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Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2011 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 16

well im excited t o see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Wonderful! Thanks for reading/reviewing...I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: twimam23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 16

Wow! Just discovered this story! Its brilliant!

I can totally see Bellas mum having something to do with this case!

Cant wait for the next installment! Xxx



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! Renee's involvement is a distinct possibility. Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 16

That creepy guy must have done it, maybe Renee is involved.....

Author's Response:

Umm...maybe?  Thanks for sticking with me!

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2011 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

you were right wtf with the creepy guy and edwards car need to know this will drive me crazy ;) and not in a good way x



Author's Response:

I figured that would be the case...it's all part of my evil plan *rubs hands together, menacingly*  lol Thanks so much for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2011 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 15

Will E revert back to his former self??



Author's Response:

I can honestly tell you 'no'.  But, that's it! Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Thanks!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Thanks!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Thanks!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Thank you!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)



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Thank you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 15

omg, the prank.... i totally would have thrown water on all of them too!....lol. I'm so glad Bella got thru to Edward when he freaked, he can't go back to that dark place, he has to fight this

Author's Response:

LOL Yeah, I could just see Alice running in and doing that to poor Jasper! Not many picked up on that...how Bella was able to reach Edward...it's my favorite part of that chapter. :) Thanks so much for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 15

cute chapter i hope it all works out 



Author's Response:

Happy you liked it! Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2011 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

I think the law suit has to do with Bella it is her parents  way of getting back at her.  The boys are lucky they stayed to lisen to them explain what happened.



Author's Response:

I think the girls were too stunned to leave. The lawsuit? Maybe...maybe not. Thank you for reading/reviewing! I really love hearing your thoughts!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

hate car sex....not inaf rome to move. :)



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LMAO! Thank you!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 5:43 PM Title: Prologue

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Thanks!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 15

Okay the pranks were all pretty funny, from last chapter and this one.  At first I was trying to figure it all out then all of a sudden my brain snapped to what was going on and I figured it out about the time that Edward fessed up..  Most definately a good time was had by all I would think...  what a cute and wicked mind someone has in writing this... LOL!!!

Now as for Aro and Jane lawyers extradorinaires... and needing to talk with dear Bella.. easy  Bella and Edward need to get married pronto, then she can't testify period... spousal priveldge and all... Come now, they love one another, want to live together, she did after all drive the very precious Chevelle, surely she is worth a lifetime committment... :-)

Marcus is a scum bucket looking for any sort of monetary gain off of the tragedy of his own child, that he failed to think about previously.  I hope you have some very creative ideas in store for him.  Good for Bella talking with Edward and helping him see that he can't (JUST CAN'T) go to that very dark place again.

Thanks this chapter TTFN   Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

I'm glad you liked the pranks; I thought it was funny, too. I see you've put some thought into this lawsuit issue...I like that. There is a bit more going on here, however and is about to be revealed....  You are right though about a couple of things, Bella does deserve the lifetime commitment and Marcus is scum. Thanks so much for reading and leaving me your thoughts! I do love to hear (read) them!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

The revenge prank was priceless!!!  Good to start my day with a belly laugh!



Author's Response:

Yay! Glad you thought it was funny, too. I couldn't get the visual out of my head! Thanks for reading/reviewing!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 15

The prank was funny, I would love to see the set up as an outtake, cause them getting things just right, the boy on boy kissing and such would be funny to read about. I cant believe that after all this time marcus wants to sue, Im thinking that the motive is going to be money plain and simple. Im glad they are going to attempt to move in together, and he wants a beach house. Cant wait to see what happens next. Loving this story.



Author's Response:

Ha! That would be funny, I'll think about it. I will tell you that money is most of the reason for the lawsuit. Happy you're liking the story, thank you for reading. I love hearing your thoughts, thank you!!

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2011 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 15

Renee and charlie have somthing to do with this law suite i bet love the story keep writing x ;)



Author's Response:

Hmmm...could be. Thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2011 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 14

Fluff is a good thing to have once in a bit.  What is with the guy at the store???



Author's Response:

Thanks, I agree. Fluff can be good  :)  Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2011 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 14

How devious are they gonna be....lol. Revenge will be sweet

Author's Response:

LOL  Well, I will tell you this...it isnt really very devious, but it is pretty freaking funny-least I thought so. Thank you for reading/reviewing, you know I love to hear from you!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh my goodness I loved this chapter!  I haven' laughed this hard in sometime.. Emmett's reaction was priceless!  Dropping to his knees giving a praye of Thanks!!!  LMAO

Why do I have this terrible feeling that Jacob Black still up to something very rotten...

