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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 113 Council

im glad taht he did what he did

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 112 Playing Nice

Oh this is going to be interesting...glad Charlie spoke up on Bella's behalf...I can't wait to see the "more children" senario!!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks

The trek across the country might be a little bit more controled than if say Emmett was there.



Author's Response:

Absolutely - but emmet is going to join them!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings

Man is Victoria back?? I hope not but if she is that just means that The Cullen's will have to get rid of her.



Author's Response:

Could be . . .

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 112 Playing Nice

looking foward to the next chatper

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 31 Blood

Ummmmmm..... Is Edward sleeping??????



Author's Response:

Yes!  Excellent guess!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 112 Playing Nice

Yay. A choppy today, and it's my 40th birthday, so I'm claiming it as a birthday present.
I keep thinking renee will come up with the ideas of fairys or lepracorns or some weird Druid type things, or even wizards. Lol
Anyways fab as per normal extra gold stars *********** ******************

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

Monday And Friday or Wednesday and Friday???????  I understand it takes awhile to write that much!!!! I'm kinda shocked you'll still give us 2 a week, that's abit to write every week!!!  LOVE IT!!!! Thank you for the update!!!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

I'm really going to miss your aily updates.  I don't have a preference for which days.  I'll just keep reading your story no matter which days you choose to update.

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

I honestly think Renee could handle the truth, my only concern is the Volturi.  Renee "sees" more than anhyone truly realizes, even Edward.  So it will be interesting to see how this pans out.  Keep up the good work, you know how much I LOVE this story!!!  I'm sorry to lose the daily updates, but being a writer myself I know how crazy RL can get...as far as the days..Sun, Wed and Fri should be good (if that works with your schedule of course!)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the encouragement!  It really does matter!

renee can't know, it breaks volturi law, but she is sure to come up with something . . .  and soon!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 30 Past

Well I guess that might end their fun for a while huh?? Sue took the information that she got better than I thought that she would have.



Author's Response:

Sue is actually coming around , wait and see!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 29 Mending

I didn't think that they would actually do that but he was trying to be convincing wasn't he? I really thought that Charlie was going to do something to Edward when he saw Bella I am glad that he didn't. And to answer your question from where I am from I am from Illinois.



Author's Response:

I thought it was important to make a new memory there!

 

I have trabeled through illinois to get to Milwaukee for Harley rallies, and i have stayed in Chicago near the Pier, but I think lower illinois is the prettiest!  Are you from the city or rural?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 28 Meadow

Well there is the old Edward making an appearance! I wondered if he was going to....



Author's Response:

The vampire in him just comes out and he feels the need to claim her!  Vampire style, of course (or is that 17 year old boy style?)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 27 Flight

two peas in a pod those two!



Author's Response:

I love that expression!  Where are you from?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Aug 2011 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting

That is good that Edward and Charlie seem to have reached an understanding and that they are now getting along.



Author's Response:

Yes, I think Edward alays wanted to get along with Charlie, he just wasn't able to have his trust.

Reviewer: forever1901 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

I think Friday's are good as well as Tuesday and Wednesday. Three a week should be okay



Author's Response:

thanks for giving me an opinion!  if nobody insisted that they wee waiting for chapters and commented, I would have no reason to post chapters! 

Reviewer: GethrenNZ Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 104 Details

enjoying this story :) hope they have more babies :) masen is too cute



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  Glad you like Masen, he is such a doll!

I will kep writing as long as i know you guys want more!  Nice to hear from someone new!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

im looking foward to the tribe meeting... keep it comming



Author's Response:

No problem.  Jacob's tribe, coming up!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter

Well hopefully Charlie is going to back down when it comes to Edward.



Author's Response:

Oh, I think Edward will see to that!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 24 Mom

Well I guess it is good that Renee and Phil are on their side!



Author's Response:

It's nice that they seem to be getting some support from her family!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

OK, that kinds sucks. You want me to choose days...Friday def!! Ill let yiou choose the other day. Id like to have one to keep me going thru the weekend and Friday is the perfect day!!

As for Renee...well i think they should go with they reunited before the accident and it was just God's will that kept the baby. You cant argue with that one, right!!!???

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!! (Ill never stop asking form more!!!)



