[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen
loved it! i like how thye think mason's eyes will change just like his daddy most stories u read he has either edwards human eye color or bellas i like that they might change. cant wwait for more!!!
Author's Response:
I'm thinking he just might have amber colored eyes like the rest of the Cullens! Not sure yet, though . . .
Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen
LOVED IT!!! So sweet!!! Can't wait to read more about Mason :)
Author's Response:
Masen is going to be an amazing little kid!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen
GREAT CHAPTER....AS ALWAYS. CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT EMILY DOES TO SAM!!!! AND HOW WILL EDWARD RESIST BELLA'S BLOOD....HIS COLD TONGUE WILL HELP EASE THE PAIN....WE ALL KNOW EVERYONE WHO HAS READ THIS IS THINKIN THE SAME THING!!! lol!!!
Author's Response:
Good idea with the tongue . . .
Date: 13 Aug 2011 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
*tear*
I'm so happy for them....
I can't wait for the next installment......
*Big Grin*
Date: 12 Aug 2011 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
Wonderful chapter. Still worried about the consequences of Sam's actions towards Edward.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
Lovely birthing...quite realistic and yet not too gorey.
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
Oh how fantastic!!!! Little Masen is here.. Charlie is rather humor in such slight little ways! Your writing of the birth like this is just wonderful; Again I must re-iterate I love your mind and how it's taps into the uniqueness of this precious little new baby and how those abilities brought about a normal delivery "well to an extent" anyway.
Great Chatper!!! Well done our wonderful author, Well done indeed! I have been wondering about Tanya and Aro so thanks for the heads up!
Till next chapter Take care ***oh, isn't it exciting over 500 reviews now***
Date: 12 Aug 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
looking foward to whats to come next
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
WOW, NOW THAT REALLY WAS A GREAT CHAPTER!! I HOPE EMILY RIPS SAM A NEW ONE!!! I GET SAM RUNS HOME TO TRY TO CONVINCE THE ELDERS TO ATTACK THE CULLENS BEFORE SUE AND JACOB GIVE THEM THE REAL STORY?? HOW CAN EMILY STAY WITH SAM AFTER HE DID WHAT HE DID, IMPRINT OR NOT??!! NOW, WHAT WILL CHARLIE DECIDE....WHEN WILL BELLA BE CHANGED...QUESTIONS...QUESTIONS...I CAN'T WAIT!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you're still interested!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
Love this story the more I read it. It keeps me on the edge and I watch for every chapter. :) Happy you love to write and I get to read. It's very good:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Lots more to come!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
Awwwwww!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SO SWEET!!!! I forgot to say, I loved that Bella didn't sit around waiting to be rescued when she saw the opportunity to get away!!
Curious to see what Mason will drink :)
Thank you for the update!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed the chapter! I loved this one too!
Date: 12 Aug 2011 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 94 Arrival
Love love love love, I am taking a bunch of cadets camping this weekend, so I don't know if I will get any of your updates, sad face for me. Oh well something to look forward to when I cet home :)
Author's Response:
Have fun with the cadets! i love camping, but these days it is in an RV! lol
Date: 12 Aug 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
Oh my........looks like Edward and Bella are delivering this baby naturally. I bet this is part of Mason's power/gift of helping his parents help him to come into the world. How sweet is that ;-) One more chapter today pleeaaasss......
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! One birth, coming up!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
well im glad that they are safe and im looking foward to the birth!
Author's Response:
Yes! Safe they are! Thank you for reviewing! One birth, coming up!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
All very exciting...
Author's Response:
Thank you! One birth, coming up!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
I'm so glad that they are together...now I am on pins and needles about Masen's birth...Alice saw everything was fine...but the no Bella thing is tripping me out, but the other senerio, additional children...oh what's gonna happen....you know how much I love this story...you keep my interest piqued all the time...so good!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! One birth, coming up!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
ohh im just so happy they are back together!! and now mason wants out! cant wait to see how the birth goes!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! One birth, coming up!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered
ohh wow!!! im so happy bella and bree got out! but poor mason must be frantic being sqeezed by the contractions! yay! poor edward though.....
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
ohh no! well im glad victoria is dead but what the hell was sam thinking! im so glad that jacob was able to command him to stop!
