[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 38
It is good to see that these two are able to talk things out, but I agree with Garett on this one it is time for Bella to start letting things go and accepting people love her.
I also feel she need to see someone and start talking about it. It is time for her to man up... or as the saying goes, shit or get off the pot.
Thanks for all the wonderful chapters.
Fiorella
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Thank you:)
Date: 20 Dec 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 38
Garrett is right. Bella needs to let people love her. She flies off the handle at everything now. She should know Edward would not do anything to hurt her.
Author's Response:
Yeah, but he shouldn't have gone about it like that.
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 37
I am with Bella. I hated planning my wedding. I had a year and my mom and sisters could not believe I wasn't that interested in all the details. I just wanted simple, but nice. They dragged my from store to store. It was torture.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 38
Damn, that was just nasty of Bells.
Poor Angela. Poor Garrett. Poor Ed.
She need a spanking! Bad Bells!
lol
Love it BB!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
lol, She's just hormional. Plus, if my hubby did that, I would probably be a little pissed too!
Date: 20 Dec 2010 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 38
awww poor angela
Author's Response:
Yeah, Bella kind of went off on her:(
Date: 20 Dec 2010 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 38
god some times she just upsets me ! i cant wait to see what happens next
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Thanks:)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 37
Poor Bella so sick I am glad that Charlie figured it out. Alice will be Alice lol.
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Thank you:)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 37
im glad that charlie knows and is excited! keep the updates comming
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 19 Dec 2010 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 37
The Tazmanian Terror that is Alice!
Gotta love her :)
I hope Bells feels better very soon. I am worried what the sickness is doing to her and the baby's health.
love it BB!!!
*hugs*
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Thanks, hon:)
Date: 19 Dec 2010 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 37
hmm surprised everyone else hasnt figured it out weither.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 18 Dec 2010 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 36
Well, Bells was being a bit snippy, but I dont blame her.
Its great she is standing up for herself :)
Awesome!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Don't you love hormones:)
Date: 18 Dec 2010 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 36
im so excited for the both of them
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Dec 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 36
woo hoo she didnt cave
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Thank you:)
Date: 18 Dec 2010 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 36
I am glad they are not fighting Bella and Edward about the wedding. If they are around the rest of the family at all they are going to figure out that Bella is pregers.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 35
I stumbled upon this story today, and just finished all 35 chapters in one sitting. This story has just been wonderful to read and have gone through plenty of emotions this afternoon while devouring it. Just beautiful, BB.
I especially love this last chapter, it was so touching.
Thank you for sharing this wonderful story with us. I can't wait to read more!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 35
awwww.... Thank you!!!
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Thanks:)
Date: 17 Dec 2010 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 35
awww he is so sweet.
I like Charlotte
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 17 Dec 2010 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Bella all day sickness not fun but the good thing is Edward is there for her. That is cool he got her moms ring and made it official cant hid that they are engaged now. I cant wait for everyones reaction.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 35
Oh Em GEE BB, That was effin beautiful!!!
*wipes away happy tears*
I just want to hug them!
Oh, they babies are getting married and having a baby of their own! *sniff*
I loved this chapter BB! Especially protective Dr Bear Char....
*swoon*
*hugs*
Date: 17 Dec 2010 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 35
im happy shes getting lots of happyiness in her life its about time!
Author's Response:
Thank you:) She deserves it, doesn't she? And so does Edward!
Date: 17 Dec 2010 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 35
That was so beautiful. Thank you for being smart enough to realize that you can't tell the sex on an ultrasound until at least 16 weeks. As a registered sonographer it drives me crazy when people get this wrong. They will be saying it is a girl or boy at eight or ten weeks. It isn't developed enough yet.
Author's Response:
Ugh, I hate when I read that, too!! Even with my kids, it was at least 20 wks before my doctor would even try.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 34
They should get married before the baby comes. She is very early pregnant and they already live together. They already had planned on getting married at some point. There is not reason to wait. All the important people are right there in that house. Bella and Edward do not need big and fancy. That is not their style.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 34
THey should get married now!!!!! THey should spill their guts get married like yesterday and and-whew-that was an awesome chapter! I think hey should have triplets also-two girls and a little boy who should be born first so he is their big brother:)
Author's Response:
Triplets??? Wow, that's an idea:)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 34
awww he is so sweet
Author's Response:
I think he is, too!
