Date: 11 Jun 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 27 Flight
Oh damn...this is gonna be interesting!!
Keep them coming...I totally love this story...
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! Yep, we're adding the werewolves!
There is a great deal more story to come!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2011 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 27 Flight
I LOOK FORWARD TO READING YOUR UPDATES DAILY!!! THIS STORY IS EVERYTHING YOU LOOK FOR IN READING. IT HAS LAUGHS, TEARS, DRAMA, AND SEXY TIMES. I RECCOMMEND THIS STORY TO EVERYONE WHO LOVES EDWARD AND BELLA HEAS!!! THANK YOU FOR SUCH A GREAT STORY!!! I HOPE YOU CONTINUE IT TO INCLUDE THEIR MARRIAGE AND BABIES, ALL THOUGH I THINK I HAVE TOLD YOU THAT ALREADY, SORRY!!! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! Please never wory about repeating yourself, I love reviews of each chapter at the end of each day I read them. If there aren't any. I wonder what I did wrong with that chapter! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 27 Flight
i sooo love your story and I love that you update alot
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come! I do so love reading how many reviews came in each evening!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 27 Flight
nice chapter:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 8 Leaves & Looking
hee, hee...good point about the power of a Mom! We can incite a riot, we can win wars, we can encourage our children to be the best they can be or the flip side, degrade them til they think they are worthless. Yep....Mom's have that opportunity...to make or break a child!
Author's Response:
Yep, I just had to let it be esme that got through to him when no one else could!
Thanks for leaving a review!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
i loved it edward was such a man! lol hope to see a new chapter soon=)keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Well Said! Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
well im excited for the next chapter to see whats instore for them in forks !
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
I really love your story, I like the different pov's and I love Edwards sense of humor......
PLEASE KEEP WRITING THIS STORY.............
Thank You
Pat
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come! Glad you like the different POV's, I am trying not to mess them up so badly!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2011 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
I want to apologize for not reviewing each chapter, im just lazy....but I think this story ios GREAT, UNIQUE, AND HAS WEONDERFUL SEXY TIME AS WELL!!!! I love a careing loving Edward, and a Bella that is shy, but not overly so. I am glad Edward and Charlie made up so to speak, and Bella got to see Renee before she is changed! From the banner, im to believe Bella gets pregnant??? That would be great. I love this story, love the speedy updates, nothing is worse than reading a story, getting involved in it and no updates for weeks!!! Maybe Bella can race after she is turned??? Read this story people, you will love it!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
I guess the banner is a give away! I forgot about that, honestly! Yes, there is a baby (s) involved, but it is completely unlike breaking dawn!
Hope you enjoy it and continue to let me know what you think! I know reviewing is a bother, but I do so love reading them!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jun 2011 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
Wow what a chapter, I love the humor you show in your writing and feel as a writer you seem to be growing with each and every chapter. I love this story and love your feed back from my reviews each time.
Sorry I have had some ISP issues with responding the last few days, hopefully with this new modem all will be well. Thanks again and have a good day
Author's Response:
Thank you for that! i have started to try and go over the first few chapters because I am starting to see the mistakes! Hopefully I will continue to improve, this writing thing is new to me!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
I'm glad to see that Charlie had a change of heart...but I am dying to find out what is in store for Bella and Edward....thanks for the upates!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
Oh Charlie, stop being a hard ass and trying to make Bella regret her decision to be with Edward...not going to happen. Renee and Emmett comparison- right on there !
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Charlie really is a stubbotn man!
Date: 10 Jun 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter
I totally love this story...I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I really appreciate reading them!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter
well its abuot time charlie figures it out !
Author's Response:
Charlie really is a hard sell! Thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2011 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 24 Mom
Yes, I am glad that Renee and Phil seem to be supportive of our little couple, because Charlie is still living in LaLa Land where these two are concerned.. TTFN Kathy xoxoxo
Author's Response:
True, true . . . but he is just being Charlie! lol Something will bring him around,m at least temporatilly! Thanks for always leaving me some discussion!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 24 Mom
I like Rene much better than Charlie!
Author's Response:
Yes but Renee is far mre intuitive - they may not get much past her! Thank yu for leaving the review!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 2:28 AM Title: Chapter 24 Mom
well im excited for the next chapter !
Author's Response:
Ha! Yes, Mom finding out just how much fun her daughter hs been having! Thank yo for leaving a review!
