[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
!nope not looosing interest!! its still a great story! and wow bella and edward could end up with 3 kids!? that would be awesome for them. cant wait for the amusement parks next!!!
Author's Response:
the theme parks with the Cullens should be a riot, and three kids for edwad would be more than he ever hoped for, I'm sure! Hope you continue to read and leave me opinions and thoughts on what you like and do not like! Thanks!
Date: 06 Jul 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 49 Confidants
This was a very sweet chapter... HUMMMM Three babies ????
Author's Response:
remember, Alice only sees possibilities - nothing is written in stone!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise
I loved the chapter... I cant wait to come home from work and fire up my laptop, go to my favorites and click on your story. Real life love isnt angst all the time we need times to just be. I loved it and im definetly not losing interest!!!
Author's Response:
I couldn't agree more! I realize that angst and edrama are necessart to a story, but I like the secdure, love feelings as well. it hurts more, however, when drama comes along after youhave been lulled into joy . . .
Date: 05 Jul 2011 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise
I really enjoyed the lemon in this chapter! The whole "Edward staying inside Bella while she sleeps"-thing kind of rubs me the wrong way to be honest (no pun intended :) but I really like how you portray his inner battle of the "boy and the beast" and how you let Bella bring out Edwards human side here.
Thanks for updating so frequently, I love having this as my (very grown up :) bedtime story
x
Author's Response:
Well, sorry about the "bad rub", but edward is a vampire and he has to show his emotions in different ways, and his physical side as well. Hope you're not too put off by it, bella seems to enjoy it and it is explained more fully in later chapters!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 48 Surprise
well im looking foward to their trip together!
Author's Response:
Theme parks with the Cullens should be a riot!
Date: 05 Jul 2011 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 47 Investments
well im glad taht she got some alone time with mom ! i hope taht in the end that shes able to keep her in their life !
Author's Response:
I really want Bella to be able to keep her mom in her life. I'm struggeling with that in the current chapter I'm writing!
Date: 04 Jul 2011 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 47 Investments
*giggle* OMG, if my mother walked in on me and my husband like Renee did with Bella and Edward, I would completely die of embarrassment...*giggle snort*
I love it...keep up the good work!!
Author's Response:
I think they handeled it well, considering they arre only teenagets! lol Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday
Love Renee's reaction to the underware and Bella's waseven better...
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the mother/daughter laughs! I wanted all to have a glld time together!
Date: 03 Jul 2011 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday
This was just too cute ;-) Black Friday shopping and all. I really liked it. Keep the chapters coming.
Author's Response:
Love that Edward went shopping on Black Friday with them! It sure surprised Renee!
Date: 03 Jul 2011 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday
well im excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
I don't think you'll be disappointed! Lots of fun coming up!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed it, and thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 46 Blacl Friday
GREAT CHAPTER!!! WITH ALL THOSE FANCY PHONES, I HOPE JACOB DOESNT CALL RENEE AND FIND OUT BELLAS BEEN IN FLORDIA AND IS PREGNANT AND VICTORIA HEARS!!!WHEN WILL EDWARD GO INTO EXPLAINING TO BELLA WHAT ITS LIKE TO BE TURNED, OR DOES SHE KNOW FROM WHEN THEY WERE TOGETHER BEFORE SHE RAN OFF WITH JACOB?? IM CURIOUS, YOU ARE ALWAYS TALKING ABOUT VAMPIRES AND WHEN THEY HAVE SEX AND HE FINISHES, HE HARDENS IMMEDIATELY, IS HIS ORGASMS STRONGER, LONGER THAN HUMAN ORGASMS? I TAKE IT AFTER READING THIS CHAPTER THAT HE RELEASES MORE FLUID THAN NORMAL??? I BET MORE READERS THAN ME WOULD LIKE TO KNOW!!! YOUR DETAIL IN ALL OF THIS FEELS "REAL", LIKE THIS IS REALLY HAPPENING AND YOU CAN PICTURE IT AS IF ITS REAL. YOU HAVE A RARE GIFT IN WRITING, EVERY SINGLE CHAPTER IS GREAT AND i CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE OF EDWARD AND BELLA AND THE BABY AND THE DELIVERY AND THE CHILD GROWING UP, ESPECIALLY AROUND EMMETT!! AND READING ABOUT HOW THEY HANDLE VICTORIA. I HOPE THIS IS A LONG LONG STORY, OR IT HAS A SEQUEL, IM HOOKED I TELL YA!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for all your questions and input! I really appreciate your taking the time to review!
