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Reviewer: vanilla-bella36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2011 6:19 PM Title: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

I LOVE IT~!! SUPER! I love the plot! Nice job! And I REALLY LOVE JAMIE!! hahahahaha! Keep it up! Use our skills and tell the world how talented you are~! YOU ROCK! :D

Reviewer: Sunnycarolina Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2011 5:11 PM Title: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

good story

Reviewer: gmteenz Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 7:50 AM Title: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

Loved it, read it from start to finish, really enjoyed it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:25 AM Title: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

awww cute little ending.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:19 AM Title: Keep Holding On

hmmm jamie knows huh

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:16 AM Title: The Huntress

hmmm  someone should have stayed with b.  Hope jamie is ok

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:12 AM Title: Bliss

lol  Thought jamie might flirt a bit with him before figuring out who he was.... or after just to mess with him.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:07 AM Title: Before the Storm

lol for em and alice.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 7:02 AM Title: I Don't Want to Want You

hmmm   who's home watchin the res???   Leah and Paul I assume.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:59 AM Title: Promise

hmmm   Jamie's gonna love all the houseguests roaming around

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:53 AM Title: White Horse

oh eddie you are an idiot.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:50 AM Title: Is This What it Feels Like?

didnt think she's actually go over.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:45 AM Title: Stand My Ground

ya had to know she'd be watchin carlisle.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:41 AM Title: You're Not Sorry

oh yeah  eddie feels as bad as b.....not

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:39 AM Title: Imaginary

hmmm now why would he be so close in a seattle hospital

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:35 AM Title: Trouble in Seattle

ah  there's jakey.    

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:31 AM Title: What I Wouldn't Give

hmmm no jake?

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:35 AM Title: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

There's something in cliche endings that we never tire of them. So... we will always enjoy them, even if the say otherwise. 

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:20 AM Title: Keep Holding On

Sam has an amazing heart, he is taking a big risk by agreeing with the Cullens, but he knows there's no other way for Bella.

As for Jamie... he will miss his friend but being the great friend he is, all he wants is for her to be happy.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:10 AM Title: The Huntress

Victoria was closer than any of them suspected, so close they all left her alone and Victoria showed up.

Where's Jamie? I do hope he is doing okay.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 7:01 AM Title: Bliss

Bella drunk had to be something, hopefully Edward might get a glimpse from Jamie's mind later. 

Victoria is around, close, but not too much. At least to Bella. However learning she might be forming an army is really bad news.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 6:43 AM Title: Before the Storm

Good luck on the midterms!!!!

Bella's tactic to get everyone's attention was really clever and worked perfectly. Most of both sides were able to talk nicely and come to organize a good plan. Sadly Jacob and Edward weren't able to do very good.

So Bella's feelings are starting to be noticeable. Alice knows... what exactly?

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:07 AM Title: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

thanks good story

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 1:39 AM Title: Epilogue: Two is Better Than One

:) Congratulations on finishing. 

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 1:27 AM Title: Keep Holding On

Well, they sure drew it out long enough didn't they?  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2010 12:01 AM Title: The Huntress

Dam!  Evil cliffy!  Update soon please.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 11:54 PM Title: Bliss

Jamie's reaction was unexpected and funny.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2010 11:42 PM Title: Before the Storm

Liked it.  :)

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:21 PM Title: I Don't Want to Want You

It's going to take a lot of work from Bella's part to keep both sides calm and able to work together. Neither wants to do it, but they are willing to try and that counts for a lot. 

It will be interesting. 

And Jamie? What will he say to all of these? How are they going to explain it? It won't be easy. I do guess that when he and Alice meet, that will be fun to watch and maybe will solve the problem, or reduce it.

Hope you post soon!!!!

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:44 PM Title: Promise

In regular circumstances, Alice would know, but she hasn't been able to see Bella in the past six years, and we don't know how much of her she has been seeing in the last three weeks.

There's going to be a lot of macho egos around Bella's place, she won't be happy about it. Jaime might, though.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:32 PM Title: White Horse

I hope Rosalie gets the chance to do something to Edward. It's certain she will be telling him plenty in her mind.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:18 AM Title: Is This What it Feels Like?

Two days, that's how long it took Bella to go visit the Cullens. She might still feel angry with Edward, and yes with them, but with them it's less intense than with Edward. As she said, they were her family and somehow she felt she owed this to them and her.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:00 AM Title: Stand My Ground

Time has flown by!!!! You and your writing has changed, the Cullens haven't, and Bella? She might have changed, but not as much as she would have liked I think.

Alice is at the door, she wouldn't have stayed away too long.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:47 AM Title: You're Not Sorry

Bella is angry and needs to get it out of her system. Since Carlisle is the only one there... he is the one who will have to take it. Even if he doesn't deserve it.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:40 AM Title: Imaginary

Reckless, that's the word to describe Bella these days. She enjoys danger, risks and thinks little before jumping into the unknown. 

Getting shot isn't the worst thing happening today, finding out who her doctor is, that's the biggest shock.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:28 AM Title: Trouble in Seattle

I didn't remember if Jake and the guys from La Push were "regular normal" guys here. Now that's covered.

Reviewer: momams Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:19 AM Title: What I Wouldn't Give

It's good to see you retaking the story. Also great that updates will be quick :)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 10:43 PM Title: I Don't Want to Want You

Fickly dickly Edward... Not my favorite person, Jacob either for that matter.

 

Bella deserves a whole person that loves her First and respects her.  That is not either one of them.

 

sigh,

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:23 PM Title: I Don't Want to Want You

Good chapter.  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:15 PM Title: Promise

Bella, be strong babe.  hehehe

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 4:04 PM Title: White Horse

Dam!  That was sad.  sigh...

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Dec 2010 7:54 AM Title: Is This What it Feels Like?

Well lets see if you keep this going, good start. If the updates are slow the story will become disinteresting.

 

Good luck,

Reviewer: longtobeme Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:35 AM Title: Is This What it Feels Like?

I just came across your story and read these first chapters. Your story is great and I am adding it to my favorites list. I can't wait to read how Edward and Bella's first conversation goes. :)

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:41 PM Title: Is This What it Feels Like?

ohhh i so can't wait for the next chapter

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 11:19 PM Title: Is This What it Feels Like?

Can't wait for more.  :)

Reviewer: Cassy68 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:33 AM Title: Imaginary

Oh what is Bella going to do now she knows what kill the other person but can't say anything or she will be put in the loony bin and what is carlisle going to do know that she has landed in his hospital are fire works going to explode when wakes up please update soon to see what happens another great chapter.

 

Reviewer: Cassy68 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2010 8:29 AM Title: What I Wouldn't Give

Congradulation on a great story is good to see thaty Bella is doing something good and moving with her life again and is good to see that is your first story and you've done a wonderful job keep up the great work and update soon

Reviewer: MyaLuv Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 1:07 PM Title: Imaginary

Amazing! I can't wait to read what happens next! Update soon!

Reviewer: dna2679 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:30 AM Title: What I Wouldn't Give

good job.. i can't wait to read more

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