Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:56 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
Love how the boys plot out this date like a recon mission - hiding in shadows, ducking into alleys. :)
I can actually really get behind Bella in this situation. She has this perception of Edward in her head from the past 7 years of experience. It's going to take more than him declaring his feelings out of jealousy for her to believe him. No one wants to here 'I love you' because you're on a date with someone else. They want to hear it for all the reasons Bella described - because that person's heart is so full they have to say it to you.
Good chapter.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:44 PM Title: McDreamy, McSteamy, and McCreamy
My two thoughts for Trevor's job were doctor, or drug dealer. :) I was half right. I have a bad feeling Bella is going to learn about cocky Attendings first-hand. Listen to Dr. K!
At least Edward has the assitance of basically everyone. :) I really enjoy all the different POVs. It's great to hear from someone not directly involved.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:59 PM Title: Truth Revealed
I'm so glad things worked out for Edward with Elizabeth. Now, whenever I hear Sex on Fire by the KOL I'll be thinking of this scene in your story. Thank you for another great chapter....
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:51 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
*sigh* Edward is starting to realize his feelings for Bella - yay! Now, if she will forgive him and own up to her own feelings.
Hee, hee, hee Blagojevich - no comments on his hair?? :)
As much as I may love me some Seeley Booth ala Bones, I have a bad feeling about this Trevor guy. But seeing as this is only chapter 8 of 60, I'm thinking there is much more drama to come. can't wait! :)
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 8:21 AM Title: Getting Reacquainted
Thank you for making Bella magnanimous and wanting to help Tanya. Looking forward to the Edward/Elizabeth confrontation.
[Report This]Date: 16 Mar 2010 7:21 AM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
I'm so glad they had the opportunity to hash through their history and emotions. Good way to do it by using their playlists...
Date: 16 Mar 2010 5:07 AM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
Whew! That was a close one. Glad the break-up drama wasn't too drawn out and was resolved rather quickly...
Date: 16 Mar 2010 4:29 AM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
Oh Sweet Jeebus! She would have to walk in just at the exact wrong moment without staying long enough to see it resolved. His Mother and Tanya buddies? Dum, dum dum...
Regards, PNW Luna
AKA Bella Luna on Twilighted
Date: 16 Mar 2010 3:25 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
So much in this chapter.
I'm intrigued by this Trevor character - especially his job. I am happy to see Edward get some competition, spur him into action.
How scary it would be to have a SWAT as a loved one. Thank you for recognizing them as the heroes they are.
And finally, the sweetness at the end. :) Don't know what else to say.
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: Puppet Master J
Puppet Master J, indeed. Thanks for the background on him and Alice. I love all the canon couples, so seeing these little bits and pieces is always a nice bonus.
I'm sensing a perfect storm is being setup for ladie's night - Bella gets the Alice makeover, and Edward and the boys decide on a night out. Can't wait!!
Date: 16 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
I thought I knew where you were going with Edward walking into Bella's apartment, but I never imagined he would walk back out! Great music choices.
I'm not sure if it will be an ongoing story, but I liked Ethan's story. Heartbreaking, but it shows that Bella truly is a doctor. And a good one at that. But it's not always saving lives, sometimes you have deliver bad news to good people.
I hope one of the boys will help screw Edward's head on straight. :)
Date: 16 Mar 2010 1:46 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
Oh Slutward. He tries to do the right thing and it still blows up in his face. But that's what makes his redemption all the better, right? ;)
Poor Bella, the girl can't catch a break.
I really like the interaction with all the guys. They all know B&E belong together, but they will rip Edward a new one when he screws up. Looking forward to more of Bella's boys . . . and maybe an Alice/Jasper meeting? :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:27 PM Title: The Day From Hell
Oooh, Bella in full-on doctor mode. Glad that Andy is going to be okay. He is a new character, so I don't have as much of a tie to him as the canon characters, but it was still hard to read about him being in a coma. Love how even after he awakes from a coma, he has more insight into B&E's tap-dancing around eahc other than they do.
Looking forward to the fallout from the kiss.
Date: 15 Mar 2010 11:25 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
Poor Emmett and his sad kitchen skills.
Love Jasper and his all-knowing ways. The dynamic with all the guys is still being fleshed out, but I am really enjoying how Bella does seem like a little sister to them
Love Bella's daydream. :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 7:45 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
So I'm a little late to this story. :) I'm a 'completed only' reader, and was so looking forward to this story and all outtakes to be finished. So here I am. I was following this story on FF, but once I saw it only went to chapter 17, I figured I would help boost your reviews on the new site.
