[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 11: What We Learn In Books
WOW!!!! I just found this story and I'm really loving it. While its sad that Jasper and Emmett had to lose Alice and Rosalie, it's a testament of love that the whole family is working together to help them through it. Sure its a sacrifice for Edward having to share Bella with his brothers but he knows the family is worth it. In the beginning it will be hard but as long as B/E keep their love intact, they will all be fine.
This chapter with Bella and Jasper was amazing. Their connection was on such deep emotional level that nothing in the world mattered to them in their moment. I really want to know what happened to make their eyes change like they did. It made their intense connection that much more powerful. One of my favorite parts was when Jasper felt the love fully take him over, he included Edward and Renesmee in is thoughts.
I can't wait for the next chapter of this. Its a great story. D
Date: 20 Nov 2010 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 11: What We Learn In Books
i'm worried that Edward and Bella's love is going to be lost in this story. I'm glad she can help the brothers, and that with each one they get their own niche, or relationship, but i worry that with Edward now things will be lost. i am actually in tears over this. If this is not an Edward and Bella HEA please let me know or post in your author notes, so I know not to read anymore. Thanks
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing- I have submitted a private message to you via this system with a response to the pairing and HEA.
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 11: What We Learn In Books
That was absolutely amazing!!! What is up with the freaky eyes? I hope this doesn't mean his connection to Bella is stronger than Edward's. She needs to be Edward's mate above all else.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 11: What We Learn In Books
wow, 5 y/o and twin 2 y/o,,, plus writing.. wow super woman.....
Great chapter.. xoxo
[Report This]Date: 20 Nov 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
I am so glad that I have found this story again, as it is one of my favorites. I am sorry that they were removed from FFn, however I am very happy that you have a new home. :)
It is almost like I get to re-read this story as a newbie, since it isn't posted in it's full story yet.
What's my favorite so far? Hmm... I think it is the building relationship with E, B and J. Ugh, I just can't wait for more! I love it!!! Thank you for re-posting!!!!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 10: How Vampires Play Tetris
I can see a future for Jasper, Edward and Bella. Jasper is falling in love with Bella and I think she may be falling for him as well. Emmett is a good guy, but I don't see him caring for Bella the way Jasper and Edward do. I also wouldn't mind seeing Jasper and Edward spending a little alone time together as well.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 10: How Vampires Play Tetris
Love the clothes idea.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
Can't take it huh? Ok, last review you ever get from me. If you don't want your readers to 'think', then don't ask for reviews.
Author's Response:
I didn't ask for reviews. I have thanked people for leaving them, but never requested them.
I've had readers repeatedly ask me to post my story here after I removed it from Fanfiction.net. So, I am. Sadly, because of the time taken in having my original fiction published, I haven't had time to edit these chapters from the "un-beta'd" copies, but wished to get them uploaded for my readers. It is a polyamorous story, and yes, Bella will have to share Edward in the future.
Date: 19 Nov 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 7: Home
You know what bothers me the most about this? Would Jasper or Emmett have ever thought to share their mates in all those years that Edward was alone? Somehow, I really and sincerely doubt it. Since of course, they never did. So now Edward is supposed to share the mate he waited a century to find. And Bella seems perfectly willing to do it, as she almost did it on the plane. I get that Alice and Marcus keep saying that Edward and Bella's bond is the strongest they've ever seen and no one can take Bella from Edward, but that sounds like an excuse and justification.
So..Edward had to share Bella with fricken Jacob before the marriage, Edward has to share his daughter with Jacob, now Edward is expected to share his mate with his brothers and look the other way. Tanya is dead, so who the hell does Bella ever have to share Edward with? Nada...no one..Bella never has to share a god damn thing. Sick.
Author's Response:
Simple thing- don't like it, don't read it. The pairings were spelled out in the story summary.
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2010 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 9: Afternoon Wood in the Woods
Wow. that was an amazing chapter! I really loved Jasper's POV. It was hard to see him and Edward suffering when Bella was with Emmett. I think you are doing a good job of balancing the emotions of the subject.
And bear sex with Emmett was fun too. ;)
Date: 18 Nov 2010 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 9: Afternoon Wood in the Woods
Love Grizz. Jazz is so sweet. Cant wait for him to get some lovin too. Eddie is being so cool about it all.
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2010 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 9: Afternoon Wood in the Woods
I SO LOVE THIS STORY!!! GREAT JOB AND KEEP THE CHAPTERS COMIN
Date: 18 Nov 2010 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 9: Afternoon Wood in the Woods
excellent chapter... of course Emmett should be a bear...