Author's Response:

Friday is a great idea, you like it better than Saturday, obviously, so okay!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

Oh no major sad face :'(
No story every day.......
Oh well, real life dose intrude. Any days is fine by me, my phone let's me know when you have a new chappy out, so what ever is best for you. :)
As always brilliant, and renee has got to guess some mythical creature, don't know what one though.
See you at the end of the next chapter. Gold stars as always *********************

Author's Response:

Your support means more than you know!  Some days i wouldn't bother except for not wanting to disappoint and looking forward to what you guys have to say about the chapter!

Reviewer: loveLambLife Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

I'm sure Renee will figure out that something supernatural is going on. I just can't imagine her settling for some sort of far-fetched half truth.

Oh, and I think Bella and Edward should definitely have another baby. Daddyward (or Father-to-be-Ward) is just the cutest.

 

Still very much enjoy following your little tale. How about Monday, Wednesday, Friday for updates. That way you'd have the weekend to write. But honestly, just do whatever fits your schedule, your readers will be with you anyway :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the advice, and for your opinion!  I love that you like the story!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 111 Delusions

though it does suck about not gettin an update we understand RL so twice a week is reat! hmm renee is noticing alot so i am looking forward to seeing how that plays out!



Author's Response:

Thanks for understanding about RL!  I HATE it, I would rather just sit and write!

Renee is a trip, she is going to be fun!

Reviewer: redbug Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

Keep going with the story. I just can't wait for new chapters.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I enjoy writing it, and I'm glad someone thinks it worth reading!  lol

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife

Wow!!! That was kinna funny that he knew that Charlie was listening and still continued what he was doing.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday

Well I think that maybe Charlie would have had a better trip if he had brought Sue with him. It is just not sinking in with him that she isn't going anywhere without him.



Author's Response:

U'm not sure that even Sue could have helped!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

More chapters please.



Author's Response:

You're so greedy . . . I love it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2011 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)

Well it is good that Bella is enjoying her birthday. It is kinna strange that Renee and Phil are supporting of Bella and Charlie is wanting her to go home!!



Author's Response:

Charlie is just ore reserved.  remember, renee tends to go with her emotions!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises

I wonder what happened that Bella is crying? Maybe it is just because she missed Edward that much too.



Author's Response:

Edward just needs to learn about happy tears!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

Well where do we start. First to who ever had ago about the sex. Have they ever been in a relationship???? The thing I really like is it's not all ott. From sitting talking while "connected" to your hubby, to the breast feeding. That's a magical time, and a completely different experience to feeding your baby. So pooh to them, you keep doing what your doing.
As for breaking it up, that's up to you, I will read it what ever way you decide.
So Europe next, or will it be renee, or maybe the talks back in forks, or a glimpse of Jacobs and bree, or an update on Sam Emily and the litter. :)
Most of all do things the way you want them done, if folks can't deal, then they should stop reading, and if you can't say something nice don't say anything. Now if they was having ago about spelling and grammar and such (although don't ask me cause I can't do neither) then that's a different matter.
So as per normal gold stars all round ********* :)

Author's Response:

Ah!  you're SOOOOo good to me!  As to grammer, I try, I really do!  it is read over at least three times!  i was a chemistry major and hated english, should have paid more attention!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

Continue or sequel, either one for me, I am just excited that there is at least 50 chapters more!!!!!  I love this story!!!!



Author's Response:

Ahhhh!  Thank you so much!  We are about to catch up with whee I am writing, so the chapters will cease to be everyday, but change to twice a week!  SORRY!  They will continue, though!

Reviewer: twilightgirl224 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

I love it, just keep adding.
I have always wondered how the characters of these stories react to watching the Twilight movies, seeing as they have the same names and all. (I just find it funny)

Author's Response:

Glad you liked that.  they are going to be forced to watch Eclipse and Breaking dawn as wwell, I think since you like it they will talk about it a little more!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

lookig foward to the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for dropping me a line!

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

How about she just tells Renee and Phil the truth about vampires? Especially since she wants to have Renee in her and her kids life...



Author's Response:

They can;t tell Renee.  humans are not allowed to know, the Volturi will kill her.  Charlie knows only becuse of his relationship with Sue (wolf thing).

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

i would do maybe a few more chapters like maybe renee visit then start a sequel with europe. wow whatwhat fun and i am soo glad to hear atleast 50 more chapters!  im like bella i think of food when i think of traveling!



