Date: 11 Jun 2010 10:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
What a wonderful basically nonembaressing party. How did Esme and Carlisle keep the children from going crazy?
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 26
that was great thanks for sharing so excited to see what will happen next update when you can thanks....
Author's Response:
Thanks for enjoying! I will update soon I promise. This story is completed so I will try to remember to post regularly.
Date: 09 Jun 2010 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 26
OH-OH!! Do I even WANT to know what's Bella's holding - no, on second thoughts, DEFINITELY NOT!! A-.
Author's Response:
Ummmmmmmmmm............. Maybe........Maybe not lol!
Date: 01 Jun 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
All you have to say is Alice. Bella and Edward don't want a party, but Alice can't help herself.
Date: 28 May 2010 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 25
URK!! Bachelor and bachelorette parties organised by Emmet?! Run for the hills!! A-.
Date: 23 May 2010 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 24
Jacob seem to get along better since Jacob never had a crush on Bella.
[Report This]Date: 22 May 2010 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter. I love seeing Bella and Edward as a normal couple doing normal stuff. Love Edward and Jacob's bromance.
Date: 22 May 2010 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think Bella and Edward need to shower before they go out in public. Bella is extremly hormonal with this pregnancy. She was always a spoiled girl who wanted everything her way, but it is even worse now.
Date: 20 May 2010 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 23
Haha this was so funny, i can't believe they got caught! Atleast they wern't still on the piano lmao
Date: 18 May 2010 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, I can't remember what chapter it is and I don't want to go looking but there was one where the top bit was all messed up. It kept repeating and cutting off in weird places. Kind of annoying.
Also- OMG! So irritating and so out of character it's not even funny. I know this is slightly AU and OOC but still, that is where I draw the line. None of these characters would ever use that term. It's so stupid.
Author's Response:
I fixed the chapter that was messed up so thank you for pointing that out.
Sorry you are not enjoying the OOC and AU story that we have written. This was the way we wanted it to play out and what term are you talking about that none of them would use? If you are not enjoying the story then maybe you should stop reading it. The story does pick up when Bella is 21 and older and has been through a lot so she has changed. Edward just lost the last 4 years of his life too. They are going to be different.
Date: 18 May 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Oh, I can't remember what chapter it is and I don't want to go looking but there was one where the top bit was all messed up. It kept repeating and cutting off in weird places. Kind of annoying.
Date: 18 May 2010 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 7
The only things I would change are the abbreviations. Should be I'll instead of I will. I'm instead of I am. Etc. It's much easier to read.
Date: 18 May 2010 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
u r forgiven
Date: 17 May 2010 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 22
Omg trust Mike to still be a pervert and Jessica to still be desperate lol. Hope you update some more soon
Date: 16 May 2010 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Jessica drank with all three of her pregnancies...had to chuckle at that one.
Date: 15 May 2010 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 21
I liked this chapter. Please keep them coming ;-)
Date: 15 May 2010 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
This is an awesome story.
Date: 14 May 2010 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 21
Aww that's so cute!! Please update some more soon
Date: 14 May 2010 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 21
i remember this...lol. gosh it seems so long ago. i feel like i have known forever. *hugs*
Date: 02 May 2010 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well that's deffinately going to be interesting lol. I loved the way she messed with Jasper that was so cool lol.
Date: 01 May 2010 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter! Loved the little joke on Jasper! So funny!
Sarah
Date: 10 Apr 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
Wow, Bella is hell on wheels! Pregnency hormones are definitly raging!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 18
Ha she really is pissed off :)
Love the chapter ^^
Author's Response:
Oh yeah!!! Thanks for enjoying!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
holy.... fuck.... omg.....
Author's Response:
I told you so!!!! lol. I told you that Edward would be back!
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing
NNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO *CRYING*
Author's Response:
Keep reading! I promise that Edward comes back.
Date: 10 Apr 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
poor edward
man pregnancy hormones, she has it bad
i feel for all of them
they all need to hide till there born
Author's Response:
Oh yeah! I took this from some of the hormones that I had when I was pregnant.
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing
Great so far! Thanks for uploading it here, I am off to read more of your story...
Author's Response:
So glad you are enjoying it!!! I hope you like the rest of the story!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 17
I LOVE the story so far :)
Author's Response:
So glad you're enjoying it!
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 17
Cool, Twins!! I love the fatc of Edward and Bella being parents of Twins while being human lol. Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thanks for loving it!
Date: 20 Mar 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 13
That was so sweet! Very interesting chapters!! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response:
I love that you are enjoying this story! It is complete so I will try to post the chapters more regularly. I keep forgetting though so that is why I post multiples at one time. Thanks for enjoying!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 10
haha lol i love this story, especially this chapter. so funny lol. Please update more soon.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I will be updating soon!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 5 But You're Human...
;)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 4 Someone is Watching Me
;)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
;)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 2 Moving
wow this brings back memories.
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing
you know this story will always be our baby.
Date: 20 Feb 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 3 Heaven and Earth
Brilliant plot bunny! :)
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Date: 14 Feb 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing
Good start. It will be interesting to see where it goes from here.
Author's Response:
Thank you for enjoying. This story is complete so the chapters will be posted regularly until the end.
Date: 14 Feb 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 The Baseball Clearing
love this story on you FF page. Sure you will get lots of great reviews here too.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I am moving all of my stories over here slowly but surely!