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Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 104 Details

Poor little guy......Mason had to wait all day for his turn to nurse 'cause daddy had mommy occupied all day..poor thing :-)  Too funny!!



Author's Response:

Your right!  i never thought about the baby waiting, of course his aunts were feeding and playing with him!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 104 Details

Masen is such a cutie...



Author's Response:

He is going to be a really sweet, mischevious little boy!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 104 Details

cute chapter looking foward to the next one 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 104 Details

Awwww....Thank you for the update!! I love it!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing, glad you love it!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 104 Details

Awwwwwww such a sweet moment, and a cub on the way for Emily, I wonder weather she will have a litter, (triplets maybe, that should teach Sam some paitents) as per :)

Author's Response:

Ha!  I didn't think of calling Emily's baby a cub - I think I called it puppies but cub is perfect and talking about a litter makes it even better!  I need to use that!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 104 Details

Oh, I thought of the perfect saying for Edwards arm being healed...what for it....

'Milk, it does a body good'...lol I guess a mothers milk is as awesome as they day it is!!!

Yes they need a new treaty and to still kick Sams ass...HARD!!!

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!



Author's Response:

Oh my gosh, I remember the milk a body good ad campaign@!  Too funny!

Sam really does need his ass kicked, problem is that the vampires would finish him!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

looking foward to the next chaper



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2011 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

Oh crap...what is Bella gonna do...did Renee hear about the kidnapping some other way...Can't wait to see how Renee reacts to everything...

I hope they have another baby...that would be awesome...I think Edward might have some reservations but he usually can't deny Bella anything...



Author's Response:

True, he's such a pushover whee she is concerned!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

Oh! yes as long as there is lots of pratice to make sure they do it right...



Author's Response:

ROFLMAO!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

I think Edward is very much willing to have another baby with Bella ;-). I think he would give her anything she wanted.  Are they going to tell Renee about her new grandson?  Can't wait till the next chapter :-)



Author's Response:

Guess they will have to think of something to tell Renee!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

glad edward and bella had some time to reconnect! and i bet edward will be willing to let her have another baby! yay! now renee...hmmm not sure what will happen there!



Author's Response:

Renee is going to be an interesting problem - one we will have to endure!  lol

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

EXCELLENT.....SHE PROBABLY WILL BE PREGNANT AFTER THAT SEZ-A-THON THETY JUST HAD!!!  HAS BELLA FORGOT VAMP SPERM, BREASTFEEDING STOPPING THAT???  AND RENEE....OH BOY!!!



Author's Response:

I don't know, Masen is only a little over three weeks old, after all!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

Well you can't bet against Alice and she did see 2. Brill as per:)

Author's Response:

True, Alice did see twins as one outcome!

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

Nice update.  Looking forward to Edward and Bella having a little baby girl.  A twin would be nice.

 



Author's Response:

A little girl would be nice, wouldn't it!  (NOT named Renesmee!)

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

Yes, Yes another baby !  Alice had seen Bella with more than one child.



Author's Response:

Alice saw twins, i guess I need to bet on her . . .

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 103 Reunions

Hmmm....forgot about Renee, good thing you didn't...lol!!  Thank you for the update!!!!!  Can we plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz have one more cause it's Sunday???????????:))))))))



Author's Response:

I sent you a teaser!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 34 Yellowstone

Your descriptions of Yellowstone made me want to visit there myself.  I loved the restaurant scene when Bella ordered Elk for everyone.  Well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I have only written about places I have been (Other than isle Esme, of course) and I love it that you enjoyed it!  I thought the elk bolting was really funny!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings

Victoria hasn't been accounted for yet, but Edward would probably have recognized her scent.  I am confused about Jessica and the lasceration on her neck.  Did she die from the crash or the mysterious vampire?  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

All is revealed soon - Jessica was drained, though, just so you know!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 8:17 AM Title: Chapter 30 Past

I loved their time in the grocery store, especially what he said about the box of cereal, and telling Angela about his fresh food diet.  TOO FUNNY!



Author's Response:

I used to tell my kids that they would be better off eating the box!  lol

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

Ooh how about anger management. You would have to come up with something different about it. But then you always seem to do that.
Fab as per :)

Author's Response:

It was REALLY hard coming up with just the right punishment for Sam!  Hope you guys like what I came up with!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 29 Mending

I liked how they made new memories in the spot where Edward had caused them both so much pain.



Author's Response:

Edward just needed to feel like there was something he could do to 'fix' what he had done!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 27 Flight

I am really enjoying this story. Thank you for sharing it with us.



