[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2010 2:50 PM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
I love this sadstic story!!! It is great thank you!
Author's Response:
hehe hello new reader :) please don't thank me :) I've written this story for people like you, I wouldn't be doing it without you, so thank you very much :) and thanks for the mugs and your support xx
Date: 25 Sep 2010 11:05 PM Title: Hopeless
Bastard! She should never want him.
Author's Response:
well my Bella is a bit of a freak, she likes it rough :) Xx
Date: 25 Sep 2010 10:56 PM Title: New Surroundings
I bet he's going to drain them in front of her to prove he's a monster. Wow, Carlisle is so mean.
Author's Response: oh you are good :) how did you guess :) and yes carlisle is also mean, however he gets nicer too, but much later on :) xx
Date: 25 Sep 2010 10:47 PM Title: Monster
He is so mean. How is he even going to think he should protect her from someone? Jasper needs a hobby.
Author's Response:
haha hello new reader :) and I know my Edward is a bastard, however I promise that he gets a little nicer hehe :) and yes Jasper is rather strange :)
Thank you for the review and support xx
Date: 24 Sep 2010 7:53 AM Title: The Voluri
Oh man, how exciting!! I cant wait to read more!
Author's Response:
More will be coming soon, :) xx
Date: 22 Sep 2010 8:02 PM Title: The Voluri
Gotta love those fun-loving Volturi! Excellent chapter. It had the feel of a courtroom drama - intense, fullblast and always a bit confusing for those involved in the process.
Author's Response:
hehe I love em too :) and thank you. xx
Date: 21 Sep 2010 4:56 PM Title: The Voluri
I think it was bella what happened in the throne room. She just doesn't know it.
Author's Response:
hehe you may be onto something there :) xx
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2010 3:16 AM Title: The Voluri
=) loved the chapter, as always, loved the return of the monster and the progress,
best wishes, Linda
Author's Response:
thank you so much, and thank you for the mugs :) xx
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 6:46 AM Title: The Voluri
She is very special and I so can't wait to see what else she can do.....
Author's Response:
I cant wait to write it, I mean this is just the tip of the ice burg, she is going to be incredible :) xx
Thanks for the mugs and your support xx
Date: 20 Sep 2010 4:03 AM Title: The Voluri
Oooo, Bella's powers are beginning to manifest themselves. Should make for some really interesting upcoming chapters.
Author's Response:
hehe it most certainly will :) thank you so much, and I am so excited for the next chapters :) xxx
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:35 AM Title: The Voluri
Haha YEP...totally confused. But, as always, I trust ya :) Normally my review would be much longer but I start my first *real* JOB tomorrow! So that college education evidently paid off. I'm actually not that excited...I work from 8am to 8pm. Yuck, right? But it's a start. And it's something to pay the bills and put food on the table so I can buy my own place! Living with the parents for the past few months has been interesting. It's going to hopefully be a good change. So I would write more, but it's 12am and I need sleep :) :) But LOVE the update!! Hope life is FANTASTIC!! And thanks for your sweet reply to my last review. You are precious!! Talk to you soon! Xoxo
Author's Response:
hehe everyone is confused :) thank you for putting your faith in me :) OMG first real job, I am soooo proud, this review is almost as good as the one I am anticipating as your whole 'I have the best boyfriend ever' review hehe :) hey 8 to 8 aint too bad :) you can do it :) I'm looking for an apartment with my fella :) you are very welcome for the last reply, I ment every word sister :) thanks for the mugs and I shall be updating soon :) xx
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2010 2:07 AM Title: The Voluri
I loved this chapter! I am so happy to see the Volturi pulling Jacob away. Let's hope that Tanya and Jacob are executed! I can't wait for the next installment. Now that everyone is in Aro's castle, the tension and plots are going to really erupt!:)
Author's Response:
thank you very much, and yeah Aro doesnt want Jacob messing with Bella too much :) and Tanya and jake shall have rather short lives in my story :) the next installment shouldnt take too long :) xx
Date: 20 Sep 2010 1:19 AM Title: The Voluri
Good chapter. I was so glad that Bella got to see Edward and the rest of the family, finally!
Was that Bella causing the disturbance? I really want them to get out of there and I'd like someone to kill Jacob.
