[Report This]Date: 12 Apr 2011 2:10 AM Title: Coming Home
Yeap! I was upset you let my Edward get hurt, but you are forgiven because he gets to spend time with Bella now.
Author's Response:
Well thank you for forgiving me. Like I said in my a/n at the end of the chatper, next chapter contains somthing of the citrus variety.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 10:31 PM Title: Coming Home
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 11 Apr 2011 9:32 PM Title: Coming Home
good chapter.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 10:42 PM Title: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me
excited to see what happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I think you are the only one excited to see what happens next. Everyone else is fearful. LOL :)
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:20 PM Title: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me
cant wait for monday!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 6:04 PM Title: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:54 PM Title: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me
nice chapter.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 5:17 PM Title: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me
Cute chapter...btw-I don't like your author's note when you say wait and see. Told you hI had a bad feeling. Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Sorry, I had to put somthing in there.
Date: 09 Apr 2011 3:41 AM Title: LA and Dress Shopping
i don't llike the feeling I have about the wild fires. I love Bella and Edward though...they are adorable.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 5:10 PM Title: LA and Dress Shopping
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:57 AM Title: LA and Dress Shopping
well i hope all ends well with them fighting the fire ! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 08 Apr 2011 12:06 AM Title: LA and Dress Shopping
good chapter.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 4:19 PM Title: The Sad Goodbye
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 3:21 AM Title: The Sad Goodbye
well i hope in the end hes goign to be alright
Author's Response:
You'll have to wait and see. Thanks so much for the review.
Date: 07 Apr 2011 12:37 AM Title: The Sad Goodbye
good chapter.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Next chapter up tomorrow instead of Friday because I won't be home untill the late evening.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 5:45 PM Title: The Mall and My Birthday Dinner
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review
Date: 05 Apr 2011 3:30 AM Title: The Mall and My Birthday Dinner
I don't want Edward to leave!! I will probably cry with Bella! Edward is so sweet! I loved the birthday he planned for Bella!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. He's only gone for a total of a few chapters. i didn't want to make it that long.
Date: 05 Apr 2011 2:28 AM Title: The Mall and My Birthday Dinner
Loved the roof top birthday.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank yo so much for the review.
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2011 1:57 AM Title: The Mall and My Birthday Dinner
aww so sweet, and i imagine we will be needing tissues for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. Yes you may want the tissues. I'm planning on putting a warning at the begining of the chapter.
Date: 03 Apr 2011 11:19 PM Title: The Meadow
I liked this chapter. It was sweet. I'm still a little nervous for Edward and the fire.
Author's Response:
You will have to wait and see with the fire. Thanks for the review.
Date: 02 Apr 2011 8:52 PM Title: The Meadow
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 02 Apr 2011 6:07 PM Title: The Meadow
nice chapter.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 5:05 PM Title: A Sad Edward
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 3:46 AM Title: Forks
How ironic is it that Charlie already met Edward.
Author's Response:
I know. I dont' know what made me think of that. Thanks for the review.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 2:04 AM Title: A Sad Edward
ok didnt see that coming, i dont wanna see them aprat
jkvfjsjnxbclbgfs (frustartion) hahah
but i cant wait for mroe :)
Author's Response:
LOL. I had to add some drama in there. It can't all be sunshine and daisies. Thank you so much for the review though. :)
Date: 01 Apr 2011 1:42 AM Title: Edward
I think that it was cute how they talked on the phone first. I think that if you are going to go out on a blind date that it is kinna good that you talk first because that might take out all of or some of the nervousness that goes with a blind date.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. As I said in a a/n, I was set up on a blind date and we talked on the phone for three days before we met. Only we didn't become a couple. The guys wasn't attractive to me. Nice guy and all, I just wasn't attracted to him. I was still nervous meeting him because I had no idea what he looked like and I wasn't about to ask my aunt what he looked like. He just wasn't what I pictured.
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2011 1:25 AM Title: A Sad Edward
awww that is tough, sad, but part of the job i guess. wish the chapter was a little longer
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. As far as chapter length, this chapter and chapter 11 aren't my favorites for writting them chapter 12 is like tripple of the first few chapters.
Date: 01 Apr 2011 1:23 AM Title: Bella
It is good that she is willing to let Alice help her because I think that Alice would have reguardless.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I was trying not to make 'my' bella so much like the books and movies.
This chapter and chapter 11 aren't my most favoriate chapters as far as my writing goes, I think I could have done better. Again I don't want to go back and change things, because to me that isn't fair. I have already completed the chapters and posted them for the world to read.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 11:56 PM Title: A Sad Edward
I'm kind of nervous for Edward (fire is my biggest fear). Wildfires sound kind of scary.