Date: 09 Jun 2011 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 24 Mom
i do pray that Bella is just wrapped amongst those blankets by the fire place...You are scaring me... WHERE IS BELLA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
You are so funny, i love the review! Not to worry, the answer will be there tomorrow! THANK you so much for taking the time to leave me a note!
[Report This]Date: 08 Jun 2011 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife
Charlie is so funny in an obsessive way... and God they do love each other sooooo much. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Charlie is just an old fashioned dad, kind of like my grandad! lol Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife
I think hearing them serves Charlie right, lol.
Author's Response:
It had to keep him up all night, right? He is really being a hard sell, but i modeled him after my grandad, the Charlie in the book reminded me of him. he had his own ideas about the way things really were, regardless of reality! thank you for reviewing the story!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife
Wow! I would say that Edward is for sure coming out of his shell! The Boxer's was pretty funny! "Bite Me" pretty cute! Poor Edward, it's a good thing that vampires can concentrate on numerous things at once, especially seeing as Bella was doing wicked wicked things to him with his father in law right outside the door!!! Yea, pretty embarassing wouldn't you say!?
TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
I just thought it would be funny for him to be so nervous about naked or dressed, on the bed, on the futon where should he stand . . . and then have him not remember what those particular boxers said - laughter for a 17 year old with a hard on would be quite tramatic!
Really glad you thought it was g funny as well!
Charlie deserved to be embarassed! He's being overly protective and obtuse . . . and really really stupid if he thinks she will ever leave Edward!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife
well i hope that they sit down and have a talk with charlie and i hope that he heard every single noise comming out of that room
Author's Response:
So true! Something is going to have to shake him up a little more! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 23 Present for my Wife
Oh bite me yessss Please bite me ;-)
Author's Response:
Ha! Wouldn't we all like to participate! Glad you liked the chapter! They still find themselves alone in the nest chapter . . . just sayin . .
Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Love it so far....I voluteer to do your editing and check spelling! :)
Author's Response:
Love you lots! Glad you like it so far!
Date: 07 Jun 2011 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday
well i hope that edward rips charlie a new one !
Author's Response:
Wait snd see, you may very nearly get your wish! lol thank you for taking the time to review and let me know what you are thinking!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday
The last scores of the games today were announced and I flipped off the television, turned out the lights and headed up the stairs towards my room when I heard her scream. Loud.
"Edward!"
Hillarious. I can't stop laughing.
Author's Response:
Excellent! Just the response I wanted! Hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday
i think charlie have a hard skul simply impenetrable:))
Author's Response:
Very true! He is a piece of work, isn't he? Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday
Finally, he acknowledges that he is blind and stupid to think she will leave Edward, lol.
Author's Response:
Well, it took enough convincing! Not sure he is on the edward bandwagon yet though! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday
lol!!!
Author's Response:
Absolutely! Thank you for that!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2011 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 22 Birthday
Good Grief will Charlie ever catch a clue! Soooooo true! The ending of the chapter was pretty funny! I can't even imagine hearing one of your children in the throws of passion!
Till next Chapter update! TTFN - Laters BB xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
I know, I have never heard my kids, thank goodness! lol (I wouldn't mind hearing edward, though . . .)
Date: 06 Jun 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire
Wow I am loving this story thanks :)
Author's Response:
I am sooooo excited that you chose to review the chapter before you reached the end of what is posted! It means alot to me to hear from readers each chapter, its the only way I can judge if you are feeling what I am trying to get you to feel! lol!
Thank you so much for that, and for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2011 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)
Well that was good and I loved the insight that Bella brought to Jasper regarding his self evaluation of his weakness, as he called it, versus Bella telling him how strong he is... That was PERFECT!!!!
Loving this story! Okay now... till next chapter hang in there and never give up this story your doing wonderfully!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I always thought Jasper didn't get enough credit! Thank you for taking the time to share your thoughts with me by reviewing!
Date: 06 Jun 2011 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)
I am really enjoying the story. I am so happy that Rene is happy for Bella and she may be just the person to make Charlie see that Bella & Edward are a forever kind of deal, lol.
I am glad that Bella was only working through her own emotions and not crying because of something that someone else did or said. I can't wait to see what happens next.
Be careful with spelling errors and switching POVs when you are writing and editing. It can get confusing. Like in the beginning of this chapter. You switched between Alice and Bella when it was supposed to be Alice. You might look for a beta reader who will help you edit and catch your mistakes.