Author's Response:
thank you, and yeah I loved the reunion :)
And yes that was Bella causing the disturbance :) and dont worry someone will be killing Jacob however it shall be later rather than sooner :/ xx
Date: 20 Sep 2010 1:08 AM Title: The Voluri
ugh. they need to rip of jacob's dick and shove it down tanya's throat and then behaed them both.
Author's Response:
sounds like an amazingly graphic little chapter :) I shall give it some serious thought, and just for you, I think I will make a big deal out of their deaths, I already have Jacobs lined up, but I'm still thinking about Tanyas :)
thank you for the review and your support xx
Date: 20 Sep 2010 12:52 AM Title: The Voluri
Yep still trying to figure out what's going on. :0)
Author's Response:
I know everything is still very confusing, however if you have any questions please just visit my blog and ask away, cos I'm sure that other people would love to know aswell :) http://misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/?zx=257e18d47d890ea0
Thank you for the review and your support xx
Date: 20 Sep 2010 12:13 AM Title: The Voluri
That chapter was wow confusing. First I would I want to know is Aro is keeping all of them then why are they so sad for her? Also if he is keeping all of them then why can't she remain with Edward? Why does she have to be with Jake? Wouldn't her being happy work more in their favor? Most importantly what the hell is her power? So many questions, each chapter seems to leave me with more questions then answers. Can't wait to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Hey, I would love to answer your questions :)
1. Aro is not interested in making Bella happy or her family, he does not want to make them stronger, he want to make them weaker, break their bond, however thats not going to happen, and that was why the Monster did the whole territory thing, he wanted to show Aro not Jacob, who Bella belonged to.
2. I'm sorry I can't tell you what her power is, I wish I could, but I can't its a big SURPRISE of this whole story, I'm very sorry, please don't hate me :)
If you have anymore questions About Irrevocable then please visit my blog, I have a whole question corner thing, and I would love to answer any more that you have :) http://misskingatyourservice.blogspot.com/?zx=257e18d47d890ea0
Thanks for the review and your support xx
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 10:56 PM Title: The Voluri
Did she cause that wild stuff to happen?
Author's Response:
Yup, she did, And there is much more to come, she can do alot more than just shake a room and cause a breeze :) xx
Thanks for the mugs xx
Date: 19 Sep 2010 10:21 PM Title: Taking Control
:)
Author's Response:
thank you for the lovely smiley faces, they make me happy :) xx
Date: 19 Sep 2010 9:43 PM Title: Leaping into the Rabbit Hole
:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:59 PM Title: The Voluri
Awesome Chapter! Love this story! Thank you for a fabulous update!
Author's Response:
thank you :) Its all thanks to you :) thank you so much, and i love the mugs xx
Date: 19 Sep 2010 7:54 PM Title: Beautiful Stranger
I've had this bookmarked forever but just now started reading. What a great first chapter. Surprised that she got nailed in the head.
Author's Response:
Oh wow I love new readers, welcome and I hope you like the rest of the story :) xx
Date: 28 Aug 2010 2:15 AM Title: New Home
ugh Hope Jake Aro and Tanya all die soon.
Author's Response:
hehe dont worry they will :) xx
Date: 26 Aug 2010 2:33 AM Title: New Home
Monsters on the loose!
Author's Response:
hehe yup he is :) xx
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:28 AM Title: New Home
Release the Kraken! Er.... Monster! I'm very excited about this next chapter. I am glad you told us about Carlisle's feelings for Bella; and why he thought of her as Esme's reincarnation of sorts, but I can't help but think that, because it is from Edward's point of view, the "However his thoughts were always platonic" might just be a case of wishful thinking. I imagine it would be hard to have platonic feelings for someone who you thought was a reincarnation of the love of your life! I was glad to see some more of Aro; he seems more insane, less calculating, for some reason. Then again, that could just be Edward's interpretation of him! Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
so sorry the reply is so late :/
oh his thoughts are platonic seriously, he would never think of another woman the way he did for esme, and he does see her as the reincarnation however its more like esme's daughter than actual esme, if that makes sence.
Aro is nuts, but I love writing for him, its great haha
thanks for your review xx
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2010 3:35 AM Title: New Home
Soooo good!! I hope the "monster" kicks Aro and his little "posse's" asses. (Wow. I just used the word posse. I haven't used that since my freshman year of college with my sorority, as our class had some group we made up...calling ourselves "the posse". We thought we were so cool back then, haha. I smile and miss all those girls now...as they are all seemingly either engaged, or just married. Growing up sucks. (Not the getting married part. That part would be great if I could just FIND the guy God wants me to marry. I tell you Abi. I'm 24! My eggs are getting old! HA HA. And I'm going to be that girl who's always the bridesmaid and never the bride because I date guys for two months and then run when it starts to look serious.
