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Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

That was a really awesome date that he planned.



Author's Response:

Wasn't it though?  Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 12

Well I really hope that Renee got it this time because I am thinking that things might get worse for her if she comes back.  I really don't think that we have heard the last from Renee or Prof. Black for that matter I think that he is going to try something with Bella and get into tons of trouble with that one.



Author's Response:

You'd be right. They'll show up like a bad penny. The Professor will get his, though ;) 

Reviewer: Team Switzerland 2009 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 1:09 PM Title: Epilogue

I absolutely loved this story :) Ups, downs, and heartfail included <3



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I try to keep the ups and downs in balance and any heatfail will always lead to an HEA. That's just how I roll.  Ugh. I didn't just say that.  Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 12

It is cute how well they get along already. I wonder how long Bella is going to think about the job before she takes it.



Author's Response:

I really like their 'togetherness'. Since this story isn't really about them trying to get together and figure out how to stay together, I was able to establish an early foundation for them.

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2011 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

I wonder if Renee is going to bring Charlie down to belittle Bella too???



Author's Response:

You know by now that Charlie wasn't fully aware of Renee's actions at the time.  :) thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 9

the Reneemonster has landed and she is pissed!!!



Author's Response:

LMAO  yes, yes she is. Just wait, she's gonna get more pissed off ;)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

Well I see the first dissagreement happening right now... I wonder how much groveling Edward is going to have to do.



Author's Response:

LOL  probably not as much as he'd have to IRL!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

I didn't think that Edward would actually let her lose her virginity in his car but that was hott!!!



Author's Response:

He did try to stop things...it was Bella who insisted they continue :)  People were split on this. Some hated that it happened and others thought it was ok. If Bella had been younger and more innocent, I would not have done it that way.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

I wonder how long it is going to be before Edward or even Jasper offer Bella a job at the shop.



Author's Response:

Not long...  :)  Thanks!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well I wonder what Bella's boss did to her.... Oh and I am shocked that Alice didn't follow after those two and find out what was going on.



Author's Response:

Her boss is sexually harassing her, though I tried to get that across subtley. I usually try to have Alice's meddling done discretely, and not all up in E/B's business!  LOL  thank you ;)

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 4

I wonder why Renee is coming to see Bella after all this time? Maybe she doesn't think that she breaks her enough by belittling her on the phone she needs to do it in person.



Author's Response:

Renee thinks she needs to keep sticking her nose in Bella's life. Even though she offers nothing but negativity. Do you hate her? I wanted people to despise Renee. I don't think I gave her any redeeming qualities  LOL   Thank you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 3:23 PM Title: Epilogue

great ending, glad they are so happy! i can't believe it's over, i'll miss this so much! hope all goes well with your surgery, get well soon!

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you for the well wishes and...I'm posting an outtake when I get caught up on these reviews :)  I hope you'll enjoy it!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Well it is good that Edward and Bella got to hang out together....



Author's Response:

It was definitely a step in the right direction :)  Thank you!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hopefully Edward can get Bella to forgive him..



Author's Response:

Edward is too charming for Bella NOT to forgive him!  lol  thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 1

It is sad that she has built up to this moment and now that she has seen Edward it wasnt what she wanted....



Author's Response:

It was sad. I shed a tear or two when I wrote that, remembering that feeling of disappointment and humiliation when you build something up in your mind, only to have it thrown back in your face. :(  

Reviewer: mrsrpatz Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 1:30 PM Title: Prologue

That is very sad that Edward left without a word to anyone but I guess that Bella kinna did the same thing even if she did leave a note.



Author's Response:

Edward's state of mind was anything but coherent when he left. I think he figured it was best for all concerned that he just got away from them. Thank you...and I apologize for it taking me so long to respond. I really do appreciate you taking the time to read and review my story!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 12:29 PM Title: Epilogue

Great way to wrap it up, Thanks for the insight into their future. And you kinda left it open at the end, does she or doesnt she get preggers? and if so is just one, or twins again? Any chance you may do an outtake later, or a sequel later on? Keep up the great work. Wishing you a safe and speedy recovery.



Author's Response:

I hadn't planned on writing anything more on LI, but after surgery I needed a jump start. So, I wrote an outtake, or more correctly, a futuretake. I'm happy you liked the story and if you'd like to take a look at the outtake, your questions will be answered ;)  I'll be posting it when I'm caught up on reviews.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 11:12 AM Title: Epilogue

loved it..gonna miss it. good luck with ur health....:)



Author's Response:

Thank you very much, both for reading and the well wishes!

