Date: 12 Jan 2016 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Awesome chapter!
Date: 11 Jan 2016 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 33
Great chapter!
Date: 10 Jan 2016 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 30
How sweet!
Date: 10 Jan 2016 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Bella!
Date: 09 Jan 2016 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter! Yay Renee and Bella made up!
Date: 29 Aug 2015 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
Carlisle and Esme are amazing people!
Date: 28 Aug 2015 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 13
Poor Bella!
Date: 20 Aug 2015 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter!
Date: 20 Apr 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 2
LOL no way lol
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 55
Aww, Alice is pregnant, I did think it was Bella because she was so starving hungry, lol. I can't believe this has happened when they're all so happy. Has Bella been in a coma for six months or is the sequel set six months in the future? She can't remember Edward and Jasper, what about Alice, doe she remember Alice? Their parents, what about them?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 54
Oh my God! Surely they won't be making it out of bed this time. The parents may have to send out a search party, lol. It was a beautiful ceremony, I love that they all included and it wasn't just a straight ceremony between Alice and Jasper and then Bella and Edward with the four of them thrown in at the end.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 53
Wow, waterfall smexy times are hot, hot, hot.
I love that they all get their family time before they get married to each other, I think they need this time together.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 52
Woohoo, Mike and Tyler made it and surprised them all, it's such a shame that Ben and Angela couldn't be there with them.
I think when they decide to have kids, if they're just going to leave it to chance, then when the baby's born they should have DNA tests to find out which one of the boys is the biological dad so that the child will always know even though they will all parent the kids together. They'll need to find out anyway because they'll have to arrange for the non biological parents to be able to consent for things like medical treatment, etc. Everything will work itself out.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 51
I think it takes more for a man to get out of an abusive relationship. It's harder for them to admit that a woman is doing this to them. It's pride and stereotyping that does a lot of it but it's just as bad for a man as woman. I'm glad that Garrett got away and now he has Kate, Emmett and Rose. Lol, Sam will never be the same again and I think Emily is loving his embarrassment, hahaha!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 50
Bwahahahaha!! Poor Sam, it's a wonder he hasn't gone blind but at least he can see the funny side now and he isn't calling them perverts anymore, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 49
Lol, if only Sam knew what went on during that flight. I can't believe Peter and Charlie got caught in the mens room giving blow jobs, hahahaha, how mortifying. The tables really have been turned, it's usually the kids getting caught doing stuff like that not the parents. I love how Bella keeps teasing them about it.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 48
Woohoo!! Jasper's a Cullen now, I'm glad his family didn't mind him changing his name, I thought they might have gone down the double barrelled route. I would love to go on a helicopter tour like they did, it would be amazing. I need a lie down after that session. I really think Bella loved being blindfolded and tied up judging from her reactions and the amount of orgasms she had, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 47
Lol, I don't know what it is but I'm getting the feeling that both Edward and Bella love a bit of danger and exhibitionism, hehe!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 46
Well thank God Lauren's gone and hopefully those photos of her and Jessica's threesome will stop her doing anything stupid to get back at Bella. I'm glad they have a supporter in Seth and it sounds as though the Volturi's are okay with their relationship as well. I think Bella got home at just the right time, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 45
I think they secretly love shocking people with their PDA's, lol, I know I would. They've definitely laid the ground from when Charlotte, Peter, Carlisle and Esme arrive to begin their new lives with Charlie, Renee, William and Catherine, perhaps the town will have got used to the idea because they'll have been gossiping about Bella, Alice, Edward and Jasper.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 44
I think that may just be the quietest sex they've ever had, lol. Ben and Angela were suitably shocked but they took it well. I think Angela's going to enjoy having two poly families in their quiet town and with all four sets of parents being in one place it will mean that she'll get to see much more of Alice and Bella. I think she'll be a great supporter of all of them if things start getting a bit rough.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 43
Lol, there's nothing like addressing the elephant in the room, bless Angela and her curiosity, hahahaha, that's what I'm calling it anyway.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 42
Lol, Charlie made me laugh. 'If I'm not getting any then neither are you.'
