Date: 29 May 2015 10:16 PM Title: Epilogue
cute and perfectly cheesy story ;) thanks for sharing it on here with us ;D
Date: 21 Aug 2012 10:16 PM Title: Epilogue
Great loved it
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. :)
Date: 20 Jul 2012 12:38 AM Title: Bella
I'm identifying me with Bella ¬¬'!!!
Author's Response:
Thats grea! I put myself in Bella. :) Thanks for the revewi.
Date: 04 Apr 2012 6:29 AM Title: La Push
oh god the feeling
Author's Response:
Yeah, decided to go the "cheezy" route on that. LOL. Thanks so much for the review. :)
Date: 04 Apr 2012 5:39 AM Title: Bella
i am giving it a chance
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for giving it a chance.
Date: 07 Jan 2012 8:32 AM Title: A New Year: A New Beginning
Great party and I loved Esme's reaction to the engagment.
Author's Response:
Yeah I thought it would be fun to have Esme be so excited for Bella and Edward. Thanks for the review.
Date: 06 Jan 2012 10:07 AM Title: Christmas
So sad to lose people poor Edward and Emmett. That was a wonderful Christmas
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 3:34 PM Title: Thanksgiving
Things are going very well and falling into place for them love the way Emmett proposed how sweet.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I wasn't sure how great that would sound. Thanks for the reivew. :)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 11:33 AM Title: It Was Perfect
That was lemony good lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 10:46 AM Title: Halloween
Sounds like a fun night.
Author's Response:
Yeah, I tried to make it sound fun. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 10:01 AM Title: Coming Home
I am just so happy that he is not hurt worse than he was. It was so sweet that his mind was on Bella.
Author's Response:
There was no way I was going to seriously hurt Edward or Emmett. I just couldn't do it. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 04 Jan 2012 9:31 AM Title: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me
it is one of the most dangerous jobs??
Author's Response:
Yes it is. :) Thanks so much for the review
Date: 03 Jan 2012 5:35 PM Title: Epilogue
This was a good ending. They seem very happy.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review
Date: 02 Jan 2012 9:35 AM Title: LA and Dress Shopping
The girls are having fun and finding the dresses right away wow.
Author's Response:
Yes, I know many brides don't find their dress on the first trip but some do. Thanks for the review
Date: 31 Dec 2011 10:50 AM Title: The Sad Goodbye
What do they mean you dont sound like EPOV guy talking he is just a sensitive guy what is wrong with that sounds like a man I would like to know. It is a good thing that the girls have the support of each other.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the support on my EPOV writting. :)
Date: 29 Dec 2011 10:46 AM Title: The Mall and My Birthday Dinner
That was a great b day
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Date: 29 Dec 2011 9:56 AM Title: The Meadow
It is going to be tough on them being apart I think it was a good thing that they dont go to far until he gets back
Author's Response:
Yes it will be. Thanks for the review
Date: 29 Dec 2011 8:23 AM Title: A Sad Edward
So sad that he will be leaving
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Date: 29 Dec 2011 4:18 AM Title: Christmas
Love it, and I love it some more. I have been feeling sentimental lately, so this chappie fits my mood perfectly :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Date: 29 Dec 2011 4:04 AM Title: Thanksgiving
What a neat Thanksgiving!! I am patiently waiting for my Edward haha :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Date: 28 Dec 2011 11:12 AM Title: Taking Chances
They are so cute and in love
Author's Response:
Yes they are. Thanks for the reivew
Date: 28 Dec 2011 10:12 AM Title: Our Date and Meeting the Parents
He took her home to meet his parents pretty sure he is in love.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Date: 28 Dec 2011 9:34 AM Title: Visiting Edward
He is not messing around everyone is going to know that she is his ;)
Author's Response:
No he isn't. Thanks for the review.