[Report This]Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
Well, I think Eddie should get her a ring like the next day, then they hop a plane to Vegas and elope.
Then the baby can be big news in itself. :)
Love the chapter BB!!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 34
Yes, I think they should get married before the baby.... even though they aren't getting married because of the baby....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:44 AM Title: Chapter 34
I knew he would be excited and I am so excited that she said yes to his purposal. I cant wait til they tell everyone else.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 34
dont think they should tell just yet! keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 34
I always hate it when they wait to tell anyone ,I think they should marry b4 the baby comes. I think they should elope. it's romantic that way.
Love this story. it breaks my heat alot but i do like it.
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Thank you:)
Date: 16 Dec 2010 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 33
Hi, I just tried finding Lustful Awakenings and couldn't find it on your page..
Thanks Pat
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 33
*looks down at doodles and the small BBQ stain on my green shirt*
I think Eddie will say that he is excited and he is going to pick her up and twirl her around, and then she is going to puke on his shoes!
*giggles*
*looks back up at your with big doe eyes and smile sweetly*
*hugs*
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I knew you had some BBQ!!
Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 33
Baby Baby Baby I think Edward will be so excited.
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You think? Thanks@
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 33
ugg cliffy
Date: 15 Dec 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 33
ruh roh
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Thanks:)
Date: 15 Dec 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 33
well i dont think that hell be upset about it ! keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 32
Poor B. Hope she feels better soon. Gotta love Mama E
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Thank you:)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
Poor David what a broken man his last act was to protect Bella. Bella is on antibiotics and they did not us a condom can you say baby please.
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Thanks:)
Date: 14 Dec 2010 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 32
Yup Edward can fight my fever anytime
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I know, right????
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2010 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 32
Hmmm, fuck like bunnies... she is on antibiotics... no condom...
YES!!!!! FUCKIN A BB!!!!!!!
*starts to twirl around and dance all over the office*
I see a baby in the future...
Oh Em GEE!!!!
lol
*hugs*
Author's Response:
lmao!!!
Date: 13 Dec 2010 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 31
Alice had her nose bent out of shape it is a terible feeling to feel like you are not needed when you need that person so much. I am so glad they worked it out.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 13 Dec 2010 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 31
Morning naughtiness and some bonding with sister- from-another-mister.
Great chapter. I cant wait to see what happens next!
*hugs*
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Dec 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 31
awww glad the girls made up
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Thank you:)
Date: 13 Dec 2010 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
im happy that they are talking again! keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 30
Very sweet... I love how Bella is healing... I would love to see a wedding... maybe a baby....
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 10:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
Another wonderful chapter, I am glad that Edward is helping Bella to be open and remember the good time.
I just hope it keeps getting better and better.
I have a question for you, when Mick killed himself, all of his possessions would have passed to Bella? Would this not be the same with his parents stuff. In this case why does Bella not use this money to build Charlie the house he wants?
This way she can repay him for everything.
Thanks you for the update
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Hmm, hadn't really thought about that, honestly...
Date: 12 Dec 2010 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
That was a wonderful day full of healing. Good thing Bella is understanding that she will be ready to marry Edward soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 29
Im so happy for them it is about time. I love what he said about wanting to marry her and that he has loved her all his life
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Dec 2010 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 30
Awwww! OMG so adorable!
Love it BB!!
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Thank you:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 30
yumminess
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Thanks:)
Date: 12 Dec 2010 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 30
it seams that shes starting to heal even faster now! cant wait till the next chatper
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 29
Oh wow!!
Hot blooded, check it and see,
Got a fever of one hundred three!
Well... that was... great :)
*hugs*
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Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 11 Dec 2010 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
Wonderful chapter, I knew that Edward would be gentle and caring.