I'm assuming the Prologue is set in the future a little, so I'm intrigued for that scene to play out.
Love the Femme Docs!
Oh, Slutward. You are one of my faves. :) And a SWAT officer on top of it?!? *swoon*
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying it. Thanks for coming here to boost the reviews and I really hope you like it! It's a bit of a monster, and I enjoy putting people on a rollercoaster ride, but hopefully you'll find it worth the effort! Thanks for coming over and I hope you like what you read!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 8:21 PM Title: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers
Wow, that was way hottt!.. :P
Date: 14 Mar 2010 3:21 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
Wow! This was so sad!
That scene where Bella thinks about the funeral was really heart wrenching! My best friend lost her father a couple of years ago, five days before Christmas and the scene was so much like the funeral, especially my friend who was in a state of shock and numbness..
Great writing! Saddest chapter so far!
Date: 14 Mar 2010 2:39 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
Well I have been sucked into the vortex of this story and its really really late, like 130am late and I cant stop reading and I have to be at work at 7am...aggghhh. I am enjoying your story very much
Author's Response:
Ouch...sorry for the vortex sucking and your lack of sleep...but I"m glad you like it :)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:53 AM Title: The Angel's Kiss
*sobs* poor edward:'(
I'm proud of bella, honestly the girl is a bad ass:)
Date: 14 Mar 2010 7:23 AM Title: Underneath It All
WOW i didn't see that comin, tragger has a twin brother:O:O
PROLOUG finally i reached it:)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:55 PM Title: Decoys and Deprecation
i love their game, and "far away" was so fitting:)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:19 PM Title: Runaway Rollercoaster
Poor Edward:( i really wanna knw how could his mother left her.
Bella taking off the ring was really heartbreaking:(
Date: 13 Mar 2010 7:05 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
I really hope nothing bad happens to bella!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:53 PM Title: The Unexpected
The ring is beautiful, and I love the new edward:) xx
Date: 13 Mar 2010 4:11 PM Title: New Heat and Old Flames
An edward playlist WOW bella was totally head over heels for him:) CUTE XX
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:34 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
edward must have been in another univerese since he didn't notice he was being followed:( i hope he doesnt hurt them really!!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:03 PM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
Oh good -- do I sense a ray of hope here? Great story!
Date: 13 Mar 2010 6:44 AM Title: Be Careful What You Wish For
edward is so sweet:)
Date: 13 Mar 2010 3:36 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Spent last two days reading entire story. Loved it now my house is trashed thanks to the kids but it was well worth it.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad. I can guarantee it's far better than mine was when I wrote it! LOL! Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 8:50 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
this story desereves a hell lot more reviews i really feel bad for not reviewing the last couple of chapters i've read, i should really go back and review, i LOVE IT REALLY, thank you!!
bella's reaction was shocking, it left my jaw hanging open, you don't expect that after "i love you"s and hot kisses:) but i totally back her, E deserved it:)!!!
Author's Response:
LOl...thanks. It did REALLY good on ffn. when I wrapped it up it had over five thousand reviews...and I had nearly two thousand on twilighted. I think it's partially because I posted it all in the course of two days here. YOu get more reviews if you space it out. :) Thanks so much for the review. So glad you are liking it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:35 PM Title: Getting Reacquainted
:) I love fluff.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 6:30 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
the bar wasinteresting. you go bella kick grabbyhands ass. so proud of her
the girls sure do know there stuff. they know what to do to get under their skins. poor edward having a chubbie all night poor paining blue balls. well i am hoping he learned his lesson and is getting his head out of his ass.
i so love this story
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:18 AM Title: Puppet Master J
alice and jasper , jasper is taking a chance.
man edward needs a beat down
love it
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:28 AM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
i love mama d she is great
i know it was a rough day hell a rough month for bella but she is strong and i am so proud of her. she makes a good doctor
love the chapter, love the story
love it
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:59 AM Title: Avoidance and Disappointment
i love your end note, edward needs to get his head pulled from his ass
the guys have all seen it why did they not say something sooner. i am glad andy has made it back to the land of the living
love it
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:34 AM Title: The Day From Hell
come on edward wake up, she is right in front of you and for how long.
i just started and i love this story. i am glued to it. i will be taking it with me to read in between my wait at the twilight convention tomorrow. yeah
love it
Author's Response:
LOL...I'm so glad you're enjoying it and I"m honored it will keep you company as you wait at the convention. I'm so envious. I'd love to go to one!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 7:18 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
I can't remember if I've reviewed yet, but just want to say that this is an AWESOME story. It's well-written, thought out, and the lemons are fantastic! It's a definite must-read!