Author's Response:
I am going to go check out the POV's right now, thank you for letting me know you think there is a problem, Actually, I have a beta as well as reediting the story again when i get it back from her! I guess some mistakes just get through!
Glad you are enjoying the story and thanks for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 21 Sisters (Dishing)
well i hope that charlie starts to come around!
Author's Response:
He has to come around sooner or later, right? Thank you for the review!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
Amazing chapter....as always!! I just adore this story, and I love that you are just so talented to really have us right in the emotions of the characters, it is hard to find a fanfiction this incredible! Please, please, please let Charlie come around, I hope to God he realizes before it is too late and the damage is done to Bella's state of mind. I am dying for the next chapter now to make sure she is ok, thanks for the mini cliffy lol. Anyway...thanks for this lovely story, and I will be trying hard to wait patiently for the next chapter...take care until then!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your words. The best I can hope for is for you to feel the emotions of the characters, that makes my day! Charlie will come around, he just needs something drastic to happen . . .
Thank you for the review, and the encouragement!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
its gonna take something drastic I fear since he told Carlilse during their talk that he was here to take his daughter home.. Seriously he is delusional if he thinks Bella would leave and even more BONKERS if he foe once second thinks that our Edward would let her go!
DAMN IT I am so engrossed in this story... till next update- TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
I absolutely adore that you call him "our edward"! Thank you for the review, and the encouragement!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
I like the setup of this fic and I want to see what happens next. I am really happy that Jake wanted Bella to be happy more than feeling the need to take her from Edward. Of course, he isn't a wolf either. I guess that makes the difference. But Sue seems amenable too.
They have done everything in the world already to show Charlie that they are in love, married, financially secure and very happy. There is no way somebody could be that dense and in denial after seeing that much evidence to the contrary, lol.
Now I am wondering if Rene is giving Bella a hard time about it too.
Author's Response:
It does kind of make you wonder if Renee said something in private, doesn't it? Well, Charlie is just going to have to adjust! Thank you for the review, and the encouragement!
Date: 05 Jun 2011 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, and the encouragement!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
IM INTERESTED, IM INTERESTED!!! PLEASE CONTINUE!! iT WOULD BE EASIER IF BELLA "DISOWNED" CHARLIE, WITH THE CHANGE COMING....BUT WHY IS BELLA SO UPSET??? MAYBE ALICE TOLD HER CHARLIES PLAN??? I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for being so escited about the storyline! It is really wondeful to get this type of encouragement! Thanjk you for taking the time to review!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
Tell him Alice!
Author's Response:
That's right, she's not shy!
Thank you for reviewing for me! Hope you continue to like the story!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie
well chalie is verry stubbard ! im excited to see what he dose next
Author's Response:
He is such an old fashiond dad, and he is so very stubborn!
Thank you for leving a review - I really do sometimes need the encouragement!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie
i love your story!!!! I cant wait for an update :)
Author's Response:
So very glad you are enjoying the story! Sometimes, without the encouragement of reviews, I think I might stop trying to find the time in my day to write!
Thank you for encouraging me!
[Report This]Date: 04 Jun 2011 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie
oh that was great I see More reviews, thats awesome! I knew the story would catch on... Please feel encouraged...
Thanks for the "teaser" of sorts with your resonse about Charlie! I'm kinda tickeled with about his attitude, he sees how happy Bella is but just cant't let it go... too cute....
Well have a good one.. until the next update Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
I love writing Charlie, he reminds me of my Dad! He is so predictable, and stubborn! Thank you for taking the time to leave me a message!
Date: 04 Jun 2011 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 19 Charlie
i kinda feel sorry for Charlie! Hope he comes around and understands that Bella is where she needs to be....
Author's Response:
Charlie is a really hard sell. He has his mind made up and he is determined. It's going to take a lot to get him to see things more clearly . . . but Edward IS a lot!
Thank you so much for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
well that went a whole lot better than it could have gone... still not sure why Charlie is being rather rude and cool to Edward after all shouldn't he be happy Bella is happy come on Charlie get on board man.... Love the story... way to go... see you next update :-) Hang in there
Author's Response:
Wow! Charlid is so going to annoy you! Be prepared, he isn't an eaxy sell and he is fiercely protective of his daughter . . . but so is Edward!