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 41
There will always be those who are ready to judge and just can't live and let live and unfortunately most of them will never change. I'm not too sure though that shouting at each of them is going to be very productive, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
God, they're so hot together. They should film their time together for the boys, I'm sure they'd love to see what they get up to, Bella and Alice would have them begging for more or would that be mercy? Lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 39
I think Bella's reaction to taking over Carlisle's company was a natural one. It doesn't matter how many letters are in those files or how many files there are, it's an unfortunate fact of life that when a woman gets a high powered job there will always be those who say she's slept her way to the top. Like Alice said they know it's not true and that's all that matters but still it doesn't make it any easier to hear the whispers and know what some people are thinking.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 38
Like I've said before it amazes me that they ever get out of bed, damn!! They could certainly give their parents a few pointers, lol. I love how Bella embarrasses them all when she starts talking sex with their parents, it's usually the other way around and I love that she turns the tables on them, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 37
They did organise a wedding for them and on such a romantic date as well. Edward and Jasper really got cool presents from Bella and Alice, no wonder Garrett was a little jealous, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 36
Have they gone and arranged the intrepid fours wedding for them? I want to know what was in Esme's box. *pouts*
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 35
Having an architect in the family is the best, you never have to look for another house as long as you live, they can just design and build it for you, well get the contractors to build it for you, lol. It sounds as though Garrett's going to need time along with Kate to rebuild that trust in people, they'll both get there.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 34
Say what you think Bella, don't hold back, lol. It seems that this family just gets bigger and bigger by the minute. Do Rose and Emmett feel a bit hypocritical?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 33
This lot just turn heads wherever they go, I'm not sure they should be allowed out in public, lol. Charlotte was really worried about Bella's reaction to her relationship with Renee and Charlie, I can understand that but I think deep down she knew that Bella would be okay with it. You have to be who you are. Now, will Carlisle and Esme be making a foray into poly territory or are they strictly just a couple?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 32
God Lauren is so desperate but obviously Danie and Jack aren't, lol, I bet that pisses her off even more. They haven't shown their parents their rings yet, in fact no one has mentioned their engagement. I know they were slightly distracted by their parents fucking on the couches but still nothing usually gets in the way of that girly squealing 'let me see your ring' moment.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 31
Bwahahahahah!! Couch sex for the parents, a bit of wife swapping and caught by the kids, lol, all in all an interesting start to the day. *falls about laughing*
Oh, and I'm so glad they said yes, was there ever any doubt? Back to the drawing board for me, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 30
Awww, aren't they a pair of old romantics, lol, that was a lovely proposal and their parents are all really happy for them. In fact it seems that the intrepid four are giving everyone the courage to explore their own sexuality and boundaries. They better say yes, it they don't, then I will, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 29
Well I think the whole house now knows how much these four love each other, lol, there could be a lot of red faces at breakfast in the morning. I wonder how Charlie, Renee, Charlotte and Peter are getting on, hehe!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 28
That was hilarious, all of them slowly catching on to what type of party it was that they met at but oh my, I'm thinking that this family dynamic is about to get a bit more complicated. Would Charlie and Peter really be open to this type of relationship for themselves?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 27
Okay, so if you didn't hear it, the penny just dropped. Jasper's mum, Charlotte is the Renee's best friend isn't she?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh my God, poor Bella, when is she going to stop being everyone's target. I'm glad Alex is gone, he won't be able to hurt anyone ever again and now Kate can come home and begin to rebuild her life with the love of her family. Are Jessica and Lauren going to cause problems for them all at work? Are people going to be thinking that they can just come on to them because of the lifestyle they lead?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh my effin God!! *runs to next chapter*
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
It's so good that Bella was able to help Kate. Women who are abused are not weak they just can't see a way out and other people need to remember that not only is the abuse physical but is mental abuse as well and that's how women end up staying, I'm so glad she's got out and I hope that she never contacts Alex.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 23
Well I didn't expect that at all. Didn't Carlisle or Esme have any idea what was going on? Sometimes parents have a sixth sense about these things and they obviously notice a difference in their childs behaviour. It's sad that Bella had to go through that but thank God Jacob won't be rearing his ugly head. It seems that Bella's attracts unwanted attention what with Jacob and now Alex, she really is going to need to be careful.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well so much for the quietest sex they've ever had. I think they need to go back to drawing board with that one, lol. What on earth is going on with Kate and Alex?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 21
They can't start fooling around now, they'll be late for dinner at Mike's, lol. Finally he penny has dropped for Renee. Like I've said before, religion has a lot to answer for. I'm just glad that after her own experiences both with her best friend and her parents, Renee was able to take things back to basics and really work out what she thought about it. I love how Charlie and Renee cringe when they see the bedroom where, nearly all, the magic happens. I wonder how much they'd cringe if they knew what happens of the couch as well, bwahahahaha!!
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Well, it looks like Renee is finally getting there. Maybe, if Jasper's parents don't take the news well, she'll be able to offer them some advice and support.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
Damn!! How do they even get out of bed, never mind put clothes on and leave the house. I need a lie down, lol. I can't wait to find out what they bought the boys.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 18
Three out of four isn't a bad result. Hopefully, given time Renee will accept Bella the way she is. Lol, this lot are going to fade away, they haven't had anything to eat since breakfast.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well Rose and Emmett are dark horses aren't they and maybe that's why they disapproved of Alice and Bella so much, they were embarrassed and ashamed that they enjoyed what happened with Amber a little too much and they thought it was wrong. Religion has so much to answer for. I'm glad that Charlie's finally sticking up for Bella.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
Lol, I've always wanted to be adopted by Carlisle and Esme, hahaha!!
I'm not sure how this confrontation is really going to work out but it looks as though Charlie's been suffering since everything went down. It serves him right though really because if he doesn't agree with Renee he should have spoke up and fought for Bella. Personally, if my parents had said all that to me, I wouldn't make any effort and I'd cut off all contact with them to the point of asking Rose not to talk about me to them, but then I'd cut my nose off to spite my face.
