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Reviewer: vampaddict10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~* Google Search: How to Make a Woman Cum*~

omg.. hehe google...:)

plz update soon

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~* Google Search: How to Make a Woman Cum*~

I LOVE IT!!! Love that geeky Edward has to be (besides me) the only one who will look up the way to make someone orgasm. lol I love it. I think I'm going to go check out Confessions of a Nanny, tattooed Daddyward you say? hmm yep definitely going to check it out. lol thanks again so much. bye

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 8 ~* Google Search: How to Make a Woman Cum*~

I love Edward's innocent responses to Bella's treasure trove of porn, Bella giving him oral sex and his confession that he did not know what to do to give her release. He was so sweet when he asked her to be his girlfriend. I enjoy the comic book story and look forward to Bella's reaction to it.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2010 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 8 ~* Google Search: How to Make a Woman Cum*~

The story is cute.

Reviewer: vampaddict10 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2010 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 7 *~ Good Vibrations ~*

omg.. haha... i just am totally in love with this story....

 

plz update soon

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2010 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 7 *~ Good Vibrations ~*

I definitely enjoyed this chapter. I loved when Bella found Edward in that state of shock and how their desire for each other exploded into that kiss.

I like that Bella wants a relationship and not just sex with Edward. I am so happy that Bella kept her wits about her and confessed to Edward about being attracted to him since her breakup with Jake, so he would know that her reaction was to him not because of his transformation. I loved his responding declaration of his devotion to her.

Honestly, I almost forgot Edward had looked in that hope chest and began to think he did hear Bella masturbating in the bathroom. Nice to know Bella has a picture of Edward along with her sex toys in her hope chest. Great update!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 7 *~ Good Vibrations ~*

:)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 7 *~ Good Vibrations ~*

I'm so glad he didn't wimp out on confessing to seeing the contents of the hope chest. To me it feels like that puts them on a more even playing field.  He now knows that she does the same thing he does behind close doors.  Plus he knows for sure now that she wants him like he wants her :)

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2010 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 7 *~ Good Vibrations ~*

Wow - I would have been embaressed by the hope chest.  I hope she is on hte pill or something else. 

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2010 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 7 *~ Good Vibrations ~*

LOVE IT!!! you leaving it like you did not so much but otherwise I love it! Edward totally knew she was masturbating poor Bella. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*

Great chapter.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2010 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*

love it

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*

:)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*

lol isn't that where all her porn is? lol I liked that chapter. I really love this whole story especially this chapter with Edward being all sweet. :D I have read all the recommendations and they all rock especially A World without sound. the only problem is the sequel is on hiatus. :( I also love Million Dollar Baby. keep up the great work on this story though. thanks again bye

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*

Edward getting caught flexing in the mirror by his parents was great.

The date was awesome.  Edward did good with all of it.

OMG, I can't wait to see what happens now that Edward's found what's in Bella's hope chest.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 7:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*

Aw, Edward and Bellawere so sweet on the phone. I love that both of them were nervous. The date was very romantic. It was good that Edward used what he knew about her to tailor the date to what she might like. I can't wait to find out if Edward gets caught while looking in her hope chest.



Author's Response:

I am writing Chapter 7 right now , and to be honest I haven't decided that yet. We'll just have to wait and see.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2010 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 6 *~ The Perfect Date~*

I hope Bella does not catch him.....

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

Yay! Edward got his girl. It was interesting to know what was going through Bella's mind at the party. I thought it might have been Bella who said, "Get a Room." I love that Bella was a little possessive when she realized that Edward was the one Tanya was kissing in the kitchen. Edward's nervousness at asking Bella to go out with him on a date was so adorkable. I am glad they kissed. It looks like Tanya is going to be some trouble for the couple in her effort to get revenge against Bella. Good chapter!

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

I love that Bella was feeling guilty for being attracted to the hot mystery guy.  It shows that she truly does care for Edward.  Her saying that he was beautiful before was perfect.  Hopefully helped ease some of the tension between them.  

I think that's the first time I've read of virgin Eddie blowing his load over his hot first kiss with Bella, the girl he loves.  That is reality at it's finest.  Especially for a nerdy guy who has had not kiss/heavy petting experiences with a girl.  Bella was awesome for handling that situation so well.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

love it

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*

LOL!  OMG, I love that Edward puked on Tanya.  Evil Bitch Whore deserved it.

I hope Bella's reaction to Edward is next.  I'm dying to get her inner monologue on the new, improved Edward.

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*

It was nice to get into Bella's head.  I should've realized she'd be like that seeing how she was in fourth grade and already had the potty mouth going on.  I like her this way. I will feel better about her reaction to Edward's new look now knowing that she was having the tingly girly bits before he changed :)

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

ROFLMAO!  OMG what a way for the girls to find out about Edward's love and devotion for Bella.  I totally lost it and my hubby looked at me like I was nuts.