Bella gets to tell Jacob she's pregnant, and you get a play by play of the delivery (something some readers didn't want to hear!) But iof I describe the sex, why not the delivery!
I don't know if his orgasms are stronger than a human male, but he feels them intensely because he has waited so many years. I imagine fluid release is the same as a human male, but his is mainly venom, as are all his fluids = tears, saqliva, etc. He just seems to still produce sperm. My understanding of these vampires is that they are frozen in time, exactly the way they were when tyhey were changed, minus any scars or problems with their bodies. Sperm are produced all the time, so that explains him having some. The sheer amount of times he comes seems to impoly lots of fluid released, however . . .
As for the length of the story, I have written dozens more chapters already and have enough for this to continue, one a day, through September at lest!
Thanks for loving the story . . .
Victoria
[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 45 Thanksgiving
WOW, ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER....SO I GUESS THEY ARE GOING BACK TO HIGHLANDS?? VICTORIA BETTER WATCH IT OR SHE WILL BE ASH!
Author's Response:
Let's hopw they make ash of Victoria! Thank you for taking the time to review!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 45 Thanksgiving
excited to see what ahppens next
Author's Response:
I think you'll lopve the next chapter, well, you'll laugh anyway!
Date: 02 Jul 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 45 Thanksgiving
loved this chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! Glad you liked it and I hope I continue to hear from you!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 45 Thanksgiving
thanks good chapter
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Hope you keep reading and thank you for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
Great chapter! LOL in some parts and in other's just wanted to shed some tears with her - Edward is so sweet... Okay till next chapter hope your getting all settled into your place.
TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! I think you'll really get a kick out of the next two chapters, you have a great sense of humor!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward
Another wonderfully written chapter Sad, but true with this wonderful crazy family - your right not every chapter can be just about them. We have to know and see lots regarding the rest of the Family....Waterfalls and Sex with Edward hummmm she has it pretty hard... :-)
Author's Response:
Yep, she has it pretty hard alright (no pun intended lol). Thank you for commenting, I love hearing what you think! Still look forward to each review when i see your name on it - I love that you tell me specific things that you like. Don't be afraid to tell me the things you didn't like, I want to know!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2011 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
thanks good chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
Sweet!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 26 Adjusting
Yes, I like it that Charlie can APOLOGIZE! Now, to find a REAL MAN who can do that! Huh, or is he only in your imagination? :)
Author's Response:
Ah! Taking a few minutes to read . . . nice! Thanks for leaving a review!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
excited taht they are all having fun !
Author's Response:
Hopefully the fun will continue for awhile! Thank you for leaving a review, it's like geting a chapter in my in box!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 25 Mother & Daughter
Mom is right, Dad is wrong! How typical is that? Ha! We know what's best for our young'uns! That's right!
Author's Response:
I does seem to always work out that way, doesn't it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2011 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
YES, ITS A BOY!!! IS ALICE BLOCKING EDWARD FROM SEEING BELLA IN FUTURE WITH HER VISIONS? ALICE SEEING HIM IN THE BACK YARD WITH A BOY TODDLER BUT NO BELLA, WONDER IF ITS BECAUSE SHE IS A SHIELD?? HOW LONG DO THEY PLAN ON STAYING ON ISLE ESME, TILL THE BABY? OBVIOUSLY THEY WILL INVESTIGATE THE LEGENDS OF RIO...
Author's Response:
Yep, it's a boy! This baby (and pregnancy) will be completely diffeent from the book! Edward LOVES the idea of being a dad!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 44 Isle Esme, Family
I really enjoy reading your story (especially because you update so frequently, thanks for that!) I love your Edward and Bella they are really cute together and I'm anxious to see what the pregnancy and Victoria have in store for them. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review! It means alot to me to get feedbackm kind of like geting a new chapter updated! Hope you enjoy the story!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward
Edward sleeping is completely tripping me out...I really want to know what is bringing that on...love insatiable Bella...complete opposite of what I'm used too...but hey, they do say women become increasingly sexual during pregnancy...such fun!!!