Wait. I think I was supposed to be leaving you a review. Not bitching about how everyone and their dog has a ring on their left finger but moi. (There's a possibility I could be PMSing...oops. How's your life going?) ;-)
Sorry about that. That's right. Back to reviewing the chapter. The chapter in which Bella has found love. And she'll probably end up having a happily ever after...and get a ring on her finger too. With a great guy who loves her and adores her and will give her children and they can start a family with a two story house with the white picket fence and a pool with built in hot tub and sun deck and little white puppy. Damn. I did it again.
Take three: This chapter was fantastic...it even got me thinking about something other than my non existent husband and the fact my father suggested I try e-harmony.You heard me. My dad is suggesting dating sites for me. I think I need more of your chapters to pull me outta this funk I'm in.
Ok. I guess I can tell you what's really going on. I kinda just found out the guy (I mean...THE guy)who I dated on and off since my freshman year in high school (that's eight years together on and off) just proposed to one of my good "friends". Did I mention this guy and I were seeing each other a month ago? I'll be using that email address of yours asap. Sorry for the crappy review. My mind's not in review mode right now. My mind is kinda numb. Along with my heart. Guys are...just insensitive jerks. What's funny is I want to hate him...but I can't find it in myself to be mad at him. I guess I just really do what him to be happy. I just don't understand...why that couldn't have been with me. I'm going to be fine. And believe it or not, I'm going to end this review at some point. It's just...see, I've got to appear strong to all my friends here. Indifferent. Like I don't care. But you're kinda like that friend that doesn't really know any of my friends here...so maybe admitting to you that the truth is: it hurts so badly that it feels like my heart fell out of my chest...is ok. Because I'm only going to admit that once, and then we'll go back to pretending everything is normal and fine. Because it will be. Sorry for forcing you to read all this...it kinda just poured out. Whether you mean to be or not, you're a great listener, ha :) And I really mean it...kick ass chapter. SO update soon hun! Xoxo :)
Author's Response:
Oh sweety, I'm so sorry I havnt replied, but listen here, that guy is obviously a dick! your lovely and he doesnt even deserve to breathe your are, and I'm not meaning to sound rude but this 'friend' is a bitch (I'm sorry but your too sweet, they dont deserve to even know someone as special as you!) I wish I could come and give you a hug, I dont like you being sad, please dont be sad, just remember, he aint worth it, so dont even waste energy and time thinking of him!
Oooft I feel a little rilled haha I am gonna have to pour all of this into writting lol
Be Happy, I shall send to monster to you :) xx
Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:57 PM Title: New Home
love it cant wait for more!!!
Author's Response:
oh thank you and I'm sorry te reply is so late :) xx
Date: 23 Aug 2010 4:15 PM Title: New Home
Great chapter! I had thought you had given up on this story, hope we don't have to wait too long to see how Edward saves poor Bella!
Well done!
Author's Response:
hey sorry for the late reply, thank you for the review and I would never give up on this story :) thank you so much xx
Date: 23 Aug 2010 3:31 PM Title: Hopeless
Holy jeez. I wouldn't mind seeing E go a little softer. But then id like to see B hate him for what he did. You know, no hea for E. Or J for that matter. They should suffer in the end.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:23 PM Title: New Home
Poor Bella . I hope they get her away from Jake soon.
Date: 23 Aug 2010 6:17 AM Title: New Home
It's times like this when you need the monster!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 2:54 AM Title: New Home
OMG please update soon this is going to be real good thanks for sharing.....
Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:56 AM Title: New Home
It's about time! Kick some ass Edward
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 12:32 AM Title: New Home
I am so happy for the update! Once again, this is an excellent chapter that is clearly setting the stage for a huge confrontation among the Volturi, werewolves and Cullens. I hope Edward destroys Tanya. Please update soon! I am so curious to see what happens next to Bella!
Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:53 PM Title: New Home
that was interesting. hmm! they teamed up because she wanted Edward and he wanted Bella. Hmm! Interesting. I think they should just be together. good grief! Disgusting individuals!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2010 11:43 PM Title: New Home
I can't wait for the monster to tear Jacon up!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2010 10:53 PM Title: New Home
I did have enough room when I returned this. So let me tell you, it's a grest chapter! I can't wqit to see what the monster does! Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
oh thank you huni, you did a great job, sorry I was about to email you but lost track :/ Thank you so much for helping me out :) and the monster is completely in control, as you have seen Edward has fully handed the reigns over to the monster :) hehe xx
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:55 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
Loved the chapter, the progress and i wonder what Aro is up to.. *hmmm*
best wishes Linda
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2010 3:39 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Loved the gruesome chapter, i keep telling myself that they´ll get whats coming, she will get her revenge LOL otherwise i would be miserable w this torture, =) i have faith in you.
best wishes Linda
Date: 19 Aug 2010 1:21 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
Thats a strange turn of events.
Date: 07 Aug 2010 3:17 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
Please don't let them damage Bella's feelings for Edward and her new "family." It seems like Carlisle is warming up to Bella finally.
And for God's sake don't let Edward go all crazy and try to stay away from Bella to keep her safe. That would be too predictable and one of the most annoying aspects of the SM version.
Your's is good and it's unique! Waiting for more!
Author's Response:
Don't worry, her feelings for the family are solid :) and yes I have loved the Carlisle/Bella chunks :)
OOft do you really think the monster would leave her with them? hehe he is going to cause a riot lol :)
And thank you very much for saying that my story is unique, that means alot to me :) more shall be coming soon, I just have a lot on my plate right now xx
Date: 06 Aug 2010 12:49 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
Great gooogly-moogly that was intense!! The tension and angst just kept rising and rising and just when we thought it was safe -- bam! Bravo on an intense yet "unput-downable" two chapters!
Author's Response:
hehe I'm glad you liked and felt the tension :) thank you very much :) xx
[Report This]Date: 05 Aug 2010 4:51 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
Why would Aro leave her with Jake???!
Author's Response:
well because he needs to break Bella's spirit :/ xx thanks for the mugs and the support xx
Date: 04 Aug 2010 9:37 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
hmmm hope Aro didnt promise her to Jacob.
Author's Response:
Ermm well he kinda did but dont worry, everything will be ok :) xx
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 4:39 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
Aro was always the crazy power hungry man! When are they going to die again? Seriously!
Jacob seriously needs to die also.
Author's Response:
Hey dont worry, they will be dead very soon :)
And Jacob is on my death list! hehe xx thanks for the mugs and th support xx
[Report This]Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:37 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
I don't want her with Jacob please fix this update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
dont worry, the monster to the rescue, but not quite yet, do you really think the Volturi will let them go?
thanks for the mugs and support xx
Date: 04 Aug 2010 2:36 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
UMMMM, Not sure this chapter made any progress to comment on other than Aro's appearance.
Author's Response:
Well no not really it was just the second torture bit, the next chapter will show progress, thanks for the review and your support xx
Date: 04 Aug 2010 12:46 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
I still haven't figured out the why of all this cruel collaboration. I'm sure the answers are over the horizon. Thanks for the update
Author's Response:
dont worry the answers are coming :) and your very welcome xx
Date: 03 Aug 2010 9:35 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
Okay, a new character has been introduced into the mix! Aro... he's so deliciously evil. I think what makes him so frightening is the fact that he doesn't appear to be insane; he's quite rational, rather. Especially in conjunction with Jacob's blatant psychopathism. That's why Aro wins (so far) in terms of real "villainness". Thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
I know Aro is one of my favorite characters too :) I only hope that I can capture his essence in the story :) hehe I love your review its nice and makes me happy, thank you very very much xx
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 8:19 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
I cannot imagine what else Bella can endure at this point. I am surprised that she has not bled to death from the screws that Jacob inserted into her body. I think Edward realizes that Aro senses Bella's vampire potential as a shield and if so, Aro will do whatever to get Bella changed into a vampire to join his coven.
Please update soon because I am so impatient to read what happens to Bella and the Cullens.
Author's Response:
Well she wont have much more torture, so dont worry about that :) and Aro would never allow her to die, and she is gonna be much more than just a shield :) yup he wants her as a vampire, but needs to break her spirit and ties to the cullens :) dont worry i will be updating soon :) xx thanks for the mugs and the support :) xx
Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:52 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
just graphic enough! you're doing fabulous.