Author's Response:
Awe thanks...I'm so glad you've enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 10 Mar 2010 1:15 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
this was SOOO GREAT!!!i am so sad it is over but it was greatly done.it has to be the best eva nothig can compare to it.thanks 4 writin it & be swagger & writin the best story in da world!!i luv ya 4 that!!!
luv,
KYNDRA
Author's Response:
Awe...thanks! That's high praise :) Thanks for reading!
Date: 09 Mar 2010 10:16 PM Title: Missing and Misunderstandings
I haven't reviewed yet, but your story fucking rocks. This is just the heavy part. I have a feeling that someone is going to get Bella on her way home. Again, your fic is so wonderful. I cannot stop reading. THANK YOU FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sherri
Date: 09 Mar 2010 6:31 AM Title: Femmes Night Out
I love your story so far...and will always love David Boreanaz...thanks for the visual.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:35 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
wow . . . i didn't realize this story was over here . . . i read it over on FFn and absolutely love it! glad to see it posted and can't wait to catch up (i quit reading when i started writing a couple of months ago) this is definitely one of my fav's! :D
Author's Response:
Oh wow...that's so cool. I really enjoy your stories! It's always cool when an Author you enjoy likes your stories as well!!!! Thanks for dropping in and I hope you like the rest!!! I even have summer outtakes posted as well :)
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:18 AM Title: Bonding and Plotting
First I want to say woot woot Minnesota reference (I live in MN) and I'm hooked on this story of yours too. You are a fantastic writer girly girl.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 2:04 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
A great story! Thanks so much for sharing with us! Very nicely done!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:56 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I really enjoyed your fic over that past few days! So glad that I found it on a Friday so I was able to read it over the weekend!
You really gave us all an amazing story with so many emotions, so much actions and some fabulous lemons!
Loved it all!
Sarah
Date: 07 Mar 2010 11:51 PM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
Awe that was an amazing wedding and honestly almost exactly what I would picture for my own! Beautiful chapter with a box of tissues! Loved it!
Sarah
Date: 07 Mar 2010 3:41 PM Title: Rearrangements and Rock Stars
Hey, there is a little mistake here: "Yeah, Bella, in about eight months or so, you are going to be an aunt!" xD
Date: 07 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
Wow! Great chapter! So proud of Bella for facing her fears to take Sellers down! And the hotel suite...wow! So hot! My ex-husband rented a place like that one time when we were on vacation...heart shapped Jacuzzi, mirrored ceilings and all...and yeah its pretty hot!
Loving it!
On to the next chapter!
Sarah
Author's Response:
Yeah...that was actually based on the suite my hubby and i stayed in on our wedding night. It was hot, but we were so exhausted, we had a hard time fully enjoying it! I wished we had more time in it, but it was only available for the one night. The next night we spent in the Roman room...equally as cheesy of a theme, but it just wasn't quite as cool as the heart room.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:40 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
great story!!! thanks for sharing it with us readers!!! =-)
tiny
Date: 07 Mar 2010 1:08 PM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
sniff-sniff... love this chapter and the visuals are just a bonus!!!
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:38 AM Title: Empowering and Contentment
I just want to tell you how much I'm enjoying your story. I originally found it on fanfic and I'm sorry you had to move it from there. Thank you for posting it here.
So today I finished 23rd chapter and I feel so involved in the story! I love the characters and the plot. Your English is so good that the story is just flowing ao I'm reading in huge gulps. :)
Thank you again and I'll review more later on!
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:53 PM Title: Declarations
awww. their engaged!!! whoo yooo!!!
tiny
Date: 04 Mar 2010 10:22 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
"The countless hours spent hiding in the cunts of a parade of slutty whores . . . I should have been with her." Very well said.
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:45 PM Title: The Angel's Kiss
you had me in tears with the names you were giving some of those patients... hahaha. i guess working in the medical field i just found that to be hilarious... LMAO!!!!!:-)anyways... awwww. the end of the chapter was so sad, great chapter!!! on to the next!!!!
tiny
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Moving Ahead and Protective Mama Bears
sniff sniff i love momma bear esme!!! she rocks!!!!
tiny
Date: 04 Mar 2010 2:31 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
nicely done, but it still hurts
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:16 PM Title: For The First Time
about damn time!!!!! hahahah great chapter..
tiny
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:17 AM Title: The Unexpected
sniff* sniff.... another great chapter..
tiny
Date: 04 Mar 2010 1:11 AM Title: Outside The Bubble
Carlisle's little spiel at the end kinda made me tear up. Way too cute but sorta sad.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:55 PM Title: Gearing Up and Getting Off
Very hot chapter now on to the trial and lets see what that lawyer tries to pull to discredit Bella.