Loved the girls night and then yes, of course the guys night too!!!  I also loved Edward's quick wit.... he figured that out pretty quickly...Alice gagging at talking with Edward  LOL!!!!

Can't wait for more as always you have me hook line and sinker!!!!



Author's Response:

 

Thank you! I'm glad you found it so funny. Poor Em, eh?  I figured that if it was my brother, I'd gag...so yeah  lol  Next chapter oughta really tickle you....  Thanks so much!!  :)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 14

Please post again soon.



Author's Response:

I hope that means you like it  lol   I am doing my best to stay on a weekly posting schedule!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2011 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14

well im glad that they got their time appart but i have a feeling that something bad is going to happen with jake and leah?! excited for the next chatper 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I appreciate that you leave me your thoughts and happy you like it! Next chapter will be fun ;)

Reviewer: Maggie79 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

great job keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I do appreciate the support!!!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

Love it! Perfect date, boy has good taste, sweet love-making.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Wait....what? Edward tastes good? Oh, duh!  I read that wrong.  lol  Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 13

i have a feeling that its not the last time we have heard from renee! im excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Hmmm, could be...but you know I'm not gonna say! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 13

The dinner cruise was so romantic!!!!! I don't think we've seen the last of Renee.....

Author's Response:

Thank you-glad you liked it! And about Renee, well...you didn't think I would actually spill anything did you?  lol  Thanks for reading-love hearing your thoughts!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

That would be the perfect date I love whales so cool.  I have swam with dalphines in the ocean that was the coolest thing ever and there where whales to but they where far away.  So sad that Bella has such relief about her mom being gone Poor Bella to have parents like that.



Author's Response:

 

I thought it was pretty cool-never done either, but would love to! I think Bella is better off not having the aggravation in her life with her so-called parents. Thank you for reading & leaving your thoughts!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2011 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 13

I loved Edward's words to Ms Rude Mommie Dearest!!!   What an amazing date...  love this story thanks for another wonderful chapter....



Author's Response:

Wonderful! Thanks so much for reading and leaving your thoughts! I appreciate them greatly.

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bella has balls of steel ;)   I love how she put Jacob in his place and that Leah witnessed it.  Renee wow what nerve she has to say them things to Bella I think Bella let her off easy.



Author's Response:

Who would take that crap from someone? Professor or not... lol  Perhaps Renee did get off easy, perhaps she'll get a bit more of what she deserves, too.....Thanks so much for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: cjngrls Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 12

I love that Bella told Renee where to go!!!  Uhg!! What a bitch!!  I love that Edward supports Bella the way he does. Bella and Edward are good together...



Author's Response:

Good together, good for each other...I'm glad you liked the tell-off, thanks for reading & reviewing!!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

Bella was on a roll! Good, she needs to be feisty to get her point across, I hope Renee won't pull anything else....

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked that scene. As for Renee still being a problem.....?  Can't say for sure right now. Thanks for reading/reviewing!! 

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

well apparently Jacob was just as big a creep as I thought, great chapter... Yes, Yes, Oh Yes both Bella and lucious Edward told Renee off and I loved the way  Edward told Tanya about  Bella... loved that dearly!

Can't wait for more.. great story



Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice words....I am so glad you are getting into these characters so much! Thanks for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

Will we see more of Tanya?  

Please post again soon.



Author's Response:

I really can't tell you if Tanya will make another appearance....might spoil the surprise  :)  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2011 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 12

im glad taht black and renee are out of her life! excited to see what happens next 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm happy you like it and appreciate you leaving your thoughts!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 12

So... who's following them??



Author's Response:

Who's following who? I dont know what you're talking about. But thank you!!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2011 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 10

Looks like it's on with Renee...



Author's Response:

Oh, it is... Thanks for reading and reviewing-I do appreciate it so much!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 12

glad he got to ink her and things are going great for them but who is following them does it have something to do with her parents??????  Cant wait for more



Author's Response:

It might be her parents. But I'm not saying. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 12

Awwwww...this story is so sweet.   Although, it looks like Renee is gonna be a problem.  Look forward to lots more chapters!



Author's Response:

Thank you! Renee? A problem?  nooo  lol  There will be a few more chapters, this story is far from over. Just getting started really. Thanks again!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 12

I really like this story and am very interested to read more of your completed works I am so ready for more of the story.... Whats the deal with creepy Jacob - and what about Charlie and Renee are they going to try and interfer with our little love birds?!  Just so many questions to keep us further enthralled in the story.... Your good that is all I can say. 

