Date: 26 Jul 2011 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 16
Does Bella not realize she was raped? One thrust or more, rape is rape. I hope she pressed charges. Edward should have too for assault. Were the police called?
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Date: 26 Jul 2011 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 16
Those two guys need to be hanging by there balls. One thrust or twenty it dont matter it is still rape but I am glad they didnt hurt her more.
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Date: 19 Jul 2011 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow hot time on the desk
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Date: 19 Jul 2011 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 15
excited to see what happens next chapter
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[Report This]Date: 12 Jul 2011 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 14
All shucks now! That was awesome!!!!!
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Date: 12 Jul 2011 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love Love Love its everywhere lol. Alice is so excited
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Date: 04 Jul 2011 1:02 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hmmm.....seems Bella still has some insecurities about Edward.....glad he could put her at ease and MAKE her understand who Rose was in the picture. They still have some 'places' to go in their relationship, so thanks for showing that!!!
Do wonder how/what she will say to his 'confession' at the end!
Thanks for the update! Can't wait for more!
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[Report This]Date: 03 Jul 2011 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
WOW, the L word!
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Date: 03 Jul 2011 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
He let it out how is she going to react she is so sensitive and freaks out without know what is realy going on. Poor girl is so insucure.
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Date: 03 Jul 2011 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 13
excited for the next chapter
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2011 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 12
Now that's the way you do it! LOL
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Date: 28 Jun 2011 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 12
well im excited to see how their relationship progresses!
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Date: 28 Jun 2011 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 12
I think taking it slow is over ;)
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Date: 28 Jun 2011 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
Cute chapter! You can tell they are both feeling the same thing about each other. Thanks for the update....will definitely check out your new story! Keep up the good work and can't wait for more!
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[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2011 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 11
Awesome!
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Date: 22 Jun 2011 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 11
im glad that they finally are talking to eachother
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Date: 21 Jun 2011 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 11
hey,
I'm glad that they are kind of together now and I hope that their relationship will be good.
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Date: 21 Jun 2011 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 11
How are things going to move slow if they kiss like that LOL.
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Date: 21 Jun 2011 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
AHHHH, such a sweet chapter! I am glad Bella is willing to give him a chance....it is so sweet he wants to spoil and treat her like a princess!! GOTTA love the guy!
Great story and thanks for the update!
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 10
Excellent!
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Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 10
well im glad that they are going to talk to each other
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Date: 14 Jun 2011 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
I am so glad he at least caught her at her car she is just running. Alice will get them where they need to be.
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[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2011 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
here is to second chances
love it
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[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, what is wrong with B. I thought she would have jumb his bones. LOL
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[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2011 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
wow that was awkward. very awkward . i can't wait to see what bella's reasoning is for not wanting to converse with edward. love it
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Thank you for the review. All reasoning will be explained soon. Hope you are enjoying it.
Date: 07 Jun 2011 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh my---this sounds like its going to get uncomfortable??? Why is Bella running away, is she embarrassed, worried, or afraid to face her TRUE feelings??? OH MY!!!
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Date: 07 Jun 2011 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
What the hell Bella???????????? The man candy was right in front of you. Edward stand up grab your balls and show her you still have them.
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Date: 07 Jun 2011 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 9
well i hope he goes after her !
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[Report This]Date: 05 Jun 2011 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 8
Ok, with the cliffee!
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Date: 01 Jun 2011 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
OMG I cant wait til they see each other
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Date: 01 Jun 2011 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
im excited to see what happens with the dinner party! keep the updates comming
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[Report This]Date: 01 Jun 2011 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
oh i so can't wait for dinner. let the games begin. love it
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[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Excellent Chapter!!!!
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Date: 24 May 2011 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
i cant wait til they see each other again
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Date: 24 May 2011 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7
i hope she can do it !
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[Report This]Date: 24 May 2011 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
oh Alice you are a ball of fire. I am surprised they didn't see each other on the plane or land. man i can't wait for them to meet. wooohoo
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[Report This]Date: 20 May 2011 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh when they come face to face i am going to love that.
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Date: 17 May 2011 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 6
What a waste of time just think they could of been doing that the whole time. Why didnt they ask any ? about where they live or what plane??? I cant wait till they see each other again.
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Date: 17 May 2011 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
well im excited to see when they meet again!
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Date: 12 May 2011 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
Its about time they hooked up just think of all them wasted days :(
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Date: 11 May 2011 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
its about time for these 2 im excited t osee what ahppens next
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Date: 11 May 2011 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 5
That was a little too rushed and ooc
[Report This]Date: 03 May 2011 4:51 AM Title: Prologue
Well, at least they're on the same page! I am intrigued by the premise and I'm all about Edward and Bella and a happy ending too. The only thing I do hope is that every chapter isn't an exact repeat of the same scene every single time. I love the little play on words here, but it would get a little old if the whole story was like that.
Looking forward to reading more!
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Date: 02 May 2011 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
I think that pissed Bella off I hope it didnt backfire on him????
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Date: 25 Apr 2011 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 3
The fun is about to begin it is ment to be and they should get use to it.
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Date: 20 Apr 2011 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 2
It sound like they are going to be in the dark when they meet I wonder when they will figure out who they are??? Alice is so clever
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Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 2
:)
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Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:48 PM Title: Prologue
:)
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Date: 16 Apr 2011 6:00 AM Title: Prologue
Sounds like it will be fun.
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