Author's Response:
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Date: 11 Dec 2010 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 29
awwww t=shirts sounds cute
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 28
Glad she made up with Esme
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
Edward probably should have hidden the suitcases in the car. Bella is scared of her own shadow at this point of her life.
Author's Response:
True but Edward doesn't know what to do anymore than most men would.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 28
im glad that she got some pictures ! and her and esme made up! keep the chatpers comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 28
Esme is an amazing women I am so glad that Bella went to her. I almost cryed for poor Bella when she walked in and Edward was packing poor girl talk about shock. It is wonderful what Edward is doing.
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 28
I have a feeling it is going to take Edward a while to get used to Bella freaking out everytime he does something that triggers a bad feeling. I do feel very sorry for people that have or are living this sort of life. I would never understand how they could stay. But reading stories like this where they feel helpless and are battered down by the shear will from someone telling them how they should feel and be.
I take my hat off to anyone that has left an abusive spouce and I hope and pray the one that are not strong enough (yet) to leave that they one day find the courage to do so.
Love the story.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 10 Dec 2010 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
Wow, heavy and sweet!
Love it BB!!!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 27
glad her and charlie got to talk.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 27
Edward's calm personality is just what Bella needs. He is a great listener. Bella is slowing becoming herself again in his arms.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 27
glad they worked it out
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[Report This]Date: 09 Dec 2010 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
No need to apologize dear. We are your devoted readers, and we understand that family comes first.
I loved this chapter, Em and Ro, and then Charlie and Bells.
Beautiful BB.
*hugs you tight*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
[Report This]Date: 08 Dec 2010 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, I really have no idea where you get the emotion to write the stories you do, this is the second I have read in as many days and I have to say that both of them are amazing.
I am really sure that you have had to dig deep to write this one. It could not be easy.
I love it. I cant wait to see what happens between Bella and Charlie. I would love to know what Emmett has been going through before he turned up on Bella's door step to speak to Rose.
Thank you for a wonderful story.
Fiorella
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
so murder/suicide just not in the order I thought.
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Date: 06 Dec 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
hmm murder suicide I guess.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
I hope that Charlie didnt have anything to do with any of the Newtons death. Bella needs Charlie and he needs her. Emmett is a good boy he knows how to kiss ass.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 06 Dec 2010 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 26
Emmett didn't mean that Rose or Bella deserved what happened to them. He is just angry that David did not help Bella. People have a harder time seeing it when the man is the one being abused by a woman. They think they should be able to get away or stop it because they are stronger.
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[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2010 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
*takes a deep breath*
Gotta love sweetward, right? :)
Sweetmett too lol
*hugs*
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2010 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
YOU ARE AWESOME!!!! I love every one of your stories. I enjopy reading your work. I anticipate your updates. LOVE LOVE LOVE IT!!! KEEP UP THE GREAT WRITING!!!
Date: 05 Dec 2010 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 26
well i hope for her sake that she gets a break soon keep the chapters comming
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2010 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
*tries to hide giggles but fails miserably*
BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
send some love to Peter and Charlotte BB!!
*snorts*
Thats priceless!
I love that Bella is getting her friends back!!
*hugs*
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Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Dec 2010 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
And the tangled web becomes even more tangled
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Date: 05 Dec 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 25
Please tell me it was a murder suicide????
Author's Response:
It was a murder/suicide....or was it??????
Date: 05 Dec 2010 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 25
well at least karen cant get her anymore! keep the chapters comming
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 03 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
It is good to see her getting independent job is good. 69 is great lol.
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[Report This]Date: 03 Dec 2010 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 24
This chapter was, to put it simply, fuckhot!
Sweet jiblits BB!!! I need a cold shower now!
Peter and Charlotte are in Chicago at the moment...
*grumbles about inconvenient timing*
Now if I was to write an actual story BB, then my fuckawesome reviews would be shorter!
*pouts*
But, I will think about it :) And I will let you know first, for sure :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
I would take shorter reviews, even if I would miss the fuck out of them, to see you writing something of your own. Perhaps, something with Peter and Charlotte....