Author's Response:
I really could never get enough when I ws pregnant. Five children. I figured i woulod write what I know! lol thank you for taking the time to review and please let me hear from you again and tell me what parts you find the most fun!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward
love it!!!!
Author's Response:
So glad you do! I hope to hear from you about the things you particularly like, and thank you for reviewing!
Date: 01 Jul 2011 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward
it wass really good how many chapters are there going to be
Author's Response:
How many chapters? Well . . . I'm not sure you want to know, unless you like really long stories . . .
Hope you hang in there with me, the rollercoaster should be fun!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
Wow, hot...love all of their reactions.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! Please continue to let me know what you like about the chapters!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward
well i hope he dosent go all emoward on her! im excited to see what ahppens next
Author's Response:
Not to worry, edward is really really trying! Thank you for reviewing!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward
Loved the last chapter and this one!!! Love the story!!! Love how Edward puts Bella first above all else!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review! please let me know your thoughts on the chapters as we go along!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review! please let me know your thoughts on the chapters as we go along!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 42 Siblings
So normally I don't like chapters such as this about the other characters. However I loved this. It was a great look at others and it was fun. I really do like your story and look forward to where this goes in future chapters. Can't wait to read about the next hunting trip.....I don't like snakes so it will be nice to see how Em is in that scene......
Author's Response:
I normally don't like chapters about the other characters either. As a writer, I now try to keep them to a minimum, but I see their importance in telling the full story and the relationship to other members of the family.
Thanks for reviewing and i hope you continue to enjoy the story and tell me what you think!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
Like how she told him...
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! I always thought edward should have been a little bit happy about the baby!
Date: 30 Jun 2011 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 27 Flight
This is a really cute story, but the jumping between POV in between paragraphs is hard to follow. It goes from Bella talking to all of a sudden Edward talking. Kinda hard to follow that.
I put in the example below so you could see what I was tlaking about.
"Edward, I became so good at riding, I couldn't see you - I didn't hear you telling me to stop, to be safe. I had to find a way to see you," I wiped my nose on my sleeve. I starred into Edward's pained face and told him what I had been fearing most to say.
"I talked Jacob into going cliff diving off the high cliff at La Push. You were there, on the cliff with me, begging me not to jump, to be safe. I saw you as clear as day as I jumped off the cliff and in the water below. I was knocked out on the rocks at the bottom and Jacob pulled me to shore."
"Dear God Bella, you could have been killed and it would have been all my fault," I exclaimed. I was sick to my core, I couldn't believe the depths of pain I had caused. She had always loved me every bit as much as I loved her and I had thought she would move on. I was a fool.
Author's Response:
Thank you soooo much for bringing that to my attention! It has been corrected, and I can';t believe that my beta, myself and a friend that always edits for me completely missed that! i try really hard to keep the POV's accurate as well as the punctuation. I have gone over it dozens of times. Literally. i guess I'm just too close to it to see the errors!
I hope you continue to read and enjoy and please, I appreciate you taking the time to point out the mistakes!
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2011 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 43 Isle Esme, Bella & Edward
I REALLY LOVE THIS STORY, IVE SAID THAT MANY TIMES. THANK YOU FOR SHARING YOUR TALENT. I HARDLY CHECK MY EMAILS CAUSE I CAN'T STOP READING LONG ENOUGH, CRAZY RIGHT?? BUT YOU HAAVE NO IDEA HOW COMFORTING IT IS TO "GET HOOKED" ON A STORY AND KNOW BASICALLY EVERY DAY A UPDATE WILL B POSTED!! YOU ARE GREAT!!! THANK YOU!!! i AM LOOKING FORWARD TO EDWARD READING ALICES MIND WHERE SHE SAW HIM PLAYING WITH THE CHILD. SINCE THE MOVIE AND MOST STORIES HAVE BELLA HAVE A GIRL, I HOPE THIS STORY HAS THEM HAVE A BOY, ANOTHER EDWARD!!! THE WORLD CANT HAVE TOO MANY EDWARDS IN MY MIND!!!