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:12 PM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
love it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
I HAVE ABSOLUTELY NO IDEA WHY YOU ARE NOT GETTING TONS AND TONS OF REVIEWS. I LOVE THIS STORY. I LOVE ALL HEAS FOR EDWARD AND BELLA, AND SEXY TIME MIXED IN IS GREAT!!! AGAIN, I LOVE THE STORY, I HOPE YOU CONTINUE IT TO INCLUDE BELLAS CHANGE AND THEIR LIFE AFTER THAT SOME! I WONDER IF HUMAN BELLA WILL GET PREGNANT BEFORE THE CHANGE WITH ALL THAT LOVE MAKIN. KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK, LOVE IT. I PERSONALLY WILL TELL ALL MY FRIENDS ABOUT THIS ONE!!!
Author's Response:
Not giving it away! There is much to this story, and it will go on for dozens of chapters if you are interested in reading it! I really love exploring the Edward Bella relationship and I think it;s fun!
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 03 Jun 2011 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
well im glad that shes takin to gifts ! cant wait til lher birthday
Author's Response:
Her birthday, yes. Everyone has planned special gifts for that day!
Hope you enjoy it and thank you so much for reviewing the story, it means a lot to have reviews each chapter!
Date: 02 Jun 2011 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire
I am thoroughly enjoying the story...I can't wait to see what happens next....
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying my thoughts on Edward and Bella! I have lots more! Thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire
Wow-no recovery time, wouldn't we ALL love for our mates to be a Vampire?!!!! Love this story!
Author's Response:
I could definately go with some 'no recovery time'! The fun of writing a story is adding some fantasy, right?
Thank you for always reviewing - there are just a few people that are keeping me going here, apparently I really do need encouragement to keep writing! LOL
Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire
well that was all sorts of hot!
Author's Response:
Thanks! <u very forst ever attempts at sex scenes, these last three chapters, and I hope I got it right!
Thanks again for reviewing!
Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 16 Home
well they are totally hot together and newly weds!
Author's Response:
I think they are hot together as well! thank you for reviewing, hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 16 Home
Hot Damn this was good! Loved how he was finally able to explain more things to her. Now the really interesting part of their marriage begins... Living each day!
Great story
Author's Response:
Ha! I like hot chapters, they need that sometimes! thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 31 May 2011 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex
now that was wicked (a good wicked) I just love this story and the fiercness of Edwards love for Bella Happy Memorial Day to you too and thanks for the chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review! Hope you had a lovely Memorial Day!
Fierceness is a good word, they have a day or two of "fierceness" before they settle down a bit! lol Not that Edward ever really settles down when it comes to bella . . .
Date: 31 May 2011 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex
that was totally hot!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it! They continue to connedt and settle into their new home in the next couple of chapters . . . lemony goodness! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 30 May 2011 11:44 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex
nice chapter:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for commenting - I appreciate that you take the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex
thabks good chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review!
Date: 30 May 2011 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex
Finally Bella got some Edward!! :-) and Edward made her pass out it was so good... haha, must be nice to be Bella!
Author's Response:
Love the way you put that! you make it sound expecially nice to be Bella - wish we all could! lol Hope you enjoy the following chapters, a couple of lemony goodness coming up next before the story moves on!
thank you so much for reviewing!
Date: 30 May 2011 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 14 Routine
i'm hooked! Please continue...Great Story!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Glad to hear that someone is enjoying reading my story! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 14 Routine
Well dear heaven's I love this story and I hope you're getting reviews because I really LOVE this story and can't personally wait for more. This Edward is wonderful!!!!!
Author's Response:
It just thrills me to have someone else think this Edward is wonderful! i was beginning to wonder what I had done wrong that no one seemed taken with him! Thank you so much for taking the time to review! i hope you continue to like him!
Date: 30 May 2011 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 14 Routine
well i hope that she starts to talk rather than assume!
Author's Response:
Let's hope so! We have surely seen enough from when people assume things! Thank you for teviewing!
Date: 30 May 2011 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 14 Routine
Please keep updating. You have me hooked.
Author's Response:
So glad you're hooked! Obviousdly I love the story! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 30 May 2011 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 14 Routine
Intersting story...can't wait to see what happens to edward and bella next. I hope you continue to post more chapters.
