN HANG ANOTHER WEEK?? I HOPE VICTORIA DOESN'T OVERHEAR ABOUT MASEN BEING BORN IN POSSIBLY A WEEK, WITH THE LATEST RIB BREAK, THE CULLENS MAY BE A LITTLE PREOCCUPIED AND VIC MAY DECIDE TO MAKE HER MOVE????
Author's Response:
Well, that's alot! this coming week will provice lots of answers for you!
Date: 29 Jul 2011 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 74 Fishing
Was alittle worried about the broken rib and the snarling during breastfeeding.
Author's Response:
Yes, things are stepping up a bit, about to get interesting!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 74 Fishing
well im excited to see whathappens next
Author's Response:
So glad you're still reading and reviewing!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 74 Fishing
Sweet... :)))
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 74 Fishing
I love possesive and caring Edward!!! Hes one of my favs. Kinda glad we didnt get any Jake in here...hehehe
Loves <3
Author's Response:
I like that edward, too . . . but I also like uncontrolled passionate Edward! Alot!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 73 Games
loving jake with everyone ! cant wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing! Ii can't wait to read the next chapter . . . and I wrote it! lol
Date: 28 Jul 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
then the trip can commense! (should be "commence")
I told her as I starred straight at her (should be "stared")
It was all I cold manage to say (should be "could")
to see me lift he photos of us (should be "the")
I am still enjoying your story!!! But, now I'm off to bed....sweet dreams! Talk to you tomorrow!
Author's Response:
I found some of the mistakes and am fixing them! mostly i'm sleeping - just soooo tired!
Date: 28 Jul 2011 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings
He looked as tough I had slapped him. ???? what does that mean
Som a vampire was in the car before the crash??? So, a vampire was in the car before the crash!
Everything else was amazing.....I loved the responses Edward gave to Jessica! LOL
Author's Response:
Yep, Edward really is not sorry that Jessica can't taunt Bella any more! He was, after all, toying with the idea of ending her himself! lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 73 Games
good chapter. soo glad jacob is still friends with all the cullens. and victoria ugh hoping her time comes to an end soon...wonder how charlie will take the news of bella and the cullens being vamps and jake a wolf?
Author's Response:
Well, Charlie knows nothing . . . yet, though they all think he will because of Sue! All are still friends, at least for now, and Victoria . . . well, she is still trying! lol
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 73 Games
JACOB MESSING WITH THEM IS PRICELESS, WONDER HOW SAM WILL TAKE ALL THIS. IM GLAD SUE N CHARLIE ARE TOGETHER AND CHARLIE WILL KNOW THE LEGENDS. AT LEAST WHEN BELLA IS TURNED SHE CAN STILL SEE CHARLIE!! I HOPE THEY GET VICTORIA SOON, IM READY FOR THAT TO BE OVER AND BABY TIME TO BEGIN AND SEEE IF BELLAS TURNED OR WANTING MORE BABIES!!
Author's Response:
Turned or wanting more babies? think the birth will come off without a hitch, or c section, or will there be suffering involved? It could go so very many ways here!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 73 Games
You know I actually like YOUR Jacob as well,...I think I like all of them better in this story.....
Heaven, Hell, & Harleys is my favorite on this site right now...... Often when I read stories on this site I am in a rush for the action to pick up, but with your chapters it is so enjoyable to just read them the way they are. They are just never boring!!!
Thank you!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad to hear you are still enjoying the story! Action is always good, but it has so much more intensity when you are invested in the characters!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2011 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 73 Games
Fun with the dog is always enjoyable. But Em seems pretty hell bent on destroying Vic!!! Hope he gets the chance SOON!!!!
Loves you <3
Author's Response:
Love bantering with the dog - - - em is pretty intense, he wnts her almost as much as edward does!
They will all have a chance at going after her, soon to come!
Date: 27 Jul 2011 11:40 AM Title: Chapter 73 Games
Aargh, the tension is getting to me~I think I could rip the bitch's head off MYSELF!!!
Author's Response:
Believe me, I have wanted to end her a thousand times - I just need her a little longer . . . at least that's what I keep telling myself!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 72 Sightseeing
Nice!! I wonder if Victoria does somehow manage to get ahold of Bella, if Mason will guide his dad to where they are or protect Bella in some way....hmmm :))
Author's Response:
Masen is already an amazing little kid! There is no telling what he is capable of!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2011 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 72 Sightseeing
i have to say a heartfelt thank you!!! this is my favorite story i have reviewed many times, but you deserve kudos for all the update, is this 4 in 2 days??? anyway, thank you and all your readers need to appreciate the fact you update regular and keep us all entertained and sitting on the edge of our seats wanting to know whats going to happen next...