Author's Response:
You are so sweet to say that you look forward each day to an update! i try to have it eveyday, but this moving houses and the internet being down really stopped things for a few days. Internet is all better now, though! lol Please comment on the story whenever you have the time, i look forward to seeing the reviews in my email box almost as much as you may look forward to seeing new chapters!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 42 Siblings
im excited to see whats instore for them next ! and im glad that rose isnt upset with the baby !
Author's Response:
He's accepting it as well as he can - for being Edward! Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
I love SM, but I love this version of Bella being pregnant and Edwards reaction to the whole thing.. this just keeps getting better and better double woot!!!!
Author's Response:
You're awesome! i always look forward to reading your reviews! i love to hear the parts of the chapter you liked best, as well as any advice for improvements!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
wow holy shit this is great... oh can't wait....
Author's Response:
Ah! Sounds like you like it!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
EXCELLENT AS ALWAYS!!! THINGS ARE REALLY GETTING INTERESTING AND EXCITING NOW!! TILL TOMORROW...
Author's Response:
I love exciting as well! the two of them have some fun times ahead before going to Thanksgiving at Renee's house! Thank you for taking the time to review and let me hear your thoughts!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
I am so glad that Edward took the news well...I laughed my ass when he fell off the stool...I could just picture his reaction...I'm excited for the both of them, just hope there isn't TOO much drama in the near future (yeah right, lol)
Keep up the great job, you know I love this story!!
Author's Response:
I'm soo sooo sooooo glad you could picture him falling off the stool! The one thing I go for is creating a visual that the reader can respond to, and I think Bella's words wee strong enough to get that response from him!
Thank you for the review!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
I agree with you......I liked your version of how Edward reacted to the pregnancy ;-) Keep the chapters coming !!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked my version! It;s okay for him to be scared, but at least he is somewhat open to reason! Thank you for taking the time to review! i love hearing your opinions and thoughts on what happened or even what should have happened!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 41 Isle Esme, Acceptance
im excited for them and the way edward reacted is great ! very over the top !
Author's Response:
So glad you liked it! He had to be anxious, but I needed him to override that and try to be reasonable and show that he cared about his child - or at least entertained the thought that it could be a child. regarding it as a monster to get rid of was just not good for me! Thank you for leaving me a review and an opinion!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
I dont know if he will suddenly be happy lol. But yay she's finally pregnant :)
Author's Response:
It is kind of hard for Edward to be happy about anything, other than Bella - isn't it! His reaction will be somewhat beter than it was in the book, though! Thank yho for taking the time to write a review and let me know your thoughts!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
Go on, I really love your story - tiina
Author's Response:
Thank you so much, and thank you for reviewing! let me hear what you think as you read the chapters, it keeps me going!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
I THINK EDWARD WILL PANIC AND INSIST CARLISLE FLY THERE IMMEDIATELY. NOT GO HOME CAUSE OF VICTORIA. I THINK ISLE ESME WILL BE TURNED INTO A MINI HOSPITAL. THE ONLY QUESTION IS...BOY OR GIRL??? SORRY FOR NOT REVIEWING, I READ THOUGH!!! ALL GREAT CHAPTERS!! I CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE AS USUAL!!!!
Author's Response:
thank you SO SO much for taking the time to review! I know it's something of an annoyanbce, but it really makes a diffeence in incentive to add chapters and continue writing! I love hearing what the story means to people, and what they get out of it!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
Okay...since this doesn't seem like the traditional pregnancy from the series, I'm going to assume it won't be as bad, but, knowing Edward, he's going to freak out and try everything to make sure she's safe...not sure what going thru his mind.