Author's Response:
Jacob has come in handy a time or two, hasn't he!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
Phew!!! Edward that was so close Bro!!! Seriously thought you were gonna fall off into darkness there for a few!!! **nope, I had faith** **giggles, chuckles**
Okay why didn't SM seem to think this through like you did when writing the birthing scene, okay I get that she wanted to show the pain of Childbirth, however, I love, love, love how you are taking into consideration the intellect of this new amazingly talented little breed of humanvampire baby... See how your pointing out that DaddyWard can read Masen's thoughts (not unlike in BD version) this TOTALLY makes sense to me that they talked the baby through the birth.. Really love your version and yes, read he notes the drama is not over yet... Still a little put out with Sam in all honesty... But then anyone that hurts EDWARD is not nice... nervy I dare say....Just the very mention of his injuries as Bella notices the bandages she will notice the bite marks later I am sure... Okay again totally Rocking with your version of the birth!!!!
Laters Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
You're too good to me! I love your reviews!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
are we really only getting one update today?
Author's Response:
lol, Yes, only one today! It was a good one, though, wasn't it?
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
Thank you for the updates!!! Love hearing from Bella and Edward!!!!
Can't wait to read aout the birth!
Author's Response:
Hope you don't get grossed out, I was pretty descriptive!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
OK, 1st thing...i know why Vic didnt hurt Bells. It was Mason!! Yeah see, I told you he would help her!!!!
OK, shes home and they are back together. Thank the Lord in Heaven!!!
Well now it seems that Little Mason wants to make a grand enterance. But E is there and he will make sure that all is well and that they all 3 get thru this alive!!
Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
Loves <3
Author's Response:
Really glad you are still enjoying the story, lots more to come!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 93 Delivered
Ahhhhhhhh! You can't leave it there, please please don't leave it there, more soon I beg, pweeese
Author's Response:
You are so funny, you want the entire story NOW, right?
Patience, it's coming . . .
Aty least you know they are together and alive, both of them!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered
Now I know your trying to make us think that Bella has not survived, but you can't be that horrid. So I'm gonna hold my breath till the next update. :)
Author's Response:
No, not trying to make you think that - - - just haven't gotten to her part yet!
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered
Big sigh of relief!!! Waiting here for the next update. You rock girl.
Author's Response:
So glad you're still with me!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered
damn
Author's Response:
Damn right!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered
So glad they made it out of the fire. Hope Bella can make it thought Masen's birth....that would be so crule if she doesn't :-0
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Love hearing from you!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered
OMG!!this must of been alices vision of bella alone &in pain... great chapter!! Ahhh cant wait for baby mason! =0) i just hope they find edward in time!
Author's Response:
Well, thank goodness that Edward and Bella joked around abour Romeo and juliet enough that he's making sure he doesn't make that mistake!
Date: 11 Aug 2011 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered
Thank you Thank you!!!! I am so exicted to hear about the birth!!!! Love all the POVs!!!!! I hope you are still able to update tomorrow!!!
Author's Response:
Yep, your update is up! I really do try for at least one a day, till I catch up to whee I am writing the story, then it will drop to two a week!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 92 Discovered
Holy Shit I could not read fast enough!!!! I knew she had to get out. I just knew she would make it out. Love all the Phone Tech stuff and the LL button! Yeah the part about Sam attaching Edward well that was wrong on Sam's part, but Thank Heaven's for Jake taking over and doing the right thing... Geezzzzz this is sooooo good!!!!! Glad reviews were good and kind..... :-) Till next chapter
Author's Response:
I absolutely LOVE that you tell me just the parts you liked (or disliked)! I wondered if anyone would like the phone tech stuff, I never really know!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
BUT CAN WE FIND OUT TODAY????????????
Author's Response:
Yes!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
For the Love of all that's Holy.... Shit!!!! Now I have enough faith and trust in your story to KNOW that you did not let them die in the fire... I know this... your going to treat us to another chapter today right!? for a humpday treat!!!! and for our reviews... Man you have one vicious mind. That ranting of Victoria was pricless how she likes to play with her food and talking about humans as Cattle... Wow!!!
Okay till next update then.... Have a good one
Author's Response:
Thank you for telling me specifically that you liked the dialogue from Victoria about the food! I love to know exactly the things that readers like. I thought it was funny, but if no one tells me they agree, I kind of wonder!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
well i hope that bella made it out of there ! looking foward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
OH DEAR GOD WOMAN!! I know that she got out, its just where they hell is she? Vic didnt say anything about seeing the car...maybe she got the car and took off in it!!!
Gimme Gimme Gimme More!!!
Thank for answering me on the HEA!! Loves <3
Author's Response:
Very observant of you to notice the car detail! Well played!
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
come on.....that is really mean to leave us like that!!!!