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying it!  Charlie is really fun to write!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter

Charlie's actions are making a little more sense now.  He doesn't want Bella to end up like him and that is preventing him from seeing how much Bella and Edward need each other.   Hopefully he comes to his senses.



Author's Response:

He will come to his senses, it will just take a little persuasion!

Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 71 Calling Sam

I had a little deja vu in this chapter. Didn't Bella & Edward tell Charlie about Dartmouth back in Chapter 58?



Author's Response:

Wow, you are absolutely right!  What a great memory you have!  I am going to go in tomorrow and change one of the chapters, probably 71!  Thanks for telling me!  Glad you are still reading!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 24 Mom

I really liked Phil and Renee's characters in this chapter, especially Phil's conversation with Edward.  Nicely done!



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Writing them is kind of fun!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday

Charlie obviously missed the part of the wedding ceremony about giving his daughter away.  I loved the birthday party and the letter opener was funny.



Author's Response:

Good point, he didn't listen or take heart when he gave her to Edward, did he!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)

I hope the party goes well, but I have a feeling that Charlie may cause an argument.  Edward seems to be feeling the tension.  I liked Renee and Phil's reaction to Bella's new life. 



Author's Response:

Did you like the part about the sisters asking how Edward was in bed?

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises

I want to see Bella tear a strip off Charlie.  I hope she finds out soon what he is up to.  Carlisle's reaction to Charlie's plans was great!



Author's Response:

Carlisl is so loving and supportive, but so is Charlie in his own way.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie

I can't believe Charlie!  Edward should tell Bella what Charlie is trying to do.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Charlie is just acting like a stubborn overprotective somewhat deluded father of an only child!  he needs to get a grip for sure!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2011 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions

I really enjoyed this chapter.  I liked that Bella was gracious about the money, and that Edward finally told her about his time apart from her.  Awesome story!



Author's Response:

I'm so excited to have a new reader!  Glad you enjoyed the chapter!  If you've gotten to this point, I hope you continue to read, I'm told it getts better and better.  it is my first story, and i guess i do improve!  lol

Thanks again for reviewing!  my favorite part of posting chapters is reading what prople think about them and their reactions!  I love it!

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

I don't want anything to happen to Emily, but Sam's punishment should

be Emily becoming a vampire so she can live...

Pat



Author's Response:

Wow, then he would love and hate her at the same time!  lol

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

Edward is the best!!!!!!!!

Emily will die unless she is changed...so Sam begs them to change her!!!!  That would be an interesting twist and forge a strong bond :))

Another update today???  It's a Saturday :P



Author's Response:

Really interesting thought but with LOTS of concequences!  lol

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

I think that because the attack was against Edward that Jake should allow him to choose Sam's fate. Of course we know that Edward would never choose death for him. I want Emily to live... and have Sam know what he could have lost...



Author's Response:

Good points, thanks for the review!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

SAM....BAN HIM FROM EVER CHANGING TO WOLF FORM!!! TWICE NOW HE HAS NEARLY KILLED EMILY...IF SHE SURVIVES THIS THAT IS.  WHAT IF SHE DOESN'T AND SAM ASKS CARLISLE TO CHANGE HER TO SAVE HER!!! THE IRONY..SAM WITH A VAMPIRE!!  WILL BELLA'S CHANGE BE SOON..OR WILL THERE  BE MORE BABIES???



Author's Response:

Good idea about Sam.  Do you REALLY want to know in advance about the other babies?

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

poor emily because of sa,ms hatred and not trustin in her she is now very hurt.  hope she pulls through. and i knew edward would accept an apology if sam really ment it. thats the type of man he is in this story. but what to do with sam hmm i have no idea cant wait to see what you come p with!!



Author's Response:

A fitting punishment for Sam is a REAL challenge!  lol

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

Nice to see Sam finally accepting that the Cullens are different and that he should give them a chance and stop with the hatred.  I think that he is suffering and will continue to suffer for all a long time for what he did to Emily, and that may be punishment enough.

Hope Emily gets well.



Author's Response:

Good thought, I;m not sure I trust him to remain sorry without further punishment, other than Emily though . . .

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 102 Consequences

everybody deserve a second chance



Author's Response:

Well said.  i agree with you . . . but i also agree with concequences!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 101 Sam

WELL, JAKE AND BREE, NEVER THOUGHT THAT ONE!!!  CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS AT THE MEETING!!!! I GUESS BREE WILL KNOIW ABOUT VAMPOS AND WOLVES NOW, AND WITH JAKE SET UP BLACK/SWAN RACING, ALL WILL BE WELL....WON'T IT??