Reviewer: nananaiis Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 11:10 AM Title: Epilogue

i love it thanks!!!!!

a beautyful story

excuse my english I'm french

 



Author's Response:

No excuses needed! Thanks so much for reading!! I'm happy you liked it :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 9:46 AM Title: Epilogue

I think it is a wonderful story and I thank you for sharing it with me.  I love the ending that is sweet and hot lol.



Author's Response:

I think YOU are wonderful for reading and reviewing every chapter. I really do appreciate it, more than I can express. So happy you enjoyed it :) I'll be posting an outtake when I finish responding to reviews. I hope you'll take a look ;)

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 8:30 AM Title: Epilogue

wow love the ending but what a shame to see it end thankyou for the enjoyment I got from reading this xoxo



Author's Response:

Thank you for sticking with me to the end, I'm happy you liked it!

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 7:46 AM Title: Epilogue

Excellent!!!  Sad that it's done, but great story!!!



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed it. I've written an outtake, and will post it after I get caught up with my reviews ;)

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 6:06 AM Title: Epilogue

I loved this chapter........so sad it had to end.  I really enjoyed this story ;-)



Author's Response:

Thank you! Posting an outtake a little later-maybe you'll like to have another little taste? :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 5:22 AM Title: Epilogue

I loved it very much I will have to admit I will miss InkWard and his beautiful Bella!!!

Great job!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much! I'm getting caught up on my reviews, and will then post an outtake I wrote. I hope you'll take a look!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 4:59 AM Title: Epilogue

Loved it. Had all the essential elements for an exciting story and more!

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it! Thank you for reading :)

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 4:34 AM Title: Epilogue

Wonderful ending!  Thank you so much for allowing me to make this journey with you.

I hope your surgery goes well...take care honey and I look forward to your next story.  Muah!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for all the support! I really appreciate the reviews and that you took the time to read my little fic!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2011 4:31 AM Title: Epilogue

loved the chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :) When I get caught up on these reviews, I am posting an outtake, or futuretake...Hope you'll take a look ;)

Reviewer: mamarobsten Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

me gusta



Author's Response:

Gracias! :)

Reviewer: LanaLee1248 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2011 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 28

I have really enjoyed this story. Excellent writing. I hope this review finds you on the road to recovery. Get well soon. The ten is for all 28 chapters.

Author's Response:

I'm very happy you liked my story! Thank you for the kind words and the rating :)

Reviewer: jacqueline3508 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 28

I like the taste of walk seem's interesting..



Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm working on it now :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 28

wow that was gripping just one question what happened to renee and charlie? hope your surgery goes well and you recover quickly x



Author's Response:

Renee just disappeared, faded away I think. Charlie stuck around to salvage what he could with Bella. Thank you for reading and for the well wishes :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 28

good luck with surgery!!!!  thanks for tieing this all up and no again, I didn't think about a brother from another mother....  New fic sounds great can't wait!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. I'm happy you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 28

so happy they are all ok! yes! Edward is going to propose! the new story look great, can't wait! good luck with your surgery, hope you recover quickly!

Author's Response:

Thank you for the nice words. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I AM working on the new one... :)

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 28

Oh man.......I'm so glad Edward and Jasper found Bella before that crazy F*** James could had a chance to carry out his threat against her life. Can't wait till the next chapter ;-)



Author's Response:

He was nuts, wasn't he? Thanks so much for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 28

I am excited to read Walk sounds good.  I am so happy the way Love Ink is ending and cant wait for the epi. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing. I'm very happy you've enjoyed it!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28

Walk....I think I'm gonna love it!



Author's Response:

I hope! :) Thanks for the support!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 28

Wow - this was a perfect ending.  I love this story and I just want to thank you for allowing me to tag along on this journey of yours.

Love the start of the new story ~ I hope you are able to continue.

I wish you well with your surgery <3

Thank you again for everything.  MUAH!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked my story. Thank YOU for supporting it. I'm working on the new one right now :)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2011 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 28

loved the ending and looking forward to the new story 



Author's Response:

Thank you! I am working on it...hope to post in a month or so.

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2011 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 27

Well holy shit!  What an exciting chapter...James is sure a sick fuck isn't he.  You portrayed him brilliantly.

And how the hell did Edward show up there?????

Loved this chapt - thanks so very much!

I hope your feeling much better. <3



Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you liked the chapter, and yes James is sick. I actaully had fun writing him, though! Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 27

please tell me they already took James out



Author's Response:

Sorry for my epic fail in responding. Thank you for taking the time to read this!

Reviewer: inge15 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 27

awww shit!!

this is gonna be good :)



Author's Response:

LOL   Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 27

loved the chapter looking forward to the enxt chapter 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to read and I am happy you liked it!