Author's Response:
No. not the traditional pregnancy from the series, but our edward will freak out in his own way, none the less! Thank you so much for taking the time to respond! Here is a snipit of how he acts -
I was scared to death. Carlisle assured me she was safe for now and I didn't want to disappoint her or bring in all the gloom and doom, but I knew the legends all too well and I wasn't sure Carlisle had shared those with her. I would have to, though . . . I had promised her no secrets. I understood her delay in telling me about the baby, having me here on our own island alone was just the right setting to tell me so that we had to face each other and I would see her joy and be able to control my fear instead of rushing her back to Carlisle to have it removed from her. This baby was a danger to my wife and though I already had feelings for the unborn child she carried, I refused to take any chances with Bella.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
First off I am so, so glad she told him away from the family AND she told Alice to let her have this with him!!!! Family can be a bit overbearing at times. :-) Second... How he will react??? Hummm if typical Edward personality he will flip. If OCC I am hoping he is jumping for joy...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I thought they should be away and slone when she told him! You are soooo good about reviewing, here is a small snippet from the next chapter -
I couldn't move. I had completely shut down, save for trying to figure out what it was she was trying to tell me. Baby, she thinks we're having a baby? God I hope she is alright, I hope I haven't pushed her over the edge. This must be why she accepts everything about me so readily . . . the blood, the hunting, the claiming her . . . it just finally got to her and she snapped. She just wanted us to work so badly that she had deluded herself into believing we can be a normal couple, have a normal life with a family. I have to reason with her, call Carlisle . . . perhaps there is a doctor in Rio that can help.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
I think he'll probably want Carlisle to examine her. I hope he doesn't wanna make her have an abortion like the original story, surely you won't go there.........
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing! I have 5 kids, only because I don't have 6. I won't go there.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 40 Isle Esme, Shock
i hope that he dosent wigg out like he did in breaking dawn! im exctied to see where u take this
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I'm not sure it's possible for Edward not to wigg out, it's just the way he is!
Date: 27 Jun 2011 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 39 Decisions
excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
You are always so sweet about reviewing! I really do appreciate it, it makes me feel like someone other than me is enjoying the ride! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 38 Rockingham
WELL MY HEART NEARLY STOPPED WHEN I WAS READING ABOUT THAT WRECK, MY GOD IF IT WERE BELLA. I WON'T EVEN GO THERE!!! I HAVE SAID THIS A MILLION TIMES, BUT ONCE AGAIN GREAT CHAPTER. THIS STORY HAS ME SITTING ON THE EDGE OF MY CHAIR WONDERING WHATS NEXT, IS IT REALLY VICTORIA??? WHAT WILL HAPPEN WHEN ROSE RIDES THE NEW BIKE HOME??? WILL BELLA GET PREGNANT?? WILL THEY STAY ON ISLE ESMW FOR BELLAS SAFETY?? I CAN'T WAIT TO FIND OUT THE ANSWERS!! PEOPLE YOU NEED TO READ THIS STORY, IT IS GREAT!!!! I LOVE HOW EDWARD LOVES HIS BELLA!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for that review! I have dozens more chapters of this story so, brace yourself for the ride!
I love hearing your thoughts and questions about what's happening!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 37 Revelations
wow lots of information in this chapter... I knew there was more to the accident at the pizza parlor.... I am venturing a guess here that perhaps Maybe that Edward's sleeping might have something to do with Bella's special abililites... hummmm we shall see ... such a good story...
Author's Response:
So excited that you love the story! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
There is lots more, and you encourage me to continue!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jun 2011 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 36 Oysters & Hot Springs
Sorry it took me sometime to read this and review, ISP issues... Hopefully ALL better! Anyway another great chapter and since it took me sometime to get back up I also have another chapter to read... Yea! for me.
I hate moving too! Sucks to move... Oh, well hopefully that's not something you will have to do again anytime soon... Have a good one and continue on with your wonderful creative mind.
Author's Response:
I loved all my trips across the country, and i wanted to share this with Edward and Bella! I thought the Cold Plunge would be fun!
Date: 25 Jun 2011 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 36 Oysters & Hot Springs
well im glad that shes having a good time with the family ! excited to see waht happens next
Author's Response:
I have done lots of camping in the West, and I liked this place - so I thought that bella and Edward might enh=joy having a hot spring right there in their room!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2011 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 36 Oysters & Hot Springs
GREAT chapter!!! VERY FUNNY!! I laughed somuch reading the taste test!! I am so glad your back "in service", I love this story and I missed it!!!
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed Bella's sense of humor! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol! More to come!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting
that was kind of hot cant wiat till the next chatper
Author's Response:
Who would have thought seeing him feed would turn her on! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
Date: 21 Jun 2011 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 20 Early Surprises
Oh, for the love of Goodness....do you think we could possibly read this many chapters and NOT be INTERESTED in your version!!!! LOL!!! Yes, it's great...awesome....stupendous!!! I will just reiterate though...the editing needs to be more concise! Please look over the last few chapters and clean it up (though the sex scenes were pretty well done!! :) Well, I'm off to bed....sweet dreams, my friend!