[Report This]Date: 03 Mar 2010 6:28 PM Title: Pressure
Wow I can't believe Bella knowing how to shoot a gun is going to be used against her. I mean ok fine she can shoot but she did not put her self in this hostage situtation and how is something she learned before any of this happend valid. I mean its not like she learned to shoot because she knew she was going to be in a hostage situtation and wanted to be ready for it.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:56 PM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
I didn't do this in high school because i went to a really small lutheran high school but last year during my freshman year of college my friends and i bought a toy wind up mouse at the toy store. we then turned it loose in the halls to see how many people we could scare. out of the 15 people that we tried we got one really good reaction. you know the whole scream and stand on a chair reaction.
Date: 03 Mar 2010 4:42 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
let the ACTION being!!!!!
tiny
Date: 03 Mar 2010 3:23 PM Title: Perfection
great firsy date! love it!!!
tiny
Date: 02 Mar 2010 5:31 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
absolutely positively loved loved loved this story! wow! it was a monster taking me about 5 days to read (why do kids want to eat? lol) but completely worth it!! your writing was so descriptive i saw it as a movie in my head and i love that!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Mar 2010 3:15 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
What a great story! I have really enjoyed the FDKK and BSK. Thanks so much for sharing your talent with us!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 4:18 PM Title: Sleeping With An Angel
are you sure this is fan fiction...hahahha your research for youe writing is excellent... hahaha are you from chicago???? cuz i am and let me tell you, when i read the whole rod blogovich (sorry wrong spelling) thing i was laughing so hard my kids were looking at me like i was crazy!!! i kno silly right. great chapter
tiny
Author's Response:
LOL...I'm an Illinoisan, but not Chicago. I live in Central IL, which is why a lot of this story takes place there....like they say...write what you know. I wrote mostly about the towns I went to college in :) Glad you enjoyed it! Thanks for the review!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 2:35 PM Title: Peeping Toms and Sage Advice
i think i love momma dshe reminds me of what esme might say!!! hahaha
tiny
Date: 01 Mar 2010 1:25 PM Title: The Day From Hell
live life to the fullest!!!! great chapter
tiny
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:43 PM Title: Femme Docs and Self -conscious Sluts
ummm that sounds really good about now!! a western omelet!!!
tiny
Date: 01 Mar 2010 12:14 PM Title: Prologue/ Brotherly Manwhores
wow great first chapter!!! i was gonna start reading it on FF, but read your note stating you were gonna move it here. so i decedied to register here also... lol.. i have a twilighted account, but i just dont like the white on black setting i just hate it... i know,,, i can change it, but it's just not the same.. well i'm glad you posted this complete story here and thanks for the link to this website..lol well i'm on to the next chapters
tiny
Date: 27 Feb 2010 8:11 PM Title: The World Spins Madly On
This chapter was amazing, there was so much emotions that I am now crying. It reminded me of when my grandfather died 11 years ago. I was very young, but I remember being so sad... Thank you for writing such a strong chapter.
Date: 27 Feb 2010 2:48 AM Title: Getting Reacquainted
Thanks writing!
Date: 26 Feb 2010 9:19 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
Loved this story. It had me laughing, crying, and loving Bella and Edward. I really loved the relationship between Emmett and Bella. It had just the right amount of suspence. Can't wait to read more of your stories!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 9:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
I'm so glad I found this fanfic, it has been a wonderful adverture. You have a great way of storytelling and I will be reading your other fanfics as well. Thanks for sharing all the heartache and joy with your readers.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for all of the awesome reviews. This is actually in the top ten reviewed list now :)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 5:28 PM Title: The Unexpected
I'm getting a little worried about gayward. At least he let her go down on him! He's so freaked about making this "perfect".
Date: 24 Feb 2010 7:56 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
That was lovely. The Bryan Adams song is what my husband and I had our first dance to.
Date: 24 Feb 2010 6:06 AM Title: Epilogue: Fifteen Years Later
With tears in my eyes I finished reading this story. What a wonderful love they share. I love these guys. I really enjoyed reading this story. Beautiful ending I love the familes they all have. Great job!