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 27

Sorry to hear your not well. who's the lawyer ? nice use of an outside influance



Author's Response:
The lawyer really didn't have anything to do with the story, just a reference. Thank you for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 27

:)



Author's Response:
Thanks!! :)

Reviewer: nancy123k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 27

Oh!!!  More!!!!  I know you won't let James kill Bella, right???? I think James has a screw loose, somehow in his mind he's ratonalized all this to being Edwards fault when really he just wanted a family, to feel wanted.  That is my opinion.  I can't wait for more!!!!



Author's Response:
I don't think that I could ever kill off a main character...    James has many screws loose! I have to agree with you about his motivation, though.  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Oct 2011 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 27

wow, he is sick in the head.....i hope Edward can get her out of there. I hope you feel better soon and that the health issues are not serious.

Author's Response:

I kind of enjoyed writing James in this story. I had to channel my inner psychopath.  LOL  Thanks for the well wishes-and thank you for reading/reviewing, as always!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2011 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 26

:)



Author's Response:
Thanks!!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 26

FANTASTIC chaper!  I so wish I could give you more than 10 coffee's.  I knew that they had to be in cahoots......

Thank you so much!



Author's Response:
Thank you!! Love my coffee ;)  LOL  Thanks so much for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2011 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 26

ok so now whats the connection  love the writting but on tender hooks here x



Author's Response:
Thanks for the compliment! (and thank you for reading!!)

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 26

Exciting chapter, please post again soon!



Author's Response:
Thank you!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 25

Yeah, I'm interested in "Walk"...



Author's Response:
Awesome! I probably won't be posting anything til after the first of the year-too much going on right now. Thanks! ;)

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 26

You just knew something was going to happen to Bella after her boss was beaten and hospitalized.  Sure hope they find her before Vic (Carla) and James get a chance to hurt her too bad.



Author's Response:
So true, I figured that many would pick up on that. Thank you for reading!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2011 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 26

Holly shit Edward should of went with her and she should not of went around the corner.  Please hurry with next chapter.



Author's Response:
Perhaps he should have... I think Bella will think better of it next time. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 26

I figured something was up when "Carla" wanted that tattoo. My confusion is why! What is her connection to the cousin - Kate?
Nice chapter. Thanks for not dragging it out!

Author's Response:

Sorry for the delay in response-  I'm a believer in not dragging things out, unless necessary ;)  Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well GO! get a move on and find your woman! please let Bella be ok

Author's Response:

Go Edward!  LOL Thank you for reading-sorry my response was delayed!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 26

so tantalizing!!!! love love love this story



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! I'm so happy you like it!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 26

looking forward to he next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2011 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 25

ohhh this is so good, i'm so frustrated with myself because I just can't figure it out...   so good...



Author's Response:

Thank you, but don't get too frustrated. The answers will come with the next chapter. (or, most answers, anyway) Thanks!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

I don't think it is Black I suspect Renee or Elizabeths family



Author's Response:

I think you are getting closer to the truth! ;) Thank you!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 23

seems like  awful big coincidence



Author's Response:

Coincidences abound in this story...not likely they are, though. Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 22

BellA heard him threaten Lead didn't she?



Author's Response:

She did hear him... Thank you!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 20

both need to communicatr better



Author's Response:

Yes, they do! Thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 19

hot



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 17

tatt in bed?



Author's Response:

Kind of... :) Thanks!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 25

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 15

Funny, is Renee a part of this lawsuit



Author's Response:

Maybe?  lol  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2011 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 25

Well I'm certainly glad everyone will be all right!

Thanks so much for the update!



Author's Response:

Thank YOU for reading!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 12

she told Black off better but both should be sufficient



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! I love the feedback :)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 12

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

wasn't really his place to handle it



Author's Response:

No, it wasn't. But Edward thought he was helping and is still pretty new at this whole relationship stuff. ;)  Thanks so much!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 7

not exactly great for the first time



Author's Response:

You're not the only one who thought that. ;)  But, Bella really didn't mind. She figured she had waited long enough and just wanted him...right then and there! Thanks for reading/reviewing!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

hell yeah



Author's Response:

LOL  Thank you, glad you like!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 5

sweet



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 4

hot!!!



Author's Response:

Ya think?  LOL Thanks!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

I love tatts and I love Edward



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading...glad you like Edward! ;)

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 1

poor Bella



Author's Response:

Awww. Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 25

Why would Jacob go after Emmett and the gang? I think this has something to do with Edward. Someone is trying to hurt Edward by hurting everyone around him, and I think the girl who had "her brother's" date tattooed on her is involved too. I'm looking forward to some more pieces of this puzzle!