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
Bella just sleep with Jasper already!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: Awkward Moments
Oh my! That last part is leaving me speachless and hungry for more!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 7: Home
Their reunion was perfect. It was so loving and sexy and for Edward to even consider sharing her I think it shows how much love he has for his family.
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 6: Lake of Stars
That was an incredible chapter. I loved how Jasper said goodbye to Alice. It was very sweet.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 7: Home
:) Loved it.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: Lake of Stars
:) Loved it
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 8: Awkward Moments
fucking hot. I loved it:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 8: Awkward Moments
i read this a couple of months ago on ff.net i loved thi story i was sad to find out thati you had taken it down but glad it is going back up i fet very moved by this story you have wonderful talent
Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 8: Awkward Moments
Three against one Bella.....best be careful
gentlemanly pants - HAHA
Hmmm naked mud wrestling
Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 7: Home
Poor Eddie's gotta be confused. Gotta love esme.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 6: Lake of Stars
what a chapter. the ache he feels is so stark so immense, who woulda thought that Bella would the one to keep this family intact. Her love is the love that keeps them tied together, no matter that its family, sexual whatever it might be. Its an amazing thing that grieve can go either way, it can tear families apart or bring them even closer, I love Alice and am so sad her influenece is just in letters even though i can love that as well, no getting rid of Alice, honey always finds a way back.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 2: Healing Balm
Things are going to be tough without Alice & Rosalie & Rennesme!
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
Awwww....such sadness! Very interesting!
Date: 16 Nov 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 6: Lake of Stars
endless shopping indeed..... and for the clumsy vampire in the end.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 5: Reunion
I can not wait to find out what Marcus has been telling Edward. Is he coming around to the idea of sharing Bella? And how much of Bella does he need to share to make this work? Blanket anyone?
Date: 16 Nov 2010 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 5: Reunion
gotta love mr bubbles. go alpha jake
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 3: Reattachment
OMG Jasper is so falling for Bella but what will Edward think? Can he share?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
Wow, Bella was getting very close to Jasper on the plane. I can not wait to see where this takes them.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 2: Healing Balm
I feel so bad for Jasper and the love of my life, Emmett.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 5: Reunion
can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3: Reattachment
It is intersting to see how Jasper has started to claim Bella as his in a way.
Alice's letter was so sad, but perfect in its own way.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your reviews!
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 2: Healing Balm
It wasn't a juicy lemon, but I thought it fit the mood of the story. Edward and Bella needed to connect on that level, but there is so much saddness and pain in and around them that they could never truly lose themselves in the act.
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
How incredibly sad for everyone.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:13 PM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
Damn meddling pixie......indeed. Yummy plane game. I wanna Jazz.
Author's Response:
I can't wait to get the outtakes of these first chapters up. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 3: Reattachment
Gotta love Alice. Hmmm Jazzy getting protective. hmmmm
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 2: Healing Balm
Poor Jazz. Kinda selfish to do that in the house to Em and Jazz I thought. Ah well.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
Poor ALice and Jasper. Glad Aro is no more. Arsehole Damn Amun.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your reviews!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
Well, when they said sharing was good, I dont think they had this in mind. But hot damn, lucky Bella, how come Bella gets all the luck, Though the idea of Alice and Rosalie being gone is hard to imagine for this strong family, great read, very sexy, cant wait to read the next chapters
Author's Response:
Thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
Wow, MistyHaze420 rec'd this and I really want to read more. I wonder if they will use this for the movie. This would be interesting on screen.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for your review. Another 5 or more chapters will go up tomorrow.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
ooooooo i want more!!! will you update soon for me please???
Author's Response:
The story is complete- has been for over a year on FFn. I will be posting a few chapters each day here in between my work as a stay at home mom, writing both fanfic and my next published novel, and everything else that has to be done.
Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 3: Reattachment
Sneaky Alice :) Great Chapter
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 2: Healing Balm
:) Another great chapter
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1: Picking Up The Unburnt Pieces
:) Great chapter
Date: 15 Nov 2010 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 4: Rio's Golden Demons
I was so excited to see this here this morning. I love this story and I tried to find it again on fanfic but couldnt. Even though I have read these chapters I enjoyed reading them again. Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reviewing. As my profile on ffn has had for a few weeks, due to TOS violations, I am in the midst of moving all my explicit stories over here where they can have a permanent home.