I love the way you show the sterile environment of this wonderful "tatt" shop and pointed out how some places don't .... (Carlilse's talk with Edward regarding infections from Tatt's) 

Loved how Bella wanted to get a tatt of the Chevelle on her Lower Lady Region, wow that was pretty perfect huh!

TTFN   Have a good weekend!   Laters BB  Kathy xoxoxoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you...really. I'm happy that you are so into this story! And I do appreciate the compliments. I'm not really into stories that have a 'message' per se...but I figure that, if nothing else, anyone prompted to get a tattoo after reading this-would make sure the place is clean  lol  Thank you again for your kind words!! I really enjoy hearing (reading) your thoughts!

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 7

Lucky girl.....hmmmm...think I need a smoke



Author's Response:

LOL  I sure did! Thanks for reading and reviewing!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 8

Yes sir're ME thinks the same thing... Mr. Edward is in for it!  Not much but some....



Author's Response:

Ahh you're right, just a little bit. Thanks for reading! I appreciate hearing your thoughts

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2011 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

Not JUST car sex, But in a SEXY Assed Chevy Chevelle!!!! Shit!  Wet Dreams right!



Author's Response:

I totally agree.....LOL  A lot better than the Volvo, huh?  Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 12

well i hope that someone isnt stocking them! 

 



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You'll have to wait and see....but thank you for reading! I love hearing your thoughts!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2011 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 12

was it Renee is the car behind them...or Jacob? Edward better keep an eye out......

Author's Response:

Good guesses, but you know I am not gonna tell you... :)  Thanks for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 10

What does Renee think telling on Bella is going to do LOL.  They now how to use the privet tatoo room ;)



Author's Response:

She was just trying to intimidate her....happy you liked the private tat room scene ;)  Thank you for reading & reviewing!!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good for Bella by throwing her out, that way her mom can see that she's not gonna take her crap anymore. Can't wait for the tats, they're gonna be hot!!!

Author's Response:

Just wait...Renee isn't gone  lol  I hope the tat sessions live up to your expectations!! Thanks for reading/reviewing  :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 10

well im excited to see how much longer it takes for her to get ink! 



Author's Response:

It won't be a long wait...Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good. Sometimes you just need the fluff.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: viking Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 10

:)



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Thank you!!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2011 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 10

How soon can u uodate? this is becoming one of my favorite stories, i have even mentioned it to a few of my friends and they like it as well..... keep the great work coming to us.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I am trying to stay on a weekly updating schedule. It made my day to read that you like this enough to talk to your friends about it!!

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2011 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

loving this story :)

keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am so happy you like it!!

Reviewer: nikon342 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 9

HA! Renee, what do I think of Renee... SHe is Nuckin' Futs! Holy Hell please let Bella give her HELL and send her ass packin' lol
XO

Author's Response:

LOL  patience...its a comin'  Thanks for reading and taking the time to leave your thoughts!!!

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 9

I think her mother is a hot mess. Bella better stand her ground cuz if not her mom will pounce. That lady is crazy as hell. You don't come up in someone else house like you pay the bills yelling and acting like you run shit. Mom or not respect my shit, hell I say she got off easy



Author's Response:

I agree 100%.....and it isnt over yet..... thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts!! I love the feedback!

Reviewer: TwilightAddict Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 9

Oh hell, who the hell does Renee think she is??  Bella is a grown woman, paying her own bills.  Her "parents" don't do anything for her.   I can't stand RENEE. 

 

Love this Edward and Bella.  Bella has a backbone and Edward is just......yummmmmmy!!!!!

 

Patiently (Alice style....bouncing on toes) waiting on more of this FANFUCKINGTASTIC story!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I am a little speecless...thank you so so much!! I love to hear your thoughts and love hearing you like this story so much. (and can just picture you bouncing...lol )

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

So nobody told Esme or Carlisle so they got a suprise but it was a good one.  Renee is another matter



Author's Response:

You're right. I think they were pleasantly surprised. Renee, well, no one wants to see her coming.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2011 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

ok, Renee, say what you gotta say and GET OUT! Bella better not back down from her!

Author's Response:

LOL Yes ma'am! I hope I dont disappoint you!  THanks!!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 9

!!!
great job!! Looking forward to the next one!

Author's Response:

LOL  thanks! love hearing your thoughts!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 9

im excited to see wht happens next 



Author's Response:

That's great! Thank you for reading-happy you like it!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 8

I dont think he is in to much trouble he ment well and he had to prove to Dan that Bella did have a boyfriend he could plead insanity lol



Author's Response:

You're probably right.....and will find out soon  lol  thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

I had some good times in the back seat of a car lol  66 ford galixie has nice big back seat lol. 