Author's Response:
I'm re editing most of the chapters!~ i was a chemistry major, my English leaves a lot to be desired, and my punctuation is even worse! lol! Glad you are enjoying the story! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting
OHHHH EVIL EVIL EVIL CLIFFEEEEEEE...
Could it be Vicky finally showing herself????
Author's Response:
Could be, there are lots of b ad guys in the world, and Bella does seem to attract her share! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting
yes that the effect:)
Author's Response:
Ha! Edward feeding = horney bella! Who would have thought? Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting
or so we thought!!!! ooooooo I sooo cant wait to see what you have in store :)
Author's Response:
I have dozens of chapters in store, I need only to know that you guys are really enjoying them! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2011 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 35 Hunting
LOL! Your so funny, "I suppose food can have that effect on you!" Right ...LOL... I think so.. But this line: "secure finally, in the way our lives were supposed to go . . . or so we thought . . ." Now that sounds pretty ominous.... I am soooooo looking forward to the next upcoming chapters....have a good evening...
Author's Response:
Hopefully t he following chapters will not disappoint you! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
Very nice....finally they have a talk about their time away from each other! I was wondering when it would finally happen! Well, since I have so much to do before going to work, I better get my a_ _ in gear, thanks for starting my day off so interestingly! LOL Sex in the morning works for me!
Author's Response:
They will have more of a talk later, really just started talking! Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
Really excited that you are reading my story, my friend!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 17 Vampire
Sad? Well, after describing lovemaking like that....I imagine most readers are breathing a little heavy themselves! Let's get to the next chapter....fast! LOL
Author's Response:
Ha! Thanks!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 12:12 PM Title: Chapter 15 Hope, Love & Sex
Hot, hot, hot!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 18 Jun 2011 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 34 Yellowstone
What a sweet chapter.. I'm loving their adventure across country...I can't wait to see where their lives go ...great story!!
Author's Response:
Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
I love adventres cross country, so I wanted to add that to their time together - they seem to be having fun!
[Report This]Date: 18 Jun 2011 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 34 Yellowstone
Well I am feeling better today (no more headache) Fun chapter, I was wondering the same thing as Bella I must admit with Edward being overly affectionate, not that he can't be, but it just seemed like something was wrong... He wants her to see him hunt.. Holy Shit that should be good, but seriously People (as Alice Says) she is not going to be sickened or grossed out by it... LOL!!! Like Bella said, he was her substitute tampon after all...LOL!!! Such a good story, never know what might be coming next.... that's what is so interesting... Till Next Chapter....
Oh, and sorry I did not make any comment on 32's last line either... Sorry, but of course Our VamWard LOVES to make his Bella wet, he makes ALL of us that Drool over him WET!!!!! LOL!!! :-)
Author's Response:
Sorry it has taken me so long to answer, moving after 25 years is about to do me in! lol!
Sorry to hear about the headache, but glad it's temporary! Edward's readtions are always a little strange, to humans, but then so are Bella's!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 34 Yellowstone
I just love those two!! I would love to see Em at the zoo-- ha!
Author's Response:
Absolutely! oI could come up with reems of fun with Emmett and Jsper at the zoo!
Thanks for reviewing!
Author's Response:
Absolutely! oI could come up with reems of fun with Emmett and Jsper at the zoo!
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 34 Yellowstone
im excited for the next chapter of their adventure !
Author's Response:
Were you excited about this chapter? I had hoped that the "eating elk" at the restaurant would be really funny!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
Love the idea that Edward is sleeping! Love this story.
Author's Response:
Sp g;ad upi ;ole ot! I hoppe you continue to!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 18 Confessions
I am thoroughly enjoying your story, and fully intend to finish reading all you have written. That being said, I noticed on more than a few occasions that you have a habit of swapping tenses from one person's POV to another without any indication, then swapping back in the next paragraph... I was wondering, do you have a Beta, and if not, do you want one? I would be more than willing to go through your past chapters and clean it up for you if you'd like.