Author's Response:

Yes, it's definitely time for some answers. Many of you are getting close to the truth. ;) Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: nicci Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 25

so many questions but i've got a sneeky feeling carlise's brother is behind a lot of this loving the story though x



Author's Response:

Most of your questions (if not all) will be answered in the next chapter! Thanks so much, happy you like it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love a sneek of the new story.    I am sure this has to do with the law suit and the death of the girl I think it is revenge against Edward.



Author's Response:

I think you're getting hot. Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: cgooden Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 25

I agree with Edward these things happening aren't random but I have a feeling for some reason that its Renee, but it could be Jacob too.  I can't wait to find out though.



Author's Response:

Hmmm, I can't really comment on that, but I promise that the next chapter will have answers! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 25

loved it looking forward to the next chapter 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2011 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 25

hope Em will be alright......i can't believe someone would trick out a car just to hurt someone else

Author's Response:

I think Em will be fine ;)  I guess the person responsible, was very determined... Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: Tamara Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 24

Huh??? NNNOOOOOOO you can't end this chapter here!!!!!

Wonderful chapter and I still think Carla is major trouble..........

MUAH !!



Author's Response:

Carla IS major trouble. The how's and why's are coming soon! :)  Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: shookie Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 24

Okay a first I figured it has something to do with the research...NOW I think it has everything to do with Edwards past. Carla  maybe long lost relative/friend. Jimmy helping Carla....I figured Leah's attack might have been a mistake. ya know the bad guys thinking that they got Bella.



Author's Response:

All very good guesses...and you're close. There are only a few chapters left, so you will find out soon! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: mountainlion718 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 24

is Emmett ok? Jimmy, Jacob or Carla....maybe all 3, Edward is gonna end up crawling inside Bella......

Author's Response:

I can't answer any of that...but the answers ARE coming, after the next chapter. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 24

OMG not Emmett



Author's Response:

Sorry... I'll wait to say anymore til after Ch 25  other than a Thank you!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:29 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)



Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 24

Glad Edward was able to hold up while doing Clara's tatoo. That date of her brother's deat just seems too much of a coincedence to me. Hope Emmet's okay. So much drama in this story, but I am enjoying it ;-)



Author's Response:

Lots of drama, lots of questions...which should all be answered shortly! Nothing but answers after the next chapter. Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 24

cant wait till the next chapter 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2011 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 24

****doing the head bang to the pillow, frustrated I can't figure this out****  Arrrg!!!!  okay so we do know beyond any shadow of a doubt that Beth really is dead and just not trying to screw with Edward right???  I mean   gawwwhhh what is up with Carla!!!!  if she is not Beth then she is connected to her skanky prisoner Dad!  Okay so Jimmy must be the person attacking Leah and Emmett, that's my guess any how... still not sure why he would but... I know your going to reveal the truth to us all that are patient...  I Can Be Patient...  I just don't like being... LOL!!!!   

Wonderful suspense building or should I say drama building chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Hmm...Okay, 1st-Carla is NOT Beth...Sadly, Beth is dead. As for Carla's connection to Marcus (or anyone else) you will have answers after the next chapter. Everything will be answered :)  Thank you so much!

Reviewer: pennycocktail Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2011 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 23

He should have one of the others do the tattoo, feels like things are gonna' start happening soon.



Author's Response:

Maybe he should. And you'd be right, things are about to take off! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 23

I think who ever attacted Leah thought it was Bella.  I think it is a set up with the tat to and this Carla.  Rose is a smart lady and knows when she needs to give someone a bitch slap lol



Author's Response:

I think you have a lot of theories and I think a couple are pretty close to the truth!  lol  Thanks so much! Love to read your thoughts!

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 23

Ohhh, so beautiful, I really feel that Edward needs to give himself a break after 5 years, I still have a feeling the message is for Edward's family...

Cant wait to see if I am right.



Author's Response:

Yes, he really does.  Happy you liked the chapter. All will be revealed soon! Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 23

well definitely something funny about Carla.... hummmm!!!!  I've got think thi k on this some..  goodness it's getting better and better



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm happy to hear I haven't confused you to the point of giving up! Keep an eye on Carla. Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 23

well im glad that she came to her sences 

 



Author's Response:

Great! Thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

Glad Bella came to her senses. Is Carla & the tat something to be worried about?

Author's Response:

About time, huh?  And, I'd say...yeah.  Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 23

I loved this chapter. A little sad though ;-(



Author's Response:

Thank you. I really liked this chapter, too. I'm glad you thought it was sad, that was my intention :)  Thanks for reading & reviewing!

Reviewer: pamikulski Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2011 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hi I can't remember from the beginning, but is Edward adopted...could that be

his sister?



Author's Response:

No, Edward wasn't adopted. His family did adopt Beth, his cousin, though. ;) Thanks so much!!

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