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Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 118 Paris

Ah rodans garden, a wonderful place, and the gates of hell is one of the most amazing pieces of sculpture I have ever seen, I have been to the lover, but I need to go back as it's so huge, I loved that mason tried to feel the statue, making his own comparisons with how it feels with how his mum described it. I would hate to see b&e get on the metro I could see E going loopy with being so crowded. And it's so easy to walk everywhere.
Fantastic chapter, I wonder what is going to happen while there out. Suppose I'm just gonna have to wait and see....

Gold stars **********. And I will watch my recording of the eifel tower sparkling at night :0)

Author's Response:

High praise indeed from someone that has been thee!  i have never desired to see Paris . . . until now!  I hope the date they are going on lives up to your expectations!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 88 Complications

Jacob was amazing in getting Edward back on what was important. I wonder how Charlie is going to take all of this.



Author's Response:

I like jacob not being the enemy!

Reviewer: venure Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 118 Paris

Congratulations on your new job! Love your story, can't wait to read even more chapters ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you, and thank you for taking the time to leave me a review!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 87 Demands

Well I wonder how Victoria is going to take the news that she is going to have to wait 3 days for her money? I also wonder how long she is going to wait before she starts hurting Bella.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair

It is good that Bella knos that she can talk to Masen and that he is going to be able to hear and understand what she is saying.

Reviewer: venure Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

^^ dear ol` Renee..

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 85 Queries

Poor Bella! I wonder if they are going to find her quickly or if it is going to be a while because Victoria seems to have covered all of the bases.



Author's Response:

Yes, Victoria did a very good job on this one!

Reviewer: venure Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 86 Dispair

*sighs* how sad

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 84 Frantic

Well at least Jasper and his military training is on the case! I wonder if Sam is really just going to not go back to the Cullens or if he will do what he doesn't want to and go back. I think that the Cullens need him right now with Bella missing with Victoria and Riley.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 83 Taken

Awww...... Now she has what she wanted I just hope that they all get Bella back before she has Mason... I really can't believe that she pulled that off that easily really with that many people on the lookout for them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 82 Hungers

Well I guess that Victoria is about to make her move I just hope that the others are prepaired and that they stop her because of Bella being so close to delivering Mason.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 118 Paris

Love it!!!! Thank you for the update!!!!  Silly Mason!!!   Are we going to get to see some pissed off Edward??????????



Author's Response:

Yes Yes Yes!  patience is a virtue!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 81 New Years Weekend

It is sooo cute to see how Masen interacts with his Daddy!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 118 Paris

looking foward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you for leaving a review - glad you're still with me!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 80 Dinner & A Movie

Well I wonder how long Sam is going to fight Emily on this one??? I think it is good that The Cullens are getting along with people in Bellas life because they are going to be able to protect Charlie from all of this.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2011 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 79 Sam Arrives

I hope that Emily is enough to stop Sam from killing the Cullens.



Author's Response:

Not enough by herself, but she is really helpful!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 78 A Winter Afternoon

I guess it is good that Jake saw this so that he knows that she isn't doing this because she has to but because she can't live without Edward.



Author's Response:

You're exactly right.  Edward let him remain there because he needed to know just that.  It was king=d of over the top, but i felt it was needed!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 77 Insurance

Well it seems that the men in this story need to listen to their women and do what they say because they are usually right! LOL...



Author's Response:

Fiction mimiks reality again!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2011 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 76 Encounter

Well I think that Jake is going to want to seek vengance for his father and help keep Bella safe.



Author's Response:

I think you're right!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 75 Fireworks

I guess that Victoria has decided that she is going to make her move on Bella now.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 74 Fishing

I hope that Masosn listens to Edward about needing to not move like that when he is startled.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 73 Games

Jacob cracks me up!!! I love how Edward doesn't say exactly what he is saying and it pisses Jake off!



Author's Response:

Edward is just so old fashioned and proper!  You have to love it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 72 Sightseeing

OOOhhh... Charlie is trying to get busy with Sue in Edward and Bella's house!! Never thought that I would see that one happen.



Author's Response:

Well, Poor Charlie haas had to listen to Edward and Bella often enough! lol

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 71 Calling Sam

Well it seems that they have won over Sue a bit more and now Sam is coming out to help Jake! I wonder how that is going to go.



Author's Response:

You just never know.  Sam is REALLY full of hate for the vampires!

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

I loved it!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it, and so very thankful that you left a review to tell me so!