Author's Response:

Glad you're excited about more chapters!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

Umm Just keep adding them :)))) LOVED the nursing!!!!! lmao!!!!! And for those of you that don't...piss off!!!!!!   Thank you for the update!!! I hope they don't run into the voltori in Europe :( eeeek!!



Author's Response:

Really appreciate your support! Thank you!

Reviewer: Alabastdelf Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 110 Plans

I think you should add chapters.It feels more natural this way, for me anyway.



Author's Response:

You may ve right.  I just don't want to scare someone off cause there are so many chapters!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie

Wow! Charlie just hasn't gotten it yet has he? I hope that it doesn't take too long for him to get it because he might just piss Bella off before he does if it takes too long.



Author's Response:

Well, parenta are notorious for pissing teenagers off!

 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 109 Alone

loved the chatper looking foward to the next one

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions

Wow!! I thought that Bella would start getting mad about the money but she surpirsed us!!!



Author's Response:

Yes, she just has to accept it along with him! 

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2011 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire

Well I think that it won't be long before Alice comes to kidnap Bella for shopping!



Author's Response:

So true!  Oh, wait, Alice already filled her closet!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 109 Alone

Great chapter...as always.  Still can't wait to meet Tanya!!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 109 Alone

Aww sweet smexie time with E&B, I like there alone time :). As always***************

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 109 Alone

whew! after all that i would think she would get pregnant now!love needy edward as well!



Author's Response:

So glad  you love needy Edward.  I just had a fan tell me that the sex was gross and I;m kind of devistated right now!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 109 Alone

Loved it!!!! Thank you for the update!!!  btw I am in phoenix,az sp it's about 8am here :)



Author's Response:

Yea!  My brother lives in Scottsdale!

I have to say, I'm kind of upst right now.  I just had a reader tell me that the sex in HHH was gross, and Edwad nursing was disgusting.  I kind of felt bad that she had read so far to find that it disgusted her, she seemed to thing EVERy chapter had sex in it.  There are less than 20 percent of chapters with sex in them overall.  I'm just, i don't know, sad - pissey - hurt - flabergasterm cas eveyone else wants more sexy times, not less!  If they want less, don't read a story with this rating!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 8:44 AM Title: Chapter 60 First Christmas

Great chapter! I liked their conversation with Jacob about the legends, and also their gift exchange.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 16 Home

awwww....... they are so cute....

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex

Well I guess that we got to see a little of the old Edward shine through there didn't we? I am glad that Bella is ok.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 14 Routine

Poor Bella!!! She totally has this all wrong!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 13 Making Ourselves at Home

I am shocked that Edward is being this bold with her right now!! What a change in him already.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions

That is sweet that Charlie even though Edward isn't his favorite person of all time still knew that this was what Bella wanted so he let her go.



Author's Response:

Yep, he had to know deep down that Edward was it for her!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 11 Promises

Wow! I never thought that Jacob would stand up for Edward!!



Author's Response:

No, but he was right!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2011 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10 Ambulance

Aww... How sweet is that??? I wonder how mad Jacob is that Edward is back in her life?



Author's Response:

Eward loves him some Bella!  ;p;  So glad he found her, finally!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 108 Moms

I love your saying!!!  Great chapter, i'm glad the others are leaving, but Renee arriving.....yea....we haven't heard from the Denalis and Tanya she probably is going to be T-R-O-U-B-L-E, in the form of jealously! They are in for a BIG surprise!!! I personally can't wait.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 58 Town

Something tells me she wants a house to take Bella to.  Hopefully Jacob will phase for the first time around Victoria and not Bella.  Edward now has that to worry about.  On another note, I can't wait to see everyone's reaction to their gifts.  Good chapter. 

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 108 Moms

loved the chapter looking foward to the next one 

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 108 Moms

loved it and your right ou dont mess with moms we are mama bears! glad esme took sam down like that it proves she is able to protect her family! ohh lord the visit with renee should be fun!..love your sayin in the a/n!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 108 Moms

Love the saying, have never herd that one before :). Soooo what comes next, renee, or the treaty. I know your not gonna keep us guessing for long.
It alwas seemed such a pity that (in this case Mason ) the baby's always grew so fast, it seems to pass so quick IRL that it just seems a pity that they don't even get that time to savour a little newborn, but then the sorry would never flow the same was....
As per a fantastic little world to hide in :)

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 108 Moms

lol.......Loved Esmes reaction!!!!!!!!!! Thank you for the update!!!!!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 108 Moms

OH HOLY CRAP!!! Go Esme! Now that is what Im talking about. Can we really let her tear Sam apart??!! Please Please Please!!!