Author's Response:

Black Swan Racing will live!  Let's just hope that Emily does!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 101 Sam

Love it!! Naughty TWCS.....



Author's Response:

Really annoying that I couldn't update like I wanted to!  Sorry again about that!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 101 Sam

i  hate that your TWCS was down i was wanderin if you were ok since we usually get updates in the moring....good chapter bella seems to be a natural at fitting in with the cullens and the stories they have to tell...and sam poor emily sam is just being an ass and i cant believe he is still acting like that....



Author's Response:

Sam is just going to keep geting himself into trouble!  thanks for reviewing, sorry about not updating this morning!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 101 Sam

looking foward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks for leaving me a message!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Aug 2011 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 101 Sam

Good  idea about Sam's punishment being tied to Bella's change.  Surprised over Jacob's inprinting on Bree.



Author's Response:

The punishment will surprise youin the end, and Jacob and Bree just seemed natural!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2011 2:39 AM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

im glad thtat they both are alright and happy!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

I feel for Emily, but Sam's ignorance is going to be his downfall.  Jacob's got a huge decision to make, wow.  

Love Emmett...his mouth gets him in sooo much trouble but he's very honest, but I would be a beet red as Bella was after his little comment, LMAO!!!

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

Great to see Edward good again. Sam was wrong. However, if he repents and admit he was wrong, he should get a second chance to try to make good on his life with Emily.

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

SAM.....MAYBE KICKING HIM OUT OF THE PACK, GIVING THE ALFA ORDER FOR HIM NOT TO PHASE??? SUE WILL HAVE TO "TESTIFY" TO THE CLUNCIL TO WHAT SHE OBSERVED, SO ITS NOT ALL JAKES DECISION. GLAD ALL IS WELL WITH EDWARDS ARM AND BELLA'S  HOOHAH!! CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR SOME OF MASEN'S ANTICS!! AND BELLA'S CHANGE AND IF THERE WILL BE MORE BABIES BEFORE HER CHANGE!   LOVIN IT!!!!!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

yay! what a good chapter, like always! and wow mason has grown! not sure what to do about sam he was just soo wrong.... ready for bella to verbally or physically beat tanya down!!!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

In the name of compassion he obviously can't die (can he) he could be ordered to be a guard dog to the cullens for the next couple of years, hummm. Not be allowed to phase anymore.. Nope I have no idea what your gonna cook up next

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

hum was it Masen that did the healing or the mothers milk  interesting

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

Edward and Bella are SO cute!!!!!!!   Poor Jake having to make that choice, and poor Emily :( Sam deserves some kind of wake up call, Like he could accidently hurt Emily and Edward saves her.  Thank you for the update, can't wait for more!!!!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 100 Morning

Poor Emily.......I feel bad for her, but Sam did break the treaty.  Wonder what Jacob's going to do with him?  Glad to see both Eddie and Belly are doing fine ;-)

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

I agree its was the venom for Bella and the breast milk for Edward.

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2011 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

Great update.  I love it that Edward's arm has healed nicely and that Bella is good to.  Until tomorrow.

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

Oooh ain't they lucky, all healed up, so the shag festival can resume, but then they wouldn't be the same with out it. So with the not so subtle hints will there be another baby???? Your still holding on to a resolution about Sam.
Oh and miracle healing....... That's cotta all be down to mumma... :)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

I THINK IT WAS BELLAS MILK THAT HEALED EDWARD AND EDWARDS SEMEN THAT HEALED BELLA, OBVIOUSLY. PERFECT REASONING.  GREAT CHAPTER!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

I think.......Bella will get pregnant with those twins Alice saw!!   I am SO glad Edward's arm healed!!! I bet the venom did heal Bella :)  Thank you for the update!!!   Looking forward to more! Maybe another one if you have one today?? :))))

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

i knew it!! i knew bellas milk or her fluids would heal him! so glad and wow the venom healing her as welll and her not changing...clever....but could she get pregnant from him comming inside of her when he dranl her milk? i know that technically you arent suppossed to get pregnant when breastfeeing but it has been known to happen....

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

It was the milk from her breasts that healed him. He hadnt fed from her in a few days since she was taken. Of course it was the milk.

Her body...that was all the venom. She is soooo ready to be changed.

Oh, and she is gonna get preggers REAL QUICK!!!!

I love that they are soo comfortable with each other. I LOVE THEM AND YOU!!!