Kitty
Author's Response:
Oh my! Thank you for the offer. I have a wonderful beta, friend actually, who goes over eerything - we must have missed the tenses. Thanks for telling me, I'll look over the chapters, and thanks for the offer! It is my first story and I hope you continue to read it!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
im excited to see whos shaking it up in forks!
Author's Response:
We're off to shake it up cross-country! Hope you enjoy!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 14 Routine
Oh darn, I need to read the next chapter but I;ve got to get to bed!!! Darn you, Vickisan, for writing such a great story! :) Good night!
Author's Response:
So glad you like the story!
Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 12 Relatives & Reunions
Love, love, love....all we need is Love, love, love! LOL that was good!
Author's Response:
I take it that means you liked it?
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
great chapter (migraine today, not too chatty)
Author's Response:
Hope you feel better!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jun 2011 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
I so look forward to your updates.. I love your story and the path it is taking!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much! I hope you continue to enjoy it! It has a roller coaser ride!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 33 Leaving Forks
:-)
Author's Response:
Love it! At least you left me a review, and I always want to know what you think!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings
Been reading this story for 3 days now. Can't stop. Enjoying it very much. Loved sleeping Edward. Alittle gross about the period sex, but not enough to make stop reading.
Author's Response:
Glad you didn't get too grossed out, he is after all a vampire! Thanks for taking the time to review, and I hope you stay with me!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 11 Promises
oooohhhh...that was good! :)
Author's Response:
Love hearing from you, hope you get to read again soon!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
Well this chapter was def interesting. I can't believe Edward is sleeping.
Author's Response:
Interesting - I don't like it, or interesting, like wow, I can't wait to read about this?
In either case, thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 10 Ambulance
Dang...Vickisan, you had my heart in my throat! You scared the B'Jesus out of me!
Author's Response:
Ha! I just wanted to have a set of circumstances that made it seem other than what it was! i love this cliffie!
Date: 16 Jun 2011 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings
well not what i thought but im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
I so hope you aren't disappointed! Sleeping was one of Edwards all time things he missed about being human - the plot thinkens in a dozen or so chapters! Thanks for leaving a review!
[Report This]Date: 16 Jun 2011 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings
Well that was more than interesting, what another little twist you have going here... Love it !!! Each chapter is pulling the reader in more and more....
yay!!!! more and more review... only 20 away from 150!!!! You can do it....
Author's Response:
So so glad you are enjoying the chapters! The plot thinkens as we go! Thank you for always leaving a review!
Date: 15 Jun 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 32 Happenings
Man, I always disliked Jessica...oh well.
As far as the vampire...it could be one of the Volutri...Or Victoria....hummm.
Author's Response:
I know, right . . . if someone had to buy the farm, it might as well have been Jessica. Of course, Edward was thinking about it . . .
Date: 15 Jun 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
wtf? i have a feeling but ill wait till the next chapter ! i cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Edward starts to have some strange things happen to him, you'll see. Bella really does have an interesting effect on him, don't you think? Thank you for the review, I would love hearing what thoughts you have on the chapter!
Date: 15 Jun 2011 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
What??? Seriously you leave it there :-( How? Why? ARRRGGGGG. You are trying to kill me!!! Him feeding off her I could see some think it gross..Me human to human yeah it would be but that was HOT... I have a dirty dirty mind remember :-)
Author's Response:
I thought it was HOT, as well. He is, after all, a vampire! I read up on some stuff and it seems it isn't even that unusual for humans! Weird. Anyway, glad you liked the story!
[Report This]Date: 15 Jun 2011 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
Well that was interesting to say the least.... I realized that I skipped the earlier chapter, apparently there were two chapters today, my bad... but I shall go back and read that one.... OMG what is wrong with Edward????... Yep he is a vampire just like Bella says, so why would that be gross for him? It wouldn't .... just say'n Bella has always understood that vampires drink Blood.. she is his singer...blood is blood...
Hope no one is mean to you over this chapter... I love the story.... TTFN Later Kathy xoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Yep, blood is blood! Edward REALLY liked it, and he will continue to . . .
Thanks for the good wishes!
Date: 15 Jun 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 30 Past
I'm glad they figured it out....I am worried about Sue though...she's going to make it interesting or she will make it easy...