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 115 Renee

I LOVED Masons POV

Author's Response:

Thank you!  I LOVE writing Masen!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 70 Ingrained

I hope that they are starting to have Sue on their side because it might just help with the rest of the Pack.



Author's Response:

True, she is one of the tribal elders!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 69 Sue

Oh I like this banter with Jake and the Cullens! It is good that they can joke with each other. Something tells me that Emmett will not keep the knowlege that Carlisle told him to himself and will try to get Edward or Bella with it.



Author's Response:

Oh you know that Emmett is going to use it!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

As usual fantastic. Having actully been to Paris I can imagin restraunts there at and walking down the sein, and I can imagin them having the same view that's from my hubby's flat, and watching the tower sparkle at night. Unfortunately the only other place I have been is London. So they could go there. Or how about Prague or Moscow that would be really cool.
Hope cardboard city gets sorted as soon as possible for ya.
Gold stars, **********

Author's Response:

Really REALLY excited to know that you have been thee and still find the story somewhat realistic, well, interms of the area.  I hate things that don't at least have a fractin of reality in them!  I would love to see Paris!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 68 Genes

It is good to see that Jake and Edward are still bantering back and forth with each other. Hopefully Sue can shed some light on this for Jake.



Author's Response:

I just LOVE having Jake and Edward banter back and forth!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2011 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

Laughing over Renee's astonishment over the Cullen's wealth.  French-speaking Edward gives me tingles!



Author's Response:

Edward gives me tingles, French speaking Edward does things we just can't discuss . . . lol

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

Don't be lonely, we are all here reading and waiting and enjoying this epic story..keep it coming.



Author's Response:

New chapter propbably on Tuesday!  Thanks for hanging in there!

Reviewer: broadwayrocks Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

Love it!!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it, and thank you so much for leaving a review to tell me so!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

I love...love...love this chapter..I love that Rose is starting to ease up about Bella wanting to be like them...I love the contection between Rose and Mason...and can't wait for more babies...twins!!!



Author's Response:

Hum, don't you want them to travel a bit before she is pregnant?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 67 Jacob

Well it seems that Sam and the Cullens are going to have to work together now doesn't it?



Author's Response:

Theu REALLY do!  lol

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

Love it!!! Thank you for the update!!!!  I guess they should visit Rome, Madrid, and Australia?????   Can't wait for your next update!!! They brighten my days :)))



Author's Response:

Can probably do Rome and Madrid (well, maybe barcelona), but Australia is a different continent completely!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

Well, things seem to be going better with Renee in Paris than I thought.  I think Masen's new abilities are still going to freak her out.  And Alice's insistence of pink tinted "curtains", would that have anything to do with twin girls being conceived in Paris, hmmmm.  Lovin it all!!!!!



Author's Response:

I just thought it would be fun to have Edward sleeping in 'pink'!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

I'm so sorry to hear you're all alone.........I really enjoyed this chapter.  Little Mason is just growing up too fast. Poor Rene.....she's probably afraid she's going to miss all his 'firsts' if she's away from him too long.  Maybe he know's he's going to have some little playmates on the way soon ;-) Can't wait!!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the chapter!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

loved the chapter looking fowardrd to the next one



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it - were going top give p[aris one more chapter, romance and all!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2011 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 117 Landed

loved it! and mason is so smart! cant wait to see more of him! and to find out if bella will be pregnant again and when...and tanya...



Author's Response:

I know, I'm getting pretty excited about it all myself!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 66 Cullen Gang

Well I guess she is getting bolder in her chase for Bella.



Author's Response:

Yep!  Did you like the harleys?

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 116 Flight

Well, I want a flight like that too!!!  Bella needs to be told about once you are changed, waxing once would be it for eternity!  Can't wait for the Tanya side of the  story to see how she is portrayed!!



Author's Response:

Tanya will be along, but first we are visiting some exciting places and having adventures.  Fun before more angst . . . and there will be angst, fair warning!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 65 Bonding

Well I guess that Jake now believes what Edward and Carlisle were trying to tell him. I wonder if Victoria will be the one making a mistake because of how mad she gets.



Author's Response:

Lets hope that Victoria makes a big mistake!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2011 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 64 Enlightening Mom

It is so cute to hear Edward talk to Masen and let him know about what he needs to do to keep his mom safe.



Author's Response:

Masen is such a cutie!  So helpful . . . till the terrible two's!

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 116 Flight

Oh God...so do I...he, he



Author's Response:

I know, right!  Where do I sign up?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 63 Purring

What else did Edward expect from his wife???