Date: 24 Feb 2010 4:36 AM Title: Everything
Great chapter! Loved all the traditional stuff the dances, the cake, the speeches. What a great honeymoon surprise. :0)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 1:46 AM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
I had wondered how Elizabeth felt about Edward changing his name. Now I know. The wedding was beautiful! :0)
Date: 24 Feb 2010 12:14 AM Title: Connecting the 'Future' Dots
Yay we're getting to the wedding :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:59 PM Title: The Eye of the Storm
Love Daddy Emmett! :0) Edward did such a great job on the stand. I'm glad that the hospital won. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 8:09 PM Title: Everything
I can't say enough about the glorious day this wedding was. First the ceremony, then the reception and now they are off to Greece, (after joining the mile high club). Very, very cool.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:53 PM Title: On The Hot Seat
I really wanted Demitri to let Varner have it. Hopefully everything will turn out well for the hospital. I had wondered if Rose was going to have the baby since Emmett wasn't in the court room. I'm off to read the next chapter.....
Date: 23 Feb 2010 7:42 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
This is so good, I can't believe the doc is the new boss O.O
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:51 PM Title: I'll Always Be Right There
Well done. Beautiful ceremony, words, music leading up to it and such love. This was everything a wedding should be and more. Tears still flowing (happy tears), just absolutely beautiful.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:13 PM Title: Gearing Up and Getting Off
What a great surprise... Edward showing up like that. Yep it would scare a person at first. lol Looking forward to the trial. Hopefully they really do have good lawyers and won't let the other side paint a bad picture of Bella. What's the trial about exactly? I the hospital was being sued for not having enough security what would making Bella look bad acheive? Guess I'll just keep reading and find out. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:00 PM Title: Bonding and Plotting
I can't help but laugh at B regarding her need to label. Can't remember if it was this story or another, where A says something to the effect of, "we spend all our time together, we're exclusive, we're crazy about each other, yeah, he's my bf." I would have to guess by that alone that A is def older. I think it shows that despite her school and career path, she is still young emotionally.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:51 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I don't get Bella. Having been very close to him for several years, she knows that Edward has trouble expressing his feelings. So now that he finally admits to her that he is in love with her, she of anyone should know that he means it, otherwise he wouldn't have said that. I guess I'm just desappointed by her behavior...
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:23 PM Title: Pressure
Well now I'm curious why would it matter if Bella knew how to use a gun. She wasn't the crazy person that took a ER waiting room hostage. :0) Poor Bella I hope she does well on her test.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 1:55 PM Title: The Inner Sanctum
I like the fluff! I especially like sensitiveward but I'd really like to see citrusward! Can't wait to see where you go w Trevor.
Date: 23 Feb 2010 6:56 AM Title: Rock On
Very fun! I laughed when Jessica's band did the Avril song. lol Then of coure I loved when the knights and the Femmes were on stage. I even looked up the songs and listened to them. Great job!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 5:17 AM Title: Fly Swatting Shirts and Citrus Flavored Showers
Really looking forward to the battle of the bands. I think it'll be a fun one to read. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 4:08 AM Title: The Human Incubators
I like the name of their band. lol I can just imagine the looks they got from the crowd when they steped up on stage. :0)
Date: 23 Feb 2010 3:31 AM Title: Justice Served and Champagne Consumed
I'm glad they got Dr. Scumbag, but that was a pretty careless move on Bella's part. I get that he needed to be delayed, but after the cops pulled up she should have played it like she didn't know what was happening. If he's a gangster he's got people working for him that all about getting even. Wouldn't he send people after her knowing that she was the one who set him up. Since you said we are getting to the end I'm guessing that doesn't happen and I'm glad. :0) Fun chapter!
Date: 23 Feb 2010 2:05 AM Title: Surprise, SURPRISE
I enjoyed hearing from Emmett. It was really sweet when he felt the baby kick and they picked a name. Cute name! I also really enjoyed Bella and Edwards time alone. I'm so glad they seem to talk so openly about stuff. It helps cut down on the misunderstandings that seem to happen in other stories and it stresses me out. So this is really enjoyable to read. :0) Great job! Oh and congrats on making it to the top 10 most reviewed. :0)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:33 PM Title: Heart to Hearts and Really Bad Timing
I'm just disappointed. But, I guess I knew they couldn't just get together and T woild probably stick around a little longer
Date: 22 Feb 2010 11:00 PM Title: A Missing Piece of the Bella & Emmett Puzzle
Great chapter! It was fun hearing about Bella and Emmett growing up. I wanted Edward to stay on the SWAT team, but this training center seems like it could be a good thing and now Emmett is going to go work there too. Rose will be so happy. :0)
Date: 22 Feb 2010 10:38 PM Title: Gearing Up and Getting Off
I thoroughly enjoyed the chapter, really hot lemon, love all over the place.