Date: 06 Jun 2010 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 3
hahaha you are wating no time in getting them dating! I like it ;)
Date: 06 Jun 2010 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow! What a fuck fest!
I played hop scotch all the way over here.......I marked the tour as my faves a couple of weeks ago and was going to start reading it this morning when I realized it was a sequel..so I went to your page and saw the sequel to this story,,,faved it and the outtakes...and that lead me to here.............so this is where I will begin..........everything!
BTW.....I love me some slash/girl on girl!
Date: 16 May 2010 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ok, I didn't see that coming. Bella's parents were really harsh last time. I hope this doesn't blow up and get messy.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 12 May 2010 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 55
I love your story: smut and a plot are my weaknesses.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 27 Apr 2010 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 56
B.B.
Found this one and just couldn't stop reading!!!!
It's hot, sexy and very thud worthy!!!!!
Off to start the sequel!!!!!
Cory
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 55
well that was a shitty way to end off! get us all excited about the baby, and then this!? what happened to alice? will bella still be open to their relationship or will she freak out even more? and what about the sex!?! how long until our fav four start going at it like mad again? off to start the sequel....
Author's Response:
lol, thanks for all the reviews:)
Date: 25 Apr 2010 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 54
yay the wedding was beautiful and perfect for them.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 53
things are going great for all of them. iit is wonderful to see and the wedding is comming!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 52
well they should all know that there will be 'dirt' to be had on each group of 4, these guys are insatiable.
Date: 25 Apr 2010 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 51
is this a small resort or what? and what about other people? seems eam is the only one to always walk in when he shouldn't! heehee
Author's Response:
lol, it's a small resort:)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 50
don't know what sam's issue is that sounded hot and it's not like e & j were going at it. it was just an average foursome. i thought all guys loved multiples...
Author's Response:
lol, I think it was the fact that he was under the impression that E and B were together and J and A were. Then he saw E and A humping like bunnies and J and B going at it....
Date: 24 Apr 2010 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 49
well that would have been one hell of an interesting plane trip.
*editing note you said the 'twelve of us' made our way off of the plane it should be sixteen.
b-e-j-a ch-r-p-char es-car-w-cat r-em-g-k
Author's Response:
thank you:)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 48
looks like things are winding down. glad to see they are all on the way to their HEA.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 47
wow, they are doing so well, things are going good for all of them... i wonder what will happen next
Date: 24 Apr 2010 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 46
well lauren is gone and life seems to be going good for our little family
Date: 24 Apr 2010 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 45
well at least they are all slowly finding acceptance
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 24 Apr 2010 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 44
glad to see that ben and ang are ok with everything. ang is right forks is about to get very interesting!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 43
"ummm... never we just expanded?"
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 42
well between all of the foursomes going on here forks is in for a sexual awakening
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 41
society will never accept the relationship these 4 have, it is sad but true
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 40
still gotta have some one on one time...
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 39
well i can see her point on what people would think
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 38
definately help get rid of the holiday stresses. wow!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 37
ooo... harleys
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 36
what did they do? paying for a resort wedding?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 56
firstly you have got me hooked even with all the fab sex there is a bigger message coming through, accept people even those a little different, secondly whar are you playing at ending the story on such a cliffie!!!!! lol moving swifthy on to the sequel, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
Thank you:) I wanted it to more than just smut, even if it has alot of smut in it;)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 55
what!!!!!!! a car crash i cant believe it, bellas got amnesia argh, is it six months and bellas just woken up? what about alice? what about her baby? more please tracy
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
aww christmas....
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 34
wow once ebja started it has snowballed!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 33
well looks like it's gonna be a happy chritmas. i wonder how em and rose will take the news?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:02 PM Title: Chapter 32
uh oh i wonder if mike and ty will hit first ask question later?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:54 AM Title: Chapter 31
well this is one big happy family
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:47 AM Title: Chapter 30
well duh, of course they will say yes... right?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 29
oh i wonder what the boys are cookin' up?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 28
how weird would that be? the parents of 2 members of an four-way being in a four-way themselves?!? would that make bella and jasper some kind of messed up step brother and step sister? wow my head hurts
Author's Response:
lol
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 27
well i guess that explains how alex died.
i am holding out hope that jasper's parents are cool about everything... crosses fingers*Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 26
ok not that i'm complaining but how did alex die? i jus thought the boys knocked him out...