Author's Response:

I think she just continues to surprise him!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 62 Plans

Well I wonder if Alice will see now that she has decided what she is going to do.



Author's Response:

Alice needs to see, hopefuly she will!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 116 Flight

Oh wow. When they were first telling renee about the flat in Paris it sounded just like my husbands place. He,s on the 9th floor and the search light comes in the bedroom window, from the eifel tower. But it does look pretty when it's got all it's sparkly lights on.
I wonder if renee will be able to stick out the whole holiday with all the vamps. And as for Edward and Bella, couldn't you say that tecnicaly it's there honeymoon. They deserve the smexie times.
As always wonderful ,lots of gold stars **********

Author's Response:

Good point - technically I suppose it is a honeymoon!

No, Renee will not be with them for long - they need time alone . . .

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 61 Presents

Well I am thinking that Christmas was a successful Christmas doesn't it??



Author's Response:

Yes, I think Christmas was good!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 60 First Christmas

Wow!!! I am shocked that Charlie is actually kind of joking about Bella and Edward and their sex life...... I wonder what Edward and Bella got her mom...



Author's Response:

I think Charlie is really trying!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 59 Christmas Eve

It is sad that Jacob is finding out all of this like this without someone that is like him to explain everything to him. Hopefully he will really listen to what is being said to him and not jump to conclusions.

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 116 Flight

Red-faced Renee is funny.



Author's Response:

Well, she soooo deserved it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 116 Flight

looking foward to their trip! 



Author's Response:

So am I!  I get to learn about Europe!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2011 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 116 Flight

Thank you for the wonderful update!!!!  I loved it!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  Nice to hear from you, hope you had a great Labor Day Weekend!  I enjoyed South Beach!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 116 Flight

whew so hott! i think edward would love bella with a brazillian! cant wait for more!!!



Author's Response:

Ha!  he might not like it!  Some guys don't, and he likes to play with those curls!  We'll see - if he doesn't she beter grow it back fast, nothing grows once she is a vampire!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 58 Town

hummmmm....... I wonder how long Victoria is going to wait before pouncing on Bella. Oh and now they are having to deal with Jakes transformation into a wolf.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 57 Showing

Wow!!! I wonder how long it is going to take Alice to be able to get a picture of Victoria.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 56 Trees

This is a scary situation for them now because they have never been in the dark about things and that is what they are now with Jake there.

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 115 Renee

Sounds very interesting :)) Thank you for the update!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 55 Arrivals

Well it is nice in this story that Edward and Jake try to be friends for the sake of Bella not just try to get along it is good for Bella that she can still have Jake around and that her husband isn't  going to figh with him.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 54 Tips

You Have to give Charlie credit for leaving before he said something to make Bella mad. That shows that he has actually learned a lesson when it comes to that.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 52 Cinderella

Ok that Chapter was sweet!! I cried when I read what Edward did for that family. It is good to know that he is going to get to live his life!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 53 Images

Awwww... Well Baby Mason has a very excited family waiting to meet him. I wonder what Charlie is going to say about this!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 51 Magic Kingdom

Awwwwww..... How amazing is it that now Edward believes what Bella has since the beginning! It is the most amazing thing to feel your baby move for the first time it is something that I wont forget!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 50 Towels & Rollercoasters

Well leave it up to the boys to start a contest while on vacation.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants

Bella and Edward are just the perfect compliment to each other. they know how to get things done that would take others quite some time to get done.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise

It was nice to see that Bella finally got to surprise Edward with something and I can't wait to see what he says about the concert.

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2011 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Yay. I've been away to my mums up north, so am only now getting to catch up on my reading. Love the twist you gave to the exception to the treaty, how can they refuse the humans request, that way it's not coming from the vamps. Very inspired.
And renee. Well she's now going on holiday with them. That should be interesting.

As always wonderful and lots of gold stars **********.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 47 Investments

I don't think that I would have been able to ever look at my mom again if that happened to me in her house. It has happened to me in my house though and it was terrible......

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday

That Edward is just sooo sweet!

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 115 Renee

aww mason is just soo cute! aesome getting inside his head for a while! and hopefully renee accepts everything while in wurope and behaves herself! cant wait for more!



Author's Response:

I look forward to developing Masen a little more - it should be fun!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 115 Renee

looking foward to the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and responding!

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 11:25 AM Title: Chapter 115 Renee

verry interesting trip:)



Author's Response:

It may be with Renee along!  lol

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 45 Thanksgiving

It is good that Edward is able to control his anger..