I love that Edward wanted to do this not just to get Bella's attention but to not have to rely on her to protect him  It's like he's doing it for himself as much as for her.  That's the only way to succeed is to do it for your self.

I loved it that Em and Jasper didn't recognize him.  Too good.

Let me just say that back tat is fucking hot!  If you did that manip it is awesome.  I can't wait for Bella to see the new Edward.  I hope he blows off all the bitches who treated him like crap

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

I liked this first chapter.  There's nothing I like more than a lovesick geeky Edward.  He did break my heart in this chapter.  I so can't wait for Rose and Alice to get their claws into him and turn him around.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

A humorous look at love.  I am in my 30s but when I was a teen girls never acknowledged self-servicing.  This story has made me curious if this is still a taboo topic.

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

aww poor Edward. I am not the least surprised that he came from a simple kiss with all the tension he had built up for her. lol I loved it. now that's a reunion. lol keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

:)

Reviewer: Cailley Rachelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

Loved this shit... :) She needs to tell him she liked him before though..

More soon

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 *~ Slip of the Tongue~*

Great chapter.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*

Edward puked on Tanya?! LMAO! That is classic. Poor boy cornered in the kitchen trying to get the predator off its prey. I loved it! I love how he explained it all to Bella. Very funny! I look forward to their talk.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2010 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*

Great chapter.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*

:)

Reviewer: sparklepeen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

Awesome, Edward is such a hot geek!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*

Go Edward for puking on tanya's face

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 4 *~ It's My Party and I'll Puke If I Want To~*

YES YES YES!!! He puked on Tanya and it was priceless. then he poked Bella in the eye? Love the awkward mixed with hotness. too cute. I think I have a new addiction. this story owns me. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! Hot awkward geeks are the best. They are so much fun to write.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*

It was good to get into Bella's head and see how she was feeling about Edward and the events that Edward described. It was shame that she pushed Jacob to have sex without waiting to make sure the feelings were there thereby ruining both of their first time with that awkwardness. I was glad that she learned from the breakup what she wanted in a relationship. It was nice to see her realization that she was falling in love with her best friend and that it was about more than seeing his arousal through his Gumby pajamas. I am glad she fell in love with him before his transformation and not because of it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words! I really love this Bella, she was very much similar to me in high school. So yea, I've always been a perv.

Reviewer: pixiewriter Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2010 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*

Good chapter....please update soon

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*

:)

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*

love it

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 3 *~My Best Friends Boner~*

a Few Days?? :( aww this story I swear has become my new obsession. lol I love that she feels that way for him too especially with his gumby pjs. lol keep up the great work. I can't wait for their reunion. thanks again bye

Author's Response:

Thanks! I will be posting as regularly as possible, hopefully at least once a week. I have written all the way to Chapter 6 and am working on chapter 7. My betas take a week to get back to me, so I am trying to keep their schedule. Everyone seemed to like the Gumby pj's. I'll try to do a RobPorn manip of geekward sporting wood to post if I can find the source images.

Reviewer: Lisabebe11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

I love the story - but it is easy for Bella to say I loved you as you were but yet she dated others and slept with others.

Reviewer: ADAdancer Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

I love the story so far.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

love it and how much edward has changed

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

love it so much

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

I am glad that Edward's parents offered their help with the transformation. I loved the scene where Emmett and Jasper saw Edward for the first time. I hope Edward's reveal is all he expects it to be, but I wonder if Bella has some bad news for him. I hope he doesn't lose himself in trying to change his appearance.

Reviewer: dazzled eyes22 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

Wow! There was a lot going on in that one chapter. I love Geekward stories and this story has a great premise. I like that Bella helped Edward when no one else would after he was tripped by the bullies in school and that she became his protector. It is a shame Edward does not have the confidence to tell her how he feels about her and their friends thought he was not interested in girls. The comic book is a really good outlet. I enjoyed that story and how he wrote himself in as the victim. I wonder what this time apart will do to their friendship.

Reviewer: Biancarose123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2010 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

love the story want more

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

god.... :)

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 2 *~ The Consequences of Spanking It~*

wow that tattoo is hott!!! I love it. I really liked that chapter especially the unveiling to Emmett and Jasper. that girl watching his ass was funny too. I can't wait to see Bella's reaction. keep up the great work. thanks again bye p.s. Edward sounds HOTTTTT lol thanks again bye

Reviewer: jbe86 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

aww! I love it. I feel so bad for Edward. I too about died when he said he went home, vomited and cried because Bella had lost her virginity to Jake. poor thing. I can't wait to see her reaction to his change. I usually hate stories like this because they change and the girl/guy says you know you didn't have to change, I liked you the way you were. then why didn't you say something to begin with? lol but I like this. I love the comic too. keep up the great work. thanks again bye

Reviewer: ajamm Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

Oh I'm curious I can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2010 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 *~ Just Friends ~*

:)

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