Author's Response:

I'll remember that if I ever write another carsex scene   lol  Thanks!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 7:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Is Edward going to give Dan a smak down???



Author's Response:

Maybe?  LOL  thank you for taking the time to review!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 5

Im sure Edward would work around her schedul so when is he hiring her????  Why didnt he tell his parents that he was seeing Bella???



Author's Response:

Ooooh....He would.  I've tried to portray him as closed off, withdrawn. When he left, he went inside himself and hasnt really come back all the way yet. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts-I love reading them.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 4

what is Renee coming for???  I am so happy he showed her his heart



Author's Response:

Because she is a mean, controlling biocth....Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 3

Its a good thing he went and talked to her and now that she showed up he has to know that she feels  something for him



Author's Response:

They're getting there. Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts...I really appreciate it.

 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

good boy but what the hell took him so long he should of went back that night.  Just got to say love Rose



Author's Response:

Rose is a fun bit of snark, isn't she? Thank you for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 1

I think Edward doesnt know how to react.



Author's Response:

You're right. Bella upsets his nice closed off little world, not to mention a reminder of the past. He panicked. Thanks for leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 May 2011 6:04 AM Title: Prologue

sounds great



Author's Response:

Thanks, hope you like it!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 8

Maybe a tiny bit of trouble but his heart was in the right place!
Looking forward to more!

Author's Response:

Happy you agree! Thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 7

It was hot.....but just imagine how it would be on a bed. Poor Edward....not enough room big boy?
Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Sex in a bed....I'll have to remember that.   Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: moewerts Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8

BUSTED!



Author's Response:

LOL  Yep!  THanks for reading.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 4

Yay!

Author's Response:

Glad you like it!!! 

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 2

It's a start!! I'm really liking this!!

Author's Response:

That's awesome...glad you like it! Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

Hmmmmm.......I think Edward has ben talking about Bella......

Author's Response:

Hmmm.......maybe!  lol    thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2011 1:13 AM Title: Prologue

I'm intrigued!

Author's Response:

Great! I hope it lives up to your expectations. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well I dont blame Edward at all for talking to Dan, he was being a prick just like Jacob.  Men they think they can blackmail women all the time.  I am glad that Edward stood up for her.  Cant wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

The way I was looking at it is that he was just trying to help-looking out for her. I see both sides of it. But, when done properly, what woman doesn't want her man sticking up for her? Glad you liked how he handled it. Thanks!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 7

Sex in the car was sexy but I was a little dissapointed in the fact that she had already lost her cherry. I like when that is explained in the first lemon how he breaks her barrier.



Author's Response:

Well, I think they were a little surprised too...LOL I know what you mean though. Not sure I could do that justice...Thanks for reading  :)

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

Another great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks again!!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well things are moving right along and I am still really enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you!!!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love how you are moving the story along and not dragging things out too much.



Author's Response:

Thank you-this story isnt really about them 'getting together', otherwise, it would be taking a while for them to find each other. It's more about them improving on the initial bond they have.  Thank you!!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well at least their talking.  I like Paul too.  He seems nice.



Author's Response:

They'll get there. I like Paul, too. You havent seen the last of him...thanks for reading!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

Well it seems that Edward did love her like I thought.  I am glad to know.  I hope Bella gives him a chance now.



Author's Response:

Yes, he does love her. He just over-reacted to seeing her and panicked  lol  thanks for leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ohhh how sad.  I think maybe he thought she didn't want anything to do with him since she was the one that left the bed back in forks.



Author's Response:

I love hearing your thoughts on the story-thank you!

Reviewer: LetRobstenLuv4ever Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 6:10 PM Title: Prologue

Wow that was a great chapter.  I really loved it and I am very interested to see where you take this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am really happy you like it! Thanks for leaving your thoughts.

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 8

Bella had better appreciate that someone in her life cares enough about her to speak up when she is unwilling to............



Author's Response:

You are going to be tough on me, aren't you?? That's great, actually. I can't wait to hear what you think about some of the upcoming chapters. Thank you!!

 

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

Really special first time for people who have loved each other for years....

 



Author's Response:

I sense some sarcasm....but it's all good. I love all the reviews and appreciate you leaving your thoughts! Thank you!!

Reviewer: blb0157 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 May 2011 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 8

Great story !!!

More and more chapters !

Brenda



Author's Response:

Thank you, happy you are enjoying it! Thank you for reading & leaving a review.

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2011 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Uh oh, hope she's not too mad, I like protective possesiveward!...lol!

Author's Response:

I know, right?? PPE is all kinds of hotness.

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