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! So glad you keep enjoying the story! I worry about geting boring!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 72 Sightseeing
sue and charlie are so cute together
Author's Response:
Thanks, I thought so too! Most people do not seem to like the chapters if they are not full of Edward and Bella!
Date: 26 Jul 2011 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 72 Sightseeing
Still enjoying the story.....keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response:
Glad you're still out there and took the time to drop me a note! Thank you!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 71 Calling Sam
That would be brilliant!!!! Poor poor Alice...lol
Author's Response:
I wonder if Alice would have a sense of humor about the camo? lol
Date: 25 Jul 2011 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 71 Calling Sam
cute chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you're still enjoying the story!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 71 Calling Sam
I think Pink Armani camo would ROCK!!!!
ok, Sue is just a tad annoying. She needs to get over herself and relax!!! My guess is that Charlie's not gonna let up about school from the sounds of things. But he is a dad, so cant totally blame him.
I cant wait till Sam shows. He needs a good ass kicking for his attitude...lol
Loves <3
Author's Response:
I so should have thought to make it PINK camo! Brilliant!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 70 Ingrained
Thankyou for the double day update!!!!! Want some pissed Edward, your pissed Edward is the BEST!!!!!!lol
Author's Response:
You are too funny! I promise, Edward will be pissed soon!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 70 Ingrained
WOW! I WOULD LIKE TO SAY THANK YOU FOR GIVING US 2 CHAPTER UPDATES IN ONE DAY!!!! YOU ALWAYS UPDATE DAILY, WHICH IS RARE BUT IM THANKFUL CAUSE IM ADDICTED TO THIS STOREY!!! BUT 2, YEAH!!! LOVIN SUE'S MIND CHANGIN, FEELIN A LITTLE SORRY FOR JACOB, TRYING TO FIGURE OUT WOLF THINGS AND PHASING BACK. I HOPE EMMETT DOESN'T TEASE EDWARD ABOUT THE ORGASMS (PREVIOUS CHAPTER) THAT WOULDN'T BE COOL. BABY TIME GETTIN CLOSER!!! HEY EVERYONE...VOTE FOR A SEQUEL OR A EXTREMELY LONNGGGGG STORY!!!! IM JUST LOVIN IT TOO MUCH!!!
Author's Response:
Well, I hope you continue to enjoy the banter between them, as well as the story line. Things will get kind of anxious soon, so enjoy the fun while it is still there!
Date: 25 Jul 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 69 Sue
Love, love, love this story, you are fantastic ! (is that enough buttering up for ya? heehee) I am enjoying this so much, really. Can't wait for each chappie!
Author's Response:
Excellent 'buttering up!' I love it! i really do want to know which parts of the story you guys like best, it helps me to know if the point I wanted to get across is coming through!
Author's Response:
Excellent 'buttering up!' I love it! i really do want to know which parts of the story you guys like best, it helps me to know if the point I wanted to get across is coming through!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 69 Sue
i love the story:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 69 Sue
I don't like it......I FRICKEN LOVE IT!!!!!! Come on, we need a seriously pissed off Edward!!!!!lol
Author's Response:
I love that you like pissed off Edward, like when he was mad at Charlie for upsetting Bella! he will be really angry soon enough . . . especially when Tanya comes to visit!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 69 Sue
Go on, I really like your story. I hadn't noticed, that Sue didn't know about Bellas pregnantcy. That makes it intresting.
Best wishes - Tiina
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for leaving me a note! I kind of slid that one in, Sue not knowing, and I was laughing at myself for having Edward's head pop up over the sofa and then Bella - I could just see how funny it would look, and hos shocked Sue would be - and all the while, Carlisle calmly sitting reading the paper!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 8:51 PM Title: Chapter 69 Sue
loved it!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! I appreciate your taking the time to leave me a note!
Date: 24 Jul 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 69 Sue
excited to see what happens with this visit from sue
Author's Response:
Sue may just be forced to open her eyes! thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 68 Genes
Jake and Edward are funny...love their protectivness and rivalry where Bella is concerned...though I keep waiting for the other shoe to fall.