Date: 28 Dec 2011 9:14 AM Title: Edward To the Rescue
First kiss loved it
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Thanks for the review
Date: 28 Dec 2011 6:55 AM Title: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her
That was a exciting first meeting cant wait for first date
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review
Date: 28 Dec 2011 5:25 AM Title: La Push
I am so excited they meet.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review
Date: 28 Dec 2011 4:09 AM Title: Visiting Edward
Good chapter
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Thanks for the review
Date: 28 Dec 2011 3:53 AM Title: Edward To the Rescue
Good chapter
Author's Response:
thanks for the rewview
Date: 28 Dec 2011 3:46 AM Title: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks foe the review
Date: 28 Dec 2011 3:40 AM Title: La Push
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 28 Dec 2011 3:25 AM Title: Forks
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 28 Dec 2011 3:10 AM Title: Edward
Good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 28 Dec 2011 2:59 AM Title: Bella
good chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2011 2:35 AM Title: Forks
I dont think she has to worry about Charlie liking Edward.
Author's Response:
That she does not. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2011 12:47 AM Title: Edward
Love at first sound??? lol
Author's Response:
Yeah, I guess so. :) Thanks for the review.
Date: 27 Dec 2011 11:43 PM Title: Bella
It sounds great
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review
Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:48 AM Title: Halloween
I LOVE scary movie marathons! My all-time favorite is the original Halloween movie. LOVE it!!!
My family does a pumpkin carving party every year where we give the food scary names.
I love this chapter because it made me think of some really funny memories :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much. I'm glad this chapter made you think of good family memories. I tried to put a lot of myself in this story. This chapter is nothing like me though. It would be somthing I would like to do if I had friends
Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:30 AM Title: Coming Home
No hate because Edward was hurt, but I am thankful the drama did not last long :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I just couldn't extend it out. It was hard enough to write
Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:19 AM Title: Happy 22nd Birthday To Me
I loved this chapter but was a bit confused by one part. I thought Jasper was Edward's friend from high school? I was wondering why Esme would just now be meeting Jasper if that was true. Forgive me if I misread anything :)
I liked that Rose, Bella, and Esme conspired together to keep the momma updated :)
Author's Response:
Woops, that was my mistake. We could say that Esme didn't meet Jasper. But Carlisle had as he knew who he was when he walked in. I know my mom hasn't met some of my brothers friends. Yes we'll go with that.
Date: 26 Dec 2011 3:04 AM Title: LA and Dress Shopping
When the time comes, I hope I find my dress so easily :)
I also really like how you don't paint James as a complete jerk. I really like how he is just another minor character in the story that gets mentioned every now and then :)
Author's Response:
That was my total intention w/ James.
Date: 26 Dec 2011 2:53 AM Title: The Sad Goodbye
Gah, my heart aches for them...
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review :)
Date: 25 Dec 2011 6:07 PM Title: The Mall and My Birthday Dinner
What a perfect birthday present! I love it.
When someone you love leaves, it is always hard to say goodbye. I feel that way every time my brother deploys and is gone for 6 months.
Haha,. I love Criminal Minds as well!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. When you said that your brother deploys, I'm assuming he is in the military. Tell him thanks for his service. I hope that he is home for the hollidays. Merry Christmas :)
Date: 25 Dec 2011 5:49 PM Title: The Meadow
I know we are our own worst critics, but I didn't see anything wrong with the chapter. I thought it was good, and seems to flow with the previous chapters :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. I remember when I was writting it, I really had to pull it out and try. I just didn't flow out of my mind as easily as other chapters had.
Date: 25 Dec 2011 5:32 PM Title: Taking Chances
Pretty sweet! I think I would totally have been tongue-tied in that situation :)
Author's Response:
Thansk so much for the review.
Date: 25 Dec 2011 5:24 PM Title: Our Date and Meeting the Parents
It's all good about using the phrase. Good to be reminded we need to do that ourselves :)
I find myself actually rubbing my hands together and getting all excited for Bella and Edward :)
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for loving my story
Date: 25 Dec 2011 5:03 PM Title: Visiting Edward
I get a very clear picture in my head when I read what is written here. I know you are focusing on the love story, and I don't pick up any bad vibes from any other characters :)
I am glad I do not have to wait for updates too! Merry Christmas!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. This story is complete. I just had to repost the Epilogue. A few people didn't understand one part of it and i rewrote that protion. Unfortunatly I didn't know that the latest version of Internet Explorer doesn't cooperate w/ TCWSL. I had already deleted the chapter so I had to do a repost and re-updated the story.