Im kinda wondering how they are gonna get preggers when she is still breastfeeding? For a human, its not really possible. Now, I get its a story and all, but still kinda curious.

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

I LOVE me some Esme!

Point of Fact - I had 5 kids in 6 years, one at a time.  The last three were in 2 and a half years.  I breastfed them all till they were at least 8 months old.  It is ENTIRELY possible to get pregnant while breast feeding - all you have to do is make one mistake, allow a supplemental bottle a day or some finger food once they are large enough and your body knows!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 9 Drag & Pull

Oh.... Edward.... I hope that Bella is ok.



Author's Response:

It gave you a start for a moment, didn't it!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 57 Showing

You are doing a good job of building up the suspense.  Victoria discovering Bella's pregnancy can't be good.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 8:41 AM Title: Chapter 56 Trees

It's scary that Victoria can get that close.  Hopefully she will get close enough for Edward to pick up her thoughts.  I suspect that Victoria will cause Jacob to Phase at some point.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 54 Tips

Charlie was a jerk!  Even if he needed to leave he should have told Bella that he needed some time to cool down. I liked that Edward was firm with him.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 52 Cinderella

This chapter was thoroughly enjoyable. I especially liked the revelation that Edward payed the child's hospital bills and helped his whole family.  Alice's prediction of the boy's future was also a nice touch.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 53 Images

I liked Edward's reaction to the image of their baby in the ultra-sound, especially when he saw that the baby looked like him.  Sweet!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 8 Leaves & Looking

That is amazing that Bella is doing so well in that sport and has kept her idenity hidden so far too.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom

My favourite parts of this chapter were when Bella helped the family to have their birthday party, and when they felt the Baby kick.  Thank you.

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2011 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters

I loved the part where the boys dressed in Hogwarts colours and stole the flag.  Your descriptions of the park made me want to go there someday.  Well done.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I was at the park a lot last year with my grandsons!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

That was a sweet change, mumma, and puppa, Cullen. I do like the sweet :). Lots og gold stars again, ****************************

Author's Response:

Well, Carlisle and Esme are mated for life and in love as well!

Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise

Bella and Edward deserve some happiness after all that they have been through and some time to revel in that happiness.  I am really enjoying this story.  It is not at all boring.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know!  It encourages me to keep writing!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 47 Investments

Great chapter!  I am really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

So glad you are enjoying it and reviewing!  Hope you continue to like it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 7 Natural

Wow! Bella is  really good at riding a motocycle! Who knew..



Author's Response:

Isn't that nuts!  She can't even walk across a flat level surface without tripping!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 6 Returning Home

Well I am kinna surprised that Bella hasn't called Charlie yet.



Author's Response:

I think she's kind of scared that if she calls he'll find out where she is and come make her come home!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

good chapter! glad jacob talked with bree and loved hearing from esme and carlisle! cant wait for more as ususal!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the Esme /Carlisle time!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 4 Planes & Plans

Oh I am sure that Charlie is just lovin Edward right now!! I hope that Edward doesn't give up and that Alice comes to help him through all of this.



Author's Response:

Charlie is super hostile, and it is understandable I suppose.  He has sen his little girl devistated when Edward left!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 Posters & Crews

I wonder what Edward is going to do if he comes back to Forks and Bella isn't there....



Author's Response:

Well . . . not to give too much away, but I think you're going to find out!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 3 Billy

Wow Charlie is going to be mad now!!!!! Billy's accident sounds like it was a vampire that wanted answers I wonder how many others think that too....



Author's Response:

You'd be surprised at how few thought that!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

I love how protective Esme can be!!!!! Bella needs to get knocked up with those twins!!!!  Thank you for the update!!!!



Author's Response:

I love that Emmett refered to it as getting knocked up!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 2 Cobwebs

Well I guess it is good that he finally came to his senses!



Author's Response:

Yes, well, as many senses as he still has!  lol

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family

I really liked the headboard scene, as well as Bella's interaction with Esme.



Author's Response:

I thought it would be fun to tease Edward about the headboard, seeing as how they all thought him so prudish and up tight!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 42 Siblings

This chapter was a lot of fun.  I liked Rosalie's POV.



