Date: 28 Nov 2010 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
its about time she started to get some happyiness in her life!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!!!!!!!!!!
You go girl!! Yes!!!
*parties like its 1979*
Uh, I mean... wait... what year is it again??
*giggles*
Loved it BB!!!!
*picks you up and cyber-spins you in a circle bear hug*
Author's Response:
*falls down dizzy* Thanks:)
Date: 27 Nov 2010 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 18
I wanted to slap the watier LOl. I didnt think they were ever going to get the first kiss it was worth the wait.
Author's Response:
lol, took them long enough, huh?
Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 18
yea.....hope some of the bitchiness rolls away now. She does need a therapist I think
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 17
Beautiful BB :)
I am off to shop! I need a hat for the winter...
preferably grey.... with a Crest or something on it...
to match my gloves lol
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Well, good luck:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 17
i hope she starts to get better for everyone in her family!
Author's Response: Thank you:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
OH Bella get a clue LOL.
Author's Response:
:)THanks:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Bella can be very stupid.
Author's Response:
Hmm, perhaps or perhaps she's just unsure:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 17
awww Rose moved to Texas.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 26 Nov 2010 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 16
Thank god for Edward if he was not there for her she would be in the funny farm.
Author's Response:
Yep:) Thanks!
Date: 25 Nov 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 16
well i hope that she starts to get betterr now! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 16
I have this feeling... its like I just know...
Karen Newton is going to be found in a ditch alongside of the road somewhere.
Beaten with a tire iron...
and her throat cut...
to make it look like she bled out.
Just to make sure noone notices the lack of blood content.
*snickers*
Bitch.
Hey, I'm just sayin'.
Loved the chapter BB, At least she can open up a little more now, all thanks to Edward.
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Nov 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
poor things
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 15
Mike dead that is a good thing.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 15
hmm Mike got off too easy, but at least he cant ever hurt her again.
Author's Response:
Yes, he did:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
And the 'truth' will set you FREE!!!
Enjoy Hell you Bastard!!!
*Peter licked his lips*
"He was just a little too tangy for my taste." Peter declares as he takes a seat beside me.
"I bet his mother won't taste any better, buthis father should taste alright." I declared turing to see him using a paper clip as a toothpick.
"I don't doubt that at all sugar." Peter smiles and throws his arm over my shoulders.
"Well, I hope the nomads you sent over there like spicy, Mrs. Newton is a spitfire. They will have heartburn, I guarantee it." I state with finality.
Peter snickers "Got that shit right baby." He kisses me on the cheek.
"Eww! No, Peter, gross! Go scrub your mouth, I don't want that nasty piece of shit's smell on me. Ergh!"
Peter struts off laughing loudly "HA! Don't you worry none darlin', I cleaned myself off before I got here."
I glare back "I don't care, go wash!"
He turns towards the bathroom chuckling all the way.
~
Yay BB!!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Tell Peter I said many thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2010 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
*stares blankly at the screen*
Well.... That couldn't have gone better *smirks*
*rubs Peter's shoulders*
Its just about dinnertime honey :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 15
yeah! He took care of the sentence himself. He deserved death for what he did to Bella. Of course he would not get it. He just did not want to spend years in jail. Bella is free of him.
Author's Response:
Of course that is assuming that he killed himself, isn't it?
Date: 24 Nov 2010 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 15
well i dont think from here shes going to get better cant wait to see what you have in sotre ofr the next chatper
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 24 Nov 2010 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
I am glad Mikes dad found his balls and stood up to them and made things right. Mike needs to rot in jail for years next to his mom. I am glad that Bella let Charlie comfort her for her and for him.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Big step for David Newton today.
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 14
well im glad that some of the truth came out! cant wait to see what happens next !
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Go ROSE!!!! Gregory..... you are an idiot. Hmmm Guess Mikey learned from Karen.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 23 Nov 2010 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 13
Mike rip his eyes out of his head. Poor Charlie wants so bad to help her but she wont let him. bella needs help.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
God I want the defense to fall on its face SO BAD!!
God bless a good James! *hugs you for that*
You are THE ONLY author I read that has good James'. Bless your heart :)
*giggles*
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Well, James can't be a dick all the time.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 13
Bella has the classic case of abuse woman's syndrome. She blames herself. She lied to doctors, neighbors, family,and friends. She hid from society as much as possible so wounds could heal. I hope the judge can see all of this.