Author's Response:
It's Not!
you know the bad vampires are dead, Edward is alive . . . and someone is seeing a baby!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
Okay woman, you have officially killed me....lol....damn cliffhanger....please oh please hurry with the update!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
LOL...I have faith in you!!!! So glad Victoria is dead!! Um, Sam is CRAZY!!!! I am pretty sure when Bella finds out what he tried to do, she will not be happy! And what will Emily think????
I hope we get EPOV or BPOV soon!!!
Thank you for the update!!!!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 91 Fire
Yay. Update, now eagaly waiting, Bella has to survive, more pleeeease. Prety please with cherries on top. :)
Author's Response:
Okay, more for you coming up!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Sad face :( had an e-mail saying 91 was up, and no chapter, I'm so on tenterhooks, Mason must be protecting his mummy till his daddy can save them all,
Author's Response:
Chapter is up for you, and you're right - Masen has been helping!
Date: 10 Aug 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
looking foward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you, glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
and more? because I am in love with this story
Author's Response:
More coming in the morning!
Thanjks for reviewing!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
Oh I'm completely enjoying this story! I just love how charlie is really trying. And i hope victoria gets what she deserves! =0)
Author's Response:
Charlie is really trying, isn't he!
Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
still loving it! great idea bella! just hope they can get to her without victoria killing or hurting her too bad! cant wait to see what happend next!!
Author's Response:
Bella really did have a great idea, didn't she! Hope they can smell the trace of her in the burning hair!
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
Kick Ass and very smart moves I might add!!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you thnk so!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
Brillant idea about the fireplace and Bella's scent. I know its going to be close though.
Author's Response:
Think they will smell Bella's scent?
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
OK, that was mean about the HEA!!! There is only 1 HEA that we all ever want and that is E&B!!!
Her idea has to work!! She is just brilliant!!!
Gimme gimme gimme more more more!!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
Actually, I do agree with you about there only being one kind of HEA!
Shhhhh . . . don't tell anyone!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
Oh my God, Oh my God, Oh my God....I'm giddy with anticipation here....I hope they find her, alive, well and in one piece....I would hate to see Edward if something happened to her again.
Author's Response:
No, Edward really won't survive if he looses her!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
Silly of course we are enjoying the story,its brilliant!!!!!!! Gosh I hope they find her before its too late!!!! I hope Riley goofs up, and goes back sooner. Thank you for the update!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad you are still enjoying the story!
Date: 09 Aug 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 90 Tracks
Yes,very much so,but the suspense is not good for my poor heart.
Author's Response:
Well, I hope you take your meds regularly . . . I do!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 89 Storm
Well just....crap!
Im goin gon an HEA here woman. Dont make me hate you at the end of this thing. I love you and your story. I want more more more!!!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
I only write HEA. The trick is, whose HEA!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 89 Storm
looking foward to the next chapter
Author's Response:
Next chapter coming up, thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 08 Aug 2011 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 89 Storm
i really hope bella comes out of this alive! good going alice for putting in the tracking device i hope they find her soon but wont victoria and riley hear or smell the approach of the vamps and could possible go ahead and hurt or kill bella. though i really hope that doesnt happen!
Author's Response:
Yep. approaching Victoria and Riley makes it tricky!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Yay another chapter! Its about time Charlie knew about vampires and shape shifters lol.
Author's Response:
You know, I need to remember to call them shape shifters!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 89 Storm
You are the best updater!! Thank you!!!! I am absolutely loving the ride...haha, it's all good as long as you don't kill off Bella :)
Drive safely!!
Author's Response:
I'm safely home, and Bella is still breathing!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 89 Storm
i hope all go well your trip and the ne chapter:)
Author's Response:
Trip went great, excellent sunburn!
Thanks for the commentary and caring!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 89 Storm
more more more puh-lease????
Author's Response:
You're so funy . . . you know there's more!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 89 Storm
And then my day was made even happier, because by the time I had finished the last chapter, there was a new one up, yay :)
Author's Response:
Yea! So glad the chapters brighten your day!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications
Oh how wonderful, I went to bed with the sulks coz Bellamy had just spoke to Edward, and when I woke up there was another chapter,
Made me a very happy person. Sending love to ya, for a wonderful story.
Author's Response:
Glad you like the chapters! Thank you for always reviewing!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications
looking foward to the next chapters
Author's Response:
Next chapters coming up!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications
just more please
Author's Response:
More coming up!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications
Ooooohhhh......this is getting goooooooddd ;-)
Author's Response:
Love getting updates from you and your opinions! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications
Thank you for the two chapters today. Hope to read another chapter Monday? if not maybe Tuesday? PLEASEEEEEEE .