I'm so happy that both Carlisle and Esme consider all them their children.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
What!? What does she mean "Let's go find out." Does this have something to do with her and Carlisle or Kate and Alex?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 14
Hmmm, that is confusing. What's Kate and Alex's problem? I think Alex has thought that Jasper and Edward are gay and possibly wonders about Bella and Alice but why is he taking extra interest in Bella and why's Kate so frosty with her? I love to see how Edward and Jasper's relationship is blossoming.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 13
I'm not sure that Bella really needed any more confirmation of what her mum thinks of her. I can understand why Rose put her on speakerphone, all of them now know the type of vitriol that their mother spews and Rose got to have more of her say and defend Bella, but was there any need for her to hear more of the same and worse? No, there wasn't and it just made her hurt and misery more acute. At least, out of all this, it's brought Rose and Emmett closer to them all and they're beginning to realise that love is the most important thing and it doesn't matter whether it's two girls, two boys, a girl and boy or all of the above.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 12
It was such an emotional day for them all but especially for Bella and Alice, I'm glad they all have each other and that Rose and Emmett are going to try to understand and accept their different relationship. I bet their faces were a picture at the airport, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! That was a bit turn around for Rose and Emmett but I imagine hearing your mum talk to your sibling like that is enough to open anyone's eyes. Alice and Bella's parents were beyond awful to them. How can you say things like that to your child? Well, they've paid the price now because Rose and Emmett have walked away from them too. I'm glad they've all apologised to each other and promised to start afresh.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 10
It sounds as though Bella's on a hiding to nothing with her family. The star of the show is obviously the blue eyed, blonde haired married Rose and if you don't fall into that category or play by the same rules then you're obviously stupid and idiotic. I don't think they have a snowball in hells chance of being accepted by their respective families.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 9
I think it's really sad that Rose and Emmett can't just be the brother and sister that Alice and Bella need. Religion gets in the way of so many things when it's really supposed to teach love, tolerance, acceptance and so many other valuable lessons, people use it the wrong way and turn it against family members, friends, Joe Bloggs down the road. Those people who believe in God should know that he loves everyone no matter what, sins may have to be atoned for but he still loves everyone. I don't necessarily believe in God but at the same time I don't believe that God would teach and agree with the judgement, bigotry and hate that people use on others in his name. There endeth the lesson, lol. Seriously, I'm not here to bible bash or force my views on anyone, I just find it really sad that a person can't be accepted for the way they are and who they are when they aren't causing harm to anyone else.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
Lol, I think Edward's in for a surprise when he reaches the promised land, hahaha. Mike and Tyler were a turn up for the books, no wonder they were such a disappointment in the respective back seats of their cars. *snort* I love how Jasper and Edward's relationship is developing and that they are comfortable enough and feel free enough to enjoy each others bodies.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
I'm glad Bella's moving out, I don't know how she's stood living there that long with Rose and Emmett's attitudes. They really need to stop shoving their beliefs down Alice and Bella's throats. I get that they're concerned for them and don't want them to get hurt but let's face it, you could have the straightest relationship going and still get hurt. There are no guarantees in life.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh my God! It's a wonder these four even manage to get dressed. Lol, with all the fucking they're doing they're going to need afternoon naps like Rose's pre-k kids. Rose and Emmett have no room to talk, they can't take back what they did by saying ther realise it was wrong. I hate it when people shove their beliefs down your throat. They can believe what they like but they should keep it to themselves and not be so judgemental.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 30 Jun 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow, things are really moving fast for them all. I think they should spend some time actually getting to know each other normally and not just carnally, lol. Rose will be glad for her and Emmett to get the place to themselves. I think we can safely say that Esme is on to what's going on between Edward and Bella and Jasper and Alice, but does she have a clue that they all like being together at the same time?
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 4
Lol, Edward's lost in his visions, mind you he really liked watching Bella and Alice at the party. So, Carlisle did notice, the wiley old dog, lol. I didn't realise that Rosalie and Emmett are actually married. Is the apartment theirs or Rose and Bella's parents? How old is everyone, because I'm thinking that it's rather childish of a married woman to be threatening her sister with their parents? She's working for God's sake, it's none of her parents or Rose's business what she does in her sex life. If she doesn't like it and it's her apartment then she should ask Bella to move out, if it's not her apartment then she should move out herself. I can see why Bella and Alice like making them squirm, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 3
I'm really surprised, I thought that Jasper and Edward would have been together fully. Could Carlisle feel the attraction they all had for each other? I think that maybe he could. I'm glad they've had a bit of a talk already, agreed to dating and set a rule. There's no point dancing around what you want, it just wastes time, lol.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 2
Hahahaha! Well none of them were expecting that. Just wait until Alice finds out and they find out about Alice. Let's hope they can hold it together and not embarrass themselves in front of Carlisle. It sounds as though Emmett and Rosalie are pair of prudes, or is it just a case of 'not in my back yard?' either way they need to get over themselves.
Jane x