Author's Response:
Me too. The people who are doing the abuse brainwash them into thinking it was something they were doing.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 13
Awww you made James nice. Great chapter. Wonder what crap the defense will pull out of there arse. Of course When mikey gets onto the stand then Rose will badger the crap out of him, and I suspect he will crack and start screaming nonsense.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) James can't always be a prick:)
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2010 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
*marks The Newtons down for dinner.... for Peter and his nomad friends*
3 for 1 boys! dinner time y'all!! *cackles evilly*
*hugs*
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:) Tell Peter to make it hurt:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
well at least its all out in the open now!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
No wonder Mike is such a prick look at his parents. So do the rest of the family have it figured out that Bella and Edward are in love????
Author's Response: Pretty much, to both questions:)
Date: 21 Nov 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
No real experience you say but that's about how it happens all the time.
Author's Response:
Thank you:) My time watching Law and Order pay off:)
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2010 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 11
I hope you do more in his POV too! :)
Hehee... Mike won't make it too far if he does get off, which I hope for my own sanity he doesn't. *quirks eyebrow*
"Don't get cocky cupcake, BB know what she is doing." Peter chastized me as he walked over to the computer desk.
"I know Petey, but it just... I don't know! GRRR! What an ass! Royally Peter! He doesn't belong on this earth anymore!" My voice getting louder towards the end of my rant.
"Don't you worry none darlin', he won't get anywhere" Peter winked with a smug smile plastered across his face.
I sighed "I guess you're right Peter." I bowed my head in submission to the realities and facts.
~
I am really getting into this story BB!! I love it!
See ya next update!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Trust in Peter, Sugar. He knows I won't let a dirtbag like Mike off.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 11
she loves him back but right now she needs to keep mike behind bars
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 20 Nov 2010 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
That was some good therapy for Bella. I love hearing Edwards pov. So he never had feelings for her other than friendship before?????
Author's Response:
He might have and not realized what they were.
Date: 20 Nov 2010 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
surprised she was ablt to get into the house.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
I EXTREMELY enjoyed a look into Papa Swan's head!!
Strap on the six-shooters pops, There's a bad man to hunt down!!
*pictures Charlie Swan in leather chaps, a ten gallon hat, and six shooters, getting ready to draw*
*falls over laughing so hard breathing is impossible*
*snorts loudly to breath*
That is such a funny picture!!
Loved it! See you next update!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am so glad that she has opened up to Edward. She needs someone.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 10
quick filler chapter but nice to see Charlie's POV
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 10
Charlie is so full of Love even if he doesnt show it. It was nice to hear what is going on with him. He wants to help Bella but dosnt know how.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 10
well im happy to see that he dosent feel that its just his fault it happens ! even though it shouldnt but it does! keep the chapter comming and edward is healing bella!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) Every small steps helps:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
lol my boys have those swords and yes they beat the crap out of each other.
Author's Response:
lol, my hubby wants to get them for ours for Christmas. I'm not so sure:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am glad she made the decision for Carlisle and Esme to go she had the choice. I was worried about her reaction to Edward taking control at wal-mart. When are they going to open there eyes about the way they feel more than friends.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 19 Nov 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
well in the end its going to make her stronger! keep the chatpers comming
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2010 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Ooooh! A peek at the inner workings of Charlie Swan?!
He is diabolical!!
*shifty eyes*
*whispers* But you didn't hear that from me...
*ducks down and starts crawling away humming Mission Impossible*
LOL :)
Loved it BB, See ya next time!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
*rolls around on the floor laughing* Oh, sugar, Charlie is diabolical!!
Date: 18 Nov 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 8
ahhh Rose.... I see. Sucks that the whole justice system is for the criminals and the victims get shafted.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
*wipes tears away*
I cannot believe that she has to go and face that monster again.
DAMNITOL!!
*starts to shake with rage*
I could really find the time to go make him dissappear for good. *ponders making Mike a missing person case*
See ya next update BB!!! :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Hmm, perhaps, Petey is available.
Date: 18 Nov 2010 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
At least this time she will have people that love her to back her. I cant wait to hear from Edward
Author's Response:
Thanks:) Few more chapters before we get to EPOV but it is coming!