Author's Response:
Yep, updates for every day - at least till late August! Then we may hav to go to two a week!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications
Nice update. Like this Jacob and how how he is supporting Edward.
Author's Response:
Glad you liked the update!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications
We understand!!! You are too good to us with your updates as it is :-) HHH is just so good it's hard to wait.....Bella desires to contact Edward, maybe Mason can help them communicate via telepathy???? I will be hoping and checking for an early update tommorow....tehe
Author's Response:
No, no telepathy!
Thanks for always updating!
Date: 08 Aug 2011 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications
much love foryou:)thanks for updates
Author's Response:
So glad you love the story!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 87 Demands
Ok...you've done it...my nails are pretty much non-existent. Errrr....I need another chapter...lol...this is killing me!!
Author's Response:
I don't want to be responsible for you loosing your nails!
You have been so amazing with the reviews - here is another chapter for you!
That will make 2 chapters a day two days in a row!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 87 Demands
So glad that Sam is finally coming aroung....he's actually helping in the effort to find Bella to save her and her son. Keep the chapters coming ;-)
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying the chapters! Watch out for Sam, though!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 87 Demands
i knew it!!! victoria wants to live like the cullens i knew she would ask for money but i bet she still tries to harm bella. i just hope poor mason can hold on a little longer! great chapter!!
Author's Response:
Yep, Masen and Victoria are the wild cards! Wonder what Masen can do to help!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 87 Demands
Alittle relief, but not enough. Be waiting here for the next update.
Author's Response:
Glad you felt a little relief! Roller coaster is coming to the cork screw!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 87 Demands
OMG!! I was literally in tears when edward
Was describing how he would end his life W/
Bella!! I'm sooo on edge right now! LOL!
I'm a lil heart broken about the twins.. but I
Won't give up hope on that or bella living through
This! =0) thank u so much for writing this story.
CANT WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
Author's Response:
I really loved how drippingly sweet and sentimental edward was about that, too! I cried as well!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 87 Demands
Thank you for another update, I am enjoying the ride :) I am hoping Mason can somehow contact his dad...maybe if Edward is closer??
LOVE IT!!!!
Author's Response:
Love it that you think Masen can help!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair
this chapter was good the last 2 dragged a bit.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the criticism, I really do appreciate knowing! Hope you enjoyed this chaper!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair
I can't stop reading this story and its almost one am. Please continue to update as often as you have in the past.
Author's Response:
Sounds like you are really enjoying the story, I'm so glad! Should be an update everyday, two sometimes when the readers go nuts over it!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair
well im excited to see what happens next !
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying the story! Thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2011 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair
oh my word i bet bella is terrified but os doing great at keeping calm and tlaking to mason!!
Author's Response:
She does seem to be keeping her head about her, isn't she! Edward is a little more frazzled!
Date: 07 Aug 2011 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair
Thank you so much for posting a new chapter!
I love the story!! Please don't kill off bella!
Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
Author's Response:
It's definately a bad situation, rogue vampires with a human captive! We just have to hope!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair
damn it...i know you have more...give me more!
Author's Response:
Patience has its virtues and rewards . . .
Date: 06 Aug 2011 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair
glad to get more pov!! glad Bella is staying strong and thinking on her toes!!!! I feel so bad for Edward, I want to see him get it together and be pissed!!!!!! lol.........ty for the 2 day update.......will will watchingfor the next!!!!!! haha
Author's Response:
Bella is so thinking on her toes - Edward just needs a minute, he always blames himself!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 85 Queries
more more more more more more more more more more more more please????????????????????????????????????????/
Author's Response:
You are too cute! Soooo glad you love the story!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 85 Queries
hopefully sam is comming around after the talk with carlisle and man victoria is a sick and crafty vamp.!
Author's Response:
Unfortunately she is REALLY crafty! Sam, well, he has a lot to learn!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 10:42 AM Title: Chapter 85 Queries
Hoping this works, (can't seem to review on my I pad) loving your story and avidly reading every chapter, just wanted to send some love your way :)
Author's Response:
Thank y ou thank you thank you! I really appreciate hearing from you!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 85 Queries
Well I got up at 12:30 my time to check for a chapter, and I was elated to find one!! Though I am even more worried than I was before, they got past them :( Come On Mason you can do it!! I'll be stalking the coffee shop waiting for your next update! LOVE THIS!! You deserve some awards, for this story, like Best Bella, Best Edward, Best every single one of the characters even Victoria...lol
As always Thank You for your writing!!!!!