Author's Response:
Bella stabbed him with the knife while they were rolling around on the ground.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 25
i knew that fucker would be back. i wonder if jasper is ok.did he write the note or did alex?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
hot sexin'in the office on the desk no less! what would daddy c say?!?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
yay for bad ass bella. bringin' the smack down on alex's ass! but... something tells me wehave not seen the last of alex....
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 22
just when everything is looking up in walks another problem... creepy alex.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 21
well how are they gonna have wild foursome loveey sexy times with reneeand charlie in the house? will bella ever get her rocks off? poor girl needs release, they've been teasing her all day!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 20
yay renee is on thier side! now we just have to get through japer's parents wonder how that will go...
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 19
well now looks like they are all still greatly enjoying the relationship. i wonder how early in the morning they have to wake up in the hopes of getting to work on time? heehee!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 18
looks like renee is not quite ready to accept this whole thing but at least the other parents have come to terms.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
wow renee slfish much?! as a parent you always put your kids first. you stand back and be their biggest supporter and chear the loudest at all of their sucesses.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 16
time to let the shit hit the fan...
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 15
oooo... now momma esme is on the case and she sounds like she means business
Date: 23 Apr 2010 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
well that was awkward, what is up with creepy alex?
Date: 23 Apr 2010 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
looks like renee may have taken a few too many bitchy pills today.
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews so far. I have enjoyed reading them.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 12
well at least there was a happy home cumming. heehee
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 11
i still can not even fathom turning one of my kidlets away let alone telling them i regret them and all of that other horrible stuff. glad to see that em and rose are seeing things clearer now. the only ones who should care about what goes on in someone's bedroom is the ones in that room. * unless they are breaking the law*
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
narrow minded people drive me batty, i can not think of anything that would turn me away from one of my kids.
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
i wonder if em and rose have decided to stop judging?
'let he who has not sinned cast the first stone'
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
well that sure would have been a sight to see on the dance floor!
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
ah but emmy 'judge not lest ye be judged'
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
bunnies have nothing on these guys. it should be 'fucking like e-b-j-a'
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 5
well that was fun! nothing like a little 'get together' with a few friends
Date: 22 Apr 2010 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 4
wow you can't tell a boy that kinda stuff b, they just drool and daydream...
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 3
i wonder is it time to get going? or time to get off? hmmm...
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 2
well i think work is about to get a hell of a lot more fun!
Author's Response: Thanks:)
Date: 22 Apr 2010 12:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
well hello....! that sure was an interesting meeting
Author's Response:
lol, thanks:)
Date: 19 Apr 2010 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 55
Aw that is terrible they find out that Alice is pregnant and then they get into a car accident!! I hope that Alice is ok. What about Bella?
Author's Response:
Thanks:0) check out the sequel!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 55
Holy Hell!!!!! Don't even tell me Bella isn't going to et her memory back especially now that Alice is pregnant. She didn't lose the baby in the accident did she???
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 55
ooooooooooohhhhh YOU ARE EVIL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO MEAN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
Author's Response:
Yes, I am mean and evil:)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 55
Wow u evil to leave it there great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks you!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 55
dun dun dun! Can't wait for tomorrow!!
Author's Response:
thank:)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 55
I love this story, I can't wait to read the sequel and I hope Bella gets her memory back!!!
please post something on this story or something when the sequel is up, because for some reason I don't get email notifications.
Author's Response:
I will thaks:)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:05 PM Title: Chapter 55
That is so sad. I hope Alice is ok.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 18 Apr 2010 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 55
MEANIE!!!! YOU ARE SO VERY VERY BAD!!