Author's Response:
aww thank you very much, sorry for the delay with chapters, i have a lot on at the moment :/ xx
Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:49 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
aww such a sad chapter
Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:33 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
I'm so confused.... what's Aro doing there??? I also don't understand what Tanya hoped to do by telling Alice and Bella about the guys pasts. They already know what kind of monters they can be. Edward even demonstrated it for Bella in the beginning of this story Jasper too. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter so I'll maybe learn what's going on. :0)
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:24 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
I didn't foresee Aro coming into the mix. Lord, how much more twisted cab this get? Poor Bella is screwed in every direction. I'm just hoping Edward's anger is fueling something strong enough to overcome the hell that's coming for all of them. I loved the Carlisle/Bella scenes in this chapter. It was truly really sweet and showed Carlisle hadn't lost his humane side. I'm curious where Rose and Emmett are right now. Maybe you addressed that earlier and my mind is going blank on me, but it just seems sketchy for them to not be in the picture. Hmmm...I wonder what you have in store for them.
I've missed you buttercup!! Sorry to hear Uni is kicking your butt! It does that to everyone! Why do I have a feeling you're one of those people who work at all hours on the day and night and have perfect grades to show for it? That reminds me of how I was when I was in college. An A- was a bad grade. Stupid plus/minus system. I graduated with a great GPA...now I'm just working on the getting a job part. The economy sucks in america. :) I miss you & miss our convos! Let's catch up soon!! Even better idea, update this fantastic story ASAP!! Xoxo!!
Author's Response:
hehe i snook up on you! and trust me it is going to get even more twisted hehe :)and yes it does appear that she is up shit creek without a paddle, but thats what the monster is for hehe :) I am glad you enjoyed the carlisle snippets they were my fav :)
anyway here is my email address - kizzez_n_hugz@hotmail.com :) use it wisely, i shall answer more questions, and I have a blog, you should check it out, its on my profile :) sorry it has taken me so long to reply, i have lots on my plate xx
Date: 03 Aug 2010 7:16 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part Two
I guess I'm just trying to understand where you are going w/this story? All I know is bits and pieces and it's not all coming together for me.
Author's Response:
Well don't worry, you aren't supposed to know where it is going, its supposed to be a surprise haha, so dont worry about that xx
Date: 01 Aug 2010 6:14 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2010 11:47 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
They've got to get out of there!!! Jake is one sick puppy!
Date: 30 Jul 2010 1:10 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
I don't know what to say...I'm hoping they electrocute Jacobs dick right off his body!
Date: 28 Jul 2010 8:06 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Wow that was pretty twisted! Ya gotta love Bella for taking all the pain on herself so that Alice would be ok. Can't believe she didn't pass out from all the pain though. She's a tough cookie. I want to see the guys get free and what they do to Jacob. :0)
Author's Response:
hehe I am a twisted little missy :)and yes she is my tough little cookie, but she has to be :) and Jacob will get what he deserves, don't you worry about that :)
thank you for your review and support xx
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2010 3:10 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Okay, awesome chapter! I can't wait 'till the next one. : )
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the mugs, and the next update will be 1 - 2 days :) xx
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:20 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
HOW THE F IS BELLA GONNA GET OUT OF THIS?.
Can't wait to find out how the rest of the story goes. It's not near the end is it? I am really enjoying this, please update soon.
Author's Response:
Hehe i adore that i have provoked such a reaction, Bella will get out of it, i promise you that :)
and there shall be 45 chapters in total, and because i love this story so frickin much, there is gonna be a sequel :) xx
Date: 26 Jul 2010 5:17 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Ugh. I wouldn't be able to handle that; how does she stop herself from passing out? Oh and I was very intrigued by Carlisle in this chapter. Please update soon?
Author's Response:
well, she has lots on her mind, and there are rather a lot of talented vamps who may be keeping her conscious. Yes i loved the carlisle snippets :) he is truely one of my fav characters! I want to write a story just about him, but i dont know if people would read :) i shall be updating tomorrow evening, thank you very very much for your kind words and support :) xx
Date: 26 Jul 2010 9:28 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
ohmy....what/who is holding the vamps back?