I love how Bella and Edward just clicked right off the bat. It seems like they were meant to be together (of course!).
can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I won't say what happenes with the wildefire.
Date: 31 Mar 2011 11:52 PM Title: A Sad Edward
I am enjoying your little story. Keep it coming.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you so much
Date: 30 Mar 2011 3:27 PM Title: Taking Chances
fluff fluff fluff :)
Author's Response:
For now its fluff. Thank you for the review.
Date: 30 Mar 2011 3:54 AM Title: Taking Chances
Awww. So sweet! I need to find me an Edward!!
Author's Response:
I hear ya sister. Thank you for the review.
Date: 29 Mar 2011 10:24 PM Title: Taking Chances
i love them :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2011 9:39 PM Title: Taking Chances
Thank you for a great story, nothing like a little faith to keep us all going.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'm not sure why or what prompted me to write this story. Maybe it was my subconscience telling myself that I will eventually find a guy to date, seeing how I have never had a boyfriend before, and to have faith the it will happen.
(If your thinking thinking I have never been kissed and I'm 23, your wrong. I have. In high school I had a friend with benefits I guess you could say. We kissed and held hands but didn't date. Mainly because I wasn't allowd at the time.)
Date: 28 Mar 2011 3:57 AM Title: Our Date and Meeting the Parents
looooooooooooooooove it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 27 Mar 2011 8:08 PM Title: Our Date and Meeting the Parents
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:35 AM Title: Visiting Edward
I would melt from Edward kisses too! Loved it!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 26 Mar 2011 4:22 AM Title: Visiting Edward
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
[Report This]Date: 24 Mar 2011 4:03 PM Title: Edward To the Rescue
ahhhh the magical first kiss
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 23 Mar 2011 10:33 PM Title: Edward To the Rescue
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 8:54 PM Title: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her
Cute chapter! Cna't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Next chapter up tomorrow.
Date: 22 Mar 2011 3:18 AM Title: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her
loved it!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you. There are lots more to come.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2011 10:58 PM Title: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 21 Mar 2011 10:15 PM Title: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 20 Mar 2011 3:03 PM Title: La Push
well they finally meet
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Yes they meet. Chapter 5 picks up right after Edward says hi.
Date: 19 Mar 2011 10:03 PM Title: La Push
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 19 Mar 2011 6:02 PM Title: La Push
I am really enjoying your story, it never fails to bring a smile to my face, and lets face it we all can use a smile. Thank You Becky
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the wonderful review.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 4:47 PM Title: Forks
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 4:19 PM Title: Edward
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 2:09 AM Title: Forks
This was another cute chapter. Kind of interesting that Charlie has met Edward before (glad he likes h im!). Also thought it was cute how Edward texted her to let Bella know he was okay after the fire.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I thought it would be funny if Charlie knew him. I also thought it was and 'Edward' thing to do to let her know that he was ok.
Date: 18 Mar 2011 1:12 AM Title: Forks
like it !!!! very sweet to tell her he wsa ok
Author's Response:
Thank you fo rthe review.
Date: 17 Mar 2011 10:38 PM Title: Forks
write more!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. The story is alread done. I'm just posting chapters.
Date: 17 Mar 2011 9:58 PM Title: Edward
I am really loving this!!! Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 4:00 AM Title: Edward
sorry about your own bad date but i really liked this set up
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Yeah, that was my aunt's idea. She has said she wants to set me up with someone else on a few ocassions, but I never really give her an answer. LOL
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 3:58 AM Title: Bella
Loved it !
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad your liking it. Next chapter up tomorrow.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2011 2:41 AM Title: Edward
really enjoying it so far !!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I'm glad your enjoying it. Next chapter we get more into Bella's background. I kind of kept it close to the book for theses first few chapters untill I found my nich and then explored my mind.
Date: 14 Mar 2011 2:53 AM Title: Bella
I like the idea for this fic, but Bella comes across as really immature. She sounds about 14.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Yes I realized that she comes off as immature. That was not intentional. As I said in my a/n that this was the first story I have ever written it took some getting used to writting and getting a style down.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 10:03 PM Title: Bella
great start can't wait to how when they meet : )
Author's Response:
Thank you. That will be very soon. Next chapter up on tuesday.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 8:10 PM Title: Bella
so far so good, have faith !!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I did have to fix this chapter a while ago as I noticed I stated Bella's job as working at the newspaper with Jasper and then ended up changing it in later chapters. That was my original idea, then I changed it too where she edits books.
Date: 13 Mar 2011 7:22 PM Title: Bella
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review
Date: 13 Mar 2011 6:45 PM Title: Bella
Nice beginning. Looking forward to the blind date.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I'll probaly post the next chapter in a few days. I want to see how readers like this story.