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

I have a feeling it has to do with Bella's milk for the repair of Edward's arm, just like his, um, fluids *cough* helped heal her.  I can't wait to see what happens in the future...more kids or will she finally become one of them.  Keep up the good work!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 99 Restored

well lets get back to some lovin! lookingfoward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

Nice update. I think that since Edward and Masen understand each other.  He should explain it to his son and let him help in the decision making.

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2011 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

LOL...circumcise - cleanliness issues...

I loved Jasper's reaction - I would have never expected that out of him - lmao.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

I think little Mason is going to want to like his daddy when it comes to him being Circumcised.  Poor thing :-

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

Have to say don't know so much what the big deal about it is. It's not that common in the uk, just if your Jewish or if it won't retract properly. My hubs ended up getting it done in his thirtys for that reason, but neither of my two sons have had it done, the only advice we were ever given when it came to the boys, was as tiny babes we should make sure it gets retracted when you clean them and then they should have no problems, so my vote is don't bother.

As per normal great chapter, still wondering what's gonna happen to Sam, kinda hoping that the tribe will deal with him, saves the cullers from petty retribution on a stupid mutt. :D

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

NO to the circumcision, not necessary, painful and like the appendix even if there seems to be no reason for it to be there, evolution has left it there for some reason, so leave well enough alone.

 

 

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

Very funny....lol!!! I think......they should, so Jake will have to live with his claw being used...hehe!!!  Thank you!!!! for the update!!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

I say to circumsise..so that he looks like his Daddy. Also, do it while he is little...

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

i think they should ask mason. he might want to look just like his daddy in that way. emmett is always a trip he keeps me laughin! good idea with the werewolf claw. instead of edward biting it....now wonder if the topic of mroe kids will come up?

Reviewer: redbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

  I think Masen should be circumcised. I really do think Masen will be the key to healing Edward's burn. I thought the part where Rosalie teased Jacob   if he wanted color and polish with his pedicure was so funny:) This Rose I like. The story just gets better and I can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

OMG...that was...interesting. I never thought about circumcision that way. But my opinion is YES, he needs it. I dont care what the books say. It is just better. Only thing is...he is part vampire. When they get cut or whatever, it usually grows back. This should be interesting.

Poor Emily...I dont know what she is gonna do. Sam is an ass and just needs to go the F*** home!

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

The pros and cons are interesting - Less sensitivity but convenient clenliness ot increased sensitivity with a need to keep things clean - tough choice!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

cute chapter loved the whole part of the curcumsision

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2011 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 98 Skin or no Skin?

NO CIRC., MASEN IS MORE ADVANCED THAN MOST INFANTS, PROVN FACT. IT WILL HURT HIM, AS LONG AS ITS NOT MEDICALLY NECESSARY, THEN NO!!!! I WANT AND HOPE EDWARDS ARM/HAND HEALS!!! SOMETHING THEY ARE NOT THINKING OF HAS GOT TO FIX IT!! FEEDING MORE?? A CARNIVORE, MOUNTAIN LION MAYBE???  

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

so will Masen help with Edward's arm. He cannot stay that way he prefect and we love them that way. When will we hear from the wicked bitch of the north (Tanya)? I can only believe she will be acting as crazy as ever!! By the way this story is sooooo good! Keep writing we will keep reading



Author's Response:

We do need to keep Edward perfect, don't we!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

Still here...still enjoying.



Author's Response:

So glad to hear from you!  Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: chocolate-emeralds Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 39 Decisions

I'm really enjoying your story. I can't wait to read what happens with Victoria (& Tanya too ... I think I saw her name on the Story Summary). 

Just a little constructive criticism, there seem to be a lot of inconsistencies and continuity issues in your story. I remember Chapter 1 Harry was alive, then a couple chapters later you mentioned that he died months before Billy did. Then in the chapter where Charlie first went fishing with the boys they had Emmett's Jeep and it was mentioned here that it's still in Forks. 

Don't hate me, I'm just trying to help.

Other than that, I love your story and can't wait to read what happens next. :)



Author's Response:

Oh, I don't hate  you at all!  i appreciate it!  I fixed the Harry thing, now I just have to find where the jeep is mentioned. . .

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

yes i'm very interesred in seeing where we go with his arm too!!!!  I too had been wondering about circumcission thanks for the wonderrul explanation....



Author's Response:

More coming up about the circumcision!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

I just found this story last week and can't stop reading.  A thought ran through my mind - I hope Jake imprints on Bree - that would be a nice twist - especially since she was so good to Bella, and obviously knows that something strange with Victoria.  I would say poor Sam, apparently he was raised with hatred in his soul, but he does need to chill out a bit!