Author's Response:
well its kinda a mixture between zafrini, jane and alec, and many more little vamps which i have waiting in the wings xx
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:36 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
loved it very nuch thanks for sharing update when you can thanks......
Author's Response:
thank you very much for the mugs, and for your patients xx
Date: 26 Jul 2010 6:17 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
I was sooooooooo excited to see this post. Glad your up and at it again. I knew it wouldn't be long before "the monster" would make an appearance. Is it wrong I wasn't fazed by the torture...yeah probably. Hurry please.
Author's Response:
oh I am glad you were antisipating my chapter :) I enjoyed writing it very much :) well the monster is constantly lurking beneath the surface, he just has to be sumoned :) it isnt wrong that you were fine by the torture, i thought that it was rather watered down, its just i know some people dont like it xx thank you very much xx
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 4:36 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Just don't take so long in updating!
Loved it!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 3:17 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Bloody amazing! Pardon the pun! Intense and visceral in the most amazing way. The situation, the tortures, and the fact that it seems hopeless. Somehow though, I don't think so. Something tells me that Jasper is the wild card here. Bella is enduring hell to protect his Alice....Satan better make a special spot for Jacob because Jasper's going to hand deliver him if necessary!
Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:35 AM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
Nice cliffhanger you have there! Cruel, but more than a little nice! I do love the way you play each friend's fear for the other off one another....very smart!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 1:21 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Haha it's so good to have you back!! You have such a twisted little mind and I LOVE every bit of it!! This story is freakin EPIC! If you're twisted, I'm on that boat right along with you because I love reading it :-) :-) You've gotta update this sucker! I've been deprived! PS- How are you?? You've been missed! We need to catch up! I'm on the hunt for your email address...it's buried in my stack of emails somewhere. I've got you tons of emails saved on MS word that are now kinda irrelevant...haha but that's ok. I'll make up for them. Take care and update soon woman!! Xoxo! :-)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:45 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Wow! these people are nuts. good grief! So when do they turn into vampys? Also when the heck are these nutcases dying?
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:44 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Loved the chapter. Hated that it took so long to post. I feel like I need to go back and re-read the whole story but I don't want to waste my time doing that if it will take as long for the next chapter to post...
Date: 26 Jul 2010 12:39 AM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Hurry with the next part please this is one f the best stories ive read. You've got me sucked in deep lol.
Date: 25 Jul 2010 11:15 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
No abuse from me. Nice chapter I can deal with the pain parts but please include a warning if any rape is involved. I cant stomach that. I hope you update soon. Thanks for sharing!
Author's Response:
Oh thank you, i was worried that everyone would hate me, and i do have the other chapter, but it hasnt gone through my beta yet, but it should be up soon, thank you very much for reading, and nope my story wont have rape, i just cant do that. xx
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:54 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
Wow! I only hope that Edward and Bella manage to survive this torture and escape. I am surprised that Jacob was electrocuting Bella...he doesn't seem smart enough to come up with that idea!
Please update soon, I have this story on my Favorites!
Author's Response:
thank you very much, and dont worry they shall survive, they need to for the sequel haha, and Jacob has brainy people to give him ideas :) he seems dumb but well he is rather clever, but only because of influence and having the vast mind of a shapeshifter :)
thank you very much for the mugs and i shall be updating when i can :) xx
Date: 25 Jul 2010 10:37 PM Title: The Punishment of Isabella Marie Swan - Part One
ugh. how jake and tanya dies soon
Date: 10 Jul 2010 5:01 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
Running for cover - can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
thank you, I have just got the internet back, so I should be updating very very soon, I hope you guys like it :) xx
Date: 08 Jul 2010 1:32 AM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
You attached Chapter 27 to the wrong story I think.
Author's Response:
yes, thank you, sorry about that :/ I guess everyone makes mistakes huh, the actual chapter 27 will be out soon :) xx
Date: 28 Jun 2010 12:48 AM Title: Inside the Mind of a Monster
Date: 26 Jun 2010 6:29 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
omg... okay do I have another chapter?
Date: 26 Jun 2010 6:19 AM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
omg... Umm I just ate lunch how strong does it have to be?
Date: 26 Jun 2010 6:07 AM Title: To Touch a Psychic
I am a little behind.. this is great.. way to catch up and I am pleased I don't get lift on this cliff hanger..