Author's Response:
It would be unlke me to leave you hanging, more to come! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 30 May 2011 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
Stumbled upon your story and I have enjoyed reading it. I hope you continue to update, I'd like to see what you have planned!
Author's Response:
Thank you! i actually have quite a few chapters written! Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 30 May 2011 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 14 Routine
I just found this story tonight and I am enjoying it... Very different. sorry not the best reviewer, but please continue to post!
Author's Response:
You are the first reviewer for this chapter and I appreciate it more than you know. It's difficult to devote so much time to just uploacing these chapters much less writing them, and not know that people are enjoying it! Don't get me wrong, I would write for myself regardless, this first story of mine has me enthrawled, it's kind of writing itelf!
thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 30 May 2011 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 13 Making Ourselves at Home
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 29 May 2011 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 13 Making Ourselves at Home
well im excited that hes letting down his guard! im excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
You have no idea . . .
Hope you continue to enjoy, the rating is about to be earned! LOL
Date: 29 May 2011 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 13 Making Ourselves at Home
Great chapter!!!! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you enjoyed it! Hope you contiue to read and review . . .
[Report This]Date: 29 May 2011 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 13 Making Ourselves at Home
Yes, love this Edward! The sweetest part was when he said he couldn't go hunt and feed because just her being in the other room with Alice was too far from him and he did not know how he could take leaving her to hunt!!! Awwwwhhhh! Now that was the woooo factor right there I tell ya!
Author's Response:
I tru;y hope you continue to like this Edward! He is so attached and devoted to her, glad he found her again! HYe starts to show his love for her in a more physical way in the next few chapters, and I tried to have them be really caring as well, just physically!
Author's Response:
I tru;y hope you continue to like this Edward! He is so attached and devoted to her, glad he found her again! HYe starts to show his love for her in a more physical way in the next few chapters, and I tried to have them be really caring as well, just physically!
[Report This]Date: 28 May 2011 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
that was wonderful - I Loved how she insisted that they get married right then... smart girl! No since in taking chances right?! After all Our Bella has taken way, way too many chances ..... can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it! I think i was great that she jumped at the chance as well, she knew her feelings, no need to be coy! thank you for leaving a review!
Date: 28 May 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
wow, wasn't expecting a wedding so fast but i like it. can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response:
Well, she saw him, and she wanted to know he would actually stay! Marry the boy then!
Thanks again for taking time to leave an opinion, it helps to know if readers are emjoying the chapters and what they are geting out of it!
Date: 28 May 2011 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
Please put another chapter today, I`m addicted!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I actually was tying to put another chapter up but having intenet problems! I want to at least have one chapte read by a few folks beore Iput anothe chapte up! It's always nice to kow that someone appreciates all the time expendd writing these thoughts down, though I did it for me, I do like to know that someone else likes it as well!
Date: 28 May 2011 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
well didnt see that one comming! im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Didn't se it coming? What did you think, did you really buy that he would misunderstand and leave? I appreciate that there has to be some angst in life, and in stories, but I am not for making romeo and juliet type decisions! I had to have him hang around and get the facts straight!
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 28 May 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
how bout all you have?
Author's Response:
You realloy don't want that! I just finished dozens of chaptes, and the story is quite lengthy! I really hope you enhoy it half as much as I did writing it! I appreciate the review of the chapters more than you know!
Date: 28 May 2011 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
soooo sweet:)
Author's Response:
Really glad you are enjoying them! i love the interactions between Edward and Bella best, above all the other characters! Thank you so much for leaving reviews of the chapters, I love kknowing what you think of each one!
Date: 28 May 2011 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 11 Promises
well i hope that shes not upset when she wakes up
Author's Response:
No, she'll be fine as soon as she realized what is happening!
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 27 May 2011 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 11 Promises
yes she does know:)
Author's Response:
Yep, that would have been my guess as wello. She always knew when Edward was near!
Thank you so much for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 27 May 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 11 Promises
wow, i like it, your jake is much more mature than canon jake, lol
Author's Response:
Thank you. Jake just has held her through enough nightmares that he knows first hand how she feels, and he really cares about her.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Victoria
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 11 Promises
wow that was close
Author's Response:
Ha! More to this story every day! Hope you enjoy it!
Victoria
Date: 26 May 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 10 Ambulance
well in the end i hope that they can help each other im excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
I love following readers through this story. It is quite long and there should be a new chapter up every other day, sometimes each day. Hope you fine it enjoyable as Edward and Bella go through their lives together!