I really enjoy this story and I can't wait to read more!!!
Author's Response:
True, Sue could make everything easier or harder in the long run! Hope you like the choice!
Date: 15 Jun 2011 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 31 Blood
Okay....omfg, ewwww on the first part, lol.
Is Edward sleeping....I have a theory but I'm not sure....can't wait till the next chapter.
Sorry I didn't review on the last....I didn't get a chance...but it was fabulous as well.
Keep up the awesome job!
Author's Response:
Remember, Blood isn't ewwweeee for a vampire, in whatever form he can get it! Add sex, and you have a seemingly winning combination! As for sleeping . . .
Date: 14 Jun 2011 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 1 Bella
LOL Now I am very intrigued.. My mind is a dirty dirty place. :-)
Author's Response:
Trust me . . . your mind is probably not as dirty a place as where Edward is going with this. After all, he is a vampire . . .
Date: 14 Jun 2011 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 30 Past
AWWWW man I was so hoping she was preggers....Wouldn't menstral blood smell different to him???? Are you sure its her period???? :-) UPDATE SOON
Author's Response:
I think she's pretty sure! Not to worry, at the rate they continue to do it, something's gotta give! the next chapter deals with the freshness of the blood there, and it's not a chapter for the faint of heart - let's just say, or for anyone that is easily grossed out! Thanks for taking the time to leave a review!
Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 30 Past
well im excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Glad you're still with me!
Date: 14 Jun 2011 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
I'm glad that they didn't stop making love...it would just seem all kinds of wrong...I was almost in tears when he took her back to where he left her....damn, didn't see that coming...I love where this is going....can't wait to see more....
Author's Response:
You made my day! If I described how she felt, and how he was acting with enough details for you to be in tears, then I did my job! love it! Thank you soooooo much for telling me that! I hope there are quite a few more occasions that get you that emotional, both good and bad, Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
So sorry I wrote a nice review then lost my ISP and lost the post. Just wanted to say you did a wonderful job with this chapter! What a wonderful thing to do with B and E in the woods.. My heart went out to Bella thinking about what he did previously and what me might have been coming from Edward (for her own good of course!) Just glad it came off like it did
Good job with this story and I do see that reviews are coming in for you.. Hang in there. TTFN Kathy xoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
Glad you enjoyed the post, and the outcome of their trip back to that spot. I hated to have Bella scared, again, but it seemed like she needed it to heal!
Thank you so much for the wonderful, long teviews. The encouragement really helps! There is alot to this story, and we have only just begun! I can update fairly easily for now because I am a couple dozen chap=ters ahead!
Victoria
Date: 13 Jun 2011 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
well im glad that even though that spot caused so much pain its not a happy plavce
Author's Response:
I just had to get rid of the pain of that place for her, and Edward oblidged!
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
I knew you would not have them stop making love!!!! Crazy that's what that would be!! great chapter, once again!! You consistent updates are wonderful and refreshing. I look forward to them every day!! I love where this story is headed!!! Maybe Alice will get her wish to plan a BIG wedding???
Author's Response:
Did you like the game they played? I haven't had a coment on it yet! Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 29 Mending
i hope this time charlie will be sure about edward
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! Charlie is trying, but the least little thing and he jumps back into lets kill Edward mode! lol It may take awhile to get him on board fully! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 28 Meadow
well i dont think shes going to like that one ! cant wiat otsee what she says
Author's Response:
Bo, there is no way the little human will stand for that nonsense! Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 13 Jun 2011 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 28 Meadow
Oh hell to the no....Leave it up to Edward to say some crap like that....making decisions for her AGAIN! He's the one that went all Caveward on her after she told him NOTHING happened....ARGH....I still love him though, but he needs to learn to stop doing this....
Author's Response:
Not to worry, the little human that owns him is about to go all cavewoman on him and let him kow what's up! Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2011 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 28 Meadow
No I can not see that happening!!! Just stop having sex till she is changed???? What have they been smoking that's all i'm saying.
LMAO can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Author's Response:
Well, Edward still over reacts, and Bella is going to have to put him in his place soon,
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!
Date: 11 Jun 2011 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 27 Flight
well im excited to see what she has to say about this !
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to review! There is a great deal more story to come!