Author's Response:
hehe yup you joined at the right time, and i was worried you didnt like the story anymore haha i thought id lost you with the first sex scene lmao im glad to have you back on board :) xx
Date: 16 Jun 2010 12:20 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
loved this chapter :)
Date: 12 May 2010 4:46 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
updateupdateupdate hahah! I looove this story, and you should know that my friends love this too but they just don't review haha ;-)
Anyway, keep up with the writing =)
Author's Response:
hehe i shall be updating when i can, im sorry i have lost internet connection but i should be up and running soon enough :) im glad you and your friends are enjoying Irrevocable :)
thanks very much xx
Date: 03 May 2010 3:00 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
How in the world did they knock out the vamps? You sure did leave us with a cliffy.... I'm hanging on waiting for the nex chapter. :0)
Author's Response: Hehe well because you have been waiting so patiently, it was jane and alec using their powers together to subdue the men. i am still writing, but i have lost internet connection (im on my phone) but i should be up and running by the weekend :) it was a huge cliffy lol i am very sorry i hope your not too mad. thank you for reading x
[Report This]Date: 02 May 2010 7:56 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
Loved the chapter, =) as always,
best wishes, Linda
Date: 01 May 2010 3:30 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
Wow, wow, wow, that's good. I'm really looking forward to next chapter.
Author's Response:
well, i am very happy that you're excited, so am i :) xx
Date: 01 May 2010 1:29 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
very nice, can't wait to find out what happens. gotta love those cliffy's.
Author's Response:
well im extremely glad that you're enjoying the cliffys, ppl have been going mental about them hah xx
Date: 01 May 2010 10:11 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
oh my..nnoo!!
Author's Response:
haha yes lol xx
Date: 01 May 2010 2:45 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
oh god. You are killing me!!!! PLEASE dont leave it there for long.
Author's Response:
dont worry, you shant be left waitin for long, i promise :) xx
Date: 01 May 2010 2:35 AM Title: Be Afraid of the Big Bad Wolf
hmmm does jasper know her real name? how does paul?
Author's Response:
yes jasper does know her real name, he knows everything about little alice, and paul is just very curious haha, he is a little bit of a stalker :) xx
Date: 01 May 2010 2:25 AM Title: To Touch a Psychic
poor alice. wonder why bella is a vision trigger like that.
Author's Response:
i know, and its just because her future is rather bleak at the moment, but dont worry it will pick up, just not anytime soon :) xx
Date: 01 May 2010 2:09 AM Title: Trust
gee eddie.....can you blame her though?
Author's Response:
thank you!!! finally someone sticks up for bella lol :) thank you xx
[Report This]Date: 01 May 2010 2:00 AM Title: The Truth Hurts
Love this story!
Author's Response:
thank you very much and thank you for the mugs :) xx
Date: 01 May 2010 1:59 AM Title: Notes
ewwww jake is really delusiional and bella is an idiot
Author's Response:
yeh she can be like that alot haha and jake is my little evil creation, bless him lol xx
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2010 11:13 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
Please don't leave me hanging like this too long!!!
Author's Response:
im sorry darlin, i cant promise you wont be left hanging, i can only promise that you will get the next chapter and that i will not stop writing for this story :) xx thanks for the mugs and your loyalty :) x
Date: 30 Apr 2010 11:10 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
thanks for the warning i do have issues visualizing certain things, but have no fesr i am not going anywhere, i'll just wait it out and pick it up when it wont give me nightmares, thanks great job.
Author's Response:
aww bless you, there shall be warnings on any chapters that i deam graphic, so dont worry. but thank you very much for sticking it out anyway :) xx
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:44 PM Title: Waffles
OK Bella was an idiot in this chapter....but Carlisle knows how to push her buttons, thats for sure.
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:21 PM Title: Killing the Corrupt
hmmm Rose is so stupid sometimes.
Author's Response:
yup she is a bitch :/ xx
Date: 30 Apr 2010 10:17 PM Title: The Truth Hurts
Bella is the one that needs to get hurt- badly. Her naivete knows no bounds. Last chapter I wanted to slap the shit out of her. I'm actually glad she gets to see all the destruction that she created. Cause she is so freaking dumb. And a sadistic Jacob is a sight to behold- he is EVIL. And I can't wait to see who the "he" is at the end of the chapter.
Author's Response:
oh well the "he" is edward lol and well you may be extremely happy about the next chapter if you believe bella needs to be punished :) xx