Date: 18 Nov 2010 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 8
well in a way it was her husband comming back! but im glad that it wasnt! cant wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Nov 2010 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 7
well her husbands back! cant wait till the next chapter keep them comming
Author's Response:
You think it's Mike? WIth Charlie?
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2010 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
GAAAAAHHHHHHHH BB!!!!!! WTF was up with that cliffie?!?!?!
*grumbles under breath*
Ok, I really liked this chapter. She was feeling a bit better.
But now... who knows whats gonna happen...
Oh yeah...
YOU DO!!
*growls*
SMACK!
"Ouch! Peter, whatd'ya do that for?!" *rubs rearend*
Peter snickers "Well sweet cheeks, ya have no reason to growl at BB, she knows what she is doin' darlin'. Now apologize or I will not let ya read for a week." Peter mischeviously smirks and tries to hide a chuckle unsuccessfully.
My eyes grow wide at that. I let out a hugs sigh and answer.
"Sorry BB for getting upset. I know you have a reason for leaving it there." I mumble our staring at my shoes like they are the most interesting thing existing.
"Good job darlin', now lets go watch a movie" Peter grabs my hand and we head to the living room to watch The Last Airbender.
Great update BB!!! See ya at the next one!! ;)
*hugs*
Author's Response: I waited seven whole chapters before leaving a cliffie. THat might be a record for me.
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh crap... It's mike....
Author's Response:
You think?
Date: 16 Nov 2010 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
Who is with Charlie??? Is it Renee??? It couldnt be Mike because he would not be walking with Charlie. Maybe Jake??? I need to know LOL
Author's Response:
It can't be Renee cause she is dead :)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 7
Arsehole must have come to find her.
Author's Response:
Thanks:) But would Charlie have brought him to her???
Date: 16 Nov 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
It is good that she told Alice she is starting to stand up for herself with Edwards help. Everyone see them as a couple but them???
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Nov 2010 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 6
well i hope she goes tomorrow1
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 6
BB, I love where this is going :)
At least some air got cleared tonight!
I am anxious to see the purpose of Emmett being single? *ponders*
*gets sidetracked by something shiny*
Uh... huh?
Anyways... See ya next update BB!!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
lol, girl, you crack me up!
Date: 15 Nov 2010 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow Eddie the white knight fighting for her honor.... Ok I'm channeling Karate Kid here. NM.
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 5
Charlie is so right she needs help she is so convinced that it was her falt that fucker did what he did to her.
Author's Response:
It's sad, really, because she did nothing but he brainwashed her into believing that it was all her fault.
Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
yea she really needs to talk to a therapist
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 5
I think that this story is coming along greatly. I do hope that something develops between E and B sooner rather than later. They can help each other, be each others shoulder to cry on or body to lean on.
I do want to see B get this guilt off her chest though, so she can breathe again.
See ya next update BB!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
THank you:) It's kind of a slow burn, but not at the same time. I hope it comes across that way as the chapters progress:)
Date: 15 Nov 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
i agree with charlie she dose need to see someone! mike really did a number on her! cant wait till the next chapter
Author's Response: Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2010 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Tough chapter for her. Wow, that was intense.
Loved it BB!! See ya next update!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 4
Need to find Mike and kill the fucker and when done kill the bastard again. Bella needs help
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She needs serious help!
Date: 14 Nov 2010 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 4
he really did a number on her!
Author's Response:
Yes, he really did. Thank you :)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
poor thing
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 3
Poor Bella. I feel so bad.
Author's Response:
She's definatly hurting.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 3
It is time for Bella to start living her dream the only problem is she probly dont remember what it was. Maybe Edward can help her with that :)
Author's Response:
Exactly:)
Date: 14 Nov 2010 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 2
She is so into the guilt and her pitty party. at least she knows there are people that love her
Author's Response:
She's been brainwashed.
Date: 14 Nov 2010 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 1
as with everything else i have read of your sound great poor Bella
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 13 Nov 2010 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
poor b. flashbacks are a bitch
Author's Response:
Yes, they are:(
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2010 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 3
Damn, that shit is scary.
I feel so much for Bells. Its not fair to her. That bastard.
*growls*
I cant wait to see what happens next :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor B.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 1
Interesting start.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2010 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow...
Loved it BB
*hugs*
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: 12 Nov 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Bella. I'd hate to feel that lost and not have a clue what to do or where to go. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)