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family

Hmmmmm.... I wonder how Renee is going to take the grandma news???? Better yet Charlie taking the grandpa news!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward

Well hopefully Carlisle can try to ease Edward's mind a little bit.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Poor baby... of course someone will buy it.Your great to be doing this with all that going on around you.

Great chapter...like the way they dealt with Renee.



Author's Response:

HA, BUT WILL they be able to deal with rernee on vacation with them?

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 42 Siblings

I really hope that Emmett gets to his snakes soon maybe that will keep him out of trouble! HAHA..... I don't think that will happen but it is worth a shot.



Author's Response:

EMMETT WILL NEVER BE OUT OF TROUBLE!  LOL

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance

Bella is always full of surprises isn't she????

Reviewer: westosobear Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Renee in Europe with the Cullen kids sounds sort of cool. Loved how Chief Jacob solved the problem about changing Bella.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2011 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock

I wonder how long it is going to take him to call Carlisle... I am guessing not that long but I could be wrong.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

That Rene can be demanding when she wants to be ;-)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Thank you for updating even though you really don't have time it seems. I have become "attached" to this story and I so look forward to updates. Now, it seems Renee threw a curve ball! Ha! The vacation will be interesting, can't wait.  Now, I wonder when Jacob will tell the tribe leaders, or council, that he will be leaving??

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

wow that renee is just wow heehee inviting herself on the vacation? lol that will be a fun trip!!



Author's Response:

It's going to be a challenge, that's for sure!

Reviewer: nicole1962 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

nice chapter:))much love for you



Author's Response:

Thank you soooo much!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Love how it happened with Renee!!!!!  Thank you for the update!!!!!



Author's Response:

She was pretty determined they were not taking her grandson away from her, wasn't she!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 113 Council

PERFECTION!!!!!

Reviewer: sunnyheaven1980 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 112 Playing Nice

Love it!!! Thank you for the update!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

looking foward to the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: 10of15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 114 Change in Plans

Great chapter!.  Jacob's handling of the matter was perfect and Sam's punishment was fitting.  Renee in Europe with the Cullen's - that will be great - I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing!  The punishment was really hard to decide - and a long time coming for me to write, but the trip to Europe with an inquisitive Renee should be prstty challenging for Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: westosobear Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 113 Council

Fair puishment.  Love the new Chief Jacob



Author's Response:

Thanks!  The punishment was really hard to decide!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 39 Decisions

Oh man Bella and Rose are banning together to get the family motorcycles for christmas. It should be fun to see who all finds out about it in the end.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2011 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 113 Council

Finally......Sam acknowledges that the Cullens are the Cold Ones spoken of in their tribal ledgends.  I'm so glad for Emily's sake and her baby to be that I will still be around for them. Can't wait till the next chapter is up ;-) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing - glad you're back!

Reviewer: Queendel Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 113 Council

Nice update. Paul is an idiot and really needed that punishment.  Jacob judgement was just and fair given that Edward, who he wounded, pardoned Sam for his action.



Author's Response:

Glad you agree!  Coming up with a fair punishment was tough, I wanted to end Sam!  lol  That, hosever, would not have been fair to Emily!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 38 Rockingham

I think that Bella should go for the racing thing again after she is changed!! It might be insteresting.



Author's Response:

Edward would have a heartattack!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 37 Revelations

Well I guess that Victoria hasn't given up on getting even with the Cullens!  I wonder if Alice hasn't seen this already because of Jacob.



Author's Response:

Possibly, Jacob dos stop all visions for her!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 36 Oysters & Hot Springs

that  chapter was just funny!



Author's Response:

I'm glad youliked it!  i thought it would be hysteical for Edward to eat Rocky Mountain Oysters!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting

I wonder what is going to happen to test this bond now??? That last sentence makes me think that it isn't going to be sunshine and roses her in a bit.



Author's Response:

There is always going to be something!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 34 Yellowstone

It is good that they are having fun! Well it is interesting that Edward wants to take her hunting I wonder what Bella is going to think about while that is going on.



Author's Response:

I loved Yellowstone and I just wanted to write about it!  Taking her hunting is just something he insists on!

Reviewer: lollyblu Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 113 Council

Wow. That was a really grown up and mature way of going about things. Really looking at the bigger picture.

Fabulous chapter. Must be gettin tired of hearing that :D
Lots of gold stars as normal **********

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Jacob is really coming into his own and growing to fit the position as chief of the tribe!

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