Author's Response:

Rose is a bit of fun several times in this story, she kind of softens up!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward

I like the way Edward now refuses to take Bella's choices from her.  That really showed in how he handled telling her about his fears for the pregnancy and her safety.



Author's Response:

Glad you like it - this Edward is a little more willing to share decisions after having almost lost her!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

I like it when the parents get a little alone time. But I totally think that Esme should be allowed to get her hands on Sam. Even if she doesnt get to kill him, she could still have a little fun!!! Mama Bear deserves it, dontcha ya think??!! =)

I want to see what happens when Eleazar shows. That should be interesting. I guess with the girls on vaca that no Tanya trouble as of yet. Damn...I was hoping that little Mason could have some fun with her head!!! That would be priceless.

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!



Author's Response:

I;m kind of scred to write Elesar, I just am not sure of his take - - - but I will figure it out!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 107 Patients & Patience

looking foward ot he next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review - hope you liked the Esme/Carlisle time!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella

I wonder what Charlie is going to do about the cliffdiving and the bikes!!



Author's Response:

I am so excited to have a new reader reviewing!  yea!

This is my first story, and I promise my writing getts better with the chapters! 

PLEASE let me know wht you think after chapter 9, though I would love to converse back and forth with  you at every opportunity!  I love hering what people ae thinking when they read each new piece of information or happening in Bella and Edward's life in this story!

Hope you enjoy it!  LOVE your pen name!

Reviewer: mysinger Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock

I enjoyed the references to the Twilight cast in Rio.  Good chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you liked the reference, I was laughing while writing it as it happened about the time they wee actually there and i ws following it on the intenet!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 106 Realizations

looking foward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Happy you are still reading!  Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 106 Realizations

They are all adorable, and I am loving the snuggly time. I can see some fun and games coming up with renee coming. I love the fact that this story takes you up and then gives you a good plateto then higher and higher again. (bit like a good orgasum really). Oppsie did I say that out loud. :D millions of gold stars *************

Author's Response:

Wow!  that was high praise . . . don't make me blush!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 5:20 PM Title: Chapter 106 Realizations

Haha nice!! I love it!!! I think she is already pregnant!!!!

Thank you for the update!!!!!



Author's Response:

Nope, not pregnant quite yet - but it does seem like it would be hard not to be, doesn't it!

Love reading your thoughts!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 106 Realizations

loved it! and im sure the family was shocked to hear edward wantin another baby! as always cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

The idea of bella over his shoulder heading upstairs just cracks me up!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 106 Realizations

I CAN'T WAIT TO HEAR WHAT THE PLAN FOR RENEE IS. AND JACOB AND BREE , SHE SHOULD BE LEAVIN, AND ANOTHER BABY, WOW SO MUCH TO LOOK FORWARD TO!!!!!



Author's Response:

We will have some Bree and Jacob mixed in with some Sam updates and Charlie and Sue - right now, I'm just excited about an up coming trip they will be taking!

Reviewer: skerbocullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 106 Realizations

OK, Bells needs to get over this idea that she is not enough for Edward. They both need to just realize that they are more than enough for each other!!!!

Mason is just the cutest thing EVER!!! I just ADORE him soooo.

Yeah, I agree, we need to bottle that shit up and fast. I may need some along with Bells breast milk.

Loves <3

Gimme Gimme Gimme PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!



Author's Response:

I'm sayin . . . Bottle that shit NOW!  lol

Hope Renee comes along alright, would hate to have to fake some deaths!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 105 Spying?

Yay. That was a really sweet chappy, just what was needed. :)

Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I just neded a little levity and some positives!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2011 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 105 Spying?

Jake is pouring on the charm on Bree.  Happy that Edward is on board with another baby.  But wait what about Renee? She's looming over the horizon.



Author's Response:

Yes, Renee is about to be an issue!

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 11:33 PM Title: Chapter 105 Spying?

 Sweet update.  It is nice to read a fic where Edward and Jacob are friends, and he is a nice person.



Author's Response:

Well, Jacob was always a nice person, he just had some harsh influences from his tribe and his own teenage  hormones!  lol

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 105 Spying?

looking foward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

So glad you're still there and reviewing!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 105 Spying?

Love it!!!  Still worried as to why Alice didn't see Bella in her vision with the twins........



Author's Response:

Glad you're still out there - I love your reviews!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2011 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 105 Spying?

yay edward wants another baby too! hope thats where twins come into the picture!



Author's Response:

You just love those babies like I do!

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