Date: 25 Dec 2011 12:11 AM Title: Edward
Haha, I am really into this Edward :) I like the subtle irony that he is a firefighter when that is the one danger to them in canon :)
I like how this story seems to build up suspense naturally :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like "my Edward." I didn't even think about the whole fire thing. I had read a T rated story when I first joined the fic world and loved that Edward was a firefighter. I know nothing about fighting fires execpt from what i have seen in movies or on tv. This story isn't about drama. I really wanted to focus on their love story. There are so many stories out there that have so much drama and i just wanted a love story. There is some drama later in the story but i don't drag it out, i kept it pretty short. Thanks so much for loving my story. It will be a long while before i even post my next one. I only have one chapter written and a page and a paragraph of chapter 2. I don't have the passion to write at the moment as well as writers block.
Date: 24 Dec 2011 11:59 PM Title: Bella
You know, it's funny. This chapter pretty much describes where I'm at at the moment. I was drawn immediately into this story!
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for the review. I was set up on a blind date. That is how I came up with the idea. Although that didn't turn out well. I never talked to him after we saw the movie. I guess he called me the next day but I didn't know untill a week later when I wast messing w/ my phone and saw my missed calls log.
Date: 21 Dec 2011 9:33 AM Title: It Was Perfect
that was awesome! It was really sweet.. Insence for the first time.
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Thanks so much for the review
Date: 21 Dec 2011 7:35 AM Title: Coming Home
Yes, I could imagian it would hurt to write about a firefighter down.. speaical after all thous men lost their lives.. So sad.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review
Date: 20 Dec 2011 11:04 PM Title: Taking Chances
I just want let you know I really do love this story. it is really sweet and refreshing.. Both are so loving caring. Know one is over barring or a asshole.. awesome story.. Love Love Love it..
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Date: 19 Dec 2011 7:52 AM Title: Bella
I like it. Sounds like she was too busy too see if anyone did give her a chance.. That happens.
Sounds like it going to be a great story..
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Date: 02 May 2011 12:50 AM Title: Our Wedding
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 01 May 2011 4:02 PM Title: 2 Weddings Down, 1 To Go
great job! enoug detail to maek it real,butnot too much that it ovedone.
BTW...my husband retired from his fire dept when out second son was born. if you ever need any help, just ask
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. If your are willing to help on the next story, contact me on here or go to fanfic and PM if you have an account there.
Date: 01 May 2011 12:43 AM Title: 2 Weddings Down, 1 To Go
Great chapter, awesome!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 2:35 AM Title: 2 Weddings Down, 1 To Go
cant wiat till the next chapter
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Thank you for the review.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 12:56 AM Title: 2 Weddings Down, 1 To Go
love it and i want more right now
Author's Response:
Only one chapter and the epilogue left. Both will be up on Sunday.
Date: 30 Apr 2011 12:53 AM Title: Graduation & 1 Wedding Down, 2 To Go
love it
Author's Response:
thank you for the review.
Date: 28 Apr 2011 5:29 PM Title: Graduation & 1 Wedding Down, 2 To Go
well im excited to see what excitement happens next
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 4:30 PM Title: Finding the Perfect Dress
You have to love a man in his dress uniform. I bet Edward and Emmett looked so sexy. The girls seemed to have all this wedding stuff about done. Yeah!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review on April 26. I can't believe I missed responding to you untill today.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 2:25 AM Title: Finding the Perfect Dress
im excited for the next chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:55 AM Title: Finding the Perfect Dress
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:45 AM Title: A New Year: A New Beginning
that was perfect
Author's Response:
Thank you for the reviw.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:31 AM Title: Coming Home
love it
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Thank you for the review.
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Thank you for the review.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:16 AM Title: The Sad Goodbye
love it
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thank you for the review.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:12 AM Title: The Mall and My Birthday Dinner
love it
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Thank you for the review.