Author's Response:
i know!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 55
Ok now.... I have a serious dilemma.... One I hunt you down and I let you become friends with my sharks... Two i create all the outfits (+ he sequel) and you post them....
Your pick... But remember my sharks are friendly!! ;)
I am going too easy on you... I am loosing my touch but you covered the bases with the sequel coming today....
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Don't feed me to the sharks! The sequel will be worth it, I promise!!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 54
Here it is!!
http://www.polyvore.com/wedding_in_brazil/set?id=17949025
Date: 18 Apr 2010 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 55
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i was just about done jumping with joy with whole baby and then this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thats fucking crazy and so awesome.. im so loving your brilliant, evil at the moment geez, mind. that was totally unexpected and i almost peed my pants thinking what the hell just happened??!!! thats totally fuck up and i was almost in my lala land .. not to mention you got us by the balls!! well if i have balls you got it.. u know what i mean lmao im not even gonna stir my brain and think about hows the sequel gonna hold up this is mother of all twister!! lol ok enough rambling cant wait for the next chapter...so much for signing for these foursome lol You my dear is the goddess of all sexcapades with a dash of major level 10 whatever lol twister!!!
Incridbly stirred up and exhausedly yours
Tricia
Author's Response:
Have I not told you that I am evil?????? Because I soooo am! Thank you and I can assure you that the sequel, is just as fucking twisted!
Date: 18 Apr 2010 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 54
That great chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 54
the wedding was lovely as was their vows, and they had some fun on their wedding night lol
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 53
those gifts were very thoughtful and their parents said some wonderful things, loved the last bit where they were like they were years ago camping in the lounge, thanks tracy
Date: 17 Apr 2010 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 52
good on sam getting his own back,
Date: 17 Apr 2010 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 51
the last four are now fully on board and they taken the next step, sounds like they are having a good time at the resort despite scaring sam lol
Date: 17 Apr 2010 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 54
So they are married now! I wonder what is going to happen to them now?
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 54
YAY!!! I was sooo bouncing on my chair for this one!! Can I find the dresses??
xoxo
Marianne
Author's Response:
Of course you can!
Date: 17 Apr 2010 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 54
awwwwww that was sweet!!
Author's Response: Thank ypu:)
Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 54
Weddings are always so much fun.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 17 Apr 2010 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 54
The wedding was short and sweet..it was perfect. The wedding night was exceptionally hot!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 53
Great cant wait
Author's Response:
Thank you for all the reviews:)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 53
Such a loving chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 50
day one of island fun they will be exhausted before they even get to the big day at this rate lol, roll on the wedding the tension is papable, a better foursome i never heard about, thanks tracy
Author's Response:
thankS:)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:30 PM Title: Chapter 53
i cant wait for a sequel i want a huge blow out fight and see how they get over it
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 53
They are getting married tomarow! I think that it is sweet that everyone stayed together as a family for the last night before they got married.
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 52
Well I guess their secret about the beach is out in the open now!!
Author's Response:
lol, yep. Sam didn't waste any time in telling them :)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 53
Any chance of some outtakes from Edwards and Jaspers POV.
Author's Response:
Maybe, but there are several chapters in the sequel from Edward, Jasper, and Alice's POV.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 53
Loved it!!! And you are writing a sequel?!?! THANK YOU!!! I love reading about these four and I don't want it to end!
Author's Response:
Thanks:)
Date: 16 Apr 2010 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 53
dont say nothing about it being almost done!! lalalalalalala not listening~~ lol my favorite 'lemon'stand is well balance with just a sweet confection moments .. sniff sniff... loving it
Author's Response:
lol, but there is a sequel! I promise more lemonade:)
Date: 15 Apr 2010 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 52
I love hearing them talk about their relationship, especially Edward. He often takes a quiet role in the relationship. Too funny that Sam blew them in for having sex on the beach!
Author's Response:
Thank you:)
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 52
i cant wait for the next chapter because you know that the parents and siblings are never going to let them live it down that they got caught on the beach by sam this is going to be good so please update soon
Author's Response:
thanks:)