Author's Response:
Yep, they got past them! Now there is indeed a problem!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 85 Queries
Well now that Sam knows more about Edward having 2 medical degrees and that he was helping make sure that his wife Emily was all right, maybe he will begin to come around and start being nicer to Edward and his family. Hope baby Mason and Bella will come out of this okay.....Keep the chapters coming!!!!
Author's Response:
More coming up!
Date: 06 Aug 2011 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 85 Queries
well im excited to see whats instore for everyone and what happens when bella is saved!
Author's Response:
Glad youre still with me!
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 85 Queries
STILL WITH YOU...JUST ANXIOUS AS HELL!!!!!
Author's Response:
The roller coaster is just getting going! Raise your hands . . .
Date: 05 Aug 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 84 Frantic
sam is such a duche ! i hope that he gets his head out of his ass soon !
Author's Response:
Ha! It doesn't sem likely! Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 84 Frantic
Oh yea!! loving every minute...
Author's Response:
Glad you love roller coasters, this one is bumpy for awhile!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 84 Frantic
i cant believe alice cant see anything
Author's Response:
She is getting snippets -like the Volvo Bella is in and that she is with Riley aned Victoria!
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 84 Frantic
CRAP!!!! Im holding on, but I want to see Vic NOW!!!!
Loves <3
Author's Response:
Keep holding on, the rollercoaster is just starting down the first hill . . .
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 84 Frantic
LOVE it!!! I want Edward to do horrible things to Victoria!!! I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next update!! I was even up at 3am my time checking to see if you had posted this chapter yet, that's how much I just love this story!!!! IT IS THE BEST ONE ON THIS SITE BY FAR!!!!!!!
Keep up the awesome writing!!!
Author's Response:
You make my DAY!
The bumpy ride continues, hold on tight . . .
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2011 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 84 Frantic
oh gosh poor edward! hopefully they cant keep him together long enough to find bella! cant wait for more!!
Author's Response:
He really is about to loose it, he knows that her chances of staying alive past the first hour are slim and none!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 84 Frantic
please can you just pm the next chapter? I'm DYING here!
Author's Response:
You sound so much like me when I read a story, I can not STAND to wait!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 83 Taken
I knew it ! I knew Victoria was going to get Bella while in town. Nail-biting chapters coming up, right?
Author's Response:
Yep, the rollercoaster is coming to the top of the first hill!
Date: 05 Aug 2011 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Author's Response:
Hope you continue to read, get to chapter 9 and you'll be hooked!
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2011 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 83 Taken
ohh noo!!! ok let me start with the last chapter that i did not review bc i was in a hurry to continue on...great one as ususal!!! and loved sexy time with edward and bella at least now as he drinks her milk he moves in her so she also gets pleasure lol and emily is really setting sam straight at least he seems to try to be polite even though it is killing him! now esme or alice should have stayed with bella in that dressing room hopefullythe cullens see the car and can rescue her quickly before victoria can hurt her and maybe masons power could help in some way..?? cant wait for more!!!!!
Author's Response:
Masen is very important in this, and they will look everywhere they can think of for her!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 83 Taken
OH MY GOD...you're killing me with the cliffy....oh this is getting nail-biting good!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying the story!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 83 Taken
i hope bella will be ok because victoria is a crazy bitch
Author's Response:
Cross your fingers, we can only hope!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 83 Taken
You are cruel beyond belief!!Arghhh! Update ASAP if you care for your readers at all! heehee!
Author's Response:
Sorry! I warned you it was going to be a bumpy ride!
Date: 04 Aug 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 83 Taken
LOL...not sure I wanted this update...eeek, well I guess it's all up to Mason now!
Author's Response:
See, now with the update the tensiion is worse! I have to drive to Florida for my daughters graduation from college - University of Florida, tomorrow! i will update really early tomorrow, though - I won't leave you hanging more than a day! (though the update really won;t still your fears any . . .)
And the roller coaster is approaching the tall hill, starting up it . . .
Author's Response:
See, now with the update the tensiion is worse! I have to drive to Florida for my daughters graduation from college - University of Florida, tomorrow! i will update really early tomorrow, though - I won't leave you hanging more than a day! (though the update really won;t still your fears any . . .)
And the roller coaster is approaching the tall hill, starting up it . . .