Author's Response:

Hey, great to hear from you!  I love to read the ideas that readers have, and you have some insight on Bree 0 just wit!

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

Oh I can't wait till Emily puts Sam in his place. He so has it coming!



Author's Response:

Yes, what to do with Sam is going to be a problem!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

ohm i hope edwards arm heals! and he doesnt loose it. and that sam he is just a lost cause. he is lucky edward is so caring and understanding and maybe edward wont kill him,....



Author's Response:

Edward needs to do what the doctor tells him.  He needs that arm!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

Awww. Sweet bonding time with the babe.
What's gonna happen to Sam, presume Emily will throw a fit at him, hoping so anyway. As per :)

Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  Sam will have to be punished, though, whether it's Emily or the tribe, or the vampires!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  Sam will have to be punished, though, whether it's Emily or the tribe, or the vampires!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

Great chapter... as always... Um I was just wondering if maybe Bella and Edward would ask Rosalie to be Mason's Godmother.. maybe to make her feel special. Just curious...;)



Author's Response:

I love reviews!  I had not even thought of the godmother thing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

looking foward to the next chapter i really dont like sam right now ! 



Author's Response:

Yes, Sam needs to be punished!  badly!  thank you for leaving a comment!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

OK, Im not too worried about hi sarm. I have a feeling that Masons cells will take care of him!!!

As for Sam, I am getting kinda tired of him. I think Emily should leave his ass if not for a little while to show him what a HUGE ASS is really is. JS!!

What I really want is to see how Tanya comes into play here. We all know she lusts after Edward. But now he is married and will kill anyone that gets in his way or even trys to harm his family. This should be interesting!!

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!

Loves <3



Author's Response:

Tanya will be a little while coming.  Lots to do first!

(besides, IF Bella gets pregnant again, Tanya while she is huge would be more fun!)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 97 Burned

Loved it of course!!!  Gosh I hope Edward's arm heals!!!  Thank you for the update!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  I love hearing from you!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2011 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

I hope Dr C's treatment is going to help his arm...Gosh, they have been through so much!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

That Mason was soooooo cute pushing his daddy out of the way while he nursed ;-)  I remember my daughter hanging on to me for dear life 18 yrs ago when she thought her dad was going to steal me away along with her dinner.......too funny :-)

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

Yay back from camping and only 2 updates, (feel free to do extras now ;)
So little mace is here now, and feeding from mummy so sweet. If there bringing Edward take away, can't they get mace some and bottle that, then he can be a veggi too.
Brilliant as usual :)

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

i hope the treatment helps his arm...what about bellas blood from the birth? can he not feed from it? and what is going to happen to sam?

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

Great udpate.  I think that Masen is a beautiful and awesome child.  And, yes, I think that Carlisle's treatment would work wonders to heal, repair, and strengthen Edward's arm.

Update soon.

 

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

i think will be a great help.and masen is a clever boy:)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

great idea...with the stem cell treatment!!! i hope it works!!! masen seems beautiful, like his parents and something tells me bella will want more children..twins maybe??? edward will have a heart attack!!  sam....hmmmm, what to do???   great story....great update, what are our chances for two today???? greedy arent we!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

looking foward to what happens next 

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Aug 2011 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 96 Breastfed

Love it!!! Mason is adorable!! Am worried about Edward,,,,hopefully what Carlisle is doing will help!!  Thank you for the update!!!  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

cute chatper ! looking foward to the next chapter 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

He seens cute, pity they all are not as good as him. It is sad to think he will grow super fast, human babies grow fast enough.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

Aaawwww........so sweet ;-)  Can't wait till this little is getting around on his own.  Hope he'll have a couple of sibblings to play with in the future :-)

Reviewer: redbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

   Masen is so sweet and I can't wait to see what happens as he grows. Love this story. I hope it is a very long one:)



Author's Response:

It is a very long one, and reviews only serve to encourage me!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

Big smile on my face.  I already love Baby Masen.  Sounds like Charlie didn't want to leave Bella's side because he feared that Edward would still change Bella. Wondering what's going to happen to Sam.



Author's Response:

You know, I actually hadn't thought of that as being a reason that charlie didn't want to leave bella's side!  I love your ideas!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 7 Natural

Very enjoyable



Author's Response:

So glad you're enjoying the story, and thank you so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2011 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 95 Masen Charles Carlisle Cullen

awwww so sweet:)



Author's Response:

thank you, and thanks again for reviewing!

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