Date: 26 Apr 2011 12:04 AM Title: The Meadow
love it
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Thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:59 PM Title: A Sad Edward
love it
Author's Response:
thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:56 PM Title: Visiting Edward
love it
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Thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:51 PM Title: Edward To the Rescue
that was perfect
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:41 PM Title: Seeing Him/ Seeing Her
the proposal was so perfect
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:35 PM Title: La Push
that was evil
Author's Response:
I'm not sure what chapter your talking about. But sorry if you feel it is evil.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:29 PM Title: Forks
loving it
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:21 PM Title: Edward
love it
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thank you for the reiview.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:15 PM Title: Bella
love it
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 11:00 PM Title: Finding the Perfect Dress
omg that was a great chapter i await the next chapter i love how they are so attentive to each other
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 12:29 PM Title: Blackness
I am glad that Bella is ok. All of her stuff will stink. It takes a lot of cleaning to get that smell out of it. I am glad she got her reports to her teachers before the fire. I don't want this story to end so soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 3:31 AM Title: A New Year: A New Beginning
That was sweet that Rose and Bella did the video for Carlisle. It was a way to learn a little more about their soon to be dad in law. I am so happy for Bella and Edward. You just know if it is the right person. It doesn't take that long to figure it out.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 25 Apr 2011 1:27 AM Title: Blackness
i am loving this story...
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 24 Apr 2011 12:57 AM Title: Blackness
WOW, intense!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 23 Apr 2011 7:39 PM Title: Blackness
your doing a great job with the specifics...
my hubby was a fire fighter and i am a nurse. keep up the great job :)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I noticed you said your hubby 'WAS', I hope that he retired and doing ok. :)
Date: 23 Apr 2011 7:31 PM Title: Blackness
well im glad tht shes ok! cant wait to see what happens next hcapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
Date: 22 Apr 2011 5:33 AM Title: A New Year: A New Beginning
well im happy that they are engaed but i have a feelingthat something is goingto happem
Date: 22 Apr 2011 12:32 AM Title: Bella
Excellent engagement and birthday party.
Date: 21 Apr 2011 3:12 PM Title: Christmas
I feel for Edward and Emmett. It must be horrible hearing people calling for help and you can't get to them. I am glad they were able to put it behind them enough to have a good Christmas.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 20 Apr 2011 2:11 AM Title: Christmas
well im glad that everyone was there for the boys! keep the updates comming
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Since this story is done and complete, it'll be easy to update on time. :)
Date: 18 Apr 2011 5:31 AM Title: Thanksgiving
well im glad that they are having a good time in flordia
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 8:26 PM Title: Thanksgiving
:)
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Thank you for the review.
Date: 16 Apr 2011 5:35 PM Title: It Was Perfect
:)
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Thank you for the review.
Date: 16 Apr 2011 4:08 AM Title: It Was Perfect
they are so cute together!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 16 Apr 2011 2:28 AM Title: It Was Perfect
well written, could have been maybe a little longer
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm not sure which chapter your talking about as far as length. If it's the first few. Yes they could have been longer, but I had never written a story before so I was just going by what felt right for me. I'm sorry to say that chapters 12 and 18 are of the longer chapters in this story. Chapter 19, which will be up on Sunday, will be shorter.
Date: 15 Apr 2011 10:29 PM Title: It Was Perfect
loved it.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
Date: 15 Apr 2011 4:34 PM Title: Halloween
Bella and Edward are so cute together. They are getting closer physically. Bella needs to make that appointment Asap.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Next chapter will be up in a few minutes.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 1:43 PM Title: Halloween
Loved it.
Hugs
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 5:33 AM Title: Halloween
well i hope that it just keeps on getting better!
Author's Response:
It certainly will. Thank you for the review.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 4:13 AM Title: Halloween
This wasn't late for me! I just got home from work! I just love Edward. Loved it and can't wait for the lemon!!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much. I had actullay put my computer away and was getting ready to sleep when it hit me I didn't update.
Date: 14 Apr 2011 3:29 AM Title: Halloween
:) GLAD CHARLIE AND EDWARD GET ALONG SO WELL
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 13 Apr 2011 1:27 AM Title: Coming Home
loved it!
Author's Response:
I'm glad your loving it. There were a few chapters in there that I thought sucked. Thanks for the review. :)
Date: 12 Apr 2011 3:29 AM Title: Coming Home
im glad that hes safe!
Author's Response:
Like I would hurt him majorly. :) Thanks for the review.