Date: 26 May 2011 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 10 Ambulance
YAY, if she isn't going to live he can change her, LOL.
Author's Response:
Yay! He found her!
Glad they are together again,k now we have to see what's ahead, and whether she will have him back easily or not!
Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot!
Date: 26 May 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 10 Ambulance
Last chapter, i thought Edward went on a feeding frenzy; my apologies! I should have known that her welfare is always his first concern! I hope she makes it, or he may have to change her!
Author's Response:
No apology necessary, though edward might think otherwise.
Hopefully, the way it was written led t=you to believe that he was doing just that, having a feeding frenzy! She isn't out of the woods yet, though, and there are struggles to come in the hospital . . . especially when Charlie gets there!
Thank you so much for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 10 Ambulance
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it!
Hope it relieved some distress!
Date: 26 May 2011 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 9 Drag & Pull
i hate cliffies...please update soon
Author's Response:
Update on its way! Hope you are enjoying the ride!
Date: 26 May 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 8 Leaves & Looking
ok they would be showing her face if she was winning :-)
Author's Response:
True, but remember it's fictin, and the story is that she is keeping the helmet on and refusing photos!
And, she only just started winning, drag racing doesn't get mych tv airtime anyway! lol
Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 26 May 2011 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 7 Natural
I thought I saw this coming and now I am wondering if she will end up racing against Edward. He may join up to get to her, lol.
Author's Response:
I never thought of such a thing! Good imagination, but no, no Edward racing in this story!
Thank you for the comment!
Date: 26 May 2011 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 6 Returning Home
well at least alice has made the first step toward smoothing things over with Charlie :-)
Author's Response:
Charlie is a piece of work and so fun to write! He is going to be difficult about this for some time to come!
Thanks for the comment!
Date: 26 May 2011 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 5 Posters & Crews
i hate triangles, lol
Author's Response:
Not to worry then! Not much of a tiangle in this story! thank you for reviewing!
Date: 26 May 2011 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 4 Planes & Plans
i'm on the edge of my seat :-)
Author's Response:
I absolutely love to hear that, it means i'm doing my job! Thanks for telling me, you made my day!
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2011 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3 Billy
so bella and an unphased jake will be out there alone, coming up against vic maybe
Author's Response:
Yes . . . Victoria. She has her rold to play in this, and Jake doesn't even know he's a werewolf! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 26 May 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 2 Cobwebs
he's going back, yay
Author's Response:
I tried to make him just be the most pitiful, confused, upset Edward that i possibly could! Hopefully, I succeedd! thanks for the review!
Date: 26 May 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
so far so good :-)
Author's Response:
Your response is so funny to me, it's the same response I use! I always leave a review when I read, i figure that if they took the time to write it, and I took the time to read it, i could at least leave an opinion. In the first few chapers, though, there is often not enough to go on, and I'm not sure I like the premise - so I just say what you did! thanks for hanging in there and reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2011 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 9 Drag & Pull
OMG!
Author's Response:
So, too much of a cliffhanger?
Date: 25 May 2011 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 8 Leaves & Looking
Poor poor Edward ... I think if they check out one of those bike races, they will find Bella!
Author's Response:
Hopefully they can drag him to the drag races, there is always hope!
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2011 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 7 Natural
Thank you for the quick updates! I can't believe that Bella just earned herself a new risky job!
Author's Response:
Crazy idea isn't it, Bella riding bikes in a race! Well, she seems to have found her nitch!
Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2011 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 6 Returning Home
Looking forward to more! Love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review!
This story is my first attempt, and it seems to be writing itself.
Chapter 9 has a major occurance in it and I am trying to make the time to upload chapters thru ten today, and hopefully i will!
thanks again, and I look forware to hearing from you!
Victoria
Date: 25 May 2011 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 Posters & Crews
Oh no....she can't like Jake!!!
Author's Response:
Well, if enough time passed, she might think he was her only option! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 25 May 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 4 Planes & Plans
Poor Edward .... how can he find her if she is with Jacob?
Author's Response:
It's not going to be eaxy, Alice still can't se around werewolves, and it seems like she is always with Jake or he is mixrd in her decisions! Thank you for reviewing! Hang in there, love always finds a way!
Date: 25 May 2011 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 3 Billy
I can't believe they are running away! Awesome plot!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review! Hope you continue to enjoy the story!