Date: 03 Dec 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
i can see bella as a librarian
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[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
Started out kinda hard, but ended with a frickin hilarious bang!!
Charlie, poor guy, having someone like Lauren pining after him...
eeew, just... ew.
*pushes 1 on cell for speed dial*
"Hey darlin'." crooned through the earpiece giving me a shiver.
"Hey, Peter. Head on out there, I am sure you will find that low life piece of trash woman at her house." I spat out with vigor.
"On my way sweetie, Charlotte said to make sure you turn the heating blankets on, you won't be puttin' your britches back on all day if she gets her way." I could here the smile in Peter's voice as he informed me of what was to come when he and Char got home.
Home. It only feels that way with them here. I smile widely at that thought.
"Ok, sugar, from the lack of response I figure you are picturing what she is gonna do to you when we get there." Peter chuckles breaking me out of my daydream.
I clear my throat and shake my head to clear the haze. "Thanks for that, Petey, I have something positive to look forward to, other than the ceasing of existance of the vile creature that is Karen Newton. Don't get any on ya, babe!"
Peter lets out a short belly laugh before he replies "Baby, I will swim back to you so that all you will smell on me is freashwater. Later, darlin'."
I sigh in longing "Later Pete, kiss Char for me, I'll be waiting."
"I know you will sweetie."
I close my eyes and sink back into my daydream as I snap my phone closed.
~
I am in love with every one of your stories BB, I cannot deny it.
I cannot wait to see what happens next!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Sugar, when are you going to write your own story!! You totally need to!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
They better catch that crazy bitch before she can hurt anyone. That is cool Rose has family now.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think Rosalie just found hersel a new family.
Author's Response:
Yep, her did!
Date: 02 Dec 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 23
Lauren hitting on Charlie. ....ROFL
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[Report This]Date: 02 Dec 2010 12:21 PM Title: Chapter 1
*sigh* ya sucked me into another story ..But i am loving every bit of it........I almost didnt read this story, I guess cause so many of the stories I read are very angsty (is that even a word?) and i get a little depressed reading them, yours has the right amount of calm mixed into the drama so to speak. not sure I am explaining this right but i try.
Author's Response:
I do understand, and yes, I do think Angsty is a word:)
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 22
Family bonding is a beautiful thing, especially after a tragedy.
I wonder what Tyler has found out?!
I have a feeling I am going to have some nomad dinners coming up probably!
*snickers*
*hugs*
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
Gotta love Alice and Charlie.
Hmmm Of course Tyler is going to say arson
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward and Bella are so cute. Charlie loves to give them a hard time, but you know he is happy.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he is:)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 22
Did someone start the fire??? Bella moving in good timing not hard to do when your homeless. Alice loves to shop lol
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 01 Dec 2010 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
I was so relieved when Charlie came around the house Thank you. About time they figured it out and said the words.
Author's Response:
I couldn't hurt Charlie, Bella needs him too much.
Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Glad charlie is ok
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 30 Nov 2010 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am glad you got teary because I sure did. I am so glad that Bella was brave enough to tell Edward her feelings.
Author's Response:
It was a big step for her.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2010 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMG they said I love you!!!!
Such cute kids :)
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 20
Bella does not need anymore drama in her life. I hope she has a cell phone to call the fire department.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 20
Please dont let anything happen to Charlie. Everything was starting to go well with her new car some boob sucking now this.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
oh wow...... Lemme Guess Karen the psycho bitch rears her head again.
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
thats hott !! im glad that mike is providing for her finally cant wait till the next cahtper
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 20
GASP!
CHARLIE!!!! DADDY!!!!!
*breaks down in sobs*
please, BB, please let Charlie be safe!!
Great writing BB!
*hugs*
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
About time they made it offical everyone else knew they were meet to be.
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[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 19
LOL, Charlie is cute!
Man!! Rose is a firecracker! lol
Love is in the air...
everywhere I look around...
*swoons*
*hugs*
Author's Response:
lol, I heart Charlie:)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hey, they finally said it out loud and declared that they are a couple.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 28 Nov 2010 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 19
charlie